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** Then there's Ron's misfortune during the first task, when badly timed flatulence gets ignited by the dragon, resulting in a very Newtonian reaction (Harry comments "I'll give him a seven on distance but the landing sucked"). Maxime is surprised when the audience starts applauding, until she's informed that they're congratulating ''the dragon'', who responds by actually taking a bow.
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** Then there's Ron's misfortune [[https://imagine.e-fic.com/viewstory.php?sid=728&textsize=0&chapter=17 during the first task, task]], when badly timed flatulence gets ignited by the dragon, resulting in a very Newtonian reaction (Harry comments "I'll give him a seven on distance but the landing sucked"). Maxime is surprised when the audience starts applauding, until she's informed that they're congratulating ''the dragon'', who responds by actually taking a bow.
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** Then there's Ron's misfortune during the first task, when badly timed flatulence gets ignited by the dragon, resulting in a very Newtonian reaction (Harry comments "I'll give him a seven on distance but the landing sucked"). Maxime is surprised when the audience starts applauding, until she's informed that they're congratulating ''the dragon'', who responds by actually taking a bow.
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* ''[[http://www.nodignity.com/freaks/nqm/nqm1.html Naked Quidditch Match]]''. All of Harry and Voldemort's correspondence, full stop:
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* ''[[http://www.nodignity.com/freaks/nqm/nqm1.html Naked Quidditch Match]]''. ''Fanfic/TheNakedQuidditchMatch'': All of Harry and Voldemort's correspondence, full stop:
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* "[[http://www.harrypotterfanfiction.com/viewstory.php?psid=94119 A story of pain and sorrow, not intented for comfort or laughter...]]a story that remains untold, on of abuse and blood...telling of a shattered girl who learned to twist a heart of stone into one of warm gold. This is not a story for the faint of heart, nor the happy in spirit. But for those who are able to understand what it means to be hurt...to watch as a girl's spirit is shattered like glass upon concrete. Watch as she melts the young master's heart of ice, and watch as she helps him heal. She has no name, but his... is Señor Draco."
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* "[[http://www.harrypotterfanfiction.com/viewstory.php?psid=94119 A story of pain and sorrow, not intented for comfort or laughter...]]a ]] a story that remains untold, on of abuse and blood...blood... telling of a shattered girl who learned to twist a heart of stone into one of warm gold. This is not a story for the faint of heart, nor the happy in spirit. But for those who are able to understand what it means to be hurt... to watch as a girl's spirit is shattered like glass upon concrete. Watch as she melts the young master's heart of ice, and watch as she helps him heal. She has no name, but his... is Señor Draco."
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** Cho wondering if Ebony was GoingCommmando since on the first sex scene, there's no mention of either her or Draco removing any panties. Ginny also wonders how they could be against a tree if Draco has to climb on top of Ebony.
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** Cho wondering if Ebony was GoingCommmando GoingCommando since on the first sex scene, there's no mention of either her or Draco removing any panties. Ginny also wonders how they could be against a tree if Draco has to climb on top of Ebony.
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* From ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7105436/1/Harry-Potter-and-Friends-read-My-Immortal Harry Potter and Friends Read My Immortal]]'':
** Lee Jordan thinking that Ebony must support incest due to wishing she were related to Gerard Way because he's hot.
** The students are sitting on the floor, listening to Ron read the story, so Seamus thinks it resembles "story time in kindergarten".
** When Harry says that Ebony's IQ is ten points lower than that of a mountain troll, Neville berates him for being rude... [[InsultToRocks to mountain trolls]].
** George saying it's good the {{Original Character}}s are in Slytherin because "we bloody don't want them".
** Hermione thinks everyone should have a go reading the story, but Ron thinks only he should, because otherwise it wouldn't be as "real". Harry agrees with Ron... but only because he finds Ron's reading style funny.
** Cedric describes Ebony's outfit with the spiky purple hair as looking like a "gothic blow fish".
** Fred saying that the story turned Draco into a "sissy boy" by having him wear makeup, and then Ron wondering how Ebony exclaimed in a "depressed" voice.
** Cho wondering if Ebony was GoingCommmando since on the first sex scene, there's no mention of either her or Draco removing any panties. Ginny also wonders how they could be against a tree if Draco has to climb on top of Ebony.
** On the infamous "WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING, YOU MOTHERFUCKERS!?" scene, George says that he wants to yell that in Snape's class, but Ron tells him not to or Snape would bite his head off.
** When, in the story, [=McGonagall=] is the one who calls names while Snape is the nonchalant one, the kids think the author got them round the wrong way.
** Ron's comment "Wow, and I thought I had bad spelling!".
** When Ebony "roars", [[CloudCuckoolander Luna]] thinks that [[InsaneTrollLogic she should be in Gryffindor, since roaring is what lions do]].
** Harry's sheer rage at being written as someone who wears makeup, grumbles while making introductions, goes by Vampire, drinks blood, giggles, and whimpers.
** When "flaming" is misspelled as "flassing", Marietta says, "Stop flossing? Okay, then I'll be able to get cavities."
** Justin calls Snape his "hero" for telling Ebony off. The others look at him funny, but he counters that ''everyone'' who tells Ebony off is good.
** Because Ebony claims to have lost her "virility", Ron asks if she's crying because she has boobs now.
** When Hermione says the "fear of a name only increases fear of the thing itself" line, Fred jokes that Voldemort is a "thing".
** When the kids induce what "masticating" was supposed to be, Seamus says, "Blech!", Zacharias covers his ears and [[IgnoringBySinging sings, "La la la la la la la la, I can't hear you!"]], and Ginny even throws up.
