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** Poor Mr. Tanaka is the consummate ButtMonkey, [[TheChewToy Chew Toy]] and was probably BornUnlucky.
** Anytime [[SpoiledBrat Mayune]] gets caught in one of her traps meant to humiliate Himeno. [[spoiler: And the one time Himeno decided to humor her, [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments and fall for one on purpose]].]]
** Anytime [[SpoiledBrat Mayune]] gets caught in one of her traps meant to humiliate Himeno. [[spoiler: And the one time Himeno decided to humor her, [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments and fall for one on purpose]].]]
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** Poor Mr. Tanaka is the consummate ButtMonkey, [[TheChewToy Chew Toy]] and was probably BornUnlucky. Particularly in the final episode of the anime. When upon finally returning to the mansion, the last of the poor man's hair falls out from Natsue telling him she was going to cut his pay for taking so long to get back after the crisis with the Tree of Fenrir was over.
** Anytime [[SpoiledBrat Mayune]] gets caught in one of her traps meant to humiliate Himeno. [[spoiler: And theone time one-time Himeno decided to humor her, [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments and fall for one on purpose]].]]
** Anytime [[SpoiledBrat Mayune]] gets caught in one of her traps meant to humiliate Himeno. [[spoiler: And the
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* Episode 2 "Let Me Hear Your Heart Flutter", starts off with Himeno being first confused, then [[{{Squick}} squicked]] when she learns exactly how a Prétear is created.
* From episode 3, "The Way of Becoming Prétear", Himeno's rather, unorthodox ice cream flavor of choice.
* From episode 3, "The Way of Becoming Prétear", Himeno's rather, unorthodox ice cream flavor of choice.
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* Episode 2 "Let Me Hear Your Heart Flutter", Flutter". The episode starts off with Himeno being first confused, then [[{{Squick}} squicked]] when she learns exactly how a Prétear is created.
* From episode 3, "The Way of BecomingPrétear", Prétear". Himeno's rather, unorthodox ice cream flavor of choice.
* From episode 3, "The Way of Becoming
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* Episode 4, "A Promise Made Under Sunlight" has Himeno, Mannen, Hajime and Shin (along with Mr. Tanaka) running all over the Awayuki Estate in search of a demon larvae. Soon enough the young knights get carried off by a gorilla. Himeno searches high and low for them for them, only to keep bumping into several exotic (and dangerous) animals living on the estate, and Mr. Tanaka gets carried off by a giant bird.
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* Episode 4, "A Promise Made Under Sunlight" has Sunlight". Has Himeno, Mannen, Hajime and Shin (along with Mr. Tanaka) running all over the Awayuki Estate in search of a demon larvae. Soon enough the young knights get carried off by a gorilla. Himeno searches high and low for them for them, only to keep bumping into several exotic (and dangerous) animals living on the estate, and Mr. Tanaka gets carried off by a giant bird.
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** Himeno then comes to the (incorrect) conclusion that he's a peeping tom.
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** Himeno then comes to the (incorrect) conclusion that he's a peeping tom. Causing Hayate to panic when she starts calling to the owner of the house.
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** When Mannen snatches her ice cream from her and tries it, his faces changes colors ''three'' times before he keels over.
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** When Mannen snatches her ice cream from her and tries it, his it. His faces changes colors ''three'' times before he keels over.
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* In the first episode of the anime, the knights trying to find the new Prétear. Mannan gets the (rather clever) idea of having Shin walk up to as many girls as they can find, look cute and take their hands. Unfortunately the poor boy is swamped by girls who keep wanting to pinch his cheeks, causing him to run away crying.
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* In the first episode of the anime, the knights trying to find the new Prétear. Mannan gets the (rather clever) idea of having Shin walk up to as many girls as they can find, look cute and take their hands. Unfortunately the poor boy is swamped by girls who keep wanting to pinch his cheeks, causing him to run away crying.
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--> '''Hayate''': You...are...so...HEAVY! (''throws Himeno off'') Dammit, there are limits even to stupidity! [[LampshadeHanging You jump put of a bush]], land on top of me and expect I wont mind the inconvenience? Damn your heavy. I thought I was gonna die.
