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* ''Synopsis'': It is the Year 352 Post Upheaval, or 2385 AD had the United States remained on Earth. Due to a treaty signed between the nations of Fodlan and this lost nation, many Americans had been allowed to attend Garreg Mach Monastery's Officers Academy for almost one hundred years, but only recently had they been permitted to form their own house: The Emerald Diamondbacks.
With this new house, the students of the Class of 1181 (by Fodlan's years) will have to brace themselves for a new kind of student: Students that have been bred for battle; students who have their own agenda to fulfill that will conflict with even with the most powerful of Fodlan's leaders, both known and unknown; students who have their own secrets to keep as a dark shadow suddenly looms over the Academy; students who, at the end of the day, may just be the key to challenging the church's authority over the people and usher in a new era for Fodlan, and perhaps, the world.
But to the natives, they are only known as the few, the proud, the Marines.
With this new house, the students of the Class of 1181 (by Fodlan's years) will have to brace themselves for a new kind of student: Students that have been bred for battle; students who have their own agenda to fulfill that will conflict with even with the most powerful of Fodlan's leaders, both known and unknown; students who have their own secrets to keep as a dark shadow suddenly looms over the Academy; students who, at the end of the day, may just be the key to challenging the church's authority over the people and usher in a new era for Fodlan, and perhaps, the world.
But to the natives, they are only known as the few, the proud, the Marines.
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* ''Synopsis'': It is the Year 352 Post Upheaval, or 2385 AD had the United States remained on Earth. Due to a treaty signed between the nations of Fodlan and this lost nation, many Americans had been allowed to attend Garreg Mach Monastery's Officers Academy for almost one hundred years, but only recently had they been permitted to form their own house: The Emerald Diamondbacks.
Diamondbacks.\\
With this new house, the students of the Class of 1181 (by Fodlan's years) will have to brace themselves for a new kind of student: Students that have been bred for battle; students who have their own agenda to fulfill that will conflict with even with the most powerful of Fodlan's leaders, both known and unknown; students who have their own secrets to keep as a dark shadow suddenly looms over the Academy; students who, at the end of the day, may just be the key to challenging the church's authority over the people and usher in a new era for Fodlan, and perhaps, theworld.
world.\\
But to the natives, they are only known as the few, the proud, the Marines.\\
With this new house, the students of the Class of 1181 (by Fodlan's years) will have to brace themselves for a new kind of student: Students that have been bred for battle; students who have their own agenda to fulfill that will conflict with even with the most powerful of Fodlan's leaders, both known and unknown; students who have their own secrets to keep as a dark shadow suddenly looms over the Academy; students who, at the end of the day, may just be the key to challenging the church's authority over the people and usher in a new era for Fodlan, and perhaps, the
But to the natives, they are only known as the few, the proud, the Marines.\\
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12050323/1/Armed-to-the-Teeth Armed to the Teeth]]'' by ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/3880613/Boyd-the-Reaver Boyd the Reaver]]''
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12050323/1/Armed-to-the-Teeth Armed to the Teeth]]'' by ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/3880613/Boyd-the-Reaver Boyd the Reaver]]''Reaver]]'' (No longer existed)
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* Comments: From the writer of The Miracle of Life comes anothe incredible piece. Watching the main characters on their adventures in Hyrule has proven to be a very entertaining experience, even if at the moment I feel that Link is being overshadowed by the colourful characters of Three Houses. Nevertheless, I'm excited to see what awaits them all as the story goes on, and how their experiences will effect the future of Fodlan upon their return.
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* Comments: From the writer of The Miracle of Life comes anothe another incredible piece. Watching the main characters on their adventures in Hyrule has proven to be a very entertaining experience, even if at the moment I feel that Link is being overshadowed by the colourful characters of Three Houses. Nevertheless, I'm excited to see what awaits them all as the story goes on, and how their experiences will effect the future of Fodlan upon their return.
