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* Appropriately, one of the lines that best establishes and encapsulates [=GLaDOS=]'s character is also one of her funniest:
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* Appropriately, one of the lines that best establishes and encapsulates [=GLaDOS=]'s [=GLaDOS=]' character is also one of her funniest:
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* [=GLaDOS=]'s insults early on in the game are made funnier still by the time and effort it usually requires for the player to realize they've been insulted at all. A good example is her backhanded, importance-deflating praise toward "[[AC:[subject name here]]]."
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* [=GLaDOS=]'s [=GLaDOS=]' insults early on in the game are made funnier still by the time and effort it usually requires for the player to realize they've been insulted at all. A good example is her backhanded, importance-deflating praise toward "[[AC:[subject name here]]]."
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* [=GLaDOS=]'s reaction to you evading getting incinerated:
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* [=GLaDOS=]'s [=GLaDOS=]' reaction to you evading getting incinerated:
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* [=GLaDOS=]'s feeble efforts to deter the player from advancing toward her chamber, and her growing resignation toward their upcoming face-off.
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* [=GLaDOS=]'s [=GLaDOS=]' feeble efforts to deter the player from advancing toward her chamber, and her growing resignation toward their upcoming face-off.
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* The whole fight can be funny, minus the part where you incinerate [=GLaDOS=]'s Morality Core and [[OhCrap she goes completely insane and tries to flood the arena with neurotoxin]].
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* The whole fight can be funny, minus the part where you incinerate [=GLaDOS=]'s [=GLaDOS=]' Morality Core and [[OhCrap she goes completely insane and tries to flood the arena with neurotoxin]].
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* GLaDOS' reaction to you evading getting incinerated:
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* GLaDOS' [=GLaDOS=]'s reaction to you evading getting incinerated:
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* "What are you doing? Stop it! I - I-I-I-[[AC:I-I-I-I]] - [[MoodWhiplash Wwwe are pleased]] that you made it through the final challenge, where we pretended we were going to murder you."
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* "What GLaDOS' reaction to you evading getting incinerated:
-->"What are you doing? Stop it! I - I-I-I-[[AC:I-I-I-I]] - [[MoodWhiplash Wwwe are pleased]] that you made it through the final challenge, where we pretended we were going to murderyou.you. We are very very happy for your success. We are throwing a party in honor of your tremendous success. Place the device on the ground, then lie on your stomach with your arms at your sides. A party associate will arrive shortly to collect you for your party. Make no further attempt to leave the testing area. Assume the Party Escort Submission Position, or you will miss the party."
-->"What are you doing? Stop it! I - I-I-I-[[AC:I-I-I-I]] - [[MoodWhiplash Wwwe are pleased]] that you made it through the final challenge, where we pretended we were going to murder
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* The Turrets in general with their AutoTune voice: [[AC:"Help." "Uh-oh." "Who are you?" "Please put me down." "Critical Error." [[PlayerPunch "I don't hate you."]]]]
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* The Turrets in general with their [[VocalDissonance friendly]] AutoTune voice: [[AC:"Help." "Uh-oh." "Who are you?" "Please put me down." "Critical Error." [[PlayerPunch "I don't hate you."]]]]
