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-->'''Shinigami:''' Oh? Did we get trapped inside a locked room again? But... if the mystery isn't solved, then I won't escape this place... *gasp*... Trapped in a cramped room with these two... ...[[AThreesomeIsHot sounds kinda fun]], actually.
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-->'''Shinigami:''' Oh? Did we get trapped inside a locked room again? But... if the mystery isn't solved, then I won't escape this place... *gasp*...''(gasp)''... Trapped in a cramped room with these two... ...[[AThreesomeIsHot sounds kinda fun]], actually.
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* When Makoto is taken away under Yomi's order, with Yomi making petty threats as usual, this exchange happens. They're the main villains, so it's more of a case of BlackComedy, but it still applies.
-->'''Yomi:''' ''(sarcastically)'' Hey, tell Mr. CEO that he doesn't belong here. Politely escort him out. Make sure he can still talk though. There are plenty of things I need to ask him.\\
'''Makoto:''' ''(nonchalantly)'' What a coincidence, I was hoping to have a nice chat with you too.
-->'''Yomi:''' ''(sarcastically)'' Hey, tell Mr. CEO that he doesn't belong here. Politely escort him out. Make sure he can still talk though. There are plenty of things I need to ask him.\\
'''Makoto:''' ''(nonchalantly)'' What a coincidence, I was hoping to have a nice chat with you too.
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* During their confrontation at the bath house, Yuma says that he has Makoto cornered. Makoto responds by pulling out a gun.
* Selecting Makoto's pants when asked to point to something that seems strange about him results in Yuma wondering to himself how much Makoto's suit costs.
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* Pointing out inccorect spots when asked "what's strange about Makoto?" results in Yuma making funny observations in the middle of the tense showdown, like "I wonder how much that suit costs" and "how many masks does he even have?"
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* When Yuma first meets Makoto, he's relaxing in a hot tub in his living room, completely naked except for his mask. After drying off and getting dressed, he asks Yuma if he'd like a turn in the bath, adding that Yuma can hop in fully clothed if he's uncomfortable with being undressed around a stranger, and he himself bathes fully clothed occasionally.
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* After Dr. Huesca refuses to speak with him, Makoto button-mashes the intercom and then shoves Yuma in front of it before going to lounge dramatically on a nearby couch.
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* When Fubuki confesses to having developed romantic feelings for him, Yuma is in disbelief, declaring there is no way someone as beautiful as her could feel that way about someone like him. Fubuki dismisses this objection by noting that she thinks Yuma is quite attractive too(i.e. her beauty shouldn't disqualify him from her interests).
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* When Fubuki confesses to having developed romantic feelings for him, Yuma is in disbelief, declaring there is no way someone as beautiful as her could feel that way about someone like him. Fubuki dismisses this objection by noting that she thinks Yuma is quite attractive too(i.too (i.e. her beauty shouldn't disqualify him from her interests).
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* Pointing out inccorect spots when asked "what's strange about Makoto?" results in Yuma making funny observations in the middle of the tense showdown, like "I wonder how much that suit costs" and "how many masks does he even have?"
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* Fubuki's EpicFail when following after Halara at the beginning.
-->'''Yakou:''' Yes, Fubuki, please go team up with Halara!\\
'''Fubuki:''' ''(salutes)'' Roger that! Off I go! ''(runs the opposite direction of the exit, then turns the right direction)'' The exit is over ''here''!
-->'''Yakou:''' Yes, Fubuki, please go team up with Halara!\\
'''Fubuki:''' ''(salutes)'' Roger that! Off I go! ''(runs the opposite direction of the exit, then turns the right direction)'' The exit is over ''here''!
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* When Fubuki confesses to having developed romantic feelings for him, Yuma is in disbelief, declaring there is no way someone as beautiful as her could feel that way about someone like him. Fubuki dismisses this objection by noting that she thinks Yuma is quite attractive too(i.e. her beauty shouldn't disqualify him from her interests).
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* The method Shinigami uses to get Yuma out of his HeroicBSOD is to bash her way into the room he has sealed himself in, wrap herself around him, and literally ''twist'' and ''snap'' his his sealed-stiff body repeatedly until he comes back to his senses.
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* The method Shinigami uses to get Yuma out of his HeroicBSOD is to bash her way into the room he has sealed himself in, wrap herself around him, and literally ''twist'' and ''snap'' his his sealed-stiff body repeatedly until he comes back to his senses.
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* At the end, Makoto casually has the NDA Submarine rebuilt. Shinigami is impressed [[LampshadeHanging that the mess and grime is exactly the same as before]].
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* At the end, Makoto casually has the NDA Submarine rebuilt. Shinigami is impressed [[LampshadeHanging that the mess and grime is exactly the same as before]].
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* Fitting for the setting of an all-girls high school, the character portraits of the students (aside from Kurumi and teachers there are inexplicably drawn in a shoujo-esque style rather than the usual Rui Komatsuzaki format.
