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--->'''Greta''': Shit, they caught me. I have to go gnash my teeth for the paparazzi.
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* '''Freshly resurrected Freddy:''' It's a boooy!
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-->'''Freshly resurrected Freddy:''' It's a boooy!
-->'''Freshly resurrected Freddy:''' It's a boooy!
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* At the dinner party, a pervy guest says Greta's got the "perfect body" for modeling and assures her he's a "good friend" of a big name in the fashion industry. Racine is completely oblivious that this guy's leering at her teenage daughter and beams with approval. The DeathGlare Greta gives the guy is one of both exhaustion and one that signifies she would love to destroy him with her bare hands if she thinks she could get away with it.
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* At the dinner party, a pervy guest says Greta's got the "perfect body" for modeling and assures her he's a "good friend" of a big name in the fashion industry. Racine is completely oblivious that this guy's leering at her teenage daughter and beams with approval. The DeathGlare Greta gives the guy is one of both exhaustion and one that signifies she would love to destroy him with her bare hands if she thinks she could get away with it.it.
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* When Greta's mom scolds her at the graduation for trying to lick Mark's lollipop, Mark's father leans out into the aisle to [[MaleGaze snatch a look]] at the "cover girl" she's telling off.
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* When Greta's mom scolds her at the graduation for trying to lick Mark's lollipop, lollipop (as in one of those large, multi-colored spiral lollipops), Mark's father leans out into the aisle to [[MaleGaze snatch a look]] at the "cover girl" she's telling off.
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* At the dinner party, a pervy guest says Greta's got the "perfect body" for modeling and assures her he's a "good friend" of a big name in the fashion industry. Racine is completely oblivious that this guy's leering at her teenage daughter and beams with approval. The DeathGlare Greta gives the one is one of both exhaustion and one that signifies she would love to destroy this guy if she thinks she could get away with it.
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* At the dinner party, a pervy guest says Greta's got the "perfect body" for modeling and assures her he's a "good friend" of a big name in the fashion industry. Racine is completely oblivious that this guy's leering at her teenage daughter and beams with approval. The DeathGlare Greta gives the one guy is one of both exhaustion and one that signifies she would love to destroy this guy him with her bare hands if she thinks she could get away with it.
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*** In regards to said photo, the football scout who talks to Dan ends up wandering onto the scene by accident and tries to strike a dignified pose.
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* At the dinner party, a pervy guest says Greta's got the "perfect body" for modeling and assures her he's a "good friend" of a big name in the fashion industry. Racine is completely oblivious that this guy's leering at her teenage daughter and beams with approval. Greta can't roll her eyes fast enough.
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* At the dinner party, a pervy guest says Greta's got the "perfect body" for modeling and assures her he's a "good friend" of a big name in the fashion industry. Racine is completely oblivious that this guy's leering at her teenage daughter and beams with approval. The DeathGlare Greta can't roll her eyes fast enough.gives the one is one of both exhaustion and one that signifies she would love to destroy this guy if she thinks she could get away with it.
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** Racine's eagerness for Greta to be photographed elicits this response in a voice ala [[Series/GilligansIsland Thurston Howell]]:
--->'''Greta''': Shit, they caught me. I have to go gnash my teeth for the paparazzi.
--->'''Greta''': Shit, they caught me. I have to go gnash my teeth for the paparazzi.
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* "Hi Alice, you wanna make babies?"
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* "Hi Alice, you wanna make babies?"babies?"
* At the dinner party, a pervy guest says Greta's got the "perfect body" for modeling and assures her he's a "good friend" of a big name in the fashion industry. Racine is completely oblivious that this guy's leering at her teenage daughter and beams with approval. Greta can't roll her eyes fast enough.
* At the dinner party, a pervy guest says Greta's got the "perfect body" for modeling and assures her he's a "good friend" of a big name in the fashion industry. Racine is completely oblivious that this guy's leering at her teenage daughter and beams with approval. Greta can't roll her eyes fast enough.
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* In Dan's dream, he hears his mother on the radio complaining about how he was seduced by "that [[SlutShaming bimbo slut]] [[CrossesTheLineTwice whore]] Alice." His only reaction is "Mom?" [[DullSurprise as if he totally expected her to say something like that.]]
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* In Dan's dream, he hears his mother on the radio complaining about how he was seduced by "that [[SlutShaming bimbo slut]] [[CrossesTheLineTwice whore]] Alice." His only reaction is "Mom?" [[DullSurprise as if he totally expected her to say something like that.]]]]
* "Hi Alice, you wanna make babies?"
* "Hi Alice, you wanna make babies?"
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* '''Freshly resurrected Freddy:''' It's a boooy!
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* '''Freshly resurrected Freddy:''' It's a boooy!boooy!
* In Dan's dream, he hears his mother on the radio complaining about how he was seduced by "that [[SlutShaming bimbo slut]] [[CrossesTheLineTwice whore]] Alice." His only reaction is "Mom?" [[DullSurprise as if he totally expected her to say something like that.]]
* In Dan's dream, he hears his mother on the radio complaining about how he was seduced by "that [[SlutShaming bimbo slut]] [[CrossesTheLineTwice whore]] Alice." His only reaction is "Mom?" [[DullSurprise as if he totally expected her to say something like that.]]
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* "Faster than a bastard maniac, more powerful than a loco madman, it's Super-Freddy!"
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* "Faster than a bastard maniac, more powerful than a loco madman, loco-madman, it's Super-Freddy!"
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* '''Freshly resurrected Freddy''': "It's a boooy!"
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* "Faster than a bastard maniac, more powerful than a loco madman, it's Super-Freddy!"Super-Freddy!"
* '''Freshly resurrected Freddy:''' It's a boooy!
* '''Freshly resurrected Freddy:''' It's a boooy!
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* 'Freshly '''Freshly resurrected Freddy': Freddy''': "It's a boooy!"
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* Freshly 'Freshly resurrected Freddy: Freddy': "It's a boooy!"
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* "It's a boy!"
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* Freshly resurrected Freddy: "It's a boy!"boooy!"
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** Mark, a hemophobic (fear of blood), realizes he's bleeding. "Whaa...? Oh shit." *faints*
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* "Faster than a bastard maniac, more powerful than a loco madman, it's Super-Freddy!"
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** Mark, a blood phobic, realizes he's bleeding. "Whaa...? Oh shit." *faints*
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** Mark, a blood phobic, hemophobic (fear of blood), realizes he's bleeding. "Whaa...? Oh shit." *faints*
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* When Greta's mom scolds her at the graduation for trying to lick Mark's lollipop, Mark's father leans out into the aisle to [[MaleGaze snatch a look]] at the "cover girl" she's telling off.
** Mark, a blood phobic, realizes he's bleeding. "Whaa...? Oh shit." *faints*
** Mark, a blood phobic, realizes he's bleeding. "Whaa...? Oh shit." *faints*
