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** James meets Angela for the second time lying in front of a mirror:
-->'''Angela:''' Have you seen my twin?
-->'''Angela:''' Have you seen my twin?
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-->'''Angela:'''
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-->'''Murphy:''' I told you before, sir. It was car theft, evading arrest, and screaming "Oh God, I hope I don't get taken to Ryall State Prison! That would suck!".
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-->'''Murphy:''' I told you before, sir. It was car theft, evading arrest, and screaming "Oh God, I hope I don't get taken to Ryall State Prison! That would suck!".suck!".
** James meets Angela for the second time lying in front of a mirror:
-->'''Angela:''' Have you seen my twin?
-->'''James:''' [[AskAStupidQuestion What does your twin look like?]]
-->'''Angela:''' ...like me.
** James meets Angela for the second time lying in front of a mirror:
-->'''Angela:''' Have you seen my twin?
-->'''James:''' [[AskAStupidQuestion What does your twin look like?]]
-->'''Angela:''' ...like me.
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Changed line(s) 64 (click to see context) from:
* "Unless... Harry is a god! I'm ''so'' going to post that theory."
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* "Unless... Harry is a god! I'm ''so'' going to [[EpilepticTrees post that theory.theory]]."
Changed line(s) 68 (click to see context) from:
-->'''Alex:''' So this is what happens when a man enters a woman's toilet. The apocalypse.
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-->'''Alex:''' So this is what happens when a man enters a woman's toilet. The apocalypse.apocalypse.
* Alex's first conversation with Judge Holloway:
-->'''Judge Holloway:''' ''(regarding Elle)'' I'm sure she'd ''love'' to see you.
-->'''Alex:''' ...I'm going to ignore the fact that you looked at my crotch when you said that.
**
-->'''Alex:''' Perhaps I'll see you later.
-->'''Judge Holloway:''' [[EyeScream Perhaps I'll put a drill through your eyes]].
-->'''Alex:''' What?
* Murphy's flashback of the conversation in Sewell's office in Noisy Hill Downpour Part 8. Especially the end.
-->'''Sewell:''' ''(offscreen, after fading away)'' Murphy, did I leave my office behind?
-->'''Murphy:''' Yeah.
-->'''Sewell:''' Thanks, I'll just get it. ''(office fades away)''
** In the same part, with Coleridge and Murphy discussing how he ended up in prison:
-->'''Coleridge:''' You stole a police cruiser and led them on a ten-hour cruise.
-->'''Murphy:''' I told you before, sir. It was car theft, evading arrest, and screaming "Oh God, I hope I don't get taken to Ryall State Prison! That would suck!".
* Alex's first conversation with Judge Holloway:
-->'''Judge Holloway:''' ''(regarding Elle)'' I'm sure she'd ''love'' to see you.
-->'''Alex:''' ...I'm going to ignore the fact that you looked at my crotch when you said that.
**
-->'''Alex:''' Perhaps I'll see you later.
-->'''Judge Holloway:''' [[EyeScream Perhaps I'll put a drill through your eyes]].
-->'''Alex:''' What?
* Murphy's flashback of the conversation in Sewell's office in Noisy Hill Downpour Part 8. Especially the end.
-->'''Sewell:''' ''(offscreen, after fading away)'' Murphy, did I leave my office behind?
-->'''Murphy:''' Yeah.
-->'''Sewell:''' Thanks, I'll just get it. ''(office fades away)''
** In the same part, with Coleridge and Murphy discussing how he ended up in prison:
-->'''Coleridge:''' You stole a police cruiser and led them on a ten-hour cruise.
-->'''Murphy:''' I told you before, sir. It was car theft, evading arrest, and screaming "Oh God, I hope I don't get taken to Ryall State Prison! That would suck!".
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** When the bus tumbles down the embankment:
-->'''Prisoners:''' ''(singing)'' The entire bus goes round and round, oh my god!
-->'''Prisoners:''' ''(singing)'' The entire bus goes round and round, oh my god!
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-->'''Heather:''' You have lovely eyes. I love the... [[BuffySpeak gougeyness]].
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-->'''Heather:''' You have lovely eyes. I love the... [[BuffySpeak gougeyness]].gougeyness]].
* When the world shifts around Alex in the hospital bathroom:
-->'''Alex:''' So this is what happens when a man enters a woman's toilet. The apocalypse.
* When the world shifts around Alex in the hospital bathroom:
-->'''Alex:''' So this is what happens when a man enters a woman's toilet. The apocalypse.
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Changed line(s) 62 (click to see context) from:
* "Unless... Harry is a god! I'm ''so'' going to post that theory."
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* "Unless... Harry is a god! I'm ''so'' going to post that theory.""
* Heather meets "Danny":
-->'''Heather:''' You have lovely eyes. I love the... [[BuffySpeak gougeyness]].
* Heather meets "Danny":
-->'''Heather:''' You have lovely eyes. I love the... [[BuffySpeak gougeyness]].
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Changed line(s) 61 (click to see context) from:
* The entire parody review of Silent Hill Revelation.
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* The entire parody review of Silent Hill Revelation.Revelation.
* "Unless... Harry is a god! I'm ''so'' going to post that theory."
* "Unless... Harry is a god! I'm ''so'' going to post that theory."
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Changed line(s) 60 (click to see context) from:
-->'''Prisoners:''' (singing) Who stole the cookie from the cookie jar? Peter stole the cookie from the cookie jar. That's why he's in prison. (short pause) 99 bottles of beer on the wall, 99 bottles of beer. You take one down, Brian drinks from it because he's an alcoholic. And in a drunken rage he kills his best friend. That's why he's in prison. 98 bottles of beer on the wall.
