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* Prince Robot genuinely enjoying Heist's novel, even if he doesn't agree with the message.
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* The Brand revealing that The Will's cape isn't some badass Freelancer gear, it's a cape from a show that The Will liked when he was a kid. He spent his first paycheck on it.
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-->'''Marko (later):''' Just to be clear. Your exact words to me were "please shoot it in my twat".
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* The explicitly described {{Meet Cute}} between Alana and Marko, which is Alana hitting Marko around the head with the butt of her rifle, preceded by a spoof of ''{{Twilight}}'' ''Literature/{{Twilight}}'' and its fans involving her absurdly devoted reaction to a book about a rock monster who falls in love.
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** The narration notes that she then began to pray that her child be a girl.
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* This comic actively tests your patience with reading it public thanks to its many, many, ''many'' opening splash pages being CrossesTheLineTwice or RefugeInAudacity.
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* This comic actively tests your patience with reading it in public thanks to its many, many, ''many'' opening splash pages being CrossesTheLineTwice or RefugeInAudacity.
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* Fiona Staples [[http://i.imgur.com/LccIQi9.png sheds some light on the creative process]], which, unsurprisingly, involves alcohol. For bonus points the donuts moon ''actually appears''.
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* Fiona Staples [[http://i.imgur.com/LccIQi9.png sheds some light on the creative process]], which, unsurprisingly, involves alcohol. For bonus points the donuts moon ''actually appears''.appears''.
* This comic actively tests your patience with reading it public thanks to its many, many, ''many'' opening splash pages being CrossesTheLineTwice or RefugeInAudacity.
* This comic actively tests your patience with reading it public thanks to its many, many, ''many'' opening splash pages being CrossesTheLineTwice or RefugeInAudacity.
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* "Welcome to Abortion Town!"
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-->''' Vaughan:''' Okay, good news/bad news, Sarah. Your daughter's name may not be quite as rare as you first thought, but on the plus side, [[ItMakesSenseInContext if she's ever convicted of arson, a frail writer will soon be ther to purchase her freedom]]. sincere congrats to you and joe!
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-->''' Vaughan:''' Okay, good news/bad news, Sarah. Your daughter's name may not be quite as rare as you first thought, but on the plus side, [[ItMakesSenseInContext if she's ever convicted of arson, a frail writer will soon be ther there to purchase her freedom]]. sincere congrats to you and joe!
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-->'''Alana:''' ''(awkward fake smile)'' Oh. And I love it!
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-->'''Alana:''' ''(awkward fake smile)'' Oh. [[BlatantLies And I love it!it]]!
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* Sophie, Gwen and The Brand find the male dragon they were looking for. {{Squick It's auto-fellating.}}
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* Sophie, Gwen and The Brand find the male dragon they were looking for. {{Squick [[{{Squick}} It's auto-fellating.}}]]
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* Sophie, Gwen and The Brand find the male dragon they were looking for. [[Squick It's auto-fellating.]]
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* Sophie, Gwen and The Brand find the male dragon they were looking for. [[Squick {{Squick It's auto-fellating.]]}}
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* Sophie, Gwen and The Brand find the male dragon they were looking for. It's auto-fellating.
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* Sophie, Gwen and The Brand find the male dragon they were looking for. [[Squick It's auto-fellating. auto-fellating.]]
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* Alana and Marko's plan to enter Landfall requires Robot IV to disguise himself as "Count Robot LX". IV is not happy about dressing up as someone of lower nobility and looks absolutely nothing like him. [[note]][[DontExplainTheJoke He does]], thanks to Fiona Staples' art style[[/note]]
-->'''Marko''': [[LampshadeHanging Looks close enough to me]].
-->'''Robot IV''': That's because you people are [[FantasticRacism filthy racists]] who think every Robot looks the same!
** It works.
-->'''Robot IV''':...fucking ''disgraceful''.
** There's also Marko's panicky refusal to hear how [[NoodleIncident Alana aquired Robot LX's pants]].
-->'''Alana''': It's way less exciting than he imagines.
-->'''Marko''': [[LampshadeHanging Looks close enough to me]].
-->'''Robot IV''': That's because you people are [[FantasticRacism filthy racists]] who think every Robot looks the same!
