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** Hell, it's also funny because the exchange could be seen as the actors talking about the movie they're in.
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* Whether you think it's intentionally funny or unintentionally so: "My suit's turned black...[[SkewedPriorities I-like-it]]-[[LampshadeHanging but-I-think-it's-something-bad!"]]
* Mostly because the exchange is seen as the actors talking about the movie they were in:
-->'''Kitai''': That sucked.
-->'''Cypher''': That is correct.
* Mostly because the exchange is seen as the actors talking about the movie they were in:
-->'''Kitai''': That sucked.
-->'''Cypher''': That is correct.
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* Whether you think it's intentionally funny or unintentionally so: "My suit's turned black...[[SkewedPriorities I-like-it]]-[[LampshadeHanging but-I-think-it's-something-bad!"]]
* Mostly because the exchange is seen as the actors talking about the movie they were in:
-->'''Kitai''': That sucked.
-->'''Cypher''': That is correct.but-I-think-it's-something-bad!"]]
* Mostly because the exchange is seen as the actors talking about the movie they were in:
-->'''Kitai''': That sucked.
-->'''Cypher''': That is correct.
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* When Cypher is talking about how he first ghosted. He had his shoulder shot by an Ursa's pincer and was pushed into a river, with the creature trying to drown him. After he settles things in his mind, Cypher says this
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* When Cypher is talking about how he first ghosted. He had his shoulder shot by an Ursa's pincer and was pushed into a river, with the creature trying to drown him. After he settles things in his mind, Cypher says thisthis:
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* Whether you think it's intentionally funny or unintentionally so: "My suit's turned black...[[SkewedPriorities I-like-it]]-[[LampshadeHanging but-I-think-it's-something-bad!"]]
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* Whether you think it's intentionally funny or unintentionally so: "My suit's turned black...[[SkewedPriorities I-like-it]]-[[LampshadeHanging but-I-think-it's-something-bad!"]]but-I-think-it's-something-bad!"]]
*Mostly because the exchange is seen as the actors talking about the movie they were in:
-->'''Kitai''': That sucked.
-->'''Cypher''': That is correct.
*Mostly because the exchange is seen as the actors talking about the movie they were in:
-->'''Kitai''': That sucked.
-->'''Cypher''': That is correct.
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--> "I look at my shoulder, and see it's pincer sticking out... and I decide... I don't want that in there anymore"
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--> "I look at my shoulder, and see it's its pincer sticking out... and I decide... I don't want that in there anymore"
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--> Cypher: What happened?
--> Kitai: You didn't see that?
--> Kitai: You didn't see that?
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* Whether you think it's intentionally funny or unintentionally so: "My suit's turned black...I-like-it-but-I-think-it's-something-bad!"
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* Whether you think it's intentionally funny or unintentionally so: "My suit's turned black...I-like-it-but-I-think-it's-something-bad!"[[SkewedPriorities I-like-it]]-[[LampshadeHanging but-I-think-it's-something-bad!"]]
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* Not long after Cypher states that he will be able to see everything that happens to Kitai, Kitai nearly slips off a rock face due to a giant crawling bug on his hand.
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* Not long after Cypher states that he will be able to see everything that happens to Kitai, Kitai nearly slips off a rock face due to a giant crawling bug spider on his hand.
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* Whether you think it's intentionally funny or unintentionally so: "My suit's turned black...I-like-it-but-I-think-it's-something-bad!"
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* Whether you think it's intentionally funny or unintentionally so: "My suit's turned black...I-like-it-but-I-think-it's-something-bad!"
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moving what appears to be an \"awesome entry\"
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* For film's existence itself. The marketers ''knew'' that displaying MNightShyamalan's name on any of the promo material would've most likely doomed it, regardless of its quality.
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* For film's existence itself. The marketers ''knew'' that displaying MNightShyamalan's on any of the promo material would've most likely doomed it, regardless of its quality.
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* For film's existence itself. The marketers ''knew'' that displaying MNightShyamalan's name on any of the promo material would've most likely doomed it, regardless of its quality.
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* Whether you think it's intentionally funny or unintentionally so: "My suit's turned black...I-like-it-but-I-think-it's-something-bad!"
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* Whether you think it's intentionally funny or unintentionally so: "My suit's turned black...I-like-it-but-I-think-it's-something-bad!"I-like-it-but-I-think-it's-something-bad!"
* For film's existence itself. The marketers ''knew'' that displaying MNightShyamalan's on any of the promo material would've most likely doomed it, regardless of its quality.
* For film's existence itself. The marketers ''knew'' that displaying MNightShyamalan's on any of the promo material would've most likely doomed it, regardless of its quality.
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-->'''Cypher''': ({{Beat}}) Correct, cadet.
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-->'''Cypher''': ({{Beat}}) Correct, cadet.That is correct.
