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--> ''(to the tune of "Old [=McDonald=]") Da-ffy Duck, he had a farm / E-I-Ay-I-O / And on this farm he had an igloo / E-I, E, I... ohh...'' (speaking) Would it be too much to ask if we could make up our minds? Hmm?
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--->'''Daffy''': [[UsefulNotes/RonaldReagan Well? Where's the rest of me?]]
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--> [--Hey! Come here! Come here! Give me a close-up! A close-up!--] ''(The screen irises in on Daffy's location, but doesn't zoom in)'' [--''This'' is a close-up?!--] ''(beat)'' [-''A CLOSE-UP, YA JERK!'' '''''A CLOSE-UP!'''''-]
--> ''(The camera zooms in to his bloodshot eyes)''
--> Thanks for the sour persimmons, cousin.
--> ''(The camera zooms in to his bloodshot eyes)''
--> Thanks for the sour persimmons, cousin.
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''(The camera zooms in to his bloodshot
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Thanks for the sour persimmons, cousin.
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-->'''Daffy:''' ''(exhausted)'' ... Alright, let's get this picture started!
-->''(THE END card cues up)''
-->'''Daffy:''' ''(pushing the card off screen)'' ''NOOOO,'' '''NOOOOOOOO!!!'''
-->''(THE END card cues up)''
-->'''Daffy:''' ''(pushing the card off screen)'' ''NOOOO,'' '''NOOOOOOOO!!!'''
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-->'''Daffy:''' ''(exhausted)'' ... Alright, let's get this picture started!
-->''(THEstarted!\\
''(THE END card cuesup)''
-->'''Daffy:'''up)''\\
'''Daffy:''' ''(pushing the card off screen)'' ''NOOOO,'' '''NOOOOOOOO!!!'''
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''(THE END card cues
-->'''Daffy:'''
'''Daffy:''' ''(pushing the card off screen)'' ''NOOOO,'' '''NOOOOOOOO!!!'''
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--> '''Bugs Bunny''': ''(snickers)'' Ain't I a stinker?
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** Capped off with Daffy realizing that his ability to speak is back, and pulling a crazed face at the camera, as if he was relying on not being understood.
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** Capped off with Daffy realizing that his ability to speak is back, and pulling shooting a crazed face DeathGlare at the camera, as if he was relying on not being understood.animator.
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--> ''(to the tune of "Old [=McDonald=]") Da-ffy Duck, he had a farm / E-I-Ay-I-O / And on this farm he had an igloo/ E-I, E, I... ohh...'' (speaking) Would it be too much to ask if we could make up our minds? Hmm?
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--> ''(to the tune of "Old [=McDonald=]") Da-ffy Duck, he had a farm / E-I-Ay-I-O / And on this farm he had an igloo/ igloo / E-I, E, I... ohh...'' (speaking) Would it be too much to ask if we could make up our minds? Hmm?
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--> ''(to the tune of "Old [=McDonald=]") "Da-ffy Duck, he had a farm/E-I-Ay-I-O/And on this farm he had an igloo/E-I, E, I... ohh...'' (speaking) Would it be too much to ask if we could make up our minds? Hmm?"
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--> ''(to the tune of "Old [=McDonald=]") "Da-ffy Da-ffy Duck, he had a farm/E-I-Ay-I-O/And farm / E-I-Ay-I-O / And on this farm he had an igloo/E-I, igloo/ E-I, E, I... ohh...'' (speaking) Would it be too much to ask if we could make up our minds? Hmm?"Hmm?
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** Take a look at the flag on Daffy's tail as he's turned into a monster. It's [[RebusBubble a picture of a screw and a baseball]]. [[DontExplainTheJoke Screw ball]].
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** Take a look at the flag on Daffy's tail as he's turned into a monster. It's [[RebusBubble a picture of a screw and a baseball]]. A [[DontExplainTheJoke Screw ball]].screwball!]]
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--->'''Daffy''': "[[UsefulNotes/RonaldReagan Well? Where's the rest of me?]]"
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--->'''Daffy''': "[[UsefulNotes/RonaldReagan [[UsefulNotes/RonaldReagan Well? Where's the rest of me?]]"me?]]
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--> [--"Hey! Come here! Come here! Give me a close-up! A close-up!"--] ''(The screen irises in on Daffy's location, but doesn't zoom in)'' [--"This is a close-up?!"--] ''(beat)'' [-"''A CLOSE-UP, YA JERK!'' '''''A CLOSE-UP!'''''"-]
--> Camera zooms WAY up to his bloodshot eyes.
--> "Thanks for the sour persimmons, cousin."
--> Camera zooms WAY up to his bloodshot eyes.
--> "Thanks for the sour persimmons, cousin."
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--> [--"Hey! [--Hey! Come here! Come here! Give me a close-up! A close-up!"--] close-up!--] ''(The screen irises in on Daffy's location, but doesn't zoom in)'' [--"This [--''This'' is a close-up?!"--] close-up?!--] ''(beat)'' [-"''A [-''A CLOSE-UP, YA JERK!'' '''''A CLOSE-UP!'''''"-]
CLOSE-UP!'''''-]
-->Camera ''(The camera zooms WAY up in to his bloodshot eyes.
eyes)''
-->"Thanks Thanks for the sour persimmons, cousin."
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-->'''Daffy:''' *exhausted* ... Alright, let's get this picture started!...
-->*The End card cues up*
-->'''Daffy:''' *pushing the card off screen* ''NOOO!'' '''NOOOOOOOO!!!'''