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* The Knowledge Core's recipe fore cake has some rather out there ingredients:
-->1 (18.25-ounce) package chocolate cake mix, 1 can prepared coconut–pecan frosting, 3/4 cup vegetable oil, 4 large eggs, 1 cup semi-sweet chocolate chips, 3/4 cup butter or margarine, 1 2/3 cup granulated sugar, 2 cups all-purpose flour; Don't forget garnishes such as Fish-shaped crackers, Fish-shaped candies, Fish-shaped solid waste, Fish-shaped dirt, Fish-shaped ethylbenzene, Pull-and-peel licorice, Fish-shaped volatile organic compounds and sediment-shaped sediment, Candy-coated peanut butter pieces (shaped like fish), 1 cup lemon juice, Alpha resins, Unsaturated polyester resin, Fiberglass surface resins and volatile malted milk impoundments, 9 large egg yolks, 12 medium geosynthetic membranes, 1 cup granulated sugar, an entry called: "How to Kill Someone with Your Bare Hands", 2 cups rhubarb, sliced, 2/3 cups granulated rhubarb, 1 tbsp. all-purpose rhubarb, 1 tsp. grated orange rhubarb, 3 tbsp. rhubarb, on fire, 1 large rhubarb, 1 cross borehole electromagnetic imaging rhubarb, 2 tbsp. rhubarb juice, Adjustable aluminum head positioner, Slaughter electric needle injector, Cordless electric needle injector, Injector needle driver, Injector needle gun, Cranial caps
-->1 (18.25-ounce) package chocolate cake mix, 1 can prepared coconut–pecan frosting, 3/4 cup vegetable oil, 4 large eggs, 1 cup semi-sweet chocolate chips, 3/4 cup butter or margarine, 1 2/3 cup granulated sugar, 2 cups all-purpose flour; Don't forget garnishes such as Fish-shaped crackers, Fish-shaped candies, Fish-shaped solid waste, Fish-shaped dirt, Fish-shaped ethylbenzene, Pull-and-peel licorice, Fish-shaped volatile organic compounds and sediment-shaped sediment, Candy-coated peanut butter pieces (shaped like fish), 1 cup lemon juice, Alpha resins, Unsaturated polyester resin, Fiberglass surface resins and volatile malted milk impoundments, 9 large egg yolks, 12 medium geosynthetic membranes, 1 cup granulated sugar, an entry called: "How to Kill Someone with Your Bare Hands", 2 cups rhubarb, sliced, 2/3 cups granulated rhubarb, 1 tbsp. all-purpose rhubarb, 1 tsp. grated orange rhubarb, 3 tbsp. rhubarb, on fire, 1 large rhubarb, 1 cross borehole electromagnetic imaging rhubarb, 2 tbsp. rhubarb juice, Adjustable aluminum head positioner, Slaughter electric needle injector, Cordless electric needle injector, Injector needle driver, Injector needle gun, Cranial caps
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* Turret: [[AC:"Help." "Uh-oh." "Who are you?" "Please put me down." [[PlayerPunch "I don't hate you."]]]]
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* Turret: The Turrets in general with their AutoTune voice: [[AC:"Help." "Uh-oh." "Who are you?" "Please put me down." "Critical Error." [[PlayerPunch "I don't hate you."]]]]
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** Note that when [=GLaDOS=] calls throwing the core into the incinerator "the dumbest thing [she's] ever seen", her monitor changes to the logo of [[VideoGame/HalfLife Black]] [[TheRival Mesa]].
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** Note that when [=GLaDOS=] calls throwing the core into the incinerator "the dumbest thing [she's] ever seen", her monitor changes to the logo of [[VideoGame/HalfLife Black]] [[TheRival Mesa]]. And shortly afterward, when the effects of the Morality Core's destruction occur, the monitor changes to [[StealthPun a pile of screws]].[[note]][[DontExplainTheJoke Because you're screwed.]][[/note]]
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** Note that when [=GLaDOS=] calls throwing the core into the incinerator "the dumbest thing [she's] ever seen", her monitor changes to the logo of [[VideoGame/HalfLife Black]] [[TheRival Mesa]].
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* "There was even going to be a party for you. A big party. That all your friends were invited to. I invited your best friend the CompanionCube. Of course, he couldn't come because you ''murdered'' him. All your other friends couldn't come either because you don't have any other friends, because of how unlikable you are. It says so right here in your personnel file. "Unlikable. [[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment Liked by no one.]] A bitter, unlikable loner, whose passing shall not be mourned." ''Shall not be mourned.'' That's exactly what it says. Very formal. Very official. It also says you were adopted, so that's funny too."
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* "There was even going to be a party for you. A big party. That all your friends were invited to. I invited your best friend the CompanionCube. Of course, he couldn't come because you ''murdered'' him. All your other friends couldn't come either because you don't have any other friends, because of how unlikable you are. It says so right here in your personnel file. "Unlikable. [[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment Liked by no one.]] A bitter, unlikable loner, whose passing shall not be mourned." ''Shall not be mourned.'' That's exactly what it says. Very formal. Very official. [[AdoptionDiss It also says you were adopted, adopted]], so that's funny too."
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* "What are you doing? Stop it! I - I-I-I-[[AC:I-I-I-I]] - [[MoodWhiplash Wwwe are pleased]] that you made it through the final challenge, [[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial where we pretended we were going to murder you]]."