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--> '''Hayate''': You...are...so...HEAVY! (''throws Himeno off'') Dammit, there are limits even to stupidity! [[LampshadeHanging You jump put out of a bush]], land on top of me and expect I wont won't mind the inconvenience? Damn your Damn, you're heavy. I thought I was gonna die.
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--> '''Mannen''': (''looking around, still drowsy'') Where's Himeno?
--> '''Sasame''': [[DeadpanSnarker Oh boy...]]
--> '''Sasame''': [[DeadpanSnarker Oh boy...]]
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--> '''Mannen''': (''looking around, still drowsy'') Where's Himeno?
-->Himeno?\\
'''Sasame''': [[DeadpanSnarker Oh boy...]]
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'''Sasame''': [[DeadpanSnarker Oh boy...]]
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** Anytime [[SpoiledBrat Mayune]] gets caught in one of her traps meant to humiliate Himeno. [[spoiler: And the one time Himeno decided to humor her, [[HeartwarmingMoments and fall for one on purpose]].]]
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** Anytime [[SpoiledBrat Mayune]] gets caught in one of her traps meant to humiliate Himeno. [[spoiler: And the one time Himeno decided to humor her, [[HeartwarmingMoments [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments and fall for one on purpose]].]]
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* During episode 6, Mannen, Hajime and Shin take Himeno Leafenia for the first time. While marveling at it's beauty, Himeno promptly falls off their flying ride and when she's rescued, she lands on her head.
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* During episode 6, Mannen, Hajime and Shin take Himeno to Leafenia for the first time. While marveling at it's beauty, Himeno promptly falls off their flying ride and when she's rescued, she lands on her head.
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* Episode 9, "Unreaching Melody", has Himeno's family (plus Mr. Tanaka) set out ghost hunting in the mansion, while wearing cosplay.
** Mannen and the other boys prank the family using Shin's plant powers to make them think a storage shed is haunted.
** Mannen and the other boys prank the family using Shin's plant powers to make them think a storage shed is haunted.
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** Himeno walking around with a roofing tile on her head.
** Himeno racing the family limousine, and running straight into a pole.
** Himeno racing the family limousine, and running straight into a pole.
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--> '''Kei''': [[LampshadeHanging Me too?]]
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* In episode 7 "Can't Protect Anyone Anymore", in a tense moment, Hayate, Go and Sasame begin to argue over how to deal with the Princess of Disaster. Himeno suddenly takes matters into her own hands, separating Sasame and Go. She then proceeds to knock them both over, and follows up with knocking Kei (who wasn't doing anything) over as well.
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* During episode 6, Mannen, Hajime and Shin take Himeno Leafenia for the first time. While marveling at it's beauty, Himeno promptly falls off their flying ride and when she's rescued, she lands on her head.
** Kaoru and Natsue's flirting.
** Kaoru and Natsue's flirting.
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* Near the end of episode 5 "Smile of Darkness", Sasame finds Mannen has fallen asleep while guarding Himeno. When he asks the boy where she is, Mannen's sleepy response is less than helpful.
--> '''Mannen''': (''looking around, still drowsy'') Where's Himeno?
--> '''Sasame''': [[DeadpanSnarker Oh boy...]]
--> '''Mannen''': (''looking around, still drowsy'') Where's Himeno?
--> '''Sasame''': [[DeadpanSnarker Oh boy...]]
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* In episode 4, "A Promise Made Under Sunlight" has Himeno, Mannen, Hajime and Shin (along with Mr. Tanaka) running all over the Awayuki Estate in search of a demon larvae. Soon enough the young knights get carried off by a gorilla. Himeno searches high and low for them for them, only to keep bumping into several exotic (and dangerous) animals living on the estate, and Mr. Tanaka gets carried off by a giant bird.
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* In episode Episode 4, "A Promise Made Under Sunlight" has Himeno, Mannen, Hajime and Shin (along with Mr. Tanaka) running all over the Awayuki Estate in search of a demon larvae. Soon enough the young knights get carried off by a gorilla. Himeno searches high and low for them for them, only to keep bumping into several exotic (and dangerous) animals living on the estate, and Mr. Tanaka gets carried off by a giant bird.