** It works.
-->'''Robot IV''':...fucking ''disgraceful''.
** There's also Marko's panicky refusal to hear how [[NoodleIncident Alana aquired Robot LX's pants]].
-->'''Alana''': It's way less exciting than he imagines.
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** Gwendolyn, who is wearing a very horrified expression on her face, covers Sophie's eyes. As you can see from the quote above, it doesn't work.
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* The first words of the series:
-->'''Hazel's Narration:''' This is how an idea becomes real.
--> '''Alana:''' [[MoodWhiplash Am I shitting?]] It feels like I'm shitting!
-->'''Hazel's Narration:''' This is how an idea becomes real.
--> '''Alana:''' [[MoodWhiplash Am I shitting?]] It feels like I'm shitting!
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* The first words of the series:
-->'''Hazel's Narration:''' This is how an idea becomes real.
--> '''Alana:''' [[MoodWhiplash Am I shitting?]] It feels like I'm shitting!
-->'''Hazel's Narration:''' This is how an idea becomes real.
--> '''Alana:''' [[MoodWhiplash Am I shitting?]] It feels like I'm shitting!
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* Sophie, Gwen and The Brand find the male dragon they were looking for. It's auto-fellating.
--> '''Sophie''': It's a boy, all right.
--> '''Sophie''': It's a boy, all right.
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-->''' Vaughan:''' Okay, good news/bad news, Sarah. Your daughter's name may not be quite as rarse as you first tought, but on the plus side, [[ItMakesSenseInContext if she's ever convicted of arson, a frail writer will soon be ther to purchase her freedom]]. sincer congrats to you and joe!
* Fiona Staples [[http://i.imgur.com/LccIQi9.png sheds some light on the creative process]], which, unsurprisingly, involves alcohol. For bonus points the donut moon ''actually appears''.
* Fiona Staples [[http://i.imgur.com/LccIQi9.png sheds some light on the creative process]], which, unsurprisingly, involves alcohol. For bonus points the donut moon ''actually appears''.
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-->''' Vaughan:''' Okay, good news/bad news, Sarah. Your daughter's name may not be quite as rarse rare as you first tought, thought, but on the plus side, [[ItMakesSenseInContext if she's ever convicted of arson, a frail writer will soon be ther to purchase her freedom]]. sincer sincere congrats to you and joe!
* Fiona Staples [[http://i.imgur.com/LccIQi9.png sheds some light on the creative process]], which, unsurprisingly, involves alcohol. For bonus points thedonut donuts moon ''actually appears''.
* Fiona Staples [[http://i.imgur.com/LccIQi9.png sheds some light on the creative process]], which, unsurprisingly, involves alcohol. For bonus points the
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** Helped by Hazel's narration talking about how dreams can come true. And RealDreamsAreWeirder.
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* A flaming gorilla chasing away a group of insane cultists while flipping them off and yelling "Yeah, that's right! Flee in terror, bitches!"
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* A Izabel as a flaming gorilla chasing away a group of insane cultists while flipping them off and yelling "Yeah, that's right! Flee in terror, bitches!"
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* Fiona Staples [[http://i.imgur.com/LccIQi9.png shed some light on the creative process]], which, unsurprisingly, involves alcohol. For bonus points the donut moon ''actually appears''.
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* Fiona Staples [[http://i.imgur.com/LccIQi9.png shed sheds some light on the creative process]], which, unsurprisingly, involves alcohol. For bonus points the donut moon ''actually appears''.
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-->''' Vaughan:''' Okay, good news/bad news, Sarah. Your daughter's name may not be quite as rarse as you first tought, but on the plus side, [[ItMakesSenseInContext if she's ever convicted of arson, a frail writer will soon be ther to purchase her freedom]]. sincer congrats to you and joe!
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-->''' Vaughan:''' Okay, good news/bad news, Sarah. Your daughter's name may not be quite as rarse as you first tought, but on the plus side, [[ItMakesSenseInContext if she's ever convicted of arson, a frail writer will soon be ther to purchase her freedom]]. sincer congrats to you and joe!joe!
* Fiona Staples [[http://i.imgur.com/LccIQi9.png shed some light on the creative process]], which, unsurprisingly, involves alcohol. For bonus points the donut moon ''actually appears''.
