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* After the end of the fifth and final "adventure" between the Pink and Blue unicorns and Charlie, Pink and Blue begin making their big pretend reveal. Charlie is not inclined to play along.
--> '''Charlie''': Are you gonna kill me now or can I go home?
--> '''Charlie''': Are you gonna kill me now or can I go home?
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'''Blue''': (''talking normally'') Oh yeah, my bad.
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--> '''Charlie''': Alright, guys, you do know that there's no ''actual'' Candy Mountain, right?
--> '''Blue''': Shun the non-believer!'
--> '''Pink''': Shuuuuuun!
--> '''Blue''': Shhhhhhhhuuuuuuuuuuuu-nah.
--> '''Charlie''': ...Yeah.
--> '''Blue''': Shun the non-believer!'
--> '''Pink''': Shuuuuuun!
--> '''Blue''': Shhhhhhhhuuuuuuuuuuuu-nah.
--> '''Charlie''': ...Yeah.
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--> '''Charlie''': I'm right here, what do you want?!
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--> '''Blue''': ...We're on a bridge, Charlie!
--> '''Charlie''': I'm right here, what do you want?!
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--> '''Blue''': ...We're on a bridge, Charlie!
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--> '''Blue''': Close your eyes, Charlie.
--> '''Charlie''': Why? Is something gonna happen?
--> '''Blue''': Yes, something wonderful! Close your eyes.
--> '''Charlie''': Ugh. Alright fine.
--> '''Blue''': I want you to picture a circle.
--> '''Charlie''': Sure.
--> ''(The screen goes black and a circle appears.)''
--> '''Blue''': Now I want you to imagine that circle in a beautiful meadow.
--> '''Charlie''': [[DeadpanSnarker Why not]].
--> '''Blue''': You're feeling very relaxed in this meadow. With your beautiful blue circle.
--> '''Charlie''': The circle's supposed to be blue?
--> '''Blue''': Uh, what?
--> '''Charlie''': You didn't tell me to picture a blue circle.
--> '''Blue''': It should be blue, Charlie.
--> '''Charlie''': Well, it's not.
--> '''Blue''': What color is the circle?
--> '''Charlie''': It's just white.
--> ''(Something within the circle starts to fade into vision very slowly.)''
--> '''Blue''': Oh, no! Charlie! Charlie, get out of there!
--> '''Charlie''': What?
--> '''Blue''': Get out of there, Charlie!
--> '''Charlie''': Wait, there's something in the circle!
--> '''Blue''': Charlie! Charlie, open your eyes!
--> '''Charlie''': [[OhCrap I-I can't!]] Why can't I open them?!
--> '''Blue''': [[BigNo Nooooo!]] I'm so sorry!
--> '''Charlie''': It's getting closer, what do I do?!
--> '''Blue''': I don't know, this wasn't supposed to happen!
--> '''Charlie''': Oh god, OH GOD!
--> '''Blue''': Charlie! Charlie, I just realized something!
--> '''Charlie''': What?!
-->''(The image comes into full view to reveal Blue mooning Charlie.)''
--> '''Blue''': You're looking at my butt!
-->''(Cut back to Blue and Charlie; Charlie opens his eyes and glares at Blue angrily, while Blue just looks at him with a shit-eating grin.)''
--> '''Charlie''': Why? Is something gonna happen?
--> '''Blue''': Yes, something wonderful! Close your eyes.
--> '''Charlie''': Ugh. Alright fine.
--> '''Blue''': I want you to picture a circle.
--> '''Charlie''': Sure.
--> ''(The screen goes black and a circle appears.)''
--> '''Blue''': Now I want you to imagine that circle in a beautiful meadow.
--> '''Charlie''': [[DeadpanSnarker Why not]].
--> '''Blue''': You're feeling very relaxed in this meadow. With your beautiful blue circle.
--> '''Charlie''': The circle's supposed to be blue?
--> '''Blue''': Uh, what?
--> '''Charlie''': You didn't tell me to picture a blue circle.
--> '''Blue''': It should be blue, Charlie.
--> '''Charlie''': Well, it's not.
--> '''Blue''': What color is the circle?
--> '''Charlie''': It's just white.
--> ''(Something within the circle starts to fade into vision very slowly.)''