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* "What are you doing? Stop it! I - I-I-I-[[AC:I-I-I-I]] - [[MoodWhiplash Wwwe are pleased]] that you made it through the final challenge, [[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial where we pretended we were going to murder you]].you."
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* "The Enrichment Center reminds you that the CompanionCube cannot speak. [[CrazyPrepared In the event that the Companion Cube does speak]], the Enrichment Center urges you to disregard its advice."
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* "The Enrichment Center reminds would like to remind you that the Weighted CompanionCube [[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial will never threaten to stab you]] and, in fact, cannot speak. [[CrazyPrepared In the event that the Companion Cube does speak]], the Enrichment Center urges you to disregard its advice."
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---> While it has been a faithful companion, your Companion Cube cannot accompany you through the rest of the test. If it could talk - and the Enrichment Center takes this opportunity to remind you that it cannot - it would tell you to go on without it, [[TheWoobie because it would rather die in a fire than become a burden to you]].]]
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---> While it has been a faithful companion, your Companion Cube cannot accompany you through the rest of the test. If it could talk - and the Enrichment Center takes this opportunity to remind you that it cannot - it would tell you to go on without it, [[TheWoobie because it would rather die in a fire than become a burden to you]].]]
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** In [[BlackComedyBurst a particularly dark bit of comedy even for this game]], [=GLaDOS=] [[spoiler: purposefully twists the knife when the time comes to incinerate the Companion Cube. As if referring to the process as "euthanization" wasn't enough, she says this if you take long enough]]:
--> [[spoiler: While it has been a faithful companion, your Companion Cube cannot accompany you through the rest of the test. If it could talk - and the Enrichment Center takes this opportunity to remind you that it cannot - it would tell you to go on without it, [[TheWoobie because it would rather die in a fire than become a burden to you]].]]
--> [[spoiler: While it has been a faithful companion, your Companion Cube cannot accompany you through the rest of the test. If it could talk - and the Enrichment Center takes this opportunity to remind you that it cannot - it would tell you to go on without it, [[TheWoobie because it would rather die in a fire than become a burden to you]].]]
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** In [[BlackComedyBurst a particularly dark bit of comedy even for this game]], [=GLaDOS=] [[spoiler: purposefully twists the knife when the time comes to incinerate the Companion Cube. As if referring to the process as "euthanization" wasn't enough, she says this if you take long enough]]:
--> [[spoiler:enough:
---> While it has been a faithful companion, your Companion Cube cannot accompany you through the rest of the test. If it could talk - and the Enrichment Center takes this opportunity to remind you that it cannot - it would tell you to go on without it, [[TheWoobie because it would rather die in a fire than become a burden to you]].]]
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---> While it has been a faithful companion, your Companion Cube cannot accompany you through the rest of the test. If it could talk - and the Enrichment Center takes this opportunity to remind you that it cannot - it would tell you to go on without it, [[TheWoobie because it would rather die in a fire than become a burden to you]].]]
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--> "[[spoiler:You euthanized your faithful Companion Cube]] more quickly than any test subject on record. Congratulations."
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*** And then the "Lab Rat" comic confirms that [[spoiler:thanks to Rattman manipulating the computer system, Chell was indeed the first test subject [=GLaDOS=] brought out of suspension]].
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*** And then the "Lab Rat" comic confirms that [[spoiler:thanks thanks to Rattman manipulating the computer system, Chell was indeed the first test subject [=GLaDOS=] brought out of suspension]].suspension.
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"[[YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe You are kidding me]]. Did you just stuff that Aperture Science Thing-We-Don't-Know-What-It-Does into an Aperture Science Emergency Intelligence Incinerator? [[ViolationOfCommonSense That has got to be the dumbest thing that]] -- whoa, [[AC:whoa]], '''[[AC:whoaaa]]''', '''''[[AC:WHOAAAAA]]'''''..."\\
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"[[YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe You are kidding me]]. Did you just stuff that Aperture [Aperture Science Thing-We-Don't-Know-What-It-Does [[BuffySpeak Thing-We-Don't-Know-What-It-Does]] into an Aperture Science Emergency Intelligence Incinerator? [[ViolationOfCommonSense That has got to be the dumbest thing that]] -- whoa, [[AC:whoa]], '''[[AC:whoaaa]]''', '''''[[AC:WHOAAAAA]]'''''..."\\
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* The whole fight can be funny, minus the part where [[spoiler:you incinerate [=GLaDOS=]'s Morality Core and [[OhCrap she goes completely insane and tries to flood the arena with neurotoxin]]]].