''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14003799/1/Professor-Joker Professor Joker]]'' by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/7375064/0n3dge 0n3dge]]
* Recommended by: VictorioMWolff-Haddock
* Status: Ongoing
* Crossover With: ''VideoGame/Persona5''
* Synopsis: It was going so well. They'd won. They'd stolen the world back... So why is Joker's reward another world on the brink of ruin? Crests? Magic's real here? And now teaching? Next you'll say the Metaverse is here in Fódlan as well... Okay, that was sarcasm but sure, why not? A Phantom Thief's work is never easy, or ever done it seems
* Comment: Just as the final battle was over, Ren and Morgana found themselves at Fodlan, encountering Jeralt and Byleth. While Byleth and Ren choose Black Eagle house, the first two new Phantom Thieves in this new world were [[spoiler:the Golden Deer's Claude & Lysethia.]]
''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14003799/1/Professor-Joker Professor Joker]]'' by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/7375064/0n3dge 0n3dge]]
* Recommended by: VictorioMWolff-Haddock
* Status: Ongoing
* Crossover With: ''VideoGame/Persona5''
* Synopsis: It was going so well. They'd won. They'd stolen the world back... So why is Joker's reward another world on the brink of ruin? Crests? Magic's real here? And now teaching? Next you'll say the Metaverse is here in Fódlan as well... Okay, that was sarcasm but sure, why not? A Phantom Thief's work is never easy, or ever done it seems
* Comment: Just as the final battle was over, Ren and Morgana found themselves at Fodlan, encountering Jeralt and Byleth. While Byleth and Ren choose Black Eagle house, the first two new Phantom Thieves in this new world were [[spoiler:the Golden Deer's Claude & Lysethia.]]
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''Mark of the Asphondel'' ([[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1906206/Mark-of-the-Asphodel Fanfiction account]] and [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/MarkoftheAsphodel/pseuds/MarkoftheAsphodel AO3 account]])
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''Mark of the Asphondel'' ([[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1906206/Mark-of-the-Asphodel Fanfiction account]] and Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/MarkoftheAsphodel/pseuds/MarkoftheAsphodel AO3 account]])
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* Comments: After being defeated by Fujimaru, Goetia ends up stranded on Foldlan. Under the disguise of [[DarkSkinnedBlond Solomon]], he decides to observe humanity once more when he senses unknown magic being cast, leading him to meet Byleth and the three House Leaders in Remire Village. Soon the [[HandicappedBadass one-armed]] mage becomes the librarian assistant in the monastery as he tries to solve its mysteries which has intrigued him...
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* Comments: After being defeated by Fujimaru, Goetia ends up stranded on Foldlan. Under the disguise of [[DarkSkinnedBlond Solomon]], Solomon, he decides to observe humanity once more when he senses unknown magic being cast, leading him to meet Byleth and the three House Leaders in Remire Village. Soon the [[HandicappedBadass one-armed]] mage becomes the librarian assistant in the monastery as he tries to solve its mysteries which has intrigued him...
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* ''Comments'': One of my favorite Robin [[spoiler: and Grima.]] Centric fics. So good it should be canon, explains so much and with an ending I actually prefer and different than the game. Read this you won't regret it, the only thing I wish for is if it was longer, but I'm okay.
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* ''Comments'': One of my favorite Robin [[spoiler: and [[spoiler:and Grima.]] Centric fics. So good it should be canon, explains so much and with an ending I actually prefer and different than the game. Read this you won't regret it, the only thing I wish for is if it was longer, but I'm okay.