--> '''Blue''': Oh, no! Charlie! Charlie, get out of there!
--> '''Charlie''': What?
--> '''Blue''': Get out of there, Charlie!
--> '''Charlie''': Wait, there's something in the circle!
--> '''Blue''': Charlie! Charlie, open your eyes!
--> '''Charlie''': [[OhCrap I-I can't!]] Why can't I open them?!
--> '''Blue''': [[BigNo Nooooo!]] I'm so sorry!
--> '''Charlie''': It's getting closer, what do I do?!
--> '''Blue''': I don't know, this wasn't supposed to happen!
--> '''Charlie''': Oh god, OH GOD!
--> '''Blue''': Charlie! Charlie, I just realized something!
--> '''Charlie''': What?!
-->''(The image comes into full view to reveal Blue mooning Charlie.)''
--> '''Blue''': You're looking at my butt!
-->''(Cut back to Blue and Charlie; Charlie opens his eyes and glares at Blue angrily, while Blue just looks at him with a shit-eating grin.)''
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'''Charlie''': Why? Is something gonna
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--> '''starfish's cousin''': Oh my god! Why would you even do that?
--> '''blue unicron''': It was probably ''sexual!''
--> '''blue unicron''': It was probably ''sexual!''
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'''blue unicron''': It was probably ''sexual!''
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* After the Cube Demon kills and possesses Krell, Norwell's ghost decides to leave.
--> '''Norwell''': Why am I still here? I don't want to watch this. (''disappears in a puff of smoke then reappears a second later'') I guess I'm protector of the Tower, I should probably stay, right? Yeah.\\
'''Cube Demon''': Yeah, stay! You've done a great job so far, buddy!\\
'''Norwell''': Hey! You killed me, you can't razz me too.
--> '''Norwell''': Why am I still here? I don't want to watch this. (''disappears in a puff of smoke then reappears a second later'') I guess I'm protector of the Tower, I should probably stay, right? Yeah.\\
'''Cube Demon''': Yeah, stay! You've done a great job so far, buddy!\\
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* Nyx runs into Norwell as a ghost who now has a keyboard. When asked how he got it, Norwell says he accidentally scared an old musician to death and "just sort of yoinked it" then admits he's been going through something of a crisis and asks if Nyx wants to hear a song.
-->'''Norwell''': Full disclosure. I'm not very good and I don't handle criticism well.
** Norwell's song itself, which is about how he went out shopping for a coat only to meet a living, talking coat which he ended up buying and marrying. He goes on to say that while he loves his coat husband he still needs a normal lifeless coat for inclement weather and the coat sings about how sad he is that Norwell can't wear him due to the terms of the witch's curse that brought him to life.
* While flying, Blue's voice takes on a far more sinister, raspy electronic tone as they ask Charlie how he can be sure that he's the real Charlie the Unicorn. They then reveal the real Charlie died of exposure following Episode 3 when Pink and Blue used Charlie's horn and kidney to make a Snowman, and then that Snowman was given Charlie's memories and went on the adventures Charlie's been going on. Charlie begins doubting his identity and the creepy music swells as images from past episodes are shown with the Snowman inserted in Charlie's place until--
--> '''Charlie''': Wait a minute! That's the, uh, Choo-Choo-Shoe. [[SeriesContinuityError That's before I even saw the snowman!]]\\
''(Scene cuts back to Charlie, Pink and Blue riding the rainbow)''\\
'''Blue''': (''talking normally'') Oh yeah, my bad.
-->'''Norwell''': Full disclosure. I'm not very good and I don't handle criticism well.
** Norwell's song itself, which is about how he went out shopping for a coat only to meet a living, talking coat which he ended up buying and marrying. He goes on to say that while he loves his coat husband he still needs a normal lifeless coat for inclement weather and the coat sings about how sad he is that Norwell can't wear him due to the terms of the witch's curse that brought him to life.
* While flying, Blue's voice takes on a far more sinister, raspy electronic tone as they ask Charlie how he can be sure that he's the real Charlie the Unicorn. They then reveal the real Charlie died of exposure following Episode 3 when Pink and Blue used Charlie's horn and kidney to make a Snowman, and then that Snowman was given Charlie's memories and went on the adventures Charlie's been going on. Charlie begins doubting his identity and the creepy music swells as images from past episodes are shown with the Snowman inserted in Charlie's place until--
--> '''Charlie''': Wait a minute! That's the, uh, Choo-Choo-Shoe. [[SeriesContinuityError That's before I even saw the snowman!]]\\
''(Scene cuts back to Charlie, Pink and Blue riding the rainbow)''\\
'''Blue''': (''talking normally'') Oh yeah, my bad.