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** Himeno's vain attempts to master the kendama (a variation on the classic cup-and-ball game).
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** Himeno's vain attempts to master the kendama (a [[note]]a variation on the classic cup-and-ball game).game[[/note]].
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* In episode 4, "A Promise Made Under Sunlight" has Himeno, Mannen, Hajime and Shin (along with Mr. Tanaka) running all over the Awayuki Estate in search of a demon larvae. Soon enough the young knights get carried off by a gorilla. Himeno searches high and low for them for them, only to keep bumping into several exotic (and dangerous) animals living on the estate, and Mr. Tanaka gets carried off by a giant bird.
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--> '''Hayate''': Quit [[PrecisionFStrike bitching and just do it]].
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--> '''Hayate''': Quit [[PrecisionFStrike bitching bitching]] and just do it]].it.
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* Himeno's rather, unorthodox ice cream flavor of choice.
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* From episode 3, "The Way of Becoming Prétear", Himeno's rather, unorthodox ice cream flavor of choice.
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* The guy's gape at Hayate, shocked that he's [[spoiler:smiling]].
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** When Mannen snatches her ice cream from her and tries it, his faces changes colors ''three'' times before he keels over.
** Himeno's vain attempts to master the kendama (a variation on the classic cup-and-ball game).
--> '''Himeno''': (''holding the kendama'') You can test my concentration abilities with ''this''?
--> '''Hayate''': Quit [[PrecisionFStrike bitching and just do it]].
*The In the finale, the guy's gape at Hayate, shocked that he's [[spoiler:smiling]].
** Himeno's vain attempts to master the kendama (a variation on the classic cup-and-ball game).
--> '''Himeno''': (''holding the kendama'') You can test my concentration abilities with ''this''?
--> '''Hayate''': Quit [[PrecisionFStrike bitching and just do it]].
*
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** When Himeno meets all the knights for the first time. She then notices Hayate, and gives him her custom MegatonPunch when she believes he'd brought his friends to attack her.
* Himeno's rather, unorthodox ice cream flavor of choice.
--> "[[BizarreTasteInFood I'll have a double scoop of powdered green tea kimchee fermented soybean yogurt, with lots of chocolate chips!]]"
* The guy's gape at Hayate, shocked that he's [[spoiler:smiling]].
--> '''Go''': He's [[spoiler:smiling...?]]
--> '''Kei''': A great distaster is going to happen tomorrow!
* Himeno's rather, unorthodox ice cream flavor of choice.
--> "[[BizarreTasteInFood I'll have a double scoop of powdered green tea kimchee fermented soybean yogurt, with lots of chocolate chips!]]"
* The guy's gape at Hayate, shocked that he's [[spoiler:smiling]].
--> '''Go''': He's [[spoiler:smiling...?]]
--> '''Kei''': A great distaster is going to happen tomorrow!
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** Poor Mr. Tanaka is the consumite ButtMonkey, [[TheChewToy Chew Toy]] and was probably BornUnlucky.
** Anytime Himeno gives Hayate her custom MegatonPunch.
** Anytime SpoiledBrat Mayune gets caught in one of her traps meant to humiliate Himeno. [[spoiler: And the one time Himeno decided to humor her, [[HeartwarmingMoments and fall for one on purpose]].]]
** Anytime Himeno gives Hayate her custom MegatonPunch.
** Anytime SpoiledBrat Mayune gets caught in one of her traps meant to humiliate Himeno. [[spoiler: And the one time Himeno decided to humor her, [[HeartwarmingMoments and fall for one on purpose]].]]
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** Poor Mr. Tanaka is the consumite consummate ButtMonkey, [[TheChewToy Chew Toy]] and was probably BornUnlucky.
** AnytimeHimeno gives Hayate her custom MegatonPunch.
** Anytime SpoiledBrat Mayune[[SpoiledBrat Mayune]] gets caught in one of her traps meant to humiliate Himeno. [[spoiler: And the one time Himeno decided to humor her, [[HeartwarmingMoments and fall for one on purpose]].]]