* Fiona Staples [[http://i.imgur.com/LccIQi9.png shed some light on the creative process]], which, unsurprisingly, involves alcohol. For bonus points the donut moon ''actually appears''.
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-->''' Vaughan:''' Okay, good news/bad news, Sarah. Your daughter's name may not be quite as rarse as you first tought, but on the plus side, [[ItMaseSenseInContext if she's ever convicted of arson, a frail writer will soon be ther to purchase her freedom]]. sincer congrats to you and joe!
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-->''' Vaughan:''' Okay, good news/bad news, Sarah. Your daughter's name may not be quite as rarse as you first tought, but on the plus side, [[ItMaseSenseInContext [[ItMakesSenseInContext if she's ever convicted of arson, a frail writer will soon be ther to purchase her freedom]]. sincer congrats to you and joe!
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* "What are they up to now? Is Alana...praying?" "No. No, she most certainly is not."
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* "What are they up to now? Is Alana...praying?" "No. No, she most certainly is not.""
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* In the letter corner, after receiving numerous letters telling Vaughan how many people have named their daughter after Hazel, he answers the letter of a mother excited over the possibility of not being too many childrens named after her:
-->''' Vaughan:''' Okay, good news/bad news, Sarah. Your daughter's name may not be quite as rarse as you first tought, but on the plus side, [[ItMaseSenseInContext if she's ever convicted of arson, a frail writer will soon be ther to purchase her freedom]]. sincer congrats to you and joe!
!! Meta
* In the letter corner, after receiving numerous letters telling Vaughan how many people have named their daughter after Hazel, he answers the letter of a mother excited over the possibility of not being too many childrens named after her:
-->''' Vaughan:''' Okay, good news/bad news, Sarah. Your daughter's name may not be quite as rarse as you first tought, but on the plus side, [[ItMaseSenseInContext if she's ever convicted of arson, a frail writer will soon be ther to purchase her freedom]]. sincer congrats to you and joe!
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--> '''Alana:''' [[MoodWhiplash Am I shitting?]] It feels like I'm shitting!
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--> '''Alana:''' [[MoodWhiplash Am I shitting?]] It feels like I'm shitting!shitting!
* "What are they up to now? Is Alana...praying?" "No. No, she most certainly is not."
* "What are they up to now? Is Alana...praying?" "No. No, she most certainly is not."
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-->'''Alana:''' That was Sexy Alana! She's a crazy person! Sexy Alana is obsessed with her nipples and uses the word '' "dick" '' unironically! She's not to be trusted!
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-->'''Alana:''' That was Sexy Alana! She's a crazy person! Sexy Alana is obsessed with her nipples and uses the word '' "dick" '' ''"dick"'' unironically! She's not to be trusted!
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* Izabel: The giant evil space fetus just shot black goo from it's eyes!
* (Marko suggests Barr as a name.)
-->Alana: Like a tavern? Like a soap?
--> Marko: My father's name is Barr.
--> Alana: (awkward fake smile) Oh. And I love It!
* (Marko suggests Barr as a name.)
-->Alana: Like a tavern? Like a soap?
--> Marko: My father's name is Barr.
--> Alana: (awkward fake smile) Oh. And I love It!
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* Izabel: '''Izabel:''' The giant evil space fetus just shot black goo from it's its eyes!
*(Marko When Marko suggests Barr as a name.)
-->Alana:name.
-->'''Alana:''' Like a tavern? Like asoap?
--> Marko:''soap''?
-->'''Marko:''' Myfather's ''father's'' name is Barr.
--> Alana: (awkward -->'''Alana:''' ''(awkward fake smile) smile)'' Oh. And I love It!it!
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-->'''Alana:''' Like a tavern? Like a
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* The Stalk: '''The Stalk:''' Oh, fuck you, you self-righteous piece of... bald!
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-->'''Hazel's Narration:''' This is how an idea becomes real.
-->Alana: '''Alana:''' [[MoodWhiplash Am I shitting? shitting?]] It feels like I'm shitting!
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* The Stalk: Oh, fuck you, you self-righteous piece of... bald!
* The Stalk: Oh, fuck you, you self-righteous piece of... bald!
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* The Stalk: Oh, fuck you, you self-righteous piece of...