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* At one point during their journey, Pink's head goes flying off. Then a bunch of pink goo leaks from the open neck wound. Then Pink's head regenerates as a lizard head.
--> '''Charlie''': Are you okay?\\
''(Several more lizard heads grow off of the first lizard head)''\\
'''Charlie''': You realize you don't need to go to these lengths to make me uncomfortable? I'm ''always'' uncomfortable.
--> '''Charlie''': Are you okay?\\
''(Several more lizard heads grow off of the first lizard head)''\\
'''Charlie''': You realize you don't need to go to these lengths to make me uncomfortable? I'm ''always'' uncomfortable.
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'''Charlie''': (''absorbs mucus'') Wow. That feels terrible.\\
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--> '''Blue''': And if you've ever been witness to a Wackawang attack, you know it's no joke. ''(Inexplicably explodes, then comes right back.)'' It'll be like that everywhere soon, if we don't stop them!
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--> '''Blue''': And if you've ever been witness to a Wackawang attack, you know it's no joke. ''(Inexplicably explodes, explodes into confetti, then comes right back.)'' It'll be like that everywhere soon, if we don't stop them!
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--> '''Blue''': Even Wackawonk?
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--> '''Blue''': '''Pink''': Even Wackawonk?Wackawong?
--> '''Blue''': Well, you know what? You're Wacka''wrong''.
* The first episode's song. By now, Charlie knows all the songs are just Pink and Blue messing with him, and the two of them ''know'' he knows, so this time they just drop the song on him at random and have it passive aggressively call him a buzzkill, and he just stands there glaring without engaging at all. They make the [[MadeOfExplodium typical ending]] [[BloodyHilarious extra spooky, though.]]
** The dolphin singing the song keeps making {{Immediate Self Contradiction}}s.
--->''Charlie the Unicorn, have a seat, please make yourself at home''\\
''Charlie the Unicorn... what are you doing inside of my house?!''\\
''Charlie the Unicorn, please come in, sit anywhere you like''\\
''Charlie the Unicorn--Not the good chair, get off of it you fool!''
** The dolphin singing the song keeps making {{Immediate Self Contradiction}}s.
--->''Charlie the Unicorn, have a seat, please make yourself at home''\\
''Charlie the Unicorn... what are you doing inside of my house?!''\\
''Charlie the Unicorn, please come in, sit anywhere you like''\\
''Charlie the Unicorn--Not the good chair, get off of it you fool!''
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* The first episode's song. By now, Charlie knows all the songs are just Pink and Blue messing with him, and the two of them ''know'' he knows, so this time they just drop the song on him at random and have it passive aggressively call him a buzzkill, and he just stands there glaring without engaging at all. They make the [[MadeOfExplodium typical ending]] [[BloodyHilarious extra spooky, though.]]
* When Charlie meets Nyx in Part Four, things in his life are so stupidly outrageous that he does not initially believe that Nyx is being genuine about the severity of the situation.
* When Charlie meets Nyx in Part Four, things in his life are so stupidly outrageous that he does not initially believe that Nyx is being genuine about the severity of the situation.
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** The
---> '''Pink''': --give you a big ol spicy kiss.\\
''(The condor kisses him.)''\\
'''Blue''': Aww.\\
'''Pink''': Now you're married and gonna have a baby!
* A RunningGag throughout the finale is Starfish freezing time so he can force Charlie
* When
-->'''Starfish''': Charlie, honey-bun, I bring more magic for you to consume.\\
'''Charlie''': Is it gross magic?\\
'''Starfish''': It's mucus from the
'''Charlie''': Mucus... from the
'''Starfish''': Yes, my lamb, it's the most powerful mucus in the world.\\
'''Charlie''': Y'know what? Sure. Whatever. Toss it in me.\\
'''Starfish''': Thank you, Charlie. You shall be mighty with mucus magic.\\
'''Charlie''': (''absorbs mucus'') Wow. That feels terrible.\\
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* After his adventure's over, Charlie is reunited with Starfish in his true form as a starfish-centaur.