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* ''Tags'': Alternate Universe, Past Relationship(s), past pairings aren't too important though, future pairings undecided, Children-centric, Fix-It of Sorts, Family Feels, Angst, Fluff, Main POVs are Shinonome and Siegbert, slow burn relationships, Some politics
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* ''Tags'': Alternate Universe, Past Relationship(s), past pairings aren't too important though, future pairings undecided, Children-centric, Fix-It of Sorts, Family Feels, Angst, Fluff, Main POVs [=POVs=] are Shinonome and Siegbert, slow burn relationships, Some politics
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* ''Comments'': An interesting and heartwarming AU that, like the synopsis states, features a less emotionless Byleth that with a child (that just so happens to secretly be Sothis reincarnated), an expanded look at Jeralt’s Mercenaries, [[spoiler: Byleth’s letters to his deceased lover]], side stories, all rolled up in the Golden Deer route.
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* ''Comments'': An interesting and heartwarming AU that, like the synopsis states, features a less emotionless Byleth that with a child (that just so happens to secretly be Sothis reincarnated), an expanded look at Jeralt’s Mercenaries, [[spoiler: Byleth’s [[spoiler:Byleth’s letters to his deceased lover]], side stories, all rolled up in the Golden Deer route.
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* ''Comments:'' An interesting premise where Edelgard, Post-Crimson Flower route, finds herself in the body of an alternate version of herself, six years in the past where she never went through the Crest Experiments and the Insurrection of the Seven ended more amicably. Now Edelgard has to figure out on how she got stuck in this world and how it's connected to the machinations of Those Who Slither in the Dark while connecting with Dimitri [[spoiler: who in this alternate world, took her place in the Crest Experiments and is the Hurricane King]].
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* ''Comments:'' An interesting premise where Edelgard, Post-Crimson Flower route, finds herself in the body of an alternate version of herself, six years in the past where she never went through the Crest Experiments and the Insurrection of the Seven ended more amicably. Now Edelgard has to figure out on how she got stuck in this world and how it's connected to the machinations of Those Who Slither in the Dark while connecting with Dimitri [[spoiler: who [[spoiler:who in this alternate world, took her place in the Crest Experiments and is the Hurricane King]].
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* ''Comments'': Interesting take on Robin/Lucina, the first few chapters are [[EarlyInstallmentWeirdness a bit rocky]] as the author attempts to establish Robin's personality and his relationships with the other characters, but [[SlowPacedBeginning it gets better by the time they reach Valm proper]]. Add onto that some interesting changes, such as [[ShipperOnDeck Sumia and most of the first gen females]] actively trying to get Lucina and Robin together and having [[spoiler: Morgan]] show up at the Mila Tree alongside Tiki with [[spoiler: Lucina's outfit and only having memories of Lucina instead of Robin.]]
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* ''Comments'': Interesting take on Robin/Lucina, the first few chapters are [[EarlyInstallmentWeirdness a bit rocky]] as the author attempts to establish Robin's personality and his relationships with the other characters, but [[SlowPacedBeginning it gets better by the time they reach Valm proper]]. Add onto that some interesting changes, such as [[ShipperOnDeck Sumia and most of the first gen females]] actively trying to get Lucina and Robin together and having [[spoiler: Morgan]] [[spoiler:Morgan]] show up at the Mila Tree alongside Tiki with [[spoiler: Lucina's [[spoiler:Lucina's outfit and only having memories of Lucina instead of Robin.]]
