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** [[TeamFourStar TFS]] and [[DougWalker Doug Walker]] reading it is [[http://m.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLC36F6B027791D382 completely]] hilarious with all of them doing either one of their (famous) roles or impersonating different characters
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* In ''Fifty Shades Darker'', Ana and Christian go to Jose's art show. To their surprise, several people recognize Ana and they soon find out why: an entire wall is dedicated to photos of her (that she didn't know existed). Christian immediately purchases every picture.
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* In ''Fifty Shades Darker'', Ana and Christian go to Jose's art show. To their surprise, several people recognize Ana and they soon find out why: an entire wall is dedicated to photos of her (that she didn't know existed). (This part is, by the way, blatant plagiarism of Blue is the Warmest Colour). Christian immediately purchases every picture.
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*** His entire use of AccentUponTheWrongSyllable
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** There's also the line from ''Fifty Shades Darker'': "My inner goddess is doing a triple axel dismount from the uneven bars." "Triple axel" is a spin in figure skating. Dismounting the uneven bars is done in ''gymnastics''.
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** There's also the line from ''Fifty Shades Darker'': "My inner goddess is doing a triple axel dismount from the uneven bars." "Triple axel" is a spin jump in figure skating. Dismounting the uneven bars is done in ''gymnastics''.
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** [[SkewedPriorities YOU DO NOT PUT TAMPONS IN THE FUCKING TOILET, OR IT MIGHT CLOG.]]
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-->'''Anna:''' I like your [[{{Narm}} kinky fuckery]].
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* Every time a euphemism for vagina is used, e.g. "my sex" or "down ''there''."
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* Every time a euphemism for vagina vulva is used, e.g. "my sex" or "down ''there''."
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** Gilbert Gottfried's reading features him ''screaming'' the word "clitoris".
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-->'''Anna:''' I like your [[Narm [[{{Narm}} kinky fuckery]].
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-->'''Anna:''' I like your [[Narm kinky fuckery]].
-->'''"Morgan Freeman":''' Yeah, more like bullshit douchery.
-->'''"Morgan Freeman":''' Yeah, more like bullshit douchery.
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* The fact that E.L. is obviously unfamiliar in how to give a blowjob. For fucks sakes, she talks about "swirling his penis with my tongue".
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** Most of them are mostly {{Narm}} rather than intentional (especially the inner goddess parts).
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** Most of them are mostly {{Narm}} rather than intentional (especially the inner goddess parts).parts).
* In ''Fifty Shades Darker'', Ana and Christian go to Jose's art show. To their surprise, several people recognize Ana and they soon find out why: an entire wall is dedicated to photos of her (that she didn't know existed). Christian immediately purchases every picture.
* In ''Fifty Shades Darker'', Ana and Christian go to Jose's art show. To their surprise, several people recognize Ana and they soon find out why: an entire wall is dedicated to photos of her (that she didn't know existed). Christian immediately purchases every picture.
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* For the interview, Kate had planned to ask Grey if he was gay, for no apparent reason.
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** The GeorgeTakei one is particularly amusing, since he shares a CatchPhrase with the narrator. The one with MorganFreeman ([[hottip:sorta:It's actually a voice imitator named Josh Robert Thompson]]) also includes some pretty hilarious commentary.
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** The GeorgeTakei one is particularly amusing, since he shares a CatchPhrase with the narrator. The one with MorganFreeman ([[hottip:sorta:It's ([[labelnote:sorta]]It's actually a voice imitator named Josh Robert Thompson]]) Thompson[[/labelnote]]) also includes some pretty hilarious commentary.
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* "He reaches between my legs and [[FetishRetardant pulls on the blue string]] –[[BigWhat what?!]] – [[FetishRetardant and gently pulls my tampon out and tosses it into the nearby toilet.]] [[SirSwearsalot Holy fuck. Sweet mother of all… Jeez.]] And then [[IKEAErotica he’s inside me.]]"
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* Anytime the phrase [[PurpleProse "inner goddess"]] is uttered. Among the things it does is a "salsa merengue," and waving pom-poms like a cheerleader, and it is once said to be like someone who has had an ice-cream snatched from it.
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* Anytime Any time the phrase [[PurpleProse "inner goddess"]] is uttered. Among the things it does is a "salsa merengue," and waving pom-poms like a cheerleader, and it is once said to be like someone who has had an ice-cream snatched from it.
** There's also the line from ''Fifty Shades Darker'': "My inner goddess is doing a triple axel dismount from the uneven bars." "Triple axel" is a spin in figure skating. Dismounting the uneven bars is done in ''gymnastics''.
** There's also the line from ''Fifty Shades Darker'': "My inner goddess is doing a triple axel dismount from the uneven bars." "Triple axel" is a spin in figure skating. Dismounting the uneven bars is done in ''gymnastics''.
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* Every time a euphemism for penis is used e.g. "incredible length".
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* Every time a euphemism for vagina is used used, e.g. "my sex".
sex" or "down ''there''."
* Every time a euphemism for penis isused used, e.g. "incredible length".
* Every time a euphemism for penis is
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** "My Christian flavored popsicle."
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* Ana's mental response to the news that she just had "vanilla sex" with Grey: "I thought it was chocolate fudge brownie sex that we had, with a cherry on the top."
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** Let's just say the entire ''series''.
** Most of them are mostlyNarm {{Narm}} rather than intentionnal intentional (especially the inner goddess parts).
** Most of them are mostly
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** Most of them are mostly Narm rather than intentionnal (escerpt ''eventually'' the inner goddess parts).
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** Most of them are mostly Narm rather than intentionnal (escerpt ''eventually'' (especially the inner goddess parts).