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* Fitting for the setting of an all-girls high school, the character portraits of the students (aside from Kurumi and teachers there are inexplicably drawn in a shoujo-esque style rather than the usual Rui Komatsuzaki format.
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* At the end, Makoto casually has the NDA Submarine rebuilt. Shinigami is impressed [[LampshadeHanging that the mess and grime is exactly the same as before]].
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* A throwaway reveal shows that the Clockford family don't merely deal with clocks; they literally ''govern the world's concept of time''.
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* When needing to clear out the cafe in Ginma so Yuma can disarm the bomb, he tells Fubuki to think of something. Her solution? Puff on a whistle and ''tell the customers there's somewhere else with better coffee''. It ''works''.
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* After Fubuki runs off ahead in the Labyrinth, she's surrounded by a swarm of [=Qs=] and apparently somehow made friends with them.
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* At one point Shinigami remarks that rather than the villain Fubuki thinks she is, if anything she's the secret protagonist of the story.
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* The way Shinigami describes herself to Yuma, complete with BigBreastPride regarding how "puffy" she is:
-->'''Shinigami:''' You're not alone! You've got a kind, teasing, needy, adorable, puffy partner by your side!
-->'''Shinigami:''' You're not alone! You've got a kind, teasing, needy, adorable, puffy partner by your side!
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* Upon entering the Mystery Labyrinth, Shinigami produces the Solution Keys [[RainbowPuke in the usual way]]... and then afterwards reveals that ''she could have just simply materialized them the whole time'' but that she wanted to do it this way again for old time's sake. Yuma is understandably confused and slightly annoyed that she chose to do it this way at all.
** On a similar note, near the end it's revealed that the Deduction Denouement at the end of each case is a literal thing that happens instead of just a summary for the player. Shinigami remarks that she does it for Yuma and she'd like him to thank her for it, Yuma apologizing and saying he always thought it was just part of her "process."
** On a similar note, near the end it's revealed that the Deduction Denouement at the end of each case is a literal thing that happens instead of just a summary for the player. Shinigami remarks that she does it for Yuma and she'd like him to thank her for it, Yuma apologizing and saying he always thought it was just part of her "process."
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* A heartwarming, ShipTease scene of a blushing Shinigami and Yuma entering the labyrinth holding hands ends with her letting go halfway so that Yuma still gets a hard landing in the labyrinth itself. Shinigami reasons it would be bad luck to end the tradition of Yuma falling into the labyrinth.
* Upon entering the Mystery Labyrinth, Shinigami produces the Solution Keys [[RainbowPuke in the usual way]]... and thenafterwards afterward Yuma thanks her, to Shinigami's surprise. She then reveals that ''she could have just simply materialized them the whole time'' but that she wanted to do it this way again for old time's sake.sake and is happy she did because Yuma thanked her for it this time. Yuma is understandably confused and slightly annoyed that she chose to do it this way at all.
** On a similar note, near the end it's revealed that the Deduction Denouement at the end of each case is a literal thing that happens instead of just a summary for the player. Shinigami remarks that she does it for Yuma and she'd like him to thank her forit, it too, Yuma apologizing and saying he always thought it was just part of her "process.""
* The presence of Mystery Phantoms that look like Yuma allows for a RunningGag of Shinigami calling them "Master" as well and poking fun at their appearance or intelligence, while Yuma lampshades that she's basically saying the same about him (or in other contexts, reminding her that the phantoms are ''not'' him).
* The method Shinigami uses to get Yuma out of his HeroicBSOD is to bash her way into the room he has sealed himself in, wrap herself around him, and literally ''twist'' and ''snap'' his his sealed-stiff body repeatedly until he comes back to his senses.
* Upon entering the Mystery Labyrinth, Shinigami produces the Solution Keys [[RainbowPuke in the usual way]]... and then
** On a similar note, near the end it's revealed that the Deduction Denouement at the end of each case is a literal thing that happens instead of just a summary for the player. Shinigami remarks that she does it for Yuma and she'd like him to thank her for
* The presence of Mystery Phantoms that look like Yuma allows for a RunningGag of Shinigami calling them "Master" as well and poking fun at their appearance or intelligence, while Yuma lampshades that she's basically saying the same about him (or in other contexts, reminding her that the phantoms are ''not'' him).
* The method Shinigami uses to get Yuma out of his HeroicBSOD is to bash her way into the room he has sealed himself in, wrap herself around him, and literally ''twist'' and ''snap'' his his sealed-stiff body repeatedly until he comes back to his senses.
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* When Fubuki [[RememberedTooLate remembers too late]] the detective agency's backup meeting place despite being with Yuma the whole time as Yakou remids her, '''everyone''' at the scene reacts with total bewilderment, including Kurumi.
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* When Fubuki [[RememberedTooLate remembers too late]] the detective agency's backup meeting place despite being with Yuma the whole time as Yakou remids her, '''everyone''' at the scene reacts with total bewilderment, including Kurumi.
