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-->'''Guy''': No! Will! Let ''me'' Pick her up! Please! It was ''my'' idea! Don't you shut me off! Don't you dare shut me off!\\
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-->'''Guy''': No! No, Will! Let ''me'' Pick pick her up! Please! It was ''my'' idea! Don't you shut me off! Don't you dare shut me off!\\
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* The part where Miss Hannigan comes up to his car and Stacks [[GettingCrapPastTheRadar mistakes her for a hooker]]:
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* The part where Miss Hannigan comes up to his car and Stacks [[GettingCrapPastTheRadar mistakes her for a hooker]]:*bleep*]]:
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* When the protagonists find out that [[spoiler: Guy had Annie kidnapped]], Guy grabs Grace's arm and insists she talk Will out of [[spoiler: firing him/going after Annie.]] Grace proceeds to slug him, to which Pepper says, "It's not 'cause she likes you!" Made funnier on two counts: (1) Refined Grace did the slugging and (2) Pepper had actually punched a guy in her class once because she liked him; she got suspended and they like each other now, according to Annie.
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* When the protagonists find out that [[spoiler: Guy had Annie kidnapped]], Guy grabs Grace's arm and insists she talk Will out of [[spoiler: firing him/going after Annie.]] Grace proceeds to slug him, to which Pepper says, "It's not 'cause she likes you!" Made funnier on two counts: (1) Refined Grace did the slugging and (2) Pepper had actually punched a guy in her class once because she liked him; she got suspended and they like each other now, according to Annie.Annie.
* This split-second line when Guy tells Will to take Annie to lunch:
-->'''Guy''': This is fantastic, Will, I'm telling you it's the most human thing you've done in this campaign, with all due respect.
-->'''Will Stacks''': None taken.
* This split-second line when Guy tells Will to take Annie to lunch:
-->'''Guy''': This is fantastic, Will, I'm telling you it's the most human thing you've done in this campaign, with all due respect.
-->'''Will Stacks''': None taken.
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Wrong girl.
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-->'''Isabella''': What does "hard-knock life" mean?\\
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'''Isabella''': Oh, then yeah.
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* Will quoting TheFreshPrinceOfBelAir theme song while campaigning
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* Will quoting TheFreshPrinceOfBelAir theme song while campaigningcampaigning
* When the protagonists find out that [[spoiler: Guy had Annie kidnapped]], Guy grabs Grace's arm and insists she talk Will out of [[spoiler: firing him/going after Annie.]] Grace proceeds to slug him, to which Pepper says, "It's not 'cause she likes you!" Made funnier on two counts: (1) Refined Grace did the slugging and (2) Pepper had actually punched a guy in her class once because she liked him; she got suspended and they like each other now, according to Annie.
* When the protagonists find out that [[spoiler: Guy had Annie kidnapped]], Guy grabs Grace's arm and insists she talk Will out of [[spoiler: firing him/going after Annie.]] Grace proceeds to slug him, to which Pepper says, "It's not 'cause she likes you!" Made funnier on two counts: (1) Refined Grace did the slugging and (2) Pepper had actually punched a guy in her class once because she liked him; she got suspended and they like each other now, according to Annie.
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* This gem during the hard-Knock Life number
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* This gem during the hard-Knock Hard-Knock Life number
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-->'''Guy''': No! Will! Let ''me'' Pick her up! Please! It was ''my'' idea! Don't you shut me off! don't you dare shut me off!\\
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-->'''Guy''': No! Will! Let ''me'' Pick her up! Please! It was ''my'' idea! Don't you shut me off! don't Don't you dare shut me off!\\
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'''Will Stacks''': (Main/SpitTake) *cough* That would be. *cough* but this is not that kinda party.
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'''Will Stacks''': (Main/SpitTake) *cough* That would be. *cough* but this is not that kinda party.party.
* Will quoting TheFreshPrinceOfBelAir theme song while campaigning
* Will quoting TheFreshPrinceOfBelAir theme song while campaigning
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-->'''Guy''': No! Will! Let ''me'' Pick her up! Please! Don't you shut me off! don't you dare shut me off!\\
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-->'''Guy''': No! Will! Let ''me'' Pick her up! Please! It was ''my'' idea! Don't you shut me off! don't you dare shut me off!\\
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* When Guy post the news that Stacks saved Annie from being run over; he suggest Stacks to invite Annie to lunch; Stacks orders Grace to bring her despite guy's protests
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* When Guy post the news that Stacks saved Annie from being run over; he suggest Stacks to invite Annie to lunch; Stacks orders Grace to bring her despite guy's Guy's protests
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'''Will Stacks''':*cough* That would be. *cough* but this is not that kinda party.
