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"Halt looked around for a convenient tree. Luckily for Horace, there were none in sight."
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* Horace gets to wear a Ranger cloak, and HilarityEnsues. He keeps asking Halt and Will if they can see him now that he's got the cloak, and eventually Will just snaps.
--> '''Will:''' Horace. You're sitting on top of a great big brown battlehorse. It's nearly two meters high and three meters long and it weighs a quarter of a ton. Of course I can see you.
** Upon further teasing from Horace, Will decides to ignore him and announces that they'll push on for a few more hours before they stop for the night. Horace agrees cheerfully, then worries that they might lose track of him. He could just disappear in the dark. For just a second, Will wishes that his friend ''would'' disappear.
--> '''Will:''' Horace. You're sitting on top of a great big brown battlehorse. It's nearly two meters high and three meters long and it weighs a quarter of a ton. Of course I can see you.
** Upon further teasing from Horace, Will decides to ignore him and announces that they'll push on for a few more hours before they stop for the night. Horace agrees cheerfully, then worries that they might lose track of him. He could just disappear in the dark. For just a second, Will wishes that his friend ''would'' disappear.
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* Will mentions Lady Pauline to Malcolm, telling him that she's a "mighty sorceress," and noting that her power is such that she could make Halt get a haircut for their wedding.
---> '''Malcolm:''' A mighty sorceress indeed.
---> '''Malcolm:''' A mighty sorceress indeed.
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* Will mentions Lady Pauline to Halt pushes himself too hard after his recovery, which finally ends when Will, Horace, Malcolm, telling and Abelard gang up on him that she's a "mighty sorceress," and noting that her power is such that she could make after he almost falls out of the saddle. Halt get indignantly asks if everyone, including his horse, is in a haircut for their wedding.conspiracy against him. Will drily answers yes; they knew he might ignore a Ranger, a healer, and a knight of Araluen, but if his horse joined in, he'd listen.
---> * Halt still manages to get the last word after giving in, sitting down with the announcement that he'll start recovering right now and leaving the others to deal with the work of setting up camp.
*Malcolm asks about Lady Pauline after Will invokes her to get Halt to rest. The Ranger tells him that she's like a "mighty sorceress," noting that her power is such that she could make Halt get a haircut for their wedding.
--> '''Malcolm:''' Amighty sorceress indeed.indeed.
* Horace gets to wear a Ranger cloak, and HilarityEnsues. He keeps asking Halt and Will if they can see him now that he's got the cloak, only pausing during the crisis with Halt. While he and Will are riding on ahead to trail Tennyson, he continues asking, and eventually Will just snaps.
--> '''Will:''' Horace. You're sitting on top of a great big brown battlehorse. It's nearly two meters high and three meters long and it weighs a quarter of a ton. Of course I can see you.
** Upon further teasing from Horace, Will decides to ignore him and announces that they'll push on for a few more hours before they stop for the night. Horace agrees cheerfully, then worries that they might lose track of him. He could just disappear in the dark. For just a second, Will wishes that his friend ''would'' disappear.
*Malcolm asks about Lady Pauline after Will invokes her to get Halt to rest. The Ranger tells him that she's like a "mighty sorceress," noting that her power is such that she could make Halt get a haircut for their wedding.
--> '''Malcolm:''' A
* Horace gets to wear a Ranger cloak, and HilarityEnsues. He keeps asking Halt and Will if they can see him now that he's got the cloak, only pausing during the crisis with Halt. While he and Will are riding on ahead to trail Tennyson, he continues asking, and eventually Will just snaps.
--> '''Will:''' Horace. You're sitting on top of a great big brown battlehorse. It's nearly two meters high and three meters long and it weighs a quarter of a ton. Of course I can see you.
** Upon further teasing from Horace, Will decides to ignore him and announces that they'll push on for a few more hours before they stop for the night. Horace agrees cheerfully, then worries that they might lose track of him. He could just disappear in the dark. For just a second, Will wishes that his friend ''would'' disappear.
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* The end of Book 10, in which Horace proudly states that he has been named "Kurokuma" (Black Bear) by the Nihon-Ja, in recognition of his prodigious strength and mighty prowess on the battlefield. Alyss then punctures his ego by telling him that [[BigEater it's actually because of his prodigious appetite and mighty prowess at the dinner table.]] As a matter of fact, both are true, but still, it's hilarious.
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* The end of Book 10, end, in which Horace proudly states that he has been named "Kurokuma" (Black Bear) by the Nihon-Ja, in recognition of his prodigious strength and mighty prowess on the battlefield. Alyss then punctures his ego by telling him that [[BigEater it's actually because of his prodigious appetite and mighty prowess at the dinner table.]] As a matter of fact, both are true, but still, it's hilarious.
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* After the celebrations of Horace and Evanlyn's engagements, Will and Alyss are standing with their arms around each other at the bow. He awkwardly suggests to Alyss that they "should think about doing something like that." She pulls away from his arm and [[PlayingHardToGet declares that he'll have to do a lot better than that]] before storming away...so she can hide the delighted grin spread all over her face.
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* After the celebrations of Horace and Evanlyn's engagements, engagement, Will and Alyss are standing with their arms around each other at the bow. He awkwardly suggests to Alyss that they "should think about doing something like that." She pulls away from his arm and [[PlayingHardToGet declares that he'll have to do a lot better than that]] before storming away...so she can hide the delighted grin spread all over her face.
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* Halt and Horace arrive in the Karellen, where Will is having trouble with his pursuit of Tennyson thanks to an uncooperative local, Black O'Malley. Halt, grinning, says that he'll get the information out of the man. He has a sparkling personality and people love talking to him.
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* Halt and Horace arrive in the Karellen, where Will is having trouble with his pursuit of Tennyson thanks to an uncooperative local, Black O'Malley. Halt, grinning, says that he'll get the information out of the man. He has a sparkling personality and people love talking to him.
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* Upon recounting how he saw Will stealing Master Chubb's pies, Horace spots a logical flaw in the order of proceedings, and asks Halt why he was there if he hadn't yet noticed Will. Halt asks indignantly if they're accusing him of planning to steal the pies for himself.
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* Upon recounting Will's conversation with Malcolm as he's trying to figure out how to handle getting the healer back home without delaying their pursuit of Tennyson. Malcolm proposes that he could come with them. Will isn't too keen on the idea of having a non-combatant along and offends Malcolm by accident. The young Ranger quickly wishes he'd never brought the matter up.
* Will comes back from hunting with a small deer but insists that it's enough meat for four people. Halt drily points out something he hadn't considered: it's three people and [[BigEater Horace.]]
* After Halt recounts the day he saw Will stealing Master Chubb's pies, Horace spots a logical flaw in the order ofproceedings, proceedings and asks Halt why he was there if he hadn't yet noticed Will. Halt asks indignantly if they're he's accusing him of planning to steal the pies for himself.
* Will comes back from hunting with a small deer but insists that it's enough meat for four people. Halt drily points out something he hadn't considered: it's three people and [[BigEater Horace.]]
* After Halt recounts the day he saw Will stealing Master Chubb's pies, Horace spots a logical flaw in the order of