-->'''Startaur''': How wonderful it is to finally greet you in my true form. I am Startaur, first turned into a wheel by a misguided sorcerer and then into a starfish by a traumatized ghost.\\
'''Charlie''': [[SeenItAll That's quite a life you've had.]]\\
'''Startaur''': HA! Yes! Although it is nothing compared to the life that still awaits! You and I shall--(''suddenly shouts in pain and stumbles backwards off a cliff only to shortly reappear as a ghost'') That was a perfectly natural heart attack, Charlie.\\
'''Charlie''': [[DullSurprise Oh.]]\\
'''Startaur''': It seems as if our time together has been cut tragically short.\\
'''Charlie''': That sucks.\\
'''Staurtaur''': (''begins slowly floating up into the sky'') Think of me when you chance to gaze upon the heavens at night. I will be staring back upon your beautiful body from the stars.\\
'''Charlie''': Ok.\\
'''Startaur''': (''stops and remains floating a few feet above Charlie'') How is this, my sweet?\\
'''Charlie''': You're a bit low.\\
'''Startaur''': (''floats a few inches higher'') How about this?\\
'''Charlie''': [[DeadpanSnarker Perfect.]]
-->'''Startaur''': How wonderful it is to finally greet you in my true form. I am Startaur, first turned into a wheel by a misguided sorcerer and then into a starfish by a traumatized ghost.\\
'''Charlie''': [[SeenItAll That's quite a life you've had.]]\\
'''Startaur''': HA! Yes! Although it is nothing compared to the life that still awaits! You and I shall--(''suddenly shouts in pain and stumbles backwards off a cliff only to shortly reappear as a ghost'') That was a perfectly natural heart attack, Charlie.\\
'''Charlie''': [[DullSurprise Oh.]]\\
'''Startaur''': It seems as if our time together has been cut tragically short.\\
'''Charlie''': That sucks.\\
'''Staurtaur''': (''begins slowly floating up into the sky'') Think of me when you chance to gaze upon the heavens at night. I will be staring back upon your beautiful body from the stars.\\
'''Charlie''': Ok.\\
'''Startaur''': (''stops and remains floating a few feet above Charlie'') How is this, my sweet?\\
'''Charlie''': You're a bit low.\\
'''Startaur''': (''floats a few inches higher'') How about this?\\
'''Charlie''': [[DeadpanSnarker Perfect.]]
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--> '''Charlie''': Augh, what happened? ''(Looks down)'' Aw, [[spoiler: [[OrganTheft they took my freakin' kidney!]]]]
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--> '''Charlie''': Augh, what happened? ''(Looks down)'' Aw, [[spoiler: [[OrganTheft they took my freakin' kidney!]]]]kidney!]]
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--> '''Charlie''': [[FlatWhat What is the door?]]
--> '''Blue''': [[MundaneMadeAwesome The Door is everything!]]
--> '''Pink''': [[SeriousBusiness All that once was and all that will be!]]
--> '''Blue''': [[HammyHerald The Door controls time and space!]]
--> '''Pink''': [[ComicalOverreacting Love and death!]]
--> '''Blue''': [[SuddenlyShouting THE DOOR CAN SEE INTO YOUR MIND!]]
--> '''Pink''': [[ChewingTheScenery THE DOOR CAN SEE INTO YOUR SOUL!]]
--> '''Charlie''': [[NotSoStoic Really? Th... The Door can do all that?]]
--> '''Pink''': [[spoiler:[[AntiClimax Heh, no.]]]]
--> '''Blue''': [[MundaneMadeAwesome The Door is everything!]]
--> '''Pink''': [[SeriousBusiness All that once was and all that will be!]]
--> '''Blue''': [[HammyHerald The Door controls time and space!]]
--> '''Pink''': [[ComicalOverreacting Love and death!]]
--> '''Blue''': [[SuddenlyShouting THE DOOR CAN SEE INTO YOUR MIND!]]
--> '''Pink''': [[ChewingTheScenery THE DOOR CAN SEE INTO YOUR SOUL!]]
--> '''Charlie''': [[NotSoStoic Really? Th... The Door can do all that?]]
