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** When you go to speak with her about the Avalugg mission, Cyllene, otherwise a stoic, blunt woman, will scream in terror because... [[WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes a Wurmple wandered into her office]] (pictured above). She hurriedly orders her Abra to just Teleport it out. With how quickly she returned to her usual stoic self seconds later, you can imagine her forcefully demanding the player character to never tell anyone about this off-screen.
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** When you go to speak with her about the Avalugg mission, Cyllene, otherwise a stoic, blunt woman, will scream in terror because... [[WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes a Wurmple wandered into her office]] (pictured above). She hurriedly orders her Abra to just Teleport it out. With how quickly she returned returns to her usual stoic self seconds later, you can imagine her forcefully demanding that the player character to never tell anyone about this off-screen.
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** When you go to speak with her about the Avalugg mission, Cyllene, otherwise a stoic, blunt woman, will scream in terror because... [[WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes a Wurmple wandered into her office]] (pictured above). She hurriedly orders her Abra to just Teleport it out. And how quickly she returned to her usual stoic self seconds later, you can imagine her forcefully demand the player character to never tell anyone about this off-screen.
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** When you go to speak with her about the Avalugg mission, Cyllene, otherwise a stoic, blunt woman, will scream in terror because... [[WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes a Wurmple wandered into her office]] (pictured above). She hurriedly orders her Abra to just Teleport it out. And With how quickly she returned to her usual stoic self seconds later, you can imagine her forcefully demand demanding the player character to never tell anyone about this off-screen.
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** When you go to speak with her about the Avalugg mission, Cyllene, otherwise a stoic, blunt woman, will scream in terror because... [[WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes a Wurmple wandered into her office]]. She hurriedly orders her Abra to just Teleport it out.
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** When you go to speak with her about the Avalugg mission, Cyllene, otherwise a stoic, blunt woman, will scream in terror because... [[WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes a Wurmple wandered into her office]].office]] (pictured above). She hurriedly orders her Abra to just Teleport it out. And how quickly she returned to her usual stoic self seconds later, you can imagine her forcefully demand the player character to never tell anyone about this off-screen.
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** Just the fact that Lian and Melli's earlier catfighting has become [[SitcomArchNemesis a full-blown Thing]] thanks to the update.
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** Just the fact that Lian and Melli's earlier catfighting cat fighting has become [[SitcomArchNemesis a full-blown Thing]] thanks to the update.update. Mai comments on it, saying she can't tell if they hate each other or if they're having a good time.
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* Once you learn the Red Chain is real, Adaman/Irida will wonder why Pokémon who have power over the human mind can help make an artifact that can "bind the world" and stop the crisis. Cogita asks if we'd even notice the world ending without our minds, adding that some people even say that [[MindScrew the world itself only exists]] because [[YourMindMakesItReal our minds are there to perceive it.]] Adaman, naturally is left even more confused, and Cogita brushes it off as a myth teaching us about the world and to think for ourselves in their own mysterious ways. Volo, naturally, interjects that myths and legends are fascinating to study before setting up this gem to end the conversation:
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* Once you learn the Red Chain is real, Adaman/Irida will wonder why Pokémon who have power over the human mind can help make an artifact that can "bind the world" and stop the crisis. Cogita asks if we'd even notice the world ending without our minds, adding that some people even say that [[MindScrew the world itself only exists]] because [[YourMindMakesItReal our minds are there to perceive it.]] Adaman, naturally Adaman/Irida, naturally, is left even more confused, and Cogita brushes it off as a myth teaching us about the world and to think for ourselves in their own mysterious ways. Volo, naturally, interjects that myths and legends are fascinating to study before setting up this gem to end the conversation:
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** When the player finds Wanda in the Coronet Highlands, she cheerfully states, "At last! Oh, I knew you'd come find me!" It comes off as her poking fun at the whole thing.
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* Melli's opinion of Cresselia when the player is asked to catch the thing? He calls it a "flying croissant".
