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** It's also kind of funny that Harry spends most of the book dreading [[BigBrotherInstinct Ron's reaction]] [[MySisterIsOffLimits to them dating]], and Ron's reaction is a nod and shrug.
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** It's also kind of funny that Harry spends most of the book dreading [[BigBrotherInstinct Ron's reaction]] [[MySisterIsOffLimits to them dating]], and Ron's reaction is a nod and shrug.
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* [=McLaggen=] flirting with Hermione. '''By licking his fingers.'''
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* [=McLaggen=] flirting with Hermione. '''By ''By licking his fingers.'''''
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* Snape being a magnificent, scene-stealing {{Jerkass}}, as usual, after Harry accuses Malfoy of being a Death Eater:
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* Snape being a magnificent, scene-stealing {{Jerkass}}, {{jerkass}}, as usual, after Harry accuses Malfoy of being a Death Eater:
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-->'''Harry:''' [[SarcasmMode Brilliant! Really brilliant!]] When I get hold of [=McLaggen=]--
-->'''Ron:''' [[LiteralMinded You don't want to get hold of him, he's the size of a troll.]] Personally, I think there’s a lot to be said for hexing him with that toenail thing[[note]]a hex that makes toenails grow "alarmingly fast"[[/note]] of the Prince's.
-->'''Ron:''' [[LiteralMinded You don't want to get hold of him, he's the size of a troll.]] Personally, I think there’s a lot to be said for hexing him with that toenail thing[[note]]a hex that makes toenails grow "alarmingly fast"[[/note]] of the Prince's.
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'''Ron:''' [[LiteralMinded You don't want to get hold of him, he's the size of a troll.]] Personally, I think
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-->'''Dobby:''' (proudly, swaying where he stands) Dobby has not slept for a week, Harry Potter!
-->'''Hermione:''' ''(gives Harry a scandalised look)''
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'''Hermione:''' ''(gives Harry a scandalised look)''
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--->''THE CONSTIPATION SENSATION THAT'S GRIPPING THE NATION!"''
--->''YOU SHOULD BE WORRYING ABOUT [[ToiletHumor U-NO-POO]]''
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--> "Where there's strife and when there's trouble, call on Peevsie he'll make double!"
--> "Where there's strife and when there's trouble, call on Peevsie he'll make double!"
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Where there's strife and when there's trouble, call on Peevsie he'll make double!"
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-->'''[[DeadpanSnarker Ron]]:''' Essence of Insanity?
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'''[[DeadpanSnarker Ron]]:''' Essence of Insanity?
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'''[[DeadpanSnarker Ron]]:''' Essence of Insanity?
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-->'''Seamus [[WritingLines (writing)]]:''' I am a wizard, not a baboon brandishing a stick.
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-->'''Vernon:''' I don't mean to be rude-
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-->'''Vernon:''' I don't mean to be rude-
-->'''Dumbledore:'''rude-\\
'''Dumbledore:''' But sadly, accidental rudeness occurs alarmingly often. Best to say nothing, my good man.
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'''Dumbledore:''' But sadly, accidental rudeness occurs alarmingly often. Best to say nothing, my good man.
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--> "Ginny kept popping up in his dreams in ways that made him devoutly thankful that Ron couldn't perform Legilimency."
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-->'''Snape:''' Of course you weren't a lot of use to him in Azkaban, but the ''gesture'' was undoubtedly fine.
-->'''Bellatrix:'''fine.\\
'''Bellatrix:''' Gesture?!
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* When Fleur at first tells Mrs. Weasley that Bill will still love her after he was attacked by Greyback, and then when she does understand what Mrs. Weasley was inferring, raves about how she doesn't care about how Bill looks and that she's "Good looking enough for the both of [them]."
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* When Fleur at first tells Mrs. Weasley that Bill will still love her after he was attacked by Greyback, and then when she does understand what Mrs. Weasley was inferring, raves about how she doesn't care about how Bill looks and that she's "Good looking enough for the both of [them]."[them]".
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--> "And you've been through all that persecution from the Ministry when they were trying to make out that you were unstable and a liar. You can still see the marks on the back of your hand where that evil woman made you write with your own blood, but you stuck to your story anyway..."
--> "You can still see where those brains got hold of me in the Ministry, look," said Ron, shaking back his sleeves.
--> "And it doesn't hurt that you've grown about a foot over the summer either," Hermione finished, ignoring Ron.
--> "I'm tall," said Ron, inconsequentially.
--> "You can still see where those brains got hold of me in the Ministry, look," said Ron, shaking back his sleeves.
--> "And it doesn't hurt that you've grown about a foot over the summer either," Hermione finished, ignoring Ron.
--> "I'm tall," said Ron, inconsequentially.
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"You can still see where those brains got hold of me in the Ministry, look," said Ron, shaking back his
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"And it doesn't hurt that you've grown about a foot over the summer either," Hermione finished, ignoring
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'''Hermione:''' ''[smirking]'' Nothing.
'''Hermione:''' ''[smirking]'' Nothing.
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'''Hermione:'''''[smirking]'' ''(smirking)'' Nothing.