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* ''Tags'': Alternate Universe, Twelfth Night AU, Politics, Humour, Romance, Drama, Diplomacy, Cross-Posted on FanFiction.Net, Love Triangles, Crossdressing
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* ''Tags'': Alternate Universe, Twelfth Night AU, Politics, Humour, Romance, Drama, Diplomacy, Cross-Posted on FanFiction.Net, Website/FanFictionDotNet, Love Triangles, Crossdressing
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* ''Tags'': Alternate Universe - Fairy Tale, Fairy Tale Retellings, Alternate Universe - Medieval, Thousandfurs AU, Religious Fanaticism, Explicit Sexual Content, Attempted Rape/Non-Con, Explicit Language, Attempted Incest, Attempted Sexual Assault, Violence, Emotional Baggage, Rehabilitation, Ballroom Dancing, Fantasizing, Fantasy, Body Horror, Disturbing Themes, Cross-Posted on FanFiction.Net
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* ''Tags'': Alternate Universe - Fairy Tale, Fairy Tale Retellings, Alternate Universe - Medieval, Thousandfurs AU, Religious Fanaticism, Explicit Sexual Content, Attempted Rape/Non-Con, Explicit Language, Attempted Incest, Attempted Sexual Assault, Violence, Emotional Baggage, Rehabilitation, Ballroom Dancing, Fantasizing, Fantasy, Body Horror, Disturbing Themes, Cross-Posted on FanFiction.NetWebsite/FanFictionDotNet
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* ''Comments'': This story is what can basically be called the Fire Emblem version of FanFic/ThirtyHs. The insane descriptions are absolutely brilliant, and bring some of this best laughs in Fire Emblem fanfiction. The way the story describes these insane metaphors in such a sophisticated manner makes the whole thing even more worth the read, and adds even more hilarity [[spoiler: when the sophistication gets thrown out the window at the end.]] The short length of the story is also great for those after a quick read.
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* ''Comments'': This story is what can basically be called the Fire Emblem version of FanFic/ThirtyHs. The insane descriptions are absolutely brilliant, and bring some of this best laughs in Fire Emblem fanfiction. The way the story describes these insane metaphors in such a sophisticated manner makes the whole thing even more worth the read, and adds even more hilarity [[spoiler: when [[spoiler:when the sophistication gets thrown out the window at the end.]] The short length of the story is also great for those after a quick read.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/37983592/chapters/94867930?view_adult=true Fire Emblem: Semper Fidelis]]'' by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/Stormrunner777/pseuds/Stormrunner777 Stormrunner777]]
* Recommended by mrthischarmingman2
* ''Status'': Ongoing
* ''Synopsis'': It is the Year 352 Post Upheaval, or 2385 AD had the United States remained on Earth. Due to a treaty signed between the nations of Fodlan and this lost nation, many Americans had been allowed to attend Garreg Mach Monastery's Officers Academy for almost one hundred years, but only recently had they been permitted to form their own house: The Emerald Diamondbacks.
With this new house, the students of the Class of 1181 (by Fodlan's years) will have to brace themselves for a new kind of student: Students that have been bred for battle; students who have their own agenda to fulfill that will conflict with even with the most powerful of Fodlan's leaders, both known and unknown; students who have their own secrets to keep as a dark shadow suddenly looms over the Academy; students who, at the end of the day, may just be the key to challenging the church's authority over the people and usher in a new era for Fodlan, and perhaps, the world.
But to the natives, they are only known as the few, the proud, the Marines.
Semper Fidelis... Always Faithful...
* Comments: The premise of this fic reminded me of ''America's Stepbrother, America's Enemy'', which I enjoyed reading a lot. While this story has only just started and progress seems to be slow, it is very well written and is setting up some interesting plot threads. I recommend this ambitious fic to anyone who is looking for something a bit different from this fandom.
* Recommended by mrthischarmingman2
* ''Status'': Ongoing
* ''Synopsis'': It is the Year 352 Post Upheaval, or 2385 AD had the United States remained on Earth. Due to a treaty signed between the nations of Fodlan and this lost nation, many Americans had been allowed to attend Garreg Mach Monastery's Officers Academy for almost one hundred years, but only recently had they been permitted to form their own house: The Emerald Diamondbacks.
With this new house, the students of the Class of 1181 (by Fodlan's years) will have to brace themselves for a new kind of student: Students that have been bred for battle; students who have their own agenda to fulfill that will conflict with even with the most powerful of Fodlan's leaders, both known and unknown; students who have their own secrets to keep as a dark shadow suddenly looms over the Academy; students who, at the end of the day, may just be the key to challenging the church's authority over the people and usher in a new era for Fodlan, and perhaps, the world.
But to the natives, they are only known as the few, the proud, the Marines.
Semper Fidelis... Always Faithful...