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* Melli's opinion of Cresselia when the player is asked to catch the thing? He calls it a "flying croissant". Then he gets in a bit of his usual ego by claiming Cresselia can't be ''all'' bad if it recognizes how amazing the arena taken care of by "the great Melli" is.
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** Beauregard also later admits that he might have to change his buddy's nickname. It serves as an excuse to tell the player that they can do so via the menu, but it's still an amusing case of LampshadeHanging narratively.
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** When the player character first picks up the Arc Phone, the game says that you found "something resembling a phone," and it's "probably" yours although it looks different. It comes off as even the narration poking fun at the new shape.
* Iscan's fear of ghosts makes him so reluctant to deal with Dusclops that he ends up referring to it as "dust bops" when he asks you to go catch one, just so he doesn't have to say the name.
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** Shortly after, comedy turns to tragedy as the sisters use Gengar to come from behind and kidnap...the wrong Growlithe. Iscan asks, "This is an emergancy! R-right?" and admits he hasn't battled with Basculegion before.
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** Shortly after, comedy turns to tragedy as the sisters use Gengar to come from behind and kidnap...the wrong Growlithe. Iscan asks, "This is an emergancy! emergency! R-right?" and admits he hasn't battled with Basculegion before.
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* While Kamado is describing the Electrode mission to you, Melli indignantly claims that a "flimsy little noodle" like the player character could never quell Lord Electrode... [[HypocriticalHumor even though]] he's [[NoodlePeople quite noodly himself]].
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** Shortly after, comedy turns to tragedy as the sisters use Gengar to come from behind and kidnap...the wrong Growlithe. Iscan asks, "This is an emergancy! R-right?" and admits he hasn't battled with Basculegion before.
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* After the Miss Fortunes do their clearly highly-rehearsed introduction routine à la anime Team Rocket, Palina can't find it in her to take them seriously.
-->'''Palina:''' You want to take...my partner? If your aim is to pester us with bad jokes, [[DeadpanSnarker those ridiculous introductions of yours were more than enough!]]
-->'''Iscan:''' Y-yes! Exactly what she said!
-->'''Palina:''' You want to take...my partner? If your aim is to pester us with bad jokes, [[DeadpanSnarker those ridiculous introductions of yours were more than enough!]]
-->'''Iscan:''' Y-yes! Exactly what she said!
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** After you beat Charm, Clover will announce that she has revived her and Coin's Pokémon and states that now they can keep fighting until they run out of potions, not unlike what the player character in many a Pokémon game may find themselves doing in difficult situations.
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** After you beat Charm, Clover will announce that she has revived her and Coin's Pokémon and states that now they can keep fighting until they run out of potions, [[LeaningOnTheFourthWall not unlike what the player character in many a Pokémon game may find themselves doing doing]] in difficult situations.
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While technically not chained it's effectively no different.
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-->'''Cogita:''' (nodding her head "no") How nonchalant you sound. [[DeadpanSnarker How confident of successes to which you contribute nothing]]. You tag along [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech only for the chance to gawk at more ancient ruins.]]
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-->'''Cogita:''' (nodding her head "no") How nonchalant you sound. [[DeadpanSnarker How confident of successes to which you contribute nothing]]. nothing.]] You tag along [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech only for the chance to gawk at more ancient ruins.]]
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Fixing indentation; Chained Sinkhole.