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--> '''Charlie''': [[FlatWhat What [What is the door?]]
door?
--> '''Blue''':[[MundaneMadeAwesome The Door is everything!]]
everything!
--> '''Pink''':[[SeriousBusiness All that once was and all that will be!]]
be!
--> '''Blue''':[[HammyHerald The Door controls time and space!]]
space!
--> '''Pink''':[[ComicalOverreacting Love and death!]]
death!
--> '''Blue''':[[SuddenlyShouting THE DOOR CAN SEE INTO YOUR MIND!]]
MIND!
--> '''Pink''':[[ChewingTheScenery THE DOOR CAN SEE INTO YOUR SOUL!]]
SOUL!
--> '''Charlie''':[[NotSoStoic Really? Th... The Door can do all that?]]
that?
--> '''Pink''':[[spoiler:[[AntiClimax Heh, no.]]]]
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--> '''Pink''':
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-->'''Charlie''': It just exploded! ''[[LampshadeHanging LIKE EVERYTHING DOES WHEN IT SINGS TO ME!!!]]''
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-->'''Charlie''': It just exploded! ''[[LampshadeHanging LIKE ''LIKE EVERYTHING DOES WHEN IT SINGS TO ME!!!]]'' ME!!!''
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* Norwell the Weasel's ghost sings a somber song about how he and the other Tutelary Weasels died. It's undercut by his Coat Husband rapping about how hot he thinks Norwell's butt is.
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--> '''Charlie''': I don't understand how you do these things!
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--> '''Charlie''': I don't understand how you can do these things!
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--> '''Blue''': Oh my god, that would be amazing! ''The screen flips upside down and Charlie floats towards the moon.''
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--> '''Blue''': Oh my god, that would be amazing! ''The amazing!
--> ''(The screen flips upside down and Charlie floats towards the moon.'')''
--> ''(The screen flips upside down and Charlie floats towards the moon.
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--> ''(The screen goes black and a circle appears.)''
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--> '''Charlie''': It's just white. ''(Something within the circle starts to fade into vision very slowly.)''
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--> '''Charlie''': It's just white.
--> ''(Something within the circle starts to fade into vision very slowly.)''
--> ''(Something within the circle starts to fade into vision very slowly.)''
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--> '''Blue''': Charlie, look! It's a lovely swan. ''(A swan floats down from above, bearing fat, human baby-like thighs and a pair of puckered human lips.)''
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--> '''Blue''': Charlie, look! It's a lovely swan.
--> ''(A swan floats down from above, bearing fat, human baby-like thighs and a pair of puckered human lips.)''
--> ''(A swan floats down from above, bearing fat, human baby-like thighs and a pair of puckered human lips.)''
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--> '''Pink''':He's got another gun!
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--> '''Pink''':He's '''Pink''': He's got another gun!
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--> '''Blue''': Charlie, I have the amulet!
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--> '''Blue''': Charlie! Charlie, I have the amulet!
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* Charlie's reaction to seeing the Banana King: green ...thing at the temple:
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--> '''Charlie''':{{Beat}} ''Uh huh.''
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--> '''Pink''': {{Beat}} He's got another gun!
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--> '''Pink''': {{Beat}} He's got another gun!
--> ''zap''
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--> ''zap''
''*Zap!*''
-->'''Pink''': {{Beat}} He's {{Beat}}
--> '''Pink''':He's got another gun!
-->''zap''''*Zap!*''
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--> '''Pink''':He's got another gun!
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* Instead of an elaborate production in Pink and Blue getting Charlie to go wherever they want him to go, this time the trio just get swept up in a rainbow while Charlie groans. The SmashCut to them already on the road makes it extra funny.
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--> '''Charlie''': ''(The swan gives him a kiss on the nose.)'' Sure. ''(An eagle floats in with similar freaky traits.)''
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--> ''(The swan gives Charlie a kiss on the nose.)''
--> '''Charlie''':''(The swan gives him a kiss on the nose.)'' Sure. Sure.
--> ''(An eagle floats in with similar freaky traits.)''
--> '''Charlie''':
--> ''(An eagle floats in with similar freaky traits.)''
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--> '''Blue''': Look at those lucsious beak lips!