* Comments: The premise of this fic reminded me of ''America's Stepbrother, America's Enemy'', which I enjoyed reading a lot. While this story has only just started and progress seems to be slow, it is very well written and is setting up some interesting plot threads. I recommend this ambitious fic to anyone who is looking for something a bit different from this fandom.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11021552/1/ The Nature of Our Anathema]]'' by ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4887491/ Encendrel]]''
* Recommended by Robotortoise
* ''Status'': Dormant
* ''Synopsis'': In another world, Robin's mother is a manakete, Robin inherits way too much of Grima's power, and a strange glitch in time causes a minor bout of amnesia. And what to make of this dark disposition?
* ''Tags'': Adventure/Humor
* ''Comments'': An alternate universe where Robin is a snarky manakete. And no, he is not Corrin. Well-written action scenes, interesting plot twists, insane ships, and crazy ideas make this story one that’s certainly worth reading.
* Recommended by Robotortoise
* ''Status'': Dormant
* ''Synopsis'': In another world, Robin's mother is a manakete, Robin inherits way too much of Grima's power, and a strange glitch in time causes a minor bout of amnesia. And what to make of this dark disposition?
* ''Tags'': Adventure/Humor
* ''Comments'': An alternate universe where Robin is a snarky manakete. And no, he is not Corrin. Well-written action scenes, interesting plot twists, insane ships, and crazy ideas make this story one that’s certainly worth reading.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7303690/1/ Crystal Clarity]]'' by ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1613412/ ADashOfInsanity]]''
* Recommended by [=Occlumancer=]
* ''Status'': Dormant
* ''Synopsis'': When others find mere dusty trinkets, Soren finds a bizarre stone under the desert sands. It's beautiful and strangely familiar, so he keeps it. Little does he know that as he holds this gem it becomes more than a mere bauble. He has a new listener now...
* ''Tags'': Friendship
* ''Comments'': Well-written (though the large paragraphs might bother some people) and everyone is very in-character. Does a great job building Soren's interactions with allies as well as fleshing out Kurthnaga's character and exploring his place in Goldoan society as well as the black dragons' overall family dynamics.
* Recommended by [=Occlumancer=]
* ''Status'': Dormant
* ''Synopsis'': When others find mere dusty trinkets, Soren finds a bizarre stone under the desert sands. It's beautiful and strangely familiar, so he keeps it. Little does he know that as he holds this gem it becomes more than a mere bauble. He has a new listener now...
* ''Tags'': Friendship
* ''Comments'': Well-written (though the large paragraphs might bother some people) and everyone is very in-character. Does a great job building Soren's interactions with allies as well as fleshing out Kurthnaga's character and exploring his place in Goldoan society as well as the black dragons' overall family dynamics.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9267091/1/ Of Wyverns and Men]]'' by ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1683189/ Komina12345]]''
* Recommended by Hollownerox
* ''Pairings'': Robin/Cherche
* ''Status'': Dormant
* ''Synopsis'': The war with Plegia is over. Though he intended never to become too attached to one of the Shepherds for fear of losing a loved one, everything changes when he meets a certain wyvern rider. Of course, this never comes without a fair share a laughter and pain at the expense of everyone's favorite tactician.
* ''Tags'': Romance
* Known for being the only Robin and Cherche fic on the website for a long time, this story is a well written take on their relationship. The author has taken a lot of time fleshing out Robin's backstory (linked him with Celice's linage from Fire Emblem 4), and giving their own creative take on the Awakening characters.
* Recommended by Hollownerox
* ''Pairings'': Robin/Cherche
* ''Status'': Dormant
* ''Synopsis'': The war with Plegia is over. Though he intended never to become too attached to one of the Shepherds for fear of losing a loved one, everything changes when he meets a certain wyvern rider. Of course, this never comes without a fair share a laughter and pain at the expense of everyone's favorite tactician.