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* Once you learn the Red Chain is real, Adaman/Irida will wonder why Pokémon who have power over the human mind can help make an artifact that can "bind the world" and stop the crisis. Cogita asks if we'd even notice the world ending without our minds, adding that some people even say that [[MindScrew the world itself only exists]] because [[YourMindMakesItReal our minds are there to perceive it.]] Adaman, naturally is left even more confused, and Cogita brushes it off as a myth teaching us about the world and to think for ourselves in their own mysterious ways. Volo, naturally, interjects that myths and legends are fascinating to study before setting up this gem:
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* Once you learn the Red Chain is real, Adaman/Irida will wonder why Pokémon who have power over the human mind can help make an artifact that can "bind the world" and stop the crisis. Cogita asks if we'd even notice the world ending without our minds, adding that some people even say that [[MindScrew the world itself only exists]] because [[YourMindMakesItReal our minds are there to perceive it.]] Adaman, naturally is left even more confused, and Cogita brushes it off as a myth teaching us about the world and to think for ourselves in their own mysterious ways. Volo, naturally, interjects that myths and legends are fascinating to study before setting up this gem:gem to end the conversation:
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-->'''Cogita:''' (nodding her head "no") How nonchalant you sound. [[DeadpanSnarker How confident of successes to which you contribute nothing]]. [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech You tag along only for the chance to gawk at more ancient ruins.]]
** And the conversation ends!
** And the conversation ends!
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-->'''Cogita:''' (nodding her head "no") How nonchalant you sound. [[DeadpanSnarker How confident of successes to which you contribute nothing]]. You tag along [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech You tag along only for the chance to gawk at more ancient ruins.]]
** And the conversation ends!]]
** And the conversation ends!
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** Old Verse 17 details the author asking a god of spring and field (Enamorus) where it goes when it's not in Hisui. It didn't answer, but the author has a pretty good guess:
-->''"[[TheUnReveal There is no great dark truth untold]]— it simply [[NotSoAboveItAll does not like the cold]]."''
** The implication that Enamorus can speak English and chose to stay silent.
-->''"[[TheUnReveal There is no great dark truth untold]]— it simply [[NotSoAboveItAll does not like the cold]]."''
** The implication that Enamorus can speak English and chose to stay silent.
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* Once you learn the Red Chain is real, Adaman/Irida will wonder why Pokémon who have power over the human mind can help make an artifact that can "bind the world" and stop the crisis. Cogita asks if we'd even notice the world ending without our minds, adding that some people even say that [[MindScrew the world itself only exists]] because [[YourMindMakesItReal our minds are there to perceive it.]] Adaman, naturally is left even more confused, and Cogita brushes it off as a myth teaching us about the world and to think for ourselves in their own mysterious ways. Volo, naturally, interjects that myths and legends are fascinating to study before setting up this gem:
-->'''Volo:''' In any case, all we have to do is complete [[RuleOfThree two more trials]] and we will get the [[PlotCoupon Red Chain]]!
-->'''Cogita:''' (nodding her head "no") How nonchalant you sound. [[DeadpanSnarker How confident of successes to which you contribute nothing]]. [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech You tag along only for the chance to gawk at more ancient ruins.]]
** And the conversation ends!
-->'''Volo:''' In any case, all we have to do is complete [[RuleOfThree two more trials]] and we will get the [[PlotCoupon Red Chain]]!
-->'''Cogita:''' (nodding her head "no") How nonchalant you sound. [[DeadpanSnarker How confident of successes to which you contribute nothing]]. [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech You tag along only for the chance to gawk at more ancient ruins.]]
** And the conversation ends!
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* After meeting Cogita and choosing a Clan leader to aid you in your quest, you are given the option to seek out the Lake Trio in any order. If you visit Lake Verity last, you go from [[ItMakesSenseInContext throwing balms at a teleporting pixie to no avail]] and [[ItMakesSenseInContext answering a Pokémon anatomy trivia quiz]] to...[[ArsonMurderAndJaywallking talking about your feelings.]]
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* After meeting Cogita and choosing a Clan leader to aid you in your quest, you are given the option to seek out the Lake Trio in any order. If you visit Lake Verity last, you go from [[ItMakesSenseInContext throwing balms at a teleporting pixie to no avail]] and [[ItMakesSenseInContext answering a Pokémon anatomy trivia quiz]] to...[[ArsonMurderAndJaywallking [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking talking about your feelings.]]