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* Let's just say the whole book.
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* Let's just say the whole book.book.
** Most of them are mostly Narm rather than intentionnal (escerpt ''eventually'' the inner goddess parts).
** Most of them are mostly Narm rather than intentionnal (escerpt ''eventually'' the inner goddess parts).
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* The fact that the author obviously isn't familiar with the BDSM subculture.
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* "Moving down, I push him into my mouth. He groans again. Ha! My inner goddess is thrilled. I can do this. I can fuck him with my mouth."
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* "Moving down, I push him into my mouth. He groans again. Ha! My inner goddess is thrilled. I can do this. I can fuck him with my mouth.""
**"My Christian flavored popsicle."
*"I'm a ho with dirty sex hair."
*Let's just say the whole book.
**"My Christian flavored popsicle."
*"I'm a ho with dirty sex hair."
*Let's just say the whole book.
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* Not in the work itself, but [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CvX6LkbiS-U various]] [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5K1RcKJVbHA celebrities]] [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7WahBH9sANg reading it.]]
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* Not in the work itself, but [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CvX6LkbiS-U various]] [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5K1RcKJVbHA celebrities]] [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7WahBH9sANg reading reading]] [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NvZVpbJ9DzY it.]]
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* "I "Moving down, I push him into my mouth. He groans again. Ha! My inner goddess is thrilled. I can do this! this. I can fuck him with my mouth!"mouth."
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* Every time Ana goes "Oh my!" or "Holy crap!" and wants to masturbate at the sight of christian Grey.
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* Every time Ana goes "Oh my!" or "Holy crap!" and wants to masturbate at the sight of christian Christian Grey.
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* Every time a euphemism for penis is used e.g. incredible length."incredible length".
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* "I can do this! I can fuck him with my mouth!!!"mouth!"
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* "I would like to bite that lip."
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* "I would like to bite that lip.""
* "I can do this! I can fuck him with my mouth!!!"
* "I can do this! I can fuck him with my mouth!!!"
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* Anytime the phrase [[PurpleProse "inner goddess"]] is uttered.
* Every time the "subconscious" is mentioned. Interestingly, the "subconscious" isn't really her subconscious, because she's clearly aware what the subconscious is doing (such as wearing half-moon spectacles) which is fully conscious.
* Every time the "subconscious" is mentioned. Interestingly, the "subconscious" isn't really her subconscious, because she's clearly aware what the subconscious is doing (such as wearing half-moon spectacles) which is fully conscious.
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* Anytime the phrase [[PurpleProse "inner goddess"]] is uttered.
uttered. Among the things it does is a "salsa merengue," and waving pom-poms like a cheerleader, and it is once said to be like someone who has had an ice-cream snatched from it.
* Every time the "subconscious" is mentioned. Interestingly, the "subconscious" isn't really her subconscious, because she's clearly aware what the subconscious is doing (such as wearing half-moon spectacles) which is fullyconscious.conscious.
* Every time Ana goes "Oh my!" or "Holy crap!" and wants to masturbate at the sight of christian Grey.
* Every time a foil packet (euphemism for condom) is mentioned during a sex scene.
* Every time a euphemism for vagina is used e.g. "my sex".
* Every time a euphemism for penis is used e.g. incredible length.
* Every time the "subconscious" is mentioned. Interestingly, the "subconscious" isn't really her subconscious, because she's clearly aware what the subconscious is doing (such as wearing half-moon spectacles) which is fully
* Every time Ana goes "Oh my!" or "Holy crap!" and wants to masturbate at the sight of christian Grey.
* Every time a foil packet (euphemism for condom) is mentioned during a sex scene.
* Every time a euphemism for vagina is used e.g. "my sex".
* Every time a euphemism for penis is used e.g. incredible length.
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* Every time the "subconscious" is mentioned. Interestingly, the "subconscious" isn't really her subconscious, because she's clearly aware what the subconscious is doing (such as wearing half-moon spectacles) which is fully conscious.
* Every time the "subconscious" is mentioned. Interestingly, the "subconscious" isn't really her subconscious, because she's clearly aware what the subconscious is doing (such as wearing half-moon spectacles) which is fully conscious.
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** The GeorgeTakei one is particularly amusing, since he shares a CatchPhrase with the narrator. The one with MorganFreeman ([[hottip:sorta:It's actually a voice imitator named Josh Robert Thompson]]) also includes some pretty hilarious commentary.
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** The GeorgeTakei one is particularly amusing, since he shares a CatchPhrase with the narrator. The one with MorganFreeman ([[hottip:sorta:It's actually a voice imitator named Josh Robert Thompson]]) also includes some pretty hilarious commentary.commentary.
* Anytime the phrase [[PurpleProse "inner goddess"]] is uttered.
* Anytime the phrase [[PurpleProse "inner goddess"]] is uttered.
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** The George Takei one is particularly amusing, since he shares a CatchPhrase with the narrator.
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** The George Takei GeorgeTakei one is particularly amusing, since he shares a CatchPhrase with the narrator.narrator. The one with MorganFreeman ([[hottip:sorta:It's actually a voice imitator named Josh Robert Thompson]]) also includes some pretty hilarious commentary.
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* Not in the work itself, but [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CvX6LkbiS-U various]] [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5K1RcKJVbHA celebrities]] [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7WahBH9sANg reading it.]]
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* Not in the work itself, but [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CvX6LkbiS-U various]] [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5K1RcKJVbHA celebrities]] [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7WahBH9sANg reading it.]]]]
** The George Takei one is particularly amusing, since he shares a CatchPhrase with the narrator.
** The George Takei one is particularly amusing, since he shares a CatchPhrase with the narrator.
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