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* While dropping Freckle off at home, Ivy raises the possibility of meeting his mother. Both Freckle and Rocky ''immediately'' shoot that idea down.
--> '''Rocky''': "You're wearing breeches for crying out Pete's sake. It can never be!"
--> '''Rocky''': "You're wearing breeches for crying out Pete's sake. It can never be!"
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** It's even funnier when you consider the fact that Mordecai is probably worried that they'll be found and be traced to him.
** The fact that Mordecai shot their getaway driver, Sniffles, because he had a runny nose, and smelt faintly of mayonnaise.
** The fact that Mordecai shot their getaway driver, Sniffles, because he had a runny nose, and smelt faintly of mayonnaise.
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** It's even funnier when you consider the fact that Mordecai [[CrazyPrepared Mordecai]] is probably worried that they'll be found and be traced to him.
** The fact that Mordecai shot their getaway driver, Sniffles, because he had a runny nose, [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking and smelt faintly of mayonnaise.]]
** The fact that Mordecai shot their getaway driver, Sniffles, because he had a runny nose, [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking and smelt faintly of mayonnaise.]]
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!!Livestreams
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!!Livestreams
[[folder:Livestreams]]
* In one stream, Tracy's audio starts glitching and cutting out, so someone turns off her audio on her own stream. So Tracy starts typing threats in dripping horror font on the drawing feed.
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'''Mordecai:''' … Yes.
** Just the way Mordecai has to hold the phone inches away because Sweet is laughing ''that loudly'' at the former's misfortune.
** At one point he tips up his shoe and dumps out some sludge from the quarry from it.
** Just the way Mordecai has to hold the phone inches away because Sweet is laughing ''that loudly'' at the former's misfortune.
** At one point he tips up his shoe and dumps out some sludge from the quarry from it.
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'''Mordecai:''' … Yes.
** Just the wayYes.\\
'''Sweet:''' *laughs so loud that Mordecai has to hold thephone receiver several inches away because Sweet is laughing ''that loudly'' at the former's misfortune.
** Atfrom his ear*\\
'''Mordecai:''' However, Mister Sweet, it seems-\\
'''Sweet:''' Wuh... What am I, your dad?! *keeps on laughing*\\
'''Mordecai:''' It... it seems we have a more considerable problem.\\
'''Sweet:''' What, someone mussed your hair? You got some dirt on ya?!\\
'''Mordecai:''' *takes off onepoint he tips up his shoe and dumps out some holds it upside down and glares at it as sludge from the quarry from it.pours out* As a matter of fact, yes.
** Just the way
'''Sweet:''' *laughs so loud that Mordecai has to hold the
** At
'''Mordecai:''' However, Mister Sweet, it seems-\\
'''Sweet:''' Wuh... What am I, your dad?! *keeps on laughing*\\
'''Mordecai:''' It... it seems we have a more considerable problem.\\
'''Sweet:''' What, someone mussed your hair? You got some dirt on ya?!\\
'''Mordecai:''' *takes off one
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** It's a tense scene, but the expressions on Mordecai's face as he gives chase (only to be thrown off by the explosions) give off an indignant 'what the hell?' vibe compared to how composed he'd been up until that point.
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** At one point he tips up his shoe and dumps out some sludge from the quarry from it.
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** To celebrate the Kickstarter for the pilot, ProZD (voice of Mordecai) [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6QqNr8ga_Go did a dub of this scene]]. His delivery of that last 'Yes' is perfect - as one commenter put it, ''Mordecai thinks the purpose behind what he’s doing is completely obvious'' and doesn't see anything strange about what he's currently doing.
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** To celebrate the Kickstarter for the pilot, ProZD (voice of Mordecai) [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6QqNr8ga_Go did a dub of this scene]]. His delivery of that last 'Yes' is perfect - as one commenter put it, ''Mordecai 'Mordecai thinks the purpose behind what he’s doing is completely obvious'' obvious', and doesn't see anything strange about what he's currently doing.