** Harry ''wishing'' he could [[PsychicPowers predict the future]], then he'd know when not to show up to potions.
** Ginny says that if she got a knut for every F-bomb, she'd be "one rich..." and then gets a CollectiveDeathGlare from George, Fred, and Ron.
--->'''Ginny''': "I was going to say witch! What did you think I was going to say, you three?"
--->'''Ron''': "I can think of some ideas."
** When Harry wishes the next chapter doesn't involve him in drag saying he wants to sleep with Malfoy, the others look at him "like he'd said that Sirius Black was innocent and Peter Pettigrew was the bad guy".
** Padma forgetting her cousins even exist.
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** "[Beren] gave [Lúthien] a smile. There was nothing but friendship and gratitude in his smile. It still made [[OverprotectiveDad Thingol]] long to chase him out of Doriath with a sword."
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** "[Beren] gave [Lúthien] a smile. There was nothing but friendship and gratitude in his smile. It still made [[OverprotectiveDad [[BoyfriendBlockingDad Thingol]] long to chase him out of Doriath with a sword."
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* ''Fanfic/HolidaysWithHolmes''''[[Funny/HolidaysWithHolmes Holidays With Holmes]]''
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* ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/4088330/1/A-Common-Enemy A Common Enemy]]'': Fëanor's ''fëa'' (soul) being "on fire" because [[KillItWithFire that's how he died]]. He remarks that he could change it if he wanted to, but he likes it because "[n]ow I am ''[[IncrediblyLamePun literally]]'' the [[MeaningfulName Spirit of Fire]] [...] and it's fun to run screaming at newcomers and watch them flee."
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* ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/4088330/1/A-Common-Enemy A Common Enemy]]'': Fëanor's ''fëa'' (soul) being "on fire" because [[KillItWithFire that's how he died]]. He remarks that he could change it if he wanted to, but he likes it because "[n]ow I am ''[[IncrediblyLamePun literally]]'' ''literally'' the [[MeaningfulName Spirit of Fire]] [...] and it's fun to run screaming at newcomers and watch them flee."
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--> Celegorm deemed it his duty to bring in fresh game and had gone hunting every day. This left his brothers to divide the other duties, and after a week of meals [[LethalChef that had been either overcooked or undercooked, raw or burnt]] – [[UpToEleven sometimes all at the same meal]] – even Fëanor's keen appetite dwindled. The only things remotely edible were the bread, the tea and the coffee, for the wine had definitely been of an inferior quality.
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--> Celegorm deemed it his duty to bring in fresh game and had gone hunting every day. This left his brothers to divide the other duties, and after a week of meals [[LethalChef that had been either overcooked or undercooked, raw or burnt]] – [[UpToEleven sometimes all at the same meal]] meal – even Fëanor's keen appetite dwindled. The only things remotely edible were the bread, the tea and the coffee, for the wine had definitely been of an inferior quality.
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* In ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/series/755028 Of a Linear Circle]] [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/13968978 Part VI]]'', [[ImmoralJournalist Rita Skeeter]] has just written yet another ludicrous article, and the following ensues:
-->'''Ron Weasley''': What am I reading, guys? I know I’m not the smartest bloke in this school, but I’m seeing words and they make no sense.
-->'''Lee Jordan''': Rita Skeeter.
-->'''Ron Weasley''': Never mind. Suddenly it makes perfect sense.
-->'''Ron Weasley''': What am I reading, guys? I know I’m not the smartest bloke in this school, but I’m seeing words and they make no sense.
-->'''Lee Jordan''': Rita Skeeter.
-->'''Ron Weasley''': Never mind. Suddenly it makes perfect sense.
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* The SoBadItsGood fic ''Fanfic/DarkSecrets'' has the [[NightmareRetardant theoretically disturbing]] scene in which RonTheDeathEater breaks into MarySue's room to menace her. With the line [[Film/TheLordOfTheRings "my preciousss"]].
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* The SoBadItsGood fic ''Fanfic/DarkSecrets'' has the [[NightmareRetardant theoretically disturbing]] scene in which RonTheDeathEater breaks into MarySue's the OC's room to menace her. With the line [[Film/TheLordOfTheRings "my preciousss"]].
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** Legolas escaped a MarySue by saying he loved Elladan, who didn't love him, so he switched his affections to ''[[BigBad Sauron]]''.
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** An honourable mention must go to the way HJ (as he styles himself soon after the events spoiler-tagged above) deals with the First Task. It has to be read to be believed, but to give you some idea of the sheer CrazyAwesome of it, the only reason Albus denied him a perfect ten was because he committed the cardinal sin of covering a Rolling Stones song other than "Ruby Tuesday".
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** An honourable mention must go to the way HJ (as he styles himself soon after the events spoiler-tagged above) deals with the First Task. It has to be read to be believed, but to give you some idea of the sheer CrazyAwesome awesomeness of it, the only reason Albus denied him a perfect ten was because he committed the cardinal sin of covering a Rolling Stones song other than "Ruby Tuesday".
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* The SoBadItsGood fic ''Fanfic/DarkSecrets'' has the [[NightmareRetardant theoretically disturbing]] scene in which RonTheDeathEater breaks into MarySue's room to menace her. With the line [[LordOfTheRings "my preciousss"]].
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* The SoBadItsGood fic ''Fanfic/DarkSecrets'' has the [[NightmareRetardant theoretically disturbing]] scene in which RonTheDeathEater breaks into MarySue's room to menace her. With the line [[LordOfTheRings [[Film/TheLordOfTheRings "my preciousss"]].
