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--->(The Bug in his new "Edgar suit" clumsily bangs into the front door, then walks inside)\\
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** Then when Beatrice notices something is horribly wrong, as "Edgar"'s skin folds in on itself while he's drinking:
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** Then when Beatrice notices something is horribly wrong, as "Edgar"'s "Edgar's" skin folds in on itself while he's drinking:
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''(The Bug turns to look in the mirror, complete with a sound effect of the water swishing around in his stomach)''\\
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''(Beatrice faints)''
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-->'''Edgar:''' I go out, I work my butt off to make a living, all I want is to come home to a nice clean house with a nice fat steak on the table, but instead I get this. It looks like poison. [[HypocriticalHumor Hey, don't you take that away, I'm eating that, damn it!]] It is poison, isn't it? I swear to God I would not be surprised if it was, the way you skulk around here like a dog that's been hit too much or ain't been hit enough, I can't make up my mind. You're useless, Beatrice. The only thing that pulls its weight around here is my goddamn truck!\\
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-->'''Edgar:''' I go out, I work my butt off to make a living, all I want is to come home to a nice clean house with a nice fat steak on the table, but instead I get this. It looks like poison. [[HypocriticalHumor Hey, don't you take that away, I'm eating that, damn it!]] dammit!]] It is ''is'' poison, isn't it? it?! I swear to God God, I would not be surprised if it was, the was. The way you skulk around here like a dog that's been hit too much or ain't been hit enough, I can't make up my mind. You're useless, Beatrice. The only thing that pulls its weight around here is my goddamn truck!\\''goddamn truck!''\\
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'''Edgar:''' You can have my gun ''[[[DramaticGunCock cocks shotgun]]]'' [[TemptingFate when you pry it from my cold, dead fingers]].\\
'''Bug:''' [[ExactWords Your proposal]] [[ThreatBackfire is acceptable]]. ''[Pulls Edgar into the crater]''
'''Bug:''' [[ExactWords Your proposal]] [[ThreatBackfire is acceptable]]. ''[Pulls Edgar into the crater]''
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'''Edgar:''' You can have my gun ''[[[DramaticGunCock gun... ''([[DramaticGunCock cocks shotgun]]]'' shotgun]])'' [[TemptingFate when you pry it from my cold, dead fingers]].\\
'''Bug:''' [[ExactWords Your proposal]] [[ThreatBackfire is acceptable]].''[Pulls ''(pulls Edgar into the crater]''crater)''
'''Bug:''' [[ExactWords Your proposal]] [[ThreatBackfire is acceptable]].
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'''Jake Jenson:''' Second Lieutenant, Jake Jenson. West Point. Graduate with honors. We're here because you are looking for the best of the best of the best, sir! ''[shoots James a snobbish glare but Edwards bursts out laughing]''\\
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'''Jake Jenson:''' Second Lieutenant, Jake Jenson. West Point. Graduate with honors. We're here because you are looking for the best of the best of the best, sir! ''[shoots ''(shoots James a snobbish glare glare, but Edwards bursts out laughing]''\\laughing)''\\
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** That's not even the half of it. Creator/WillSmith was at one point considered for the part of the ''Good Captain himself!''
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** That's not even the half of it. Creator/WillSmith was at one point considered for the part of the ''Good Captain ''good captain himself!''
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** And then would-be! J pulls the little table in the room towards him. Oh, God, the noise...'''''the NOISE''''' it makes! ''WebVideo/CinemaSins'' had to take a sin off of this film because of how funny it was.
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** And then would-be! J pulls the little table in the room towards him. Oh, God, the noise... '''''the NOISE''''' it makes! ''WebVideo/CinemaSins'' had to take a sin off of this film because of how funny it was.
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-->'''Kay:''' Have a look at this, please...''(triggers neuralizer)''\\
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-->'''Kay:''' Have a look at this, please... ''(triggers neuralizer)''\\
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'''Kay:''' Never hurt her before...''(he leaves, Jay in tow)''\\
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'''Kay:''' Never hurt her before... ''(he leaves, Jay in tow)''\\
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--->'''Kay:''' (pats Reggie on the back) Congratulations Reg, it's a... squid.\\
'''Jay:''' ''(cradling newborn)'' Well, actually...it is kinda--\\
''(The newborn alien projectile vomits all over Jay's face)''\\
'''Jay:''' ''(cradling newborn)'' Well, actually...it is kinda--\\
''(The newborn alien projectile vomits all over Jay's face)''\\
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--->'''Kay:''' (pats ''(pats Reggie on the back) back)'' Congratulations Reg, it's a... squid.\\
'''Jay:''' ''(cradling newborn)'' Well, actually... it iskinda--\\
''(Thekinda–\\
''[The newborn alien projectile vomits all over Jay'sface)''\\face.]''\\
'''Jay:''' ''(cradling newborn)'' Well, actually... it is
''(The
''[The newborn alien projectile vomits all over Jay's
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''([[ThousandYardStare Jay just stares at him]], still covered in sticky squid-juice)''\\
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'''Jay:''' ''(gawking as he receives his weapon)'' Kay...hey, man! You get a series-4 deatomizer and I get this little midget cricket?!\\
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'''Jay:''' ''(gawking as he receives his weapon)'' Kay... hey, man! You get a series-4 deatomizer and I get this little midget cricket?!\\
