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* In a meta sense, due to the both lead characters married here. in the ''[[Franchise/HarryPotter Wizarding World]]. ''[[Creator/HelenaBonhamCarter Bellatrix Lestrange]] is married to [[Creator/JohnnyDepp Gellert Grindelwald]].
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* In a meta sense, due to the both lead characters married here. in In the ''[[Franchise/HarryPotter Wizarding World]]. World]], ''[[Creator/HelenaBonhamCarter Bellatrix Lestrange]] is married to [[Creator/JohnnyDepp Gellert Grindelwald]].
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-->'''The black widow:''' Oh, those girls are ten-a-penny - you've got so much more! You've got... you've got a ''wonderful personality''!
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-->'''The black widow:''' Oh, those girls are ten-a-penny - you've got so much more! You've got... you've got a ''wonderful personality''!''[[DamnedByFaintPraise wonderful personality]]''!
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* The Everglots on Victor:
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* [[AwfulWeddedLife The Everglots Everglots]] on Victor:
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* In a meta sense, due to the both lead characters married here. in the ''[[Franchise/HarryPotter Wuzarding World]]. ''[[Creator/HelenaBonhamCarter Bellatrix Lestrange]] is married to [[Creator/JohnnyDepp Gellert Grindelwald]].
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* In a meta sense, due to the both lead characters married here. in the ''[[Franchise/HarryPotter Wuzarding Wizarding World]]. ''[[Creator/HelenaBonhamCarter Bellatrix Lestrange]] is married to [[Creator/JohnnyDepp Gellert Grindelwald]].
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* In a meta sense, due to the both lead characters married here. in the ''[[Franchise/HarryPotter Wuzarding World]]. ''[[Creator/HelenaBonhamCarter Bellatrix Lestrange]] is married to [[Creator/JohnnyDepp Gellert Grindelwald]].
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* When it's revealed that [[spoiler:Barkis was the one who murdered Emily]], one of the wedding guests' [[JawDrop jaw drops]]. ''[[LiteralMetaphor Literally]]''.
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* When it's revealed that [[spoiler:Barkis Barkis was the one who murdered Emily]], Emily, one of the wedding guests' [[JawDrop jaw drops]]. ''[[LiteralMetaphor Literally]]''.
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* When it's revealed that [[spoiler:Barkis was the one who murdered Emily]], a character's [[JawDrop jaw drops]]. ''[[LiteralMetaphor Literally]]''.
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* When it's revealed that [[spoiler:Barkis was the one who murdered Emily]], a character's one of the wedding guests' [[JawDrop jaw drops]]. ''[[LiteralMetaphor Literally]]''.
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* When it's revealed that [[spoiler:Barkis was the one who murdered Emily]], a character's [[JawDrop jaw drops]]. [[Literal Metaphor Literally]].
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* When it's revealed that [[spoiler:Barkis was the one who murdered Emily]], a character's [[JawDrop jaw drops]]. [[Literal Metaphor Literally]].''[[LiteralMetaphor Literally]]''.
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* When it's revealed that [[spoiler:Barkis was the one who murdered Emily]], a character's [[JawDrop jaw drops]]. [[Literal Metaphor Literally]].
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* When Victor tells Scraps to play dead, he just looks confused because Scraps is dead already.
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* When Victor tells (the dead) Scraps to play dead, he the dog just looks confused because Scraps is dead already.gives an indignant whine, as if mildly offended.
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* It's easy to miss, but one resident of the Land of the Dead is a barber, whose scissors are normally kept lodged in his head. Looks like he was killed with them after giving a bad haircut to an angry patron!
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* "...There's an ''eye'' in me soup." Followed shortly by Grandfather Everglot scaring his grandson and his wife out of the their wits, simply by asking where they keep the [[{{Pun}} spirits]].
* Before the heartwarming moment where Alfred and Gertrude reunite, the PunctuatedPounding he gets before finally remembers her name is hilarious.
* Before the heartwarming moment where Alfred and Gertrude reunite, the PunctuatedPounding he gets before finally remembers her name is hilarious.
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* "...There's an ''eye'' in me soup." Followed shortly by Grandfather Everglot scaring his grandson and his wife out of the their wits, simply by asking where they keep the [[{{Pun}} spirits]].
* Before the heartwarming moment where Alfred and Gertrude reunite, the PunctuatedPounding he gets before he finallyremembers says her name is hilarious.
* Before the heartwarming moment where Alfred and Gertrude reunite, the PunctuatedPounding he gets before he finally
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* "And with these hands... I will cup your..." ''(realizes he has hands over chest)'' "... Oh goodness no."
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* "And with these hands... I will cup your..." ''(realizes he has [[GettingCrapPastTheRadar hands over chest)'' chest]])'' "... Oh goodness no."
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** "With this hand, I shall take your wine..no."
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* When Victor tells Scraps to play dead, he just looks confused because Scraps is dead already.
* The line, "Why go up [to the Land of the Living], when people are ''dying'' to get down here?!"
* Emily says that something beautiful takes her breath away...well, it would if she had any.
* The line, "Why go up [to the Land of the Living], when people are ''dying'' to get down here?!"
* Emily says that something beautiful takes her breath away...well, it would if she had any.
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* The Everglotts on Victor:
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* The Everglotts Everglots on Victor:
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* The scene where Victor talks about visiting his parents to the deceased Emily is a mirror of someone living speaking of their dead parents.
