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-->'''Lola:''' Sex shouldn't be "comfy!"
-->'''Worker:''' Thank god, I thought it was just me.
-->'''Worker:''' Thank god, I thought it was just me.
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-->'''Lola:''' Sex shouldn't be "comfy!"
-->'''Worker:'''"comfy!"\\
'''Worker 1:''' Thank god, I thought it was just me.\\
'''Worker 2:''' ''Mum!''
-->'''Worker:'''
'''Worker 1:''' Thank god, I thought it was just me.\\
'''Worker 2:''' ''Mum!''
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-->'''Lola:''' Burgundy. Please, God, tell me I have not inspired something ''burgundy''. ''(to Charlie, almost growling)'' Red. ''({{beat}}, then louder)'' Re-e-e-ed. ''({{beat}})'' '''[[SuddenlyShouting RED!]]''' ''Red'', Charlie boy. '''''Red''''' is the color of ''sex''! Burgundy is the color of ''hot water bottles''! Red is the color of sex and fear and danger and signs that say, [[PunctuatedForEmphasis "Do! Not! Enter!]]" All my ''favorite'' things in life.
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-->'''Lola:''' Burgundy. Please, God, tell me I have not inspired something ''burgundy''. ''(to Charlie, almost growling)'' Red. ''({{beat}}, then louder)'' Re-e-e-ed. ''({{beat}})'' '''[[SuddenlyShouting RED!]]''' ''Red'', Charlie boy. Rule ONE! '''''Red''''' is the color of ''sex''! Burgundy is the color of ''hot water bottles''! Red is the color of sex and fear and danger and signs that say, [[PunctuatedForEmphasis "Do! Not! Enter!]]" All my ''favorite'' things in life.
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* The song 'History of Wrong Guys' in the Broadway adaptation, or, really, any time Annaleigh Ashford's Lauren is on stage.
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* The song 'History of Wrong Guys' in the Broadway adaptation, or, really, any time Annaleigh Ashford's Creator/AnnaleighAshford's Lauren is on stage.
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-->'''Lola:''' Burgundy. Please, God, tell me I have not inspired something ''burgundy''. ''(to Charlie, almost growing)'' Red. ''({{beat}}, then louder)'' Re-e-e-ed. ''({{beat}})'' '''[[SuddenlyShouting RED!]]''' ''Red'', Charlie boy. '''''Red''''' is the color of ''sex''! Burgundy is the color of ''hot water bottles''! Red is the color of sex and fear and danger and signs that say, [[PunctuatedForEmphasis "Do! Not! Enter!]]" All my ''favorite'' things in life.
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-->'''Lola:''' Burgundy. Please, God, tell me I have not inspired something ''burgundy''. ''(to Charlie, almost growing)'' growling)'' Red. ''({{beat}}, then louder)'' Re-e-e-ed. ''({{beat}})'' '''[[SuddenlyShouting RED!]]''' ''Red'', Charlie boy. '''''Red''''' is the color of ''sex''! Burgundy is the color of ''hot water bottles''! Red is the color of sex and fear and danger and signs that say, [[PunctuatedForEmphasis "Do! Not! Enter!]]" All my ''favorite'' things in life.
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-->'''Lola:''' ''(sweetly to Don)'' Well, I'm very flattered, but if you can't get girls to wear them... ''(deep manly voice)'' you'll never get blokes like ''me'' to wear them!
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-->'''Lola:''' ''(sweetly to Don)'' Well, I'm very flattered, but if you can't get girls women to wear them... ''(deep manly voice)'' you'll never get blokes like ''me'' to wear them!
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-->'''Lola:''' Burgundy. Please, God, tell me I have not inspired something ''burgundy''. ''(to Charlie, almost growing)'' Red. ''({{beat}}, then louder)'' Re-e-e-ed. ''({{beat}})'' '''[[SuddenlyShouting RED!]]''' ''Red'', Charlie boy. '''''Red''''' is the color of ''sex''! Burgundy is the color of '''hot water bottles'''! Red is the color of sex and fear and danger and signs that say, [[PunctuatedForEmphasis "Do! Not! Enter!]]" All my ''favorite'' things in life.
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-->'''Lola:''' Burgundy. Please, God, tell me I have not inspired something ''burgundy''. ''(to Charlie, almost growing)'' Red. ''({{beat}}, then louder)'' Re-e-e-ed. ''({{beat}})'' '''[[SuddenlyShouting RED!]]''' ''Red'', Charlie boy. '''''Red''''' is the color of ''sex''! Burgundy is the color of '''hot ''hot water bottles'''! bottles''! Red is the color of sex and fear and danger and signs that say, [[PunctuatedForEmphasis "Do! Not! Enter!]]" All my ''favorite'' things in life.
