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* [[spoiler:A section of the Nightmare is guarded by a rotating, [[NightmareFace spotlight-eyed]] statue of Principal Wells, spouting random [[NonSequitur non-sequiturs]] in a {{Flanderization}} of his real personality.]]
--> [[spoiler:'''Principal Wells''']]: [[spoiler:I regret to announce that one of your classmates, Maxine Caulfield, has died, under tragic circumstances that I promise to investigate [[BlackComedy after I]] ''[[TheAlcoholic get my drink on.]]]]''
--> [[spoiler:'''Principal Wells''']]: [[spoiler:I regret to announce that one of your classmates, Maxine Caulfield, has died, under tragic circumstances that I promise to investigate [[BlackComedy after I]] ''[[TheAlcoholic get my drink on.]]]]''
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*** For the record, if you tell David to kick the table at Jefferson he will give it a powerful boot... that sends it sliding about three feet across the floor. Jefferson looks down at it with a 'what the hell?' expression, kicks it back into David's feet, and shoots him.
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* It's funny that, throughout a few episodes, Chloe suggests she beats someone up, and Max can reset time over and over, not considering the fact that once Max rewinds time, Chloe will only gain satisfaction from it the one time and if Max rewinds time to undo it, Chloe won't gain any satisfaction from the action she no longer commited,
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* It's funny that, throughout a few episodes, Chloe suggests she beats someone up, and Max can reset time over and over, not considering the fact that once Max rewinds time, Chloe will only gain satisfaction from it the one time and if Max rewinds time to undo it, Chloe won't gain any satisfaction from the action she no longer commited,
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* In the art gallery, there are stick-thin statuettes that appear to be based on MontyPython's "Ministry of Silly Walks"
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* In the art gallery, there are stick-thin statuettes that appear to be based on MontyPython's Creator/MontyPython's "Ministry of Silly Walks"
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** [[spoiler:Becomes even more funny if you happened to kiss both Chloe and Warren, calling Max out for trying to get both of them at the same time and then they proceed to continue hooking up.]]
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** [[spoiler:Becomes even more funny funnier if you happened to kiss both Chloe and Warren, calling Max out for trying to get both of them at the same time and then they proceed to continue hooking up.]]
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* [[spoiler: One of the texts in the nightmare sequence is from Samuel, but unlike the others, it isn't really scary or threatening. He simply wonders how he and Max are able to talk when he doesn't have a phone.]]
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* It's funny that, throughout a few episodes, Chloe suggests she beats someone up, and Max can reset time over and over, not considering the fact that once Max rewinds time, Chloe will only gain satisfaction from it the one time and if Max rewinds time to undo it, Chloe won't gain any satisfaction from the action she no longer commited,
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'''Chloe:''' Clearly I'm rich as fuck--how much do I have? (86 cents. Rich as fuck indeed.)
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'''Chloe:''' Clearly I'm rich as fuck--how much do I have? (86 cents. Rich as fuck indeed.)*player chooses 86 cents* (Livin' large in Arcadia Bay!)
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--> '''Max:''' (looking at the first one) "That one is kind of silly"
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--> '''Max:''' (looking at the first one) "That one is kind of silly"silly."
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* This game's dialogue can be kind of... {{Narm}}y for some... Like when Chloe says "hella" or Stella says "kool kidz"[[note]]Upon the release of Episode 5, this has been changed to "kids"[[/note]]. It's kind of funny.
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* This game's dialogue can be kind of... {{Narm}}y for some... Like when Chloe says "hella" or Stella says "kool kidz"[[note]]Upon the release of Episode 5, this has been changed to "kids"[[/note]]."cool kids"[[/note]]. It's kind of funny.
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** Especially in the final part where you must choose an object to help him. The table and bottle deserves special mention.
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* When Max drives through the storm-ravaged Arcadia Bay to find Warren, she sees Evan Harris caught in the middle of it, trying to [[TooDumbToLive take a picure of the whirlwind]].
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* When Max drives through the storm-ravaged Arcadia Bay to find Warren, she sees Evan Harris caught in the middle of it, trying to [[TooDumbToLive take a picure picture of the whirlwind]].