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** Anytime SpoiledBrat Mayune
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* Himeno's rather, unorthodox ice cream flavor of choice.
--> "[[BizarreTasteInFood I'll have a double scoop of powdered green tea kimchee fermented soybean yogurt, with lots of chocolate chips!]]"
* The guy's gape at Hayate, shocked that he's [[spoiler:smiling]].
--> '''Go''': He's [[spoiler:smiling...?]]
--> '''Kei''': A great distaster is going to happen tomorrow!
--> "[[BizarreTasteInFood I'll have a double scoop of powdered green tea kimchee fermented soybean yogurt, with lots of chocolate chips!]]"
* The guy's gape at Hayate, shocked that he's [[spoiler:smiling]].
--> '''Go''': He's [[spoiler:smiling...?]]
--> '''Kei''': A great distaster is going to happen tomorrow!
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* In the first episode of the anime, the knights trying to find the new Pretear. Mannan gets the (rather clever) idea of having Shin walk up to as many girls as they can find, look cute and take their hands. Unfortunately the poor boy is swamped by girls who keep wanting to pinch his cheeks, causing him to run away crying.
** Goh, doesn't have much luck looking for the Pretear either.
** Goh, doesn't have much luck looking for the Pretear either.
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* In the first episode of the anime, the knights trying to find the new Pretear.Prétear. Mannan gets the (rather clever) idea of having Shin walk up to as many girls as they can find, look cute and take their hands. Unfortunately the poor boy is swamped by girls who keep wanting to pinch his cheeks, causing him to run away crying.
** Goh, doesn't have much luck looking for thePretear Prétear either.
** Goh, doesn't have much luck looking for the
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** Himeno and Hayate's CrashIntoHello.
** Hayate then subverts the usual [[KnightInShiningArmor gentlemanly stereotypes]], by insulting Himeno the first chance he gets.
--> '''Hayate''': You...are...so...HEAVY! (''throws Himeno off'') Dammit, there are limits even to stupidity! [[LampshadeHanging You jump put of a bush]], land on top of me and expect I wont mind the inconvenience? Damn your heavy. I thought I was gonna die.
** Himeno then comes to the (incorrect) conclusion that he's a peeping tom.
** Hayate then subverts the usual [[KnightInShiningArmor gentlemanly stereotypes]], by insulting Himeno the first chance he gets.
--> '''Hayate''': You...are...so...HEAVY! (''throws Himeno off'') Dammit, there are limits even to stupidity! [[LampshadeHanging You jump put of a bush]], land on top of me and expect I wont mind the inconvenience? Damn your heavy. I thought I was gonna die.
** Himeno then comes to the (incorrect) conclusion that he's a peeping tom.
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* In the first episode of the anime, the knights trying to find the new Pretear. Mannan gets the (rather clever) idea of having Shin walk up to as many girls as they can find, look cute and take their hands. Unfortunately the poor boy is swamped by girls who keep wanting to pinch his cheeks, causing him to run away crying.
** Goh, doesn't have much luck looking for the Pretear either.
--> '''Goh''': (''while chasing after some girls'') Hey wait! Why are you running away? [[ComicallyMissingThePoint I just wanna hold your hands!]]
** Goh, doesn't have much luck looking for the Pretear either.
--> '''Goh''': (''while chasing after some girls'') Hey wait! Why are you running away? [[ComicallyMissingThePoint I just wanna hold your hands!]]
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** Poor Mr. Tanaka is the consumite ButtMonkey, TheChewToy and was probably BornUnlucky.
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** Poor Mr. Tanaka is the consumite ButtMonkey, TheChewToy [[TheChewToy Chew Toy]] and was probably BornUnlucky.
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** Anytime SpoiledBrat Mayune gets caught in one of her traps meant to humiliate Himeno. [[spoiler: And the one time Himeno decided to humor her, and fall for one on purpose.]]
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** Anytime SpoiledBrat Mayune gets caught in one of her traps meant to humiliate Himeno. [[spoiler: And the one time Himeno decided to humor her, [[HeartwarmingMoments and fall for one on purpose.purpose]].]]