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* [=McGonagall's=] exasperation upon discovering Harry, Ron, and Hermione are caught up in the latest crisis yet ''[[WeirdnessMagnet again]]''.
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-->'''Lavender:''' I happen to be his girlfriend!
-->'''Hermione:''' I happen to be his... friend. [[note]] And future wife.[[/note]]
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'''Harry:''' ''(Startled)'' What?!\\
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'''Harry:''' ''(Startled)'' ''(startled)'' What?!\\
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** Dumbledore delivers that last line in the most airy, cheerful manner possible, like he didn't just witness an angsty teenage romance drama ''or'' like he's seen similar scenes so many times during his years at Hogwarts that he's no longer fazed by them. As several people have noted, he looks like he's watching his favorite TV show.
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** Dumbledore delivers that last line in the most airy, cheerful manner possible, like he didn't just witness an angsty teenage romance drama ''or'' like he's seen similar scenes so many times during his years at Hogwarts that he's no longer fazed by them. As several people have noted, he looks like he's watching his favorite TV show.
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** The Muggle Prime Minister at the time was UsefulNotes/JohnMajor, the greyest man in British politics. This also means that the predecessor who tried to [[{{DestinationDefenestration}} throw Fudge out the window]] was UsefulNotes/MargaretThatcher.
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** The Muggle Prime Minister at the time was UsefulNotes/JohnMajor, the greyest man in British politics. This also means that the predecessor who tried to [[{{DestinationDefenestration}} throw Fudge out the window]] was UsefulNotes/MargaretThatcher. There's a ''reason'' they called her the Iron Lady!
** Even funnier because, as Ron points out, this is actually a good way to tell the difference at a glance.
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** Dumbledore delivers that last line in the most airy, cheerful manner possible, like he didn't just witness an angsty teenage romance drama ''or'' like he's seen similar scenes so many times during his years at Hogwarts that he's no longer fazed by them. As several people have noted, he looks like he's watching his favorite TV show.
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-->'''Ron:''' [[LiteralMinded You don't want to get hold of him, he's the size of a troll.]] Personally, I think there’s a lot to be said for hexing him with that toenail thing of the Prince's.
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-->'''Ron:''' [[LiteralMinded You don't want to get hold of him, he's the size of a troll.]] Personally, I think there’s a lot to be said for hexing him with that toenail thing thing[[note]]a hex that makes toenails grow "alarmingly fast"[[/note]] of the Prince's.
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'''Harry:''' Yeah... that's Yeah. That's what my friends call me.\\
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-->'''Snape:''' This is your book?\\
'''Harry:''' Yeah.\\
'''Snape:''' Then why does it have the name "Roonil Wazlib" in it?\\
'''Harry:''' Yeah.\\
'''Snape:''' Then why does it have the name "Roonil Wazlib" in it?\\
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-->'''Snape:''' This is your book?\\
the copy of ''Advanced Potion-Making'' that you purchased from Flourish and Blotts?\\
'''Harry:'''Yeah.Yes.\\
'''Snape:''' Then why does it have the name "Roonil Wazlib"in it?\\written inside the front cover?\\
'''Harry:'''
'''Snape:''' Then why does it have the name "Roonil Wazlib"
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[[caption-width-right:350:"But I am the Chosen One-" *WHACK* "Sorry."]]
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* Hermione's perfectly-planned and executed OperationJealousy: She drops by Harry, Parvati, and Ron snogging Lavender, casually mentions her date is [=McLaggen=] (Ron comes up for air with a noise like an unclogging sink), Parvati and Lavender are agog, noting that Hermione HasAType for Quidditch players, Hermione clarifies that she likes ''really good'' Quidditch players (Ron's reaction to the knife-twisting isn't described), and makes a triumphant exit, leaving Parvati and Lavender to discuss everything they thought they knew about Hermione, Ron to stare into empty space, and Harry to reflect on what girls won't do for revenge.
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* Hermione's perfectly-planned and executed OperationJealousy: She drops by Harry, Parvati, and Ron snogging Lavender, casually mentions her date is [=McLaggen=] (Ron comes up for air with a noise like an unclogging sink), Parvati and Lavender are agog, noting that Hermione HasAType for Quidditch players, Hermione clarifies that she likes ''really good'' Quidditch players (Ron's reaction to the knife-twisting isn't described), and makes a triumphant exit, leaving Parvati and Lavender to discuss everything they thought they knew about Hermione, Ron to stare into empty space, and Harry to reflect on what girls won't do for revenge.
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** The Muggle Prime Minister at the time was UsefulNotes/JohnMajor, the greyest man in British politics. This also means that the predecessor who tried to throw Fudge out the window was UsefulNotes/MargaretThatcher.
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** The Muggle Prime Minister at the time was UsefulNotes/JohnMajor, the greyest man in British politics. This also means that the predecessor who tried to [[{{DestinationDefenestration}} throw Fudge out the window window]] was UsefulNotes/MargaretThatcher.
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'''Harry:''' Oh... brilliant.\\
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'''Harry:''' Oh... brilliant.Oh. Brilliant.\\
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** The Muggle Prime Minister at the time was UsefulNotes/JohnMajor, the greyest man in British politics.