*The first words of the series:
--> Alana: Am I shitting? It feels like I'm shitting!
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* The explicitly described {{Meet Cute}} between Alana and Marko, which is Alana hitting Marko around the head with the butt of her rifle, preceded by a spoof of ''{{Twilight}}'' and its fans involving her absurdly devoted reaction to a book about a rock monster who falls in love.
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* The explicitly described {{Meet Cute}} between Alana and Marko, which is Alana hitting Marko around the head with the butt of her rifle, preceded by a spoof of ''{{Twilight}}'' and its fans involving her absurdly devoted reaction to a book about a rock monster who falls in love.love.
* Izabel: The giant evil space fetus just shot black goo from it's eyes!
* (Mark suggests Barr as a name.)
-->Alana: Like a tavern? Like a soap?
--> Marko: My father's name is Barr.
--> Alana: (awkward fake smile) Oh. And I love It!
*A flaming gorilla chasing away a group of insane cultists while flipping them off and yelling "Yeah, that's right! Flee in terror, bitches!"
* The Stalk: Oh, fuck you, you self-righteous piece of... bald!
* Izabel: The giant evil space fetus just shot black goo from it's eyes!
* (Mark suggests Barr as a name.)
-->Alana: Like a tavern? Like a soap?
--> Marko: My father's name is Barr.
--> Alana: (awkward fake smile) Oh. And I love It!
*A flaming gorilla chasing away a group of insane cultists while flipping them off and yelling "Yeah, that's right! Flee in terror, bitches!"
* The Stalk: Oh, fuck you, you self-righteous piece of... bald!
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* The explicitly described {{Meet Cute}} between Alana and Marko, which is Alana hitting Marko around the head with the butt of her rifle, preceded by a spoof of ''{{Twilight}}'' and its fans involving her absurdly devoted reaction to a book about a rock monster who falls in love.
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-->'''[[OhCrap Alana:]]''' Did. Did you just finish inside me?
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-->'''Alana:''' That was Sexy Alana! She's a crazy person! Sexy Alana is obsessed with her nipples and uses the word '' "dick" '' unironically! She's not to be trusted!
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-->'''Alana:''' That was Sexy Alana! She's a crazy person! Sexy Alana is obsessed with her nipples and uses the word '' "dick" '' unironically! She's not to be trusted!trusted!
* The explicitly described {{Meet Cute}} between Alana and Marko, preceded by a spoof of ''{{Twilight}}'' and its fans involving her absurdly devoted reaction to a book about a rock monster who falls in love.
* The explicitly described {{Meet Cute}} between Alana and Marko, preceded by a spoof of ''{{Twilight}}'' and its fans involving her absurdly devoted reaction to a book about a rock monster who falls in love.
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I thought it was funny, and thought I\'d share. You can practically hear the snark in Hazel\'s voice here.
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* Issue #11, the first few pages we see Marko and Alana finish "being intimate." Hazel's snarky narration is just icing on the cake:
-->'''[[DeadpanSnarker Hazel:]]''' Yeah, yeah, so my mom and dad used to have sex. What, like your parents just ''willed'' you into existence?
** There's also Alana's response to realizing that Marko finished inside her (Justified worries, given they're both still fugitives at the time and all):
-->'''[[OhCrap Alana:]]''' Did. Did you just finish inside me?
-->'''Marko:''' Are you kidding? I thought you ''told'' me to finish inside you.
-->'''Alana:''' That was Sexy Alana! She's a crazy person! Sexy Alana is obsessed with her nipples and uses the word '' "dick" '' unironically! She's not to be trusted!
-->'''[[DeadpanSnarker Hazel:]]''' Yeah, yeah, so my mom and dad used to have sex. What, like your parents just ''willed'' you into existence?
** There's also Alana's response to realizing that Marko finished inside her (Justified worries, given they're both still fugitives at the time and all):
-->'''[[OhCrap Alana:]]''' Did. Did you just finish inside me?
-->'''Marko:''' Are you kidding? I thought you ''told'' me to finish inside you.
-->'''Alana:''' That was Sexy Alana! She's a crazy person! Sexy Alana is obsessed with her nipples and uses the word '' "dick" '' unironically! She's not to be trusted!