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* Poor Mr. Tanaka is the consumite ButtMonkey, TheChewToy and was probably BornUnlucky. You can't help but feel for this guy.
* "I'll have a double scoop of powdered green tea kimchee fermented soybean yogurt, with lots of chocolate chips!" ...Seriously?! Who the HELL would eat somthing like '''THAT!?'''
* "I'll have a double scoop of powdered green tea kimchee fermented soybean yogurt, with lots of chocolate chips!" ...Seriously?! Who the HELL would eat somthing like '''THAT!?'''
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* Many of the anime's numerous [[RunningGag Running Gag's]].
** Poor Mr. Tanaka is the consumite ButtMonkey, TheChewToy and was probably BornUnlucky. You can't help but feel
** Anytime Himeno gives Hayate her custom MegatonPunch.
** Anytime SpoiledBrat Mayune gets caught in one of her traps meant to humiliate Himeno. [[spoiler: And the one time Himeno decided to humor her, and fall forthis guy.
one on purpose.]]
** Mayune's tendency to CrashIntoHello with the older Leafe Knights and drag them off to hold her towel for her while she gets cleaned up as a means of seducing them. Only to have said knight sneak off before she gets her chance.
*"I'll Himeno's rather, unorthodox ice cream flavor of choice.
--> "[[BizarreTasteInFood I'll have a double scoop of powdered green tea kimchee fermented soybean yogurt, with lots of chocolatechips!" ...Seriously?! Who the HELL would eat somthing like '''THAT!?'''chips!]]"
** Poor Mr. Tanaka is the consumite ButtMonkey, TheChewToy and was probably BornUnlucky.
** Anytime Himeno gives Hayate her custom MegatonPunch.
** Anytime SpoiledBrat Mayune gets caught in one of her traps meant to humiliate Himeno. [[spoiler: And the one time Himeno decided to humor her, and fall for
** Mayune's tendency to CrashIntoHello with the older Leafe Knights and drag them off to hold her towel for her while she gets cleaned up as a means of seducing them. Only to have said knight sneak off before she gets her chance.
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--> "[[BizarreTasteInFood I'll have a double scoop of powdered green tea kimchee fermented soybean yogurt, with lots of chocolate
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* Anytime Himeno gives Hayate her custom MegatonPunch!
* Anytime spoiled Mayune gets caught in one of her traps meant to humiliate Himeno. [[spoiler:And the one time Himeno decided to humor her, and fall for one on purpose!]]
* Mayune's tendency to CrashIntoHello with the older Leafe Knights and drag them off to hold her towel for her while she gets cleaned up as a means of seducing them. Only to have said knight sneak off before she gets her chance.
* Anytime spoiled Mayune gets caught in one of her traps meant to humiliate Himeno. [[spoiler:And the one time Himeno decided to humor her, and fall for one on purpose!]]
* Mayune's tendency to CrashIntoHello with the older Leafe Knights and drag them off to hold her towel for her while she gets cleaned up as a means of seducing them. Only to have said knight sneak off before she gets her chance.
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* Anytime Himeno gives Hayate her costum MegaTonPunch!
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* Anytime Himeno gives Hayate her costum MegaTonPunch!custom MegatonPunch!
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The flavor she lists along with the powdered green tea and kimchee is \"natto,\" fermented soybeans.
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* "I'll have a double scoop of powdered green tea kimchee unfermented, fermented soybean yogurt, with lots of chocolate chips!" ...Seriously?! Who the HELL would eat somthing like '''THAT!?'''
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* The guy's gape at Hayate, shocked that he's [[spoiler:smileing]].
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* "I'll have a double scoop of powdered green tea kimchee unfermented, soybean yogurt, with lots of chocolate chips!" ...Seriously?! who Who the HELL would eat somthing like '''THAT!'''
'''THAT!?'''
* The guy's gape at Hayate, shocked that he's[[spoiler:smileing]].[[spoiler:smiling]].
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* "I'll have a double scoop of powdered green tea kimchee unfermented, soybean yogurt, with lots of chocolate chips!" ...Seriously?! who the HELL would eat somthing like '''THAT!!!''''''THAT!'''