--> '''Charlie''': ''(The eagle kisses him twice.)'' Grazie. ''(Next is an emu. With only one eye.)''
--> '''Charlie''': ''(The eagle kisses him twice.)'' Grazie. ''(Next is an emu. With only one eye.)''
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--> '''Blue''': Look at those lucsious luscious beak lips!
--> ''(The eagle kisses Charlie twice.)''
--> '''Charlie''':''(The eagle kisses him twice.)'' Grazie. Grazie.
--> ''(Next is an emu. With only one eye.)''
--> ''(The eagle kisses Charlie twice.)''
--> '''Charlie''':
--> ''(Next is an emu. With only one eye.)''
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--> '''Charlie''': You don't have to kiss me. ''(Emu kisses him.)'' Alright... ''(Next up is...)''
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--> '''Charlie''': You don't have to kiss me. ''(Emu
--> ''(The emu kisses him.)'' Alright... )''
--> '''Charlie''': Alright...
--> ''(Next up is...)''
--> ''(The emu kisses him.
--> '''Charlie''': Alright...
--> ''(Next up is...)''
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* Instead of an elaborate production in Pink and Blue getting Charlie to go wherever they want him to go, this time the trio just get swept up in a rainbow while Charlie groans. The SmashCut to them already on the road makes it extra funny.
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--> '''Swan''': ''URRRREEEeEEEeerrr!''
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--> '''Swan''': ''URRRREEEeEEEeerrr!''''[=URRRREEEeEEEeerrr=]!''
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* The Order of Tutelary Weasels are hilariously neurotic about everything, constantly complaining about Nyx inconveniencing them for happening to make a request at night, [[HypocriticalHumor while forcing them to repeatedly stand out in the rain.]] When they point out that they could just come back later, the Weasels reply that suggesting it just insults them further.
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* The Order of Tutelary Weasels are hilariously neurotic about everything, constantly complaining about Nyx inconveniencing them for happening to make a request at night, [[HypocriticalHumor while forcing them Nyx to repeatedly stand out in the rain.]] When they point out that they could Nyx asks about just come coming back later, the Weasels reply that suggesting it just insults them further.
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--> '''Blue''': And if you've ever been witness to a Wackawang attack, you know it's no joke. ''(Inexplicably explodes, then comes right back)'' It'll be like that everywhere soon, if we don't stop them!
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--> '''Blue''': And if you've ever been witness to a Wackawang attack, you know it's no joke. ''(Inexplicably explodes, then comes right back)'' back.)'' It'll be like that everywhere soon, if we don't stop them!
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--> '''Blue''': Charlie, look! It's a lovely swan. ''(A swan floats down from above, bearing fat, human baby-like thighs and a pair of puckered human lips)''
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--> '''Blue''': Charlie, look! It's a lovely swan. ''(A swan floats down from above, bearing fat, human baby-like thighs and a pair of puckered human lips)''lips.)''
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--> '''Charlie''': ''(the swan gives him a kiss on the nose)'' Sure. ''(An eagle floats in with similar freaky traits)''
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--> '''Charlie''': ''(the ''(The swan gives him a kiss on the nose)'' nose.)'' Sure. ''(An eagle floats in with similar freaky traits)''traits.)''
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--> '''Charlie''': ''(The eagle kisses him twice)'' Grazie. ''(Next is an emu. With only one eye)''
--> '''Pink''': ''(gasps)'' An emu! What a rare treat!
--> '''Pink''': ''(gasps)'' An emu! What a rare treat!
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--> '''Charlie''': ''(The eagle kisses him twice)'' twice.)'' Grazie. ''(Next is an emu. With only one eye)''
eye.)''
--> '''Pink''':''(gasps)'' ''(Gasps)'' An emu! What a rare treat!
--> '''Pink''':
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--> '''Charlie''': You don't have to kiss me. ''(Emu kisses him)'' Alright... ''(Next up is...)''
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--> '''Charlie''': You don't have to kiss me. ''(Emu kisses him)'' him.)'' Alright... ''(Next up is...)''
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* Plus the irony that after a whole series of torment Charlie has finally learned not to buy into anything Blue and Pink say, only to be thrown into a ''real'' adventure that he refuses to believe.
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--> '''Charlie''': It's just white. (something within the circle starts to fade into vision very slowly)
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--> '''Charlie''': It's just white. (something ''(Something within the circle starts to fade into vision very slowly)slowly.)''