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* In a bit of dark humor, Makoto lampshades how "the biggest dimwit" among Yuma's friends (i.e. Fubuki) survived the longest, perhaps due to her overpowered ability. The letter supposedly written by Fubuki that gives more exposition tries to have her stay in character by having her say she does not understand what she discovered and is simply copying the information down word for word.
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* After Shinigami froze time and opened the portal to the mystery labyrinth, Desuhiko almost immediately flirts with her at first sight, which is a mistake, as she retaliates by [[RapidFireFisticuffs rapidly beating him up]], knocking him and Yuma into the portal.
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* Vivia's utter lack of motivation and downer behavior arguably irritating Shinigami more than any of the other partners Yuma brought into the Mystery Labyrinth. She outright says she's going to ignore him, only to fail repeatedly as he simply annoys her too much.
* Vivia is actually quite ''happy'' to hear his Forte won't work in the Labyrinth, as it gives him even less reason to do anything other than tag along.
* Vivia is actually quite ''happy'' to hear his Forte won't work in the Labyrinth, as it gives him even less reason to do anything other than tag along.
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* Fubuki in disguise is easily recognizable even before she speaks thanks to her retaining her characteristic "girly" walk animation. Also, while in disguise she is labeled with the hilariously unfitting moniker of "forceful Peacekeeper." And when Yuma does not immediately recognize her, Fubuki fears his amnesia has gotten worse and he has literally forgotten who she is.
* Fubuki completely misunderstanding Desuhiko's plan to have her flirt with Dr.Huesca to get him to let them in.
-->'''Fubuki:''' Desuhiko says he will serve you with all his heart, nya!
* Fubuki completely misunderstanding Desuhiko's plan to have her flirt with Dr.Huesca to get him to let them in.
-->'''Fubuki:''' Desuhiko says he will serve you with all his heart, nya!
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* When Yuma doubts Shinigami's assertion that she doesn't know of any connection between him and the Ramen Stand Owner, she suddenly asserts that if she's lying then she'll do a handstand naked. Yuma points out that she's already not really wearing anything in this form.
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* Fubuki covering her face with her hands only to [[CovertPervert keep watching]] through her spread fingers while Yuma and Shinigami go through their usual intimate pulling-sword-from-her-mouth routine. She then interprets it as Shinigami having hidden a weapon on herself and Yuma disarming her.
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* After deciding the crime was a homicide, the question becomes specifically why this is the case. Fubuki simply says she agrees with Yuma, despite him not having said anything yet.
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* Kurumi's irritated expression upon seeing Yuma and Fubuki holding hands. When Yuma tries to explain it's for the investigation, she pouts while mildly believing so.
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* Kurumi's irritated expression upon seeing Yuma and Fubuki holding hands. When Yuma tries to explain it's for the investigation, she pouts adorably while mildly believing so.so. Fubuki's factual but misleading attempt to explain why they're holding hands doesn't help matters:
-->'''Fubuki:''' Yes. In order to share time together, we clutch our hands tight to one another. Until Yuma dies... No, even in death, I am sworn to never let go.
* Fubuki matter-of-factly noting time has stopped (upon the summoning of the Mystery Labyrinth), as for her family witnessing such a thing is not unusual.
-->'''Fubuki:''' Yes. In order to share time together, we clutch our hands tight to one another. Until Yuma dies... No, even in death, I am sworn to never let go.
* Fubuki matter-of-factly noting time has stopped (upon the summoning of the Mystery Labyrinth), as for her family witnessing such a thing is not unusual.
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-->'''Fubuki:''' I am so naive that the servants [[ComicallyMissingThePoint call me "dummy thicc" behind my back.]]
* There is a RunninGag throughout the chapter with Fubuki matter-of-factly remarking on how she and Yuma are the only survivors of the NDA, with Yuma having to correct her each time that they don't know that.
* There is a RunninGag throughout the chapter with Fubuki matter-of-factly remarking on how she and Yuma are the only survivors of the NDA, with Yuma having to correct her each time that they don't know that.
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-->'''Fubuki:''' I am so naive that the servants [[ComicallyMissingThePoint call me "dummy thicc" behind my back.]]
]] [[note]]This is a rather clever take on the similar joke in Japanese, where the servants call her "muchimuchi." Muchi on its own means "ignorant," but when doubled up it means "voluptuous." Fubuki though interpreted the doubling up as them calling her very ignorant.[[/note]]
* There is aRunninGag RunningGag throughout the chapter with Fubuki matter-of-factly remarking on how she and Yuma are the only survivors of the NDA, with Yuma having to correct her each time that they don't know that.that.
* Yuma retaining memory of Fubuki turning back time (due to his Coalescence) leads to Fubuki jumping to the conclusion that he is a member of the Clockford family, perhaps even a long lost brother.
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* Yuma retaining memory of Fubuki turning back time (due to his Coalescence) leads to Fubuki jumping to the conclusion that he is a member of the Clockford family, perhaps even a long lost brother.