* ''Tags'': Romance
* Known for being the only Robin and Cherche fic on the website for a long time, this story is a well written take on their relationship. The author has taken a lot of time fleshing out Robin's backstory (linked him with Celice's linage from Fire Emblem 4), and giving their own creative take on the Awakening characters.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12583843/1/ Crocodile Tears]] by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5259901/ AlcatrazisGod]]
* Recommended by: @/Nightelf37
* Crossover with: ''VideoGame/NierAutomata''
* Status: Dormant; last updated April 2018 (deleted off of fanfiction.net)
* Synopsis: 2B finds herself stranded in the middle of a surreal forest crawling with twisted sadists and nightmarish monsters. When she encounters an amnesia-stricken 9S, she sets out to investigate the two strangers who have taken advantage of his confusion. With her own memories either lost or disheveled, she struggles to figure out how she came to such a place and how to escape it.
* Recommended by: @/Nightelf37
* Crossover with: ''VideoGame/NierAutomata''
* Status: Dormant; last updated April 2018 (deleted off of fanfiction.net)
* Synopsis: 2B finds herself stranded in the middle of a surreal forest crawling with twisted sadists and nightmarish monsters. When she encounters an amnesia-stricken 9S, she sets out to investigate the two strangers who have taken advantage of his confusion. With her own memories either lost or disheveled, she struggles to figure out how she came to such a place and how to escape it.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14108072/1/Outlaw-Knight Outlaw Knight]]'' by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/15499468/Ernestrunningaway]]net/u/15499468/Ernestrunningaway Ernestrunningaway]]
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/40057158/chapters/100319124 The Heroes of Legend]]'' by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/Critica7 Critica7]]
* Recommended by: mrthischarmingman2
* Status: Ongoing
* Crossover with ''Franchise/TheLegendOfZelda''
* Synopsis: One day, the students of Garreg Mach disappeared without a trace. Two weeks later, they returned, having spent three years in Hyrule. This is their story.
* Comments: From the writer of The Miracle of Life comes anothe incredible piece. Watching the main characters on their adventures in Hyrule has proven to be a very entertaining experience, even if at the moment I feel that Link is being overshadowed by the colourful characters of Three Houses. Nevertheless, I'm excited to see what awaits them all as the story goes on, and how their experiences will effect the future of Fodlan upon their return.
* Recommended by: mrthischarmingman2
* Status: Ongoing
* Crossover with ''Franchise/TheLegendOfZelda''
* Synopsis: One day, the students of Garreg Mach disappeared without a trace. Two weeks later, they returned, having spent three years in Hyrule. This is their story.
* Comments: From the writer of The Miracle of Life comes anothe incredible piece. Watching the main characters on their adventures in Hyrule has proven to be a very entertaining experience, even if at the moment I feel that Link is being overshadowed by the colourful characters of Three Houses. Nevertheless, I'm excited to see what awaits them all as the story goes on, and how their experiences will effect the future of Fodlan upon their return.
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* Crossover with: VideoGame/FateGrandOrder''VideoGame/FateGrandOrder''
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* Crossover with: VideoGame/RedDeadRedemptionII''VideoGame/RedDeadRedemptionII''
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14108072/1/Outlaw-Knight Outlaw Knight]]'' by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/15499468/Ernestrunningaway]]
* Recommended by: mrthischarmingman2
* Status: Ongoing
* Crossover with: VideoGame/RedDeadRedemptionII
* Synopsis: Defeated by his nemesis, abandoned by the man he gave his life to, and dying from his ravaged lungs, Arthur Morgan was certain his time was at an end as he looked to the dawn one last time. But through the will of fate, or some silent, unknowable power, he awoke to a foreign land, tended to by strangers. Among them, none baffled him more than this cobalt-haired girl with a sword...
* Comments: This is one of the last kind of crossovers I'd imagine anybody making, but honestly? The author makes the premise really work, especially with how the characters interact off each other. Arthur and Byleth's interactions together are the highlights of the fic so far, and I look forward to seeing where the author goes with this story once it really gets started.