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* [[ButtMonkey Alyssa]] is ''full of this''. You can help but laugh at her misfortunes that could have been simply avoided if she was being alert. Fortunately for her, you can always save her from them.
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* [[ButtMonkey Alyssa]] is ''full of this''. You can can't help but laugh at her misfortunes that could have been simply avoided if she was being alert. Fortunately for her, you can always save her from them.
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--> '''Max:''' You eat like a pig. Try the floor.\\
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'''Frank:''' I was eating those beans—are you fucking insane? I WAS EATING THOSE BEANS!\\
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''(she spills the plate of beans Frank was eating)''\\
'''Frank:''' I was eating those beans—are you fucking insane? I WAS EATING THOSE BEANS!\\
''(he gets up and slips in the spilled beans, much to the amusement of Max)''
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* While it's ''meant'' to be horrific, Jefferson bluntly asking Max if she wants to stay in his "Dark Room forever" right the fuck out of nowhere can come across as more humorous than anything. [[InterfaceScrew Much to her own chagrin]], Max has no choice but to follow this up with one of four completely out-of-character responses, one of which is a passionate and sincere declaration of love. The whole exchange seems like something lifted out of a bad fanfic.
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* Chloe's expression before she proposes breaking into the pool and Max's response.
-->'''Chloe:''' *silent coy grin*
-->'''Max:''' That impish look scares me...
-->'''Chloe:''' *silent coy grin*
-->'''Max:''' That impish look scares me...
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* In the art gallery, there are stick-thin statuettes that appear to be based on MontyPython's "Ministry of Silly Walks"
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--> '''Max:''' (looking at the first one) "That one is kind of silly"
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* It's small and easily missed, but in the [[spoiler: Everyday Heroes gallery]], there's a photo op where Max can take an unsuspecting woman's unguarded camera and use it to snap a picture of her from behind, then put it back like nothing ever happened. A bit of a SurpriseCreepy moment on Max's part.
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David can use the camera to smash the villain\'s face if you do that.
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* When [[spoiler:David comes to rescue you, you have to rewind to just prior to his entrance, and ask Jefferson for a last request in an effort to change something to give David an advantage. If a frantic player asks Jefferson to take a final photo in an effort to delay him...well, it doesn't help David at all. You do, however, get a trophy/achievement for getting one of the optional photos!]]
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** Another has "Y u no" guy asking Alyssa "Y u play hard to get? U already hard to want"
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* This game's dialogue can be kind of... {{Narm}}y for some... Like when Chloe says "hella" or Stella says "kool kidz". It's kind of funny.
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* When Max drives through the storm-ravaged Arcadia Bay to find Warren, she sees somebody caught in the middle of it, trying to [[TooDumbToLive take a picture of it]].
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* [[spoiler: In the nightmare sequence, Max has an option to collect bottles. She lampshades the difficulty most players must of felt from that first bottle hunt in Episode 2]]
--> ''[[spoiler:More bottle searching? Seriously? This might be Hell...]]''
--> ''[[spoiler:More bottle searching? Seriously? This might be Hell...]]''
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-->[[spoiler:'''Pompidou''']]: [[spoiler:Bitch do not mess with Frank. Or me. You got a snack?]]
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** [[spoiler:The reversed version of "Obstacles" is given credits, in backwards letters, of course.]]
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** [[spoiler:The reversed version of "Obstacles" "To All of You" is given credits, in backwards letters, of course.]]
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** The whole scene in general can become darkly humorous as you scramble to [[spoiler: find a way to stop Jefferson from killing David, most likely resulting in poor David biting it over, and over, and over, and ''over'' again right in front of you]]. What begins as shock gradually makes way for "...come on, man, ''seriously''?"
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** This observation by Max.
--> ''Max:'' I've been through so many realities in one week. "[[TitleDrop Life is...]] [[SubvertedTrope weird...]]"
--> ''Max:'' I've been through so many realities in one week. "[[TitleDrop Life is...]] [[SubvertedTrope weird...]]"
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** [[spoiler:The reversed version of "Obstacles" is given credits, in backwards letters, of course.]]
** [[spoiler:The reversed version of "Obstacles" is given credits, in backwards letters, of course.]]