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* "Red!"
-->'''Lola:''' Burgundy. Please, God, tell me I have not inspired something ''burgundy''. ''(to Charlie, almost growing)'' Red. ''({{beat}}, then louder)'' Re-e-e-ed. ''({{beat}})'' '''[[SuddenlyShouting RED!]]''' ''Red'', Charlie boy. '''''Red''''' is the color of ''sex''! Burgundy is the color of '''hot water bottles'''! Red is the color of sex and fear and danger and signs that say, [[PunctuatedForEmphasis "Do! Not! Enter!]]" All my ''favorite'' things in life.
-->'''Lola:''' Burgundy. Please, God, tell me I have not inspired something ''burgundy''. ''(to Charlie, almost growing)'' Red. ''({{beat}}, then louder)'' Re-e-e-ed. ''({{beat}})'' '''[[SuddenlyShouting RED!]]''' ''Red'', Charlie boy. '''''Red''''' is the color of ''sex''! Burgundy is the color of '''hot water bottles'''! Red is the color of sex and fear and danger and signs that say, [[PunctuatedForEmphasis "Do! Not! Enter!]]" All my ''favorite'' things in life.
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* Proving that she gets more women's attention than does the loutish, traditionally-masculine Don, Lola asks the workers how many of them wonder what she will wear every day, every woman raises her hand. George raises his as well. When Don glares at George, George sheepishly lowers his hand -- then gives Don a defiant look and thrusts it back up.
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* Proving that she gets more women's attention than does the loutish, traditionally-masculine Don, Lola asks the workers how many of them wonder what she will wear every day, and every woman raises her hand. George raises his as well. When Don glares at George, George sheepishly lowers his hand -- then gives Don a defiant look and thrusts it back up.
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-->'''Lola:''' ''(sweetly to Don)'' Well, I'm very flattered, but if you can't get girls to wear them... ''(deep manly voice)'' you'll never get blokes like ''me'' to wear them!
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-->'''Lola:''' ''(sweetly to Don)'' Well, I'm very flattered, but if you can't get girls to wear them... ''(deep manly voice)'' you'll never get blokes like ''me'' to wear them!them!
* Proving that she gets more women's attention than does the loutish, traditionally-masculine Don, Lola asks the workers how many of them wonder what she will wear every day, every woman raises her hand. George raises his as well. When Don glares at George, George sheepishly lowers his hand -- then gives Don a defiant look and thrusts it back up.
* Proving that she gets more women's attention than does the loutish, traditionally-masculine Don, Lola asks the workers how many of them wonder what she will wear every day, every woman raises her hand. George raises his as well. When Don glares at George, George sheepishly lowers his hand -- then gives Don a defiant look and thrusts it back up.
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* When Don flirts with Lola, she strolls over, sits on his lap and...
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* The song 'History of Wrong Guys' in the Broadway adaptation, or, really, any time Annaleigh Ashford's Lauren is on stage.
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* The song 'History of Wrong Guys' in the Broadway adaptation, or, really, any time Annaleigh Ashford's Lauren is on stage.stage.
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-->'''Lola:''' ''(sweetly to Don)'' Well, I'm very flattered, but if you can't get girls to wear them... ''(deep manly voice)'' you'll never get blokes like ''me'' to wear them!
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-->'''Lola:''' ''(sweetly to Don)'' Well, I'm very flattered, but if you can't get girls to wear them... ''(deep manly voice)'' you'll never get blokes like ''me'' to wear them!
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-->'''Worker:''' Thank god, I thought it was just me.
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-->'''Worker:''' Thank god, I thought it was just me.me.
* The song 'History of Wrong Guys' in the Broadway adaptation, or, really, any time Annaleigh Ashford's Lauren is on stage.
* The song 'History of Wrong Guys' in the Broadway adaptation, or, really, any time Annaleigh Ashford's Lauren is on stage.
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* "Pass us me boobs, will ya?"
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* "Pass us me boobs, will ya?"ya?"
* During Lola's anti-burgundy speech.
-->'''Lola:''' Sex shouldn't be "comfy!"
-->'''Worker:''' Thank god, I thought it was just me.
* During Lola's anti-burgundy speech.
-->'''Lola:''' Sex shouldn't be "comfy!"
-->'''Worker:''' Thank god, I thought it was just me.