-->'''Emily''': Oh, what a fantastic idea! Where are [your parents] buried?
-->'''Victor''': They’re... Not from around here...
-->'''Emily''': Where are they?
-->'''Victor''': *Points upwards*
-->'''Emily''': *soft gasp* Oh they’re still alive!
-->'''Victor''': I’m afraid so.
-->'''Emily''': Oh, what a fantastic idea! Where are [your parents] buried?
-->'''Victor''': They’re... Not from around here...
-->'''Emily''': Where are they?
-->'''Victor''': *Points upwards*
-->'''Emily''': *soft gasp* Oh they’re still alive!
-->'''Victor''': I’m afraid so.
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* The end of "Remains of the Day", when Victor discreetly dances towards the exit.
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** In that same scene, Elder Gutknech using just his forefinger to stop the Maggot from charging Lord Barkis.
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* The literal "second-hand shop", for those who have lost their first. The hands aid Emily in her chase by pointing the right direction.
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* "Stay back! I've got a... dwarf, and I'm not afraid to use him!"
** "I want some questions! Now!"
-->"Answers. I think you mean answers."
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-->"Answers. I think you mean answers."
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* "Stay This when Victor first realizes he's in the land of the dead:
--> '''Victor:''' ''(grabs the nearest weapon, a sword through General Bonesapart, picking up the whole guy)'' Stay back! I've gota... dwarf, a...dwarf...and I'm not afraid to use him!"
** "Ihim! I want some questions! Now!"
-->"Answers.Now!
--> '''Bonesapart:''' ''(very politely)'' "Answers". I think you meananswers." "answers".
--> '''Victor:''' Uh, yes, thank you. I need answers!
--> '''Victor:''' ''(grabs the nearest weapon, a sword through General Bonesapart, picking up the whole guy)'' Stay back! I've got
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--> '''Bonesapart:''' ''(very politely)'' "Answers". I think you mean
--> '''Victor:''' Uh, yes, thank you. I need answers!
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* Before the heartwarming moment where Alfred and Gertrude reunite, the PunctuatedPounding he gets before finally remembers her name is hilarious.
** And before that, Gertrude tries to defend herself with only her walker while they are mere inches away from it.
** And before that, Gertrude tries to defend herself with only her walker while they are mere inches away from it.
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-->'''Victor''': I did? I did?! ''(starts banging his head on the bar counter)'' Wake up! Wake up! Wake up! Wake up!
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-->'''Victor''': I did? I did?! [[OhCrap I did...]] ''(starts banging his head on the bar counter)'' Wake up! Wake up! Wake up! Wake up!
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* "Fetch me musket!"; during the wedding party invasion, Emil responds, "Fetch your own musket! I'm off!"
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* "Fetch me musket!"; during the wedding party invasion, Emil responds, "Fetch your own musket! [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere I'm off!"off!]]"
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-->(''Emily rolls her eyes.'')
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-->(''Emily rolls her eyes.'')'')
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* "Fetch me musket!"; during the downstairs invasion, Emil responds to that with, "Fetch your own musket! I'm off!"
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* "Fetch me musket!"; during the downstairs wedding party invasion, Emil responds to that with, responds, "Fetch your own musket! I'm off!"
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*"Fetch me musket!"; during the downstairs invasion, Emil responds to that with, "Fetch your own musket! I'm off!"
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* In "According To Plan", the Everglots are so pessimistic about Victoria's imminent wedding that their parts are played as if they were part of a requiem mass. To top it off, the doorbell in the end sounds almost like a funeral bell.
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* At the beginning of "The Wedding Song", the black widow spider notices that Victor's coat is a little torn and calls in her fellow spiders to help patch it up. The process ends up being a rather ticklish experience for Victor.
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* At the beginning of "The Wedding Song", the black widow spider notices that Victor's coat is a little torn and calls in her fellow spiders to help patch it up. The process ends up being a rather ticklish experience for Victor.Victor.
* The black widow attempts to console Emily with a ''very'' cliched line. Emily is suitably unimpressed.
-->'''The black widow:''' Oh, those girls are ten-a-penny - you've got so much more! You've got... you've got a ''wonderful personality''!
-->(''Emily rolls her eyes.'')
* The black widow attempts to console Emily with a ''very'' cliched line. Emily is suitably unimpressed.
-->'''The black widow:''' Oh, those girls are ten-a-penny - you've got so much more! You've got... you've got a ''wonderful personality''!
-->(''Emily rolls her eyes.'')
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* As Victoria is getting her corsets laced: "Tighter. I can still hear you breathe without gasping."
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* As Victoria is getting her corsets laced: "Tighter. "Get those corsets laced properly. I can still hear you breathe speak without gasping."
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-->'''Victor''': I did? I did?! ''(starts banging his head on the bar counter)'' Wake up! Wake up! Wake up! Wake up!
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-->'''Victor''': I did? I did?! ''(starts banging his head on the bar counter)'' Wake up! Wake up! Wake up! Wake up!up!
* At the beginning of "The Wedding Song", the black widow spider notices that Victor's coat is a little torn and calls in her fellow spiders to help patch it up. The process ends up being a rather ticklish experience for Victor.
* At the beginning of "The Wedding Song", the black widow spider notices that Victor's coat is a little torn and calls in her fellow spiders to help patch it up. The process ends up being a rather ticklish experience for Victor.
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* [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7L7UpzXTnIA The dead going to the church for Victor and Emily’s wedding:]]
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