-->*The End card cues up*
-->'''Daffy:''' *pushing the card off screen* ''NOOO!'' '''NOOOOOOOO!!!'''
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-->'''Daffy:''' *exhausted* ... ''(exhausted)'' ... Alright, let's get this picture started!...
-->*The Endstarted!
-->''(THE END card cuesup*
up)''
-->'''Daffy:'''*pushing ''(pushing the card off screen* ''NOOO!'' screen)'' ''NOOOO,'' '''NOOOOOOOO!!!'''
-->*The End
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-->'''Daffy:'''
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--> '''Bugs Bunny''': (''snickers'') Ain't I a stinker?
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--> '''Bugs Bunny''': (''snickers'') ''(snickers)'' Ain't I a stinker?
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--> [--"Hey! Come here! Come here! Give me a close-up! A close-up!" ''[The screen closes in on Daffy's location, but doesn't zoom in]'' "This is a close-up?!"--] ''(beat)'' [-"''A CLOSE-UP, YA JERK!'' '''''A CLOSE-UP!'''''"-]
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--> [--"Hey! Come here! Come here! Give me a close-up! A close-up!" ''[The close-up!"--] ''(The screen closes irises in on Daffy's location, but doesn't zoom in]'' "This in)'' [--"This is a close-up?!"--] ''(beat)'' [-"''A CLOSE-UP, YA JERK!'' '''''A CLOSE-UP!'''''"-]
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-->That's strange. All of a sudden I don't quite feel like myself. ''[The animator paints a mirror]'' Oh, I feel ''all right'', and yet I... I, uh... ''[Daffy catches a glimpse of his reflection]'' '''EEEEK'''!!! ''YOU KNOW BETTER THAN THAT''!
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-->That's strange. All of a sudden I don't quite feel like myself. ''[The animator paints a mirror]'' Oh, I feel ''all right'', and yet I... I, uh... ''[Daffy catches a glimpse of his reflection]'' '''EEEEK'''!!! ''YOU KNOW BETTER THAN THAT''!THAT!''
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--> [--"Hey! Come here! Come here! Give me a close-up! A close-up!" (The screen closes in on Daffy's location, but doesn't zoom in) "This is a close-up?!"--] (''beat'') [-"''A CLOSE-UP, YA JERK!'' '''''A CLOSE-UP!'''''"-]
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--> [--"Hey! Come here! Come here! Give me a close-up! A close-up!" (The ''[The screen closes in on Daffy's location, but doesn't zoom in) in]'' "This is a close-up?!"--] (''beat'') ''(beat)'' [-"''A CLOSE-UP, YA JERK!'' '''''A CLOSE-UP!'''''"-]
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* Every twist, every alteration, every mockery, every shredded remains of The FourthWall, every subversion of cartoon film-making that this short deploys. The humor in this short is Meta before people even understood what Meta ''was''.
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** And then Daffy getting angry with his eyes turning red before he screams and jumps around, before yelling, '''''"[[{{Angrish}} BAAAAAAHHHBBBLBLBLBLBBLB]] -- AND I'VE NEVER BEEN SO HUMILIATED IN ALL MY LIFE!!!"'''''
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** And then Daffy getting angry with his eyes turning red before he screams and jumps around, before yelling, '''''"[[{{Angrish}} BAAAAAAHHHBBBLBLBLBLBBLB]] AAAAAAHHHBBBLBLBLBLBBLB]] -- AND I'VE NEVER BEEN SO HUMILIATED IN ALL MY LIFE!!!"'''''LIFE!"'''''
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-->That's strange. All of a sudden I don't quite feel like myself. ''[The animator paints a mirror]'' Well, I feel ''alright'', and yet I... I, uh... ''[Daffy catches a glimpse of his reflection]'' '''EEEEK'''!!! ''YOU KNOW BETTER THAN THAT''!
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-->That's strange. All of a sudden I don't quite feel like myself. ''[The animator paints a mirror]'' Well, Oh, I feel ''alright'', ''all right'', and yet I... I, uh... ''[Daffy catches a glimpse of his reflection]'' '''EEEEK'''!!! ''YOU KNOW BETTER THAN THAT''!
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* Daffy's reaction to being turned into a bizarre monster: "''EEEEK''!!! ''YOU KNOW BETTER THAN THAT''!"
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* Daffy's reaction to being turned into a bizarre monster: "''EEEEK''!!! monster:
-->That's strange. All of a sudden I don't quite feel like myself. ''[The animator paints a mirror]'' Well, I feel ''alright'', and yet I... I, uh... ''[Daffy catches a glimpse of his reflection]'' '''EEEEK'''!!! ''YOU KNOW BETTER THANTHAT''!"THAT''!
-->That's strange. All of a sudden I don't quite feel like myself. ''[The animator paints a mirror]'' Well, I feel ''alright'', and yet I... I, uh... ''[Daffy catches a glimpse of his reflection]'' '''EEEEK'''!!! ''YOU KNOW BETTER THAN
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--> ''(to the tune of "Old [=McDonald=]") "Da-ffy Duck, he had a farm/E-I-Ay-I-O/And on that farm he had an igloo/E...I...A...I....ohh...'' (speaking) Would it be too much to ask if we could make up our minds? Hmm?"
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--> ''(to the tune of "Old [=McDonald=]") "Da-ffy Duck, he had a farm/E-I-Ay-I-O/And on that this farm he had an igloo/E...I...A...I....igloo/E-I, E, I... ohh...'' (speaking) Would it be too much to ask if we could make up our minds? Hmm?"
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!!Duck Amuck
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