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'''Will Stacks''':*cough* Stacks''': (Main/SpitTake) *cough* That would be. *cough* but this is not that kinda party.
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'''Will Stacks''': Yes, insane, ain't it?\\
'''Annie''': I bet if I moved in with you, you'd become ''President!''\\
'''Will Stacks''': (Main/SpitTake) *cough* That would be. *cough* but this is not that kinda party.
'''Annie''': I bet if I moved in with you, you'd become ''President!''\\
'''Will Stacks''': (Main/SpitTake) *cough* That would be. *cough* but this is not that kinda party.
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'''Will Stacks''': Yes, insane, ain't it?\\
it?\\
'''Annie''': I bet if I moved in with you, you'd become''President!''\\
''president''!\\
'''WillStacks''': (Main/SpitTake) *cough* Stacks''':*cough* That would be. *cough* but this is not that kinda party.
'''Annie''': I bet if I moved in with you, you'd become
'''Will
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* This dialogue from Annie & Stacks when Mr. Stacks tells her he's running for mayor
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'''Will Stacks''': Yes, insane, ain't it? \\
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'''Will Stacks''': Yes, insane, ain't it? \\ it?\\
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(''Stacks shuts Guy off'')
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(''Stacks shuts Guy off'')off'')
*This dialogue from Annie & Stacks when Mr. Stacks tells her he's running for mayor
-->'''Will Stacks''': 'The more we're seen together the better for my campaign.\\
'''Annie''': Wait, ''that's'' how America's elected?\\
'''Will Stacks''': Yes, insane, ain't it? \\
'''Annie''': I bet if I moved in with you, you'd become ''President!''\\
'''Will Stacks''': (Main/SpitTake) *cough* That would be. *cough* but this is not that kinda party.
*This dialogue from Annie & Stacks when Mr. Stacks tells her he's running for mayor
-->'''Will Stacks''': 'The more we're seen together the better for my campaign.\\
'''Annie''': Wait, ''that's'' how America's elected?\\
'''Will Stacks''': Yes, insane, ain't it? \\
'''Annie''': I bet if I moved in with you, you'd become ''President!''\\
'''Will Stacks''': (Main/SpitTake) *cough* That would be. *cough* but this is not that kinda party.
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'''Isabella''': Oh, then yeah.
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'''Isabella''': Oh, then yeah.yeah.
*When Guy post the news that Stacks saved Annie from being run over; he suggest Stacks to invite Annie to lunch; Stacks orders Grace to bring her despite guy's protests
-->'''Guy''': No! Will! Let ''me'' Pick her up! Please! Don't you shut me off! don't you dare shut me off!\\
(''Stacks shuts Guy off'')
*When Guy post the news that Stacks saved Annie from being run over; he suggest Stacks to invite Annie to lunch; Stacks orders Grace to bring her despite guy's protests
-->'''Guy''': No! Will! Let ''me'' Pick her up! Please! Don't you shut me off! don't you dare shut me off!\\
(''Stacks shuts Guy off'')
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'''Pepper''': It means our life ''sucks!'''\\
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'''Pepper''': It means our life ''sucks!'''\\''sucks!''\\
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'''Pepper''': It means our life ''sucks!'''
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'''Pepper''': It means our life ''sucks!'''''sucks!'''\\
'''Isabella''': Oh, then yeah.
'''Isabella''': Oh, then yeah.
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* This gem during the hard-Knock Life number
'''Isabella''': What does "hard-knock life" mean?\\
'''Isabella''': What does "hard-knock life" mean?\\
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* When Isabella asks what “hard-knock life” means, an Pepper glibly tells her, “it means our life ''sucks!''"
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'''Isabella''': What does "hard-knock life" mean?\\
'''Pepper''': It means our life
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* When Isabella asks what “hard-knock life” means, an Pepper glibly tells her, “it means our life ''sucks!''
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* When Isabella asks what “hard-knock life” means, an Pepper glibly tells her, “it means our life ''sucks!''''sucks!''"
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* Isabella asks what a "Hard-Knock Life" means. Pepper's response is the ''perfect definition''!
-->'''Pepper''': "It means our life '''sucks.'''"
-->'''Pepper''': "It means our life '''sucks.'''"
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* When Isabella asks what a "Hard-Knock Life" means. Pepper's response is the ''perfect definition''!
-->'''Pepper''': "It“hard-knock life” means, an Pepper glibly tells her, “it means our life '''sucks.'''"''sucks!''
-->'''Pepper''': "It
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* Isabella asks what a "Hard-Knock Life" means. Pepper's response is the ''perfect definition''! "It means our life '''sucks.'''