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-->'''Prisoners:''' (singing) Who stole the cookie from the cookie jar? Peter stole the cookie from the cookie jar. That's why he's in prison. (short pause) 99 bottles of beer on the wall, 99 bottles of beer. You take one down, Brian drinks from it because he's an alcoholic. And in a drunken rage he kills his best friend. That's why he's in prison. 98 bottles of beer on the wall.wall.
* The entire parody review of Silent Hill Revelation.
* The entire parody review of Silent Hill Revelation.
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-->'''Prisoners:''' The wheels on the bus go round and round, round and round, round and round.
-->'''Anne:''' Oh God, please shut up.
-->'''Anne:''' Oh God, please shut up.
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-->'''Prisoners:''' (singing) The wheels on the bus go round and round, round and round, round and round.
-->'''Anne:''' Oh God, please shutup.up.
-->''Scene fades out, fading back in to showing the bus driving in the rain''
-->'''Prisoners:''' (singing) Who stole the cookie from the cookie jar? Peter stole the cookie from the cookie jar. That's why he's in prison. (short pause) 99 bottles of beer on the wall, 99 bottles of beer. You take one down, Brian drinks from it because he's an alcoholic. And in a drunken rage he kills his best friend. That's why he's in prison. 98 bottles of beer on the wall.
-->'''Anne:''' Oh God, please shut
-->''Scene fades out, fading back in to showing the bus driving in the rain''
-->'''Prisoners:''' (singing) Who stole the cookie from the cookie jar? Peter stole the cookie from the cookie jar. That's why he's in prison. (short pause) 99 bottles of beer on the wall, 99 bottles of beer. You take one down, Brian drinks from it because he's an alcoholic. And in a drunken rage he kills his best friend. That's why he's in prison. 98 bottles of beer on the wall.
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-->'''Kaufmann:''' So they got married. It was a lovely ceremony. Only the four of them there. No, wait, the Bull wasn't... Anyway. Sorry, I can't remember why there's a Bull in this story. She decides to run. She runs into a field, ignoring the signs saying "Look out, depressive Bull in field".
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-->'''Kaufmann:''' So they got married. It was a lovely ceremony. Only the four of them there. No, wait, the Bull wasn't... Anyway. Sorry, I can't remember why there's a Bull in this story. She decides to run. She runs into a field, ignoring the signs saying "Look out, depressive Bull in field".field".
* Part 2 of Noisy Hill: Downpour when the prisoners on the bus sing.
-->'''Prisoners:''' The wheels on the bus go round and round, round and round, round and round.
-->'''Anne:''' Oh God, please shut up.
* Part 2 of Noisy Hill: Downpour when the prisoners on the bus sing.
-->'''Prisoners:''' The wheels on the bus go round and round, round and round, round and round.
-->'''Anne:''' Oh God, please shut up.
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* The entire story telling bit in part 11 of Noisy Hill Shattered Memories, with Kaufmann forgetting a few times what the bull's part in the story is, Cheryl playing around with the figurines and when it ''glitches up'' at the end, leaving the three human figurines floating in mid-air.
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* The entire story telling bit in part 11 of Noisy Hill Shattered Memories, with Kaufmann forgetting a few times what the bull's part in the story is, Cheryl playing around with the figurines and when it ''glitches up'' at the end, leaving the three human figurines floating in mid-air.mid-air.
-->'''Kaufmann:''' So Wilhelm is passionately in love with the Bull. No, sorry, not... I introduced them in a weird order for no reason, and now I've gotten all confused. No-one's in love with the Bull. But the Bull is fine with that. I imagine... I don't really know if... Well, it's my story, I suppose I can do what I want. No, let's say the Bull is not fine with that. The Bull is depressed and suicidal and... OK, I'm getting sidetracked.
-->'''Kaufmann:''' So they got married. It was a lovely ceremony. Only the four of them there. No, wait, the Bull wasn't... Anyway. Sorry, I can't remember why there's a Bull in this story. She decides to run. She runs into a field, ignoring the signs saying "Look out, depressive Bull in field".
-->'''Kaufmann:''' So Wilhelm is passionately in love with the Bull. No, sorry, not... I introduced them in a weird order for no reason, and now I've gotten all confused. No-one's in love with the Bull. But the Bull is fine with that. I imagine... I don't really know if... Well, it's my story, I suppose I can do what I want. No, let's say the Bull is not fine with that. The Bull is depressed and suicidal and... OK, I'm getting sidetracked.
-->'''Kaufmann:''' So they got married. It was a lovely ceremony. Only the four of them there. No, wait, the Bull wasn't... Anyway. Sorry, I can't remember why there's a Bull in this story. She decides to run. She runs into a field, ignoring the signs saying "Look out, depressive Bull in field".
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* Michelle's song in part 6 of Noisy Hill Shattered Memories.
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* Michelle's song in part 6 of Noisy Hill Shattered Memories.Memories.
* The entire story telling bit in part 11 of Noisy Hill Shattered Memories, with Kaufmann forgetting a few times what the bull's part in the story is, Cheryl playing around with the figurines and when it ''glitches up'' at the end, leaving the three human figurines floating in mid-air.
* The entire story telling bit in part 11 of Noisy Hill Shattered Memories, with Kaufmann forgetting a few times what the bull's part in the story is, Cheryl playing around with the figurines and when it ''glitches up'' at the end, leaving the three human figurines floating in mid-air.