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** To celebrate the Kickstarter for the pilot, ProZD (voice of Mordecai) [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6QqNr8ga_Go did a dub of this scene]]. His delivery of that last 'Yes' is perfect - as one commenter put it, ''Mordecai thinks the purpose behind what he’s doing is completely obvious'' and doesn't see anything strange about what he's currently doing.
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** When Mordecai is setting up Gracie, he goes outside where Nico is waiting. Nico silently communicates via gesture: first indicating a gun to mean a shootout is going to ensue, then a thumbs up when Mordecai nods. He gets carried away with this, though, blowing a kiss to Mordecai and randomly gesturing to mean 'scissors', to which Mordecai first rolls his eyes and then gestures back 'what does that mean?'
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* At the speakeasy, Zib tries to flit with ''Wick'' of all people. After being pushed back my Mitzi (who was between them), Zib proceeds to not only stick a cigarette in his mouth without lighting it, he seemingly forgets that he already has a ''lit'' one, thus having two - one lit and one not - in his mouth at once, with this unusual setup continuing until just after Viktor's "un-smile" growl, at which point Zib sheepishly tosses the unlit one behind him.
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* At the speakeasy, Zib tries to flit flirt with ''Wick'' of all people. After being pushed back my Mitzi (who was between them), Zib proceeds to not only stick a cigarette in his mouth without lighting it, he seemingly forgets that he already has a ''lit'' one, thus having two - one lit and one not - in his mouth at once, with this unusual setup continuing until just after Viktor's "un-smile" growl, at which point Zib sheepishly tosses the unlit one behind him.
* The Lackadaisy crew's reaction after tasting the Canadian Whiskey that Ivy, Freckle and Rocky fought hard to bring to the speakeasy is hilarious.
** Special mention goes to Ivy whom tries her best to act tough and say that she deserves to at least get a taste of what she nearly died for. As expected she doesn't enjoy it one bit, for extra hilarity she tries to give the rest of the drink to Freckle whom only backs away in fear while making ''cat noises''.
-->'''Ivy:''' (''in response to Viktor’s growl'') Pft. You have ''no'' idea what I went through to get this.\\
'''Viktor:''' (''maintaining a disapproving expression'') I have ''very'' good an idea.\\
'''Ivy:''' (''glares at Viktor til he relents, then takes a swig. Cue SpitTake'') [[ImplausibleDeniability Mmm~… Sophisticated… flavor.]] (''offers unfinished drink to Freckle'')\\
(''[[FurryReminder Freckle gives a startled chirp, then backs away while growling]]'')
** Some of the DamnedByFaintPraise responses the crew gives, such as Zib saying the drinks "beat radiator fluid" and Miss M saying that they're "better than getting shot".
** [[TheAlcoholic Wick]] on the other hand doesn't even flinch and actually starts analyzing the drink like a sommelier.
-->'''Wick:''' What's that aftertaste? Crisp, full-bodied, um, (''snapping his fingers'') reminiscent of oak wood... (''smiles'') Coffin varnish!
** Special mention goes to Ivy whom tries her best to act tough and say that she deserves to at least get a taste of what she nearly died for. As expected she doesn't enjoy it one bit, for extra hilarity she tries to give the rest of the drink to Freckle whom only backs away in fear while making ''cat noises''.
-->'''Ivy:''' (''in response to Viktor’s growl'') Pft. You have ''no'' idea what I went through to get this.\\
'''Viktor:''' (''maintaining a disapproving expression'') I have ''very'' good an idea.\\
'''Ivy:''' (''glares at Viktor til he relents, then takes a swig. Cue SpitTake'') [[ImplausibleDeniability Mmm~… Sophisticated… flavor.]] (''offers unfinished drink to Freckle'')\\
(''[[FurryReminder Freckle gives a startled chirp, then backs away while growling]]'')
** Some of the DamnedByFaintPraise responses the crew gives, such as Zib saying the drinks "beat radiator fluid" and Miss M saying that they're "better than getting shot".