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** If one does the math, one realizes that [[{{NoodleIncident}} the PM who tried to]] [[{{DestinationDefenestration}} throw Fudge out the window]] was UsefulNotes/MargaretThatcher.
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** If one does the math, maths, one realizes will realise that [[{{NoodleIncident}} the PM who tried to]] [[{{DestinationDefenestration}} throw Fudge out the window]] was UsefulNotes/MargaretThatcher.
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** Harry asks Snape how long Dumbledore will be away for. Snape gives brief pauses before wordlessly wandering off.
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* When Harry and Dumbledore go into Slughorn's memory of Tom Riddle asking him about Horcruxes, Harry, who has plenty of experience of getting information from those reluctant to spill the beans, is actually ''impressed'' by Riddle's skill, noting that he's watching "a master at work".
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** Hermione's increasingly MessyHair as Harry finishes his potion much earlier before her.
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* The students first seeing the love potion and how they just, sort of, ''float'' toward it.
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* Slughorn's pure giddiness at Harry's Draught of Living Death, happily exclaiming that a single drop would easily be enough to ''[[BlackComedy kill the entire class]]''.
* Harry and Ron fighting to see who will get the newer-looking Potions book in the cupboard, topped with Harry smacking Ron's book childishly with his own.
* Hermione's increasingly MessyHair as Harry finishes his potion much earlier before her.
* When Slughorn presents Harry with the Felix Felicis, the rest of the class are noticeably put out and reluctant to applaud him.
* Harry and Ron fighting to see who will get the newer-looking Potions book in the cupboard, topped with Harry smacking Ron's book childishly with his own.
* Hermione's increasingly MessyHair as Harry finishes his potion much earlier before her.
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* Slughorn's potions class has a few:
** The students first seeing the love potion and how they just, sort of, ''float'' toward it.
** Slughorn's pure giddiness at Harry's Draught of Living Death, happily exclaiming that a single drop would easily be enough to ''[[BlackComedy kill the entire class]]''.
* ** Harry and Ron fighting to see who will get the newer-looking Potions book in the cupboard, topped with Harry smacking Ron's book childishly with his own.
* ** Hermione's increasingly MessyHair as Harry finishes his potion much earlier before her.
* ** Continuing the films' RunningGag of Seamus BlowingStuffUp: during the Potions class, he looks down into his cauldron when it spontaneously explodes in his face, leaving him with an AshFace.
** Crabbe realising his [[EpicFail potion]] has melted the end off his stirrer.
** When Slughorn presents Harry with the Felix Felicis, the rest of the class are noticeably put out and reluctant to applaud him.
** The students first seeing the love potion and how they just, sort of, ''float'' toward it.
** Slughorn's pure giddiness at Harry's Draught of Living Death, happily exclaiming that a single drop would easily be enough to ''[[BlackComedy kill the entire class]]''.
** Crabbe realising his [[EpicFail potion]] has melted the end off his stirrer.
** When Slughorn presents Harry with the Felix Felicis, the rest of the class are noticeably put out and reluctant to applaud him.
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* Continuing the films' RunningGag of Seamus BlowingStuffUp: during the Potions class, he looks down into his cauldron when it spontaneously explodes in his face, leaving him with an AshFace.
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* "Yes, Harry Potter! And if Dobby does it [[note]][[ItMakesSenseInContext (stalking Malfoy)]][[/note]] wrong, Dobby will throw himself off the topmost tower, Harry Potter!"
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* Luna Lovegood meets Professor Trelawney. Luna starts telling her about the "Rotfang Conspiracy" (the non-existent aurors' plan to bring down the Ministry of Magic by using "a combination of Dark Magic and gum disease"); Trelawney is genuinely fascinated.
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* Luna Lovegood meets Professor Trelawney. Luna starts telling her about the "Rotfang Conspiracy" (the non-existent aurors' Aurors' plan to bring down the Ministry of Magic by using "a combination of Dark Magic and gum disease"); Trelawney is genuinely fascinated.
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* With Christmas approaching, Harry's newfound popularity results in traffic jams on the school corridors. Specifically [[UnderTheMistletoe around the mistletoe decorations]]. Harry just decides to use the hidden passageways, bereft of such things, much to Ron's delight.
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* With Christmas approaching, Harry's newfound popularity results in traffic jams on in the school corridors. Specifically [[UnderTheMistletoe around the mistletoe decorations]]. Harry just decides to use the hidden passageways, passageways bereft of such things, much to Ron's delight.
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* Another small gem. Kreacher sends Harry a Christmas present while he's away at the Burrow. It's a package full of maggots.
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* Another small gem. Kreacher sends Harry a Christmas present while he's away at the Burrow. It's a package full of maggots.
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* After both Ron and Katie Bell end up in the hospital wing, Hagrid speculates if someone with a grudge against the Gryffindor Quidditch team is responsible. Fred dismisses the idea of someone trying to murder a school Quidditch team, only for George to point out Oliver Wood probably would have done that to the Slytherin team if he could have gotten away with it.