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--> '''Blue''': (the image comes into full view to reveal Blue mooning Charlie) You're looking at my butt!
-->''(Cut back to Blue and Charlie; Charlie opens his eyes and glares at Blue angrily, while Blue just looks at him with a shit-eating grin)''
-->''(Cut back to Blue and Charlie; Charlie opens his eyes and glares at Blue angrily, while Blue just looks at him with a shit-eating grin)''
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--> '''Blue''': You're looking at my butt!
-->''(Cut back to Blue and Charlie; Charlie opens his eyes and glares at Blue angrily, while Blue just looks at him with a shit-eating
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* The scene with the "birds".
--> '''Blue''': Charlie, look! It's a lovely swan. ''(A swan floats down from above, bearing fat, human baby-like thighs and a pair of puckered human lips)''
--> '''Swan''': ''Urrrurrr!''
--> '''Charlie''': Uh...
--> '''Swan''': ''URRRREEEeEEEeerrr!''
--> '''Pink''': What a big beautiful boy!
--> '''Charlie''': ''(the swan gives him a kiss on the nose)'' Sure. ''(An eagle floats in with similar freaky traits)''
--> '''Pink''': Oh my! It's a sensuous golden eagle!
--> '''Eagle''': ''Scrawrr.''
--> '''Charlie''': Wow, that is a bird.
--> '''Eagle''': ''Strrrrawerrr.''
--> '''Blue''': Look at those lucsious beak lips!
--> '''Charlie''': ''(The eagle kisses him twice)'' Grazie. ''(Next is an emu. With only one eye)''
--> '''Pink''': ''(gasps)'' An emu! What a rare treat!
--> '''Emu''': ''Blablablablabla!''
--> '''Blue''': What's that big old boy doin' up here?
--> '''Eagle''': ''Blablablablablablabla!''
--> '''Charlie''': You don't have to kiss me. ''(Emu kisses him)'' Alright... ''(Next up is...)''
--> '''Pink''': Woah! Is that...?
--> '''Blue''': The dreaded condor!
--> '''Condor''': ''Blah blah blah!''
--> '''Charlie''': [[DeadpanSnarker Oh no.]]
--> '''Blue''': Charlie, look! It's a lovely swan. ''(A swan floats down from above, bearing fat, human baby-like thighs and a pair of puckered human lips)''
--> '''Swan''': ''Urrrurrr!''
--> '''Charlie''': Uh...
--> '''Swan''': ''URRRREEEeEEEeerrr!''
--> '''Pink''': What a big beautiful boy!
--> '''Charlie''': ''(the swan gives him a kiss on the nose)'' Sure. ''(An eagle floats in with similar freaky traits)''
--> '''Pink''': Oh my! It's a sensuous golden eagle!
--> '''Eagle''': ''Scrawrr.''
--> '''Charlie''': Wow, that is a bird.
--> '''Eagle''': ''Strrrrawerrr.''
--> '''Blue''': Look at those lucsious beak lips!
--> '''Charlie''': ''(The eagle kisses him twice)'' Grazie. ''(Next is an emu. With only one eye)''
--> '''Pink''': ''(gasps)'' An emu! What a rare treat!
--> '''Emu''': ''Blablablablabla!''
--> '''Blue''': What's that big old boy doin' up here?
--> '''Eagle''': ''Blablablablablablabla!''
--> '''Charlie''': You don't have to kiss me. ''(Emu kisses him)'' Alright... ''(Next up is...)''
--> '''Pink''': Woah! Is that...?
--> '''Blue''': The dreaded condor!
--> '''Condor''': ''Blah blah blah!''
--> '''Charlie''': [[DeadpanSnarker Oh no.]]
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* The Order of Tutelary Weasels are hilariously neurotic about everything, constantly complaining about Nyx inconveniencing them for happening to make a request at night, [[HypocriticalHumor while forcing him to repeatedly stand out in the rain.]] When he points out that he could just come back later, they reply that suggesting it just insults them further.
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* The Order of Tutelary Weasels are hilariously neurotic about everything, constantly complaining about Nyx inconveniencing them for happening to make a request at night, [[HypocriticalHumor while forcing him them to repeatedly stand out in the rain.]] When he points they point out that he they could just come back later, they the Weasels reply that suggesting it just insults them further.