** [[TheAlcoholic Wick]] on the other hand doesn't even flinch and actually starts analyzing the drink like a sommelier.
-->'''Wick:''' What's that aftertaste? Crisp, full-bodied, um, (''snapping his fingers'') reminiscent of oak wood... (''smiles'') Coffin varnish!
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* The Lackadaisy crew's reaction after tasting the Canadian Whiskey that Ivy, Freckle and Rocky fought hard to bring to the speakeasy is hilarious.
** Special mention goes to Ivy whom tries her best to act tough and say that she deserves to at least get a taste of what she nearly died for. As expected she doesn't enjoy it one bit, for extra hilarity she tries to give the rest of the drink to Freckle whom only backs away in fear while making ''cat noises''.
-->'''Ivy:''' (''in response to Viktor’s growl'') Pft. You have ''no'' idea what I went through to get this.\\
'''Viktor:''' (''maintaining a disapproving expression'') I have ''very'' good an idea.\\
'''Ivy:''' (''glares at Viktor til he relents, then takes a swig. Cue SpitTake'') [[ImplausibleDeniability Mmm~… Sophisticated… flavor.]] (''offers unfinished drink to Freckle'')\\
(''[[FurryReminder Freckle gives a startled chirp, then backs away while growling]]'')
** Some of the DamnedByFaintPraise responses the crew gives, such as Zib saying the drinks "beat radiator fluid" and Miss M saying that they're "better than getting shot".
** [[TheAlcoholic Wick]] on the other hand doesn't even flinch and actually starts analyzing the drink like a sommelier.
-->'''Wick:''' What's that aftertaste? Crisp, full-bodied, um, (''snapping his fingers'') reminiscent of oak wood... (''smiles'') Coffin varnish!
** Special mention goes to Ivy whom tries her best to act tough and say that she deserves to at least get a taste of what she nearly died for. As expected she doesn't enjoy it one bit, for extra hilarity she tries to give the rest of the drink to Freckle whom only backs away in fear while making ''cat noises''.
-->'''Ivy:''' (''in response to Viktor’s growl'') Pft. You have ''no'' idea what I went through to get this.\\
'''Viktor:''' (''maintaining a disapproving expression'') I have ''very'' good an idea.\\
'''Ivy:''' (''glares at Viktor til he relents, then takes a swig. Cue SpitTake'') [[ImplausibleDeniability Mmm~… Sophisticated… flavor.]] (''offers unfinished drink to Freckle'')\\
(''[[FurryReminder Freckle gives a startled chirp, then backs away while growling]]'')
** Some of the DamnedByFaintPraise responses the crew gives, such as Zib saying the drinks "beat radiator fluid" and Miss M saying that they're "better than getting shot".
** [[TheAlcoholic Wick]] on the other hand doesn't even flinch and actually starts analyzing the drink like a sommelier.
-->'''Wick:''' What's that aftertaste? Crisp, full-bodied, um, (''snapping his fingers'') reminiscent of oak wood... (''smiles'') Coffin varnish!
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At the speakeasy, Zib tries to flit with ''Wick'' of all people. After being pushed back my Mitzi (who was between them), Zib proceeds to not only stick a cigarette in his mouth without lighting it, he seemingly forgets that he already has a ''lit'' one, thus having two - one lit and one not - in his mouth at once, with this unusual setup continuing until just after Viktor's "un-smile" growl, at which point Zib sheepishly tosses the unlit one behind him.
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* At the speakeasy, Zib tries to flit with ''Wick'' of all people. After being pushed back my Mitzi (who was between them), Zib proceeds to not only stick a cigarette in his mouth without lighting it, he seemingly forgets that he already has a ''lit'' one, thus having two - one lit and one not - in his mouth at once, with this unusual setup continuing until just after Viktor's "un-smile" growl, at which point Zib sheepishly tosses the unlit one behind him.