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--> "I look at my shoulder, and see it's pincer sticking out... and I decide... I don't want that in there anymore"
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--> "I look at my shoulder, and see it's pincer sticking out... and I decide... I don't want that in there anymore"anymore"
* Whether you think it's intentionally funny or unintentionally so: "My suit's turned black...I-like-it-but-I-think-it's-something-bad!"
* Whether you think it's intentionally funny or unintentionally so: "My suit's turned black...I-like-it-but-I-think-it's-something-bad!"
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-->'''Cypher''': Me too.
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-->'''Cypher''': Me too.too.
* When Cypher is talking about how he first ghosted. He had his shoulder shot by an Ursa's pincer and was pushed into a river, with the creature trying to drown him. After he settles things in his mind, Cypher says this
--> "I look at my shoulder, and see it's pincer sticking out... and I decide... I don't want that in there anymore"
* When Cypher is talking about how he first ghosted. He had his shoulder shot by an Ursa's pincer and was pushed into a river, with the creature trying to drown him. After he settles things in his mind, Cypher says this
--> "I look at my shoulder, and see it's pincer sticking out... and I decide... I don't want that in there anymore"
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* The part where Cypher is trying to maintain his own composure while he repeatedly urges his panicking son to stop running in fear; Kitai is too traumatized to listen and becomes more fearful, grabbing his cutlass, that's when his father finally loses his composure and tells Kitai to "''put his [[ExactWords damn cutlass]] away''".
-->"You are running from NOTHING!"
-->"You are running from NOTHING!"
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-->"You are running from NOTHING!"
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* The part where Cypher is trying to maintain his own composure while he repeatedly urges his panicking son to stop running in fear; Kitai is too traumatized to listen and becomes more fearful, grabbing his cutlass, that's when his father finally loses his composure and tells Kitai to "''put his [[ExactWords damn cutlass]] away''".
-->"You are running from NOTHING!"
-->"You are running from NOTHING!"
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-> Cypher: What happened?
-> Kitai: You didn't see that?
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-->"You are running from NOTHING!"
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-> Kitai: You didn't see that?
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-> Kitai: You didn't see that?that?
* After Kitai [[spoiler: is able to give himself the antitoxin to cure his poisoning]], he simply lies on the ground trying to regroup himself and finds the only response to that ordeal that he can:
-->'''Kitai''': That sucked.
-->'''Cypher''': ({{Beat}}) Correct, cadet.
* When Kitai and Cypher [[spoiler: are re-united safely at the end]]:
-->'''Kitai''': Dad?.....I want to work with Mom.
-->'''Cypher''': Me too.
* After Kitai [[spoiler: is able to give himself the antitoxin to cure his poisoning]], he simply lies on the ground trying to regroup himself and finds the only response to that ordeal that he can:
-->'''Kitai''': That sucked.
-->'''Cypher''': ({{Beat}}) Correct, cadet.
* When Kitai and Cypher [[spoiler: are re-united safely at the end]]:
-->'''Kitai''': Dad?.....I want to work with Mom.
-->'''Cypher''': Me too.
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* The part where Cypher is trying to maintain his own composure while he repeatedly urges his panicking son to stop running in fear; Kitai is too traumatized to listen and becomes more fearful, grabbing his cutlass, that's when his father finally loses his composure and tells Kitai to "''put his [[ExactWords damn cutlass]] away''".
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* The part where Cypher is trying to maintain his own composure while he repeatedly urges his panicking son to stop running in fear; Kitai is too traumatized to listen and becomes more fearful, grabbing his cutlass, that's when his father finally loses his composure and tells Kitai to "''put his [[ExactWords damn cutlass]] away''".away''".
* Not long after Cypher states that he will be able to see everything that happens to Kitai, Kitai nearly slips off a rock face due to a giant crawling bug on his hand.
-> Cypher: What happened?
-> Kitai: You didn't see that?
* Not long after Cypher states that he will be able to see everything that happens to Kitai, Kitai nearly slips off a rock face due to a giant crawling bug on his hand.
-> Cypher: What happened?
-> Kitai: You didn't see that?
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* Cypher telling Kitai to "put his damn cutlass away" after his son escaped from the baboons.
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* The part where Cypher telling is trying to maintain his own composure while he repeatedly urges his panicking son to stop running in fear; Kitai is too traumatized to listen and becomes more fearful, grabbing his cutlass, that's when his father finally loses his composure and tells Kitai to "put "''put his [[ExactWords damn cutlass away" after his son escaped from the baboons.cutlass]] away''".
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* Cipher telling Kitai to "put his damn cutlass away" after his son escaped from the baboons.
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* Cipher Cypher telling Kitai to "put his damn cutlass away" after his son escaped from the baboons.
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* Cipher telling Kitai to "put his damn cutlass away" after his son escaped from the baboons.