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-->''(Cut back to Blue and Charlie; Charlie opens his eyes and glares at Blue angrily, while Blue just looks at him with a shit-eating grin)''
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* This absolute gem:
--> '''Blue''': Close your eyes, Charlie.
--> '''Charlie''': Why? Is something gonna happen?
--> '''Blue''': Yes, something wonderful! Close your eyes.
--> '''Charlie''': Ugh. Alright fine.
--> '''Blue''': I want you to picture a circle.
--> '''Charlie''': Sure.
--> '''Blue''': Now I want you to imagine that circle in a beautiful meadow.
--> '''Charlie''': [[DeadpanSnarker Why not]].
--> '''Blue''': You're feeling very relaxed in this meadow. With your beautiful blue circle.
--> '''Charlie''': The circle's supposed to be blue?
--> '''Blue''': Uh, what?
--> '''Charlie''': You didn't tell me to picture a blue circle.
--> '''Blue''': It should be blue, Charlie.
--> '''Charlie''': Well, it's not.
--> '''Blue''': What color is the circle?
--> '''Charlie''': It's just white. (something within the circle starts to fade into vision very slowly)
--> '''Blue''': Oh, no! Charlie! Charlie, get out of there!
--> '''Charlie''': What?
--> '''Blue''': Get out of there, Charlie!
--> '''Charlie''': Wait, there's something in the circle!
--> '''Blue''': Charlie! Charlie, open your eyes!
--> '''Charlie''': [[OhCrap I-I can't!]] Why can't I open them?!
--> '''Blue''': [[BigNo Nooooo!]] I'm so sorry!
--> '''Charlie''': It's getting closer, what do I do?!
--> '''Blue''': I don't know, this wasn't supposed to happen!
--> '''Charlie''': Oh god, OH GOD!
--> '''Blue''': Charlie! Charlie, I just realized something!
--> '''Charlie''': What?!
--> '''Blue''': (the image comes into full view to reveal Blue mooning Charlie) You're looking at my butt!
--> '''Blue''': Close your eyes, Charlie.
--> '''Charlie''': Why? Is something gonna happen?
--> '''Blue''': Yes, something wonderful! Close your eyes.
--> '''Charlie''': Ugh. Alright fine.
--> '''Blue''': I want you to picture a circle.
--> '''Charlie''': Sure.
--> '''Blue''': Now I want you to imagine that circle in a beautiful meadow.
--> '''Charlie''': [[DeadpanSnarker Why not]].
--> '''Blue''': You're feeling very relaxed in this meadow. With your beautiful blue circle.
--> '''Charlie''': The circle's supposed to be blue?
--> '''Blue''': Uh, what?
--> '''Charlie''': You didn't tell me to picture a blue circle.
--> '''Blue''': It should be blue, Charlie.
--> '''Charlie''': Well, it's not.
--> '''Blue''': What color is the circle?
--> '''Charlie''': It's just white. (something within the circle starts to fade into vision very slowly)
--> '''Blue''': Oh, no! Charlie! Charlie, get out of there!
--> '''Charlie''': What?
--> '''Blue''': Get out of there, Charlie!
--> '''Charlie''': Wait, there's something in the circle!
--> '''Blue''': Charlie! Charlie, open your eyes!
--> '''Charlie''': [[OhCrap I-I can't!]] Why can't I open them?!
--> '''Blue''': [[BigNo Nooooo!]] I'm so sorry!
--> '''Charlie''': It's getting closer, what do I do?!
--> '''Blue''': I don't know, this wasn't supposed to happen!
--> '''Charlie''': Oh god, OH GOD!
--> '''Blue''': Charlie! Charlie, I just realized something!
--> '''Charlie''': What?!
--> '''Blue''': (the image comes into full view to reveal Blue mooning Charlie) You're looking at my butt!
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** [[TheStinger There's also the fact that ''ten thousand years later'' the upsetting bat is still in the catacombs.]]
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** [[TheStinger There's also the fact that that]] ''ten thousand years later'' the upsetting bat is still in the catacombs.]]
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** [[TheStinger There's also the fact that ''ten thousand years later'' the upsetting bat is still in the catacombs.]]