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* The Lackadaisy trio’s return to the hideout:
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At the speakeasy, Zib tries to flit with ''Wick'' of all people. After being pushed back my Mitzi (who was between them), Zib proceeds to not only stick a cigarette in his mouth without lighting it, he seemingly forgets that he already has a ''lit'' one, thus having two - one lit and one not - in his mouth at once, with this unusual setup continuing until just after Viktor's "un-smile" growl, at which point Zib sheepishly tosses the unlit one behind him.
* The Lackadaisy trio’s return to thehideout:eponymous speakeasy:
* The Lackadaisy trio’s return to the
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* The Lackadaisy crew's reaction after tasting the Canadian Whiskey that Ivy, Freckle and Rocky fought hard to bring to the speakeasy is hilarious.
** Special mention goes to Ivy whom tries her best to act tough and say that she deserves to at least get a taste of what she nearly died for. As expected she doesn't enjoy it one bit, for extra hilarity she tries to give the rest of the drink to Freckle whom only backs away in fear while making ''cat noises''.
-->'''Ivy:''' (''in response to Viktor’s growl'') Pft. You have ''no'' idea what I went through to get this.\\
'''Viktor:''' (''maintaining a disapproving expression'') I have ''very'' good an idea.\\
'''Ivy:''' (''glares at Viktor til he relents, then takes a swig. Cue SpitTake'') [[ImplausibleDeniability Mmm~… Sophisticated… flavor.]] (''offers unfinished drink to Freckle'')\\
(''[[FurryReminder Freckle gives a startled chirp, then backs away while growling]]'')
** Some of the DamnedByFaintPraise responses the crew gives, such as Zib saying the drinks "beat radiator fluid" and Miss M saying that they're "better than getting shot".
** [[TheAlcoholic Wick]] on the other hand doesn't even flinch and actually starts analyzing the drink like a sommelier.
-->'''Wick:''' What's that aftertaste? Crisp, full-bodied, um, (''snapping his fingers'') reminiscent of oak wood... (''smiles'') Coffin varnish!
** Special mention goes to Ivy whom tries her best to act tough and say that she deserves to at least get a taste of what she nearly died for. As expected she doesn't enjoy it one bit, for extra hilarity she tries to give the rest of the drink to Freckle whom only backs away in fear while making ''cat noises''.
-->'''Ivy:''' (''in response to Viktor’s growl'') Pft. You have ''no'' idea what I went through to get this.\\
'''Viktor:''' (''maintaining a disapproving expression'') I have ''very'' good an idea.\\
'''Ivy:''' (''glares at Viktor til he relents, then takes a swig. Cue SpitTake'') [[ImplausibleDeniability Mmm~… Sophisticated… flavor.]] (''offers unfinished drink to Freckle'')\\
(''[[FurryReminder Freckle gives a startled chirp, then backs away while growling]]'')
** Some of the DamnedByFaintPraise responses the crew gives, such as Zib saying the drinks "beat radiator fluid" and Miss M saying that they're "better than getting shot".
** [[TheAlcoholic Wick]] on the other hand doesn't even flinch and actually starts analyzing the drink like a sommelier.
-->'''Wick:''' What's that aftertaste? Crisp, full-bodied, um, (''snapping his fingers'') reminiscent of oak wood... (''smiles'') Coffin varnish!
