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!!Fridge Logic
* Pike's report won't be useless despite the fact neither Starfleet nor the UFP do have jurisdiction on Majalis.
** The next Starfleet officer who'll meet Alora when she's in danger won't be eager to help her now that she's been exposed for her management of child sacrifices.
** The Federation may well extend offers to Prospect VII to join if they agree to not attack Majalis anymore. Therefore, Majalans who can't bear the First Servant thing anymore will know they can have a decent life on a colony helped by the UFP.
* Pike's report won't be useless despite the fact neither Starfleet nor the UFP do have jurisdiction on Majalis.
** The next Starfleet officer who'll meet Alora when she's in danger won't be eager to help her now that she's been exposed for her management of child sacrifices.
** The Federation may well extend offers to Prospect VII to join if they agree to not attack Majalis anymore. Therefore, Majalans who can't bear the First Servant thing anymore will know they can have a decent life on a colony helped by the UFP.
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!!Fridge Logic
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* Pike's report won't be useless despite the fact that neither Starfleet nor the UFPdo have jurisdiction on Majalis.
** The next Starfleet officerwho'll meet who meets Alora when she's in danger won't be eager to help her now that she's been exposed for her management of child sacrifices.
sacrifices (assuming that Starfleet ever goes anywhere near Majalis again, which is unlikely).
** The Federation may well extendoffers an offer to Prospect VII to join if they agree to not attack Majalis anymore. Therefore, Majalans who can't bear the First Servant thing anymore will know they can have a decent life on a colony helped by the UFP.
* Pike's report won't be useless despite the fact that neither Starfleet nor the UFP
** The next Starfleet officer
** The Federation may well extend
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** The next Starfleet officer who'll meet Alora when she's in danger won't be eager to help her now she's exposed for her management of child sacrifices.
** The Federation may well extend offers to Prospect VII to join it if they accept to not attack Majalis anymore. Therefore, Majalan people who can't bear the First Servant thing anymore will know they can have a decent life on a colony helped by the UFP.
** The Federation may well extend offers to Prospect VII to join it if they accept to not attack Majalis anymore. Therefore, Majalan people who can't bear the First Servant thing anymore will know they can have a decent life on a colony helped by the UFP.
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** The next Starfleet officer who'll meet Alora when she's in danger won't be eager to help her now that she's been exposed for her management of child sacrifices.
** The Federation may well extend offers to Prospect VII to joinit if they accept agree to not attack Majalis anymore. Therefore, Majalan people Majalans who can't bear the First Servant thing anymore will know they can have a decent life on a colony helped by the UFP.
** The Federation may well extend offers to Prospect VII to join
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** The Federation may well offers to Prospect VII to join it if they accept to not attack Majalis anymore. Therefore, Majalan people who can't bear the First Servant thing anymore will know they can have a decent life on a colony helped by the UFP.
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** The Federation may well extend offers to Prospect VII to join it if they accept to not attack Majalis anymore. Therefore, Majalan people who can't bear the First Servant thing anymore will know they can have a decent life on a colony helped by the UFP.
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** The next Satfleet officer who'll meet Alora when she's in danger won't be eager to help her now she's exposed for her management of children sacrifices.
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** The next Satfleet Starfleet officer who'll meet Alora when she's in danger won't be eager to help her now she's exposed for her management of children child sacrifices.
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!!Fridge Logic
* Pike's report won't be useless despite the fact neither Starfleet nor the UFP do have jurisdiction on Majalis.
**The next Satfleet officer who'll meet Alora when she's in danger won't be eager to help her now she's exposed for her management of children sacrifices.
** The Federation may well offers to Prospect VII to join it if they accept to not attack Majalis anymore. Therefore, Majalan people who can't bear the First Servant thing anymore will know they can have a decent life on a colony helped by the UFP.
* Pike's report won't be useless despite the fact neither Starfleet nor the UFP do have jurisdiction on Majalis.
**The next Satfleet officer who'll meet Alora when she's in danger won't be eager to help her now she's exposed for her management of children sacrifices.
** The Federation may well offers to Prospect VII to join it if they accept to not attack Majalis anymore. Therefore, Majalan people who can't bear the First Servant thing anymore will know they can have a decent life on a colony helped by the UFP.