** Even then, the dry [[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment redundancy]] with which she describes [[spoiler: the circumstances behind the Morality Core's installation]], amplified further by her flat, robotic delivery, lends that moment a good bit of comedy regardless of how chilling it otherwise is.
** Even then, the dry [[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment redundancy]] with which she describes [[spoiler: the circumstances behind the Morality Core's installation]], amplified further by her flat, robotic delivery, lends that moment a good bit of comedy regardless of how chilling it otherwise is.
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* The whole fight can be funny, minus the part where [[spoiler:you you incinerate [=GLaDOS=]'s Morality Core and [[OhCrap she goes completely insane and tries to flood the arena with neurotoxin]]]].
neurotoxin]].
** Even then, the dry [[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment redundancy]] with which she describes[[spoiler: the circumstances behind the Morality Core's installation]], installation, amplified further by her flat, robotic delivery, lends that moment a good bit of comedy regardless of how chilling it otherwise is.
** Even then, the dry [[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment redundancy]] with which she describes
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* "There was even going to be a party for you. A big party. That all your friends were invited to. I invited your best friend the CompanionCube. Of course, [[spoiler: he couldn't come because you ''murdered'' him]]. All your other friends couldn't come either because you don't have any other friends, because of how unlikable you are. It says so right here in your personnel file. "Unlikable. [[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment Liked by no one.]] A bitter, unlikable loner, whose passing shall not be mourned." ''Shall not be mourned.'' That's exactly what it says. Very formal. Very official. It also says you were adopted, so that's funny too."
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* "There was even going to be a party for you. A big party. That all your friends were invited to. I invited your best friend the CompanionCube. Of course, [[spoiler: he couldn't come because you ''murdered'' him]].him. All your other friends couldn't come either because you don't have any other friends, because of how unlikable you are. It says so right here in your personnel file. "Unlikable. [[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment Liked by no one.]] A bitter, unlikable loner, whose passing shall not be mourned." ''Shall not be mourned.'' That's exactly what it says. Very formal. Very official. It also says you were adopted, so that's funny too."
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** Another: "[[spoiler:Thank you for assuming the Party Escort Submission Position]]."
* Seeing the platform in the final test chamber [[spoiler: lead to a ''pit of fire'']] is so outrageous and unexpected it becomes hilarious.
* Seeing the platform in the final test chamber [[spoiler: lead to a ''pit of fire'']] is so outrageous and unexpected it becomes hilarious.
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** Another: "[[spoiler:Thank "Thank you for assuming the Party Escort Submission Position]].Position."
* Seeing the platform in the final test chamber[[spoiler: lead to a ''pit of fire'']] fire'' is so outrageous and unexpected it becomes hilarious.
* Seeing the platform in the final test chamber
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*** And then the "Lab Rat" comic confirms that [[spoiler:thanks to Rattman manipulating the computer system, Chell was indeed the first test subject [=GLaDOS=] brought out of suspension.
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*** And then the "Lab Rat" comic confirms that [[spoiler:thanks to Rattman manipulating the computer system, Chell was indeed the first test subject [=GLaDOS=] brought out of suspension.suspension]].
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get comfortable
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--->'''SelfDemonstrating/GLaDOS:''' It was a morality core they installed after I flooded the Enrichment Center with a deadly neurotoxin to make me stop flooding the Enrichment Center with a deadly neurotoxin.
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--->'''SelfDemonstrating/GLaDOS:''' It was a morality core they installed after I flooded the Enrichment Center with a deadly neurotoxin to make me stop flooding the Enrichment Center with a deadly neurotoxin. So get comfortable, while I warm up the neurotoxin emitters.
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* During the credits, when "Still Alive" reaches the line "Look at me still talking...", an ASCII rendering of [=GLaDOS=] appears on the screen. "[[VisualPun Look at me]]", indeed