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-->'''Pepper''': "It means our life '''sucks.
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-->'''Grace:''' No need to elaborate.
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-->'''Grace:''' No need to elaborate.elaborate.
*Isabella asks what a "Hard-Knock Life" means. Pepper's response is the ''perfect definition''! "It means our life '''sucks.'''
*Isabella asks what a "Hard-Knock Life" means. Pepper's response is the ''perfect definition''! "It means our life '''sucks.'''
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--->'''Mila Kunis' character:''' Says the boy who doesn't have to go home to the moon every night. [moon tears]
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--->'''Mila Kunis' character:''' Says the boy who doesn't have to go home to the moon every night. [moon tears]tears]
* Grace is insistent that Annie's bow be tied with the satin facing out. Stacks does not understand why it's so important. Includes this blink-and-you-miss-it line:
-->'''Stacks:''' I used to know a girl named Satin...
-->'''Grace:''' No need to elaborate.
* Grace is insistent that Annie's bow be tied with the satin facing out. Stacks does not understand why it's so important. Includes this blink-and-you-miss-it line:
-->'''Stacks:''' I used to know a girl named Satin...
-->'''Grace:''' No need to elaborate.
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-->''But I find myself here at this snothouse / Little shoes, little socks'', please kill me! I'm serious! Please kill me! I'm not singing, I'm asking!"
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-->''But I find myself here at this snothouse / Little shoes, little socks'', please kill me! I'm serious! Please kill me! I'm not singing, I'm asking!"asking!"
* The entirety of Moon Quake Lake.
--->'''Mila Kunis' character:''' Says the boy who doesn't have to go home to the moon every night. [moon tears]
* The entirety of Moon Quake Lake.
--->'''Mila Kunis' character:''' Says the boy who doesn't have to go home to the moon every night. [moon tears]
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-->'''Stacks''': I don't like you in ''Harlem''! Why would I like you on Facebook?
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-->'''Stacks''': I don't like you in ''Harlem''! Why would I like you on Facebook?Facebook?
* Hannigan's outburst in the middle of "Little Girls".
-->''But I find myself here at this snothouse / Little shoes, little socks'', please kill me! I'm serious! Please kill me! I'm not singing, I'm asking!"
* Hannigan's outburst in the middle of "Little Girls".
-->''But I find myself here at this snothouse / Little shoes, little socks'', please kill me! I'm serious! Please kill me! I'm not singing, I'm asking!"
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* [[spoiler:Stacks getting accosted by Miss Hannigan.]]
--> [[spoiler:'''Miss Hannigan''': Like me on Facebook! \\
'''Stacks''': I don't like you in ''Harlem''! Why would I like you on Facebook?]]
--> [[spoiler:'''Miss Hannigan''': Like me on Facebook! \\
'''Stacks''': I don't like you in ''Harlem''! Why would I like you on Facebook?]]
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-->'''Stacks:''' God has a path for us all, and your path should be away from the car!
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-->'''Stacks:''' God has a path for us all, and your path should be away from the car!car!
-->'''Miss Hannigan''': Like me on Facebook!
-->'''Stacks''': I don't like you in ''Harlem''! Why would I like you on Facebook?
-->'''Miss Hannigan''': Like me on Facebook!
-->'''Stacks''': I don't like you in ''Harlem''! Why would I like you on Facebook?
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* [[spoiler:Stacks getting accosted by Miss Hannigan.]]
--> [[spoiler:'''Miss Hannigan''': Like me on Facebook! \\
'''Stacks''': I don't like you in ''Harlem''! Why would I like you on Facebook?]]
* The part where Miss Hannigan comes up to his car and Stacks [[GettingCrapPastTheRadar mistakes her for a hooker]]:
-->'''Miss Hannigan:''' Hey, Mr. Will Stacks!
-->'''Stacks:''' No, thank you! I'm not looking for temporary companionship!
-->'''Miss Hannigan:''' What?
-->'''Stacks:''' God has a path for us all, and your path should be away from the car!
--> [[spoiler:'''Miss Hannigan''': Like me on Facebook! \\
'''Stacks''': I don't like you in ''Harlem''! Why would I like you on Facebook?]]
* The part where Miss Hannigan comes up to his car and Stacks [[GettingCrapPastTheRadar mistakes her for a hooker]]:
-->'''Miss Hannigan:''' Hey, Mr. Will Stacks!
-->'''Stacks:''' No, thank you! I'm not looking for temporary companionship!
-->'''Miss Hannigan:''' What?
-->'''Stacks:''' God has a path for us all, and your path should be away from the car!