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'''Rocky:''' Well, I could probably wring some more out of my coat for you. (''proceeds to do just that [[FunnyBackgroundEvent while Freckle continues to evade Ivy’s offer of Sunset Rose Cocktail]]'') There ''was'' a minor incident? (''[[OhCrap at this point, Freckle looks alarmed and Ivy drops the glass]]'') Incidences…\\
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'''Rocky:''' Well, I could probably wring some more out of my coat for you. (''proceeds to do just that [[FunnyBackgroundEvent while Freckle continues to evade Ivy’s offer of Sunset Rose Cocktail]]'') There ''was'' a minor minor... incident? (''[[OhCrap at this point, Freckle looks alarmed and Ivy drops the glass]]'') Incidences…\\
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''[[DramaticIrony (Cue the beat-up car falling apart, breaking down and catching fire in the Lackadaisy garage)]]''
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''[[DramaticIrony (Cue the beat-up car falling apart, breaking down and catching fire apart in the Lackadaisy garage)]]''garage, with the engine catching fire less than a second before the scene cuts back to the speakeasy.)]]''
* The Lackadaisy crew's reaction after tasting the Canadian Whiskey that Ivy, Freckle and Rocky fought hard to bring to the speakeasy is hilarious.
** Special mention goes to Ivy whom tries her best to act tough and say that she deserves to at least get a taste of what she nearly died for. As expected she doesn't enjoy it one bit, for extra hilarity she tries to give the rest of the drink to Freckle whom only backs away in fear while making ''cat noises''.
-->'''Ivy:''' (''in response to Viktor’s growl'') Pft. You have ''no'' idea what I went through to get this.\\
'''Viktor:''' (''maintaining a disapproving expression'') I have ''very'' good an idea.\\
'''Ivy:''' (''glares at Viktor til he relents, then takes a swig. Cue SpitTake'') [[ImplausibleDeniability Mmm~… Sophisticated… flavor.]] (''offers unfinished drink to Freckle'')\\
(''[[FurryReminder Freckle gives a startled chirp, then backs away while growling]]'')
** Some of the DamnedByFaintPraise responses the crew gives, such as Zib saying the drinks "beat radiator fluid" and Miss M saying that they're "better than getting shot".
** [[TheAlcoholic Wick]] on the other hand doesn't even flinch and actually starts analyzing the drink like a sommelier.
-->'''Wick:''' What's that aftertaste? Crisp, full-bodied, um, (''snapping his fingers'') reminiscent of oak wood... (''smiles'') Coffin varnish!
* The Lackadaisy crew's reaction after tasting the Canadian Whiskey that Ivy, Freckle and Rocky fought hard to bring to the speakeasy is hilarious.
** Special mention goes to Ivy whom tries her best to act tough and say that she deserves to at least get a taste of what she nearly died for. As expected she doesn't enjoy it one bit, for extra hilarity she tries to give the rest of the drink to Freckle whom only backs away in fear while making ''cat noises''.
-->'''Ivy:''' (''in response to Viktor’s growl'') Pft. You have ''no'' idea what I went through to get this.\\
'''Viktor:''' (''maintaining a disapproving expression'') I have ''very'' good an idea.\\
'''Ivy:''' (''glares at Viktor til he relents, then takes a swig. Cue SpitTake'') [[ImplausibleDeniability Mmm~… Sophisticated… flavor.]] (''offers unfinished drink to Freckle'')\\
(''[[FurryReminder Freckle gives a startled chirp, then backs away while growling]]'')
** Some of the DamnedByFaintPraise responses the crew gives, such as Zib saying the drinks "beat radiator fluid" and Miss M saying that they're "better than getting shot".
** [[TheAlcoholic Wick]] on the other hand doesn't even flinch and actually starts analyzing the drink like a sommelier.
-->'''Wick:''' What's that aftertaste? Crisp, full-bodied, um, (''snapping his fingers'') reminiscent of oak wood... (''smiles'') Coffin varnish!
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-->'''Wick:''' What's that aftertaste? Crisp, full-bodied, um, (''snapping his fingers'') reminiscent of oak wood... [[IAteWhat Coffin varnish!]]
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-->'''Wick:''' What's that aftertaste? Crisp, full-bodied, um, (''snapping his fingers'') reminiscent of oak wood... [[IAteWhat (''smiles'') Coffin varnish!]]varnish!