* Recommended by: mrthischarmingman2
* Status: Ongoing
* Crossover with: VideoGame/RedDeadRedemptionII
* Synopsis: Defeated by his nemesis, abandoned by the man he gave his life to, and dying from his ravaged lungs, Arthur Morgan was certain his time was at an end as he looked to the dawn one last time. But through the will of fate, or some silent, unknowable power, he awoke to a foreign land, tended to by strangers. Among them, none baffled him more than this cobalt-haired girl with a sword...
* Comments: This is one of the last kind of crossovers I'd imagine anybody making, but honestly? The author makes the premise really work, especially with how the characters interact off each other. Arthur and Byleth's interactions together are the highlights of the fic so far, and I look forward to seeing where the author goes with this story once it really gets started.
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** Can't really recommend this one. This story tries to make things "grayer" by derailing characters (and whole nations) so the {{Jerkass}} Avatar looks better.
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** Can't really recommend this one. This story tries to make things "grayer" by derailing characters (and whole nations) so the {{Jerkass}} JerkSue Avatar looks better.
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** Can't really recommend this one. This story tries to make things "grayer" by derailing characters (and whole nations) so the JerkSue {{Jerkass}} Avatar looks better.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13964412/1/And-They-Called-Her-Nina And They Called Her Nina]]'' by Mythendary
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13964412/1/And-They-Called-Her-Nina And They Called Her Nina]]'' by Mythendary[[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4045350/Mythendary Mythendary]]
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13762969/1/Monstrosity Monstrosity]]'' by [=CitrusChickadee=][[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/455846/CitrusChickadee CitrusChickadee]]
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13964412/1/And-They-Called-Her-Nina And They Called Her Nina]]'' by Mythendary
* Recommended by: StarHunter
* ''Status'': Complete
* ''Synopsis'': The second princess of the house of Ylisse had an identity complex.
* ''Tags'': Family, Drama
* ''Comments'': A look at how the present-day second-gen characters might feel about their future counterparts, told mostly through the viewpoint of Lucina, here called Nina to differentiate herself from her adult self. Most of the other kids get a few cameos, too. There's some seriously emotional and complex stuff in here; Nina's feelings towards Lucina are all done very realistically and relatably.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13762969/1/Monstrosity Monstrosity]]'' by [=CitrusChickadee=]
* Recommended by StarHunter
* Status: Complete
* Pairing: Dimitri/Dedue
* Synopsis: The Kingdom triumphs over the Empire at the Tailtean Plains, but not without a lot of sacrifice. Perhaps the most difficult change to deal with is Dedue's new form. But Dimitri will not give up on him, even as a Demonic Beast, despite the protests from everyone else. Crimson Flower AU.
* Tags: Drama
* Comments: A Crimson Flower AU where the Kingdom wins, but Dedue is stuck as a Demonic Beast following the penultimate battle. The idea is interesting in general, and everyone's reactions to the situation are handled really realistically.
* Recommended by StarHunter
* Status: Complete
* Pairing: Dimitri/Dedue
* Synopsis: The Kingdom triumphs over the Empire at the Tailtean Plains, but not without a lot of sacrifice. Perhaps the most difficult change to deal with is Dedue's new form. But Dimitri will not give up on him, even as a Demonic Beast, despite the protests from everyone else. Crimson Flower AU.
* Tags: Drama
* Comments: A Crimson Flower AU where the Kingdom wins, but Dedue is stuck as a Demonic Beast following the penultimate battle. The idea is interesting in general, and everyone's reactions to the situation are handled really realistically.
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** Pardon the dissenting opinion, but I disagree. The fic is well-written, in theory, and it definitely has some strong elements (some of the original characters definitely deepen the world created), but... it didn't grip me. I dislike over-prosaicness in a narrative, and the author indulges in it. He also makes rather weak (and grossly unnecessary) changes to the plot which have ruinous effects upon characters - for instance, in the "Premonition", he has [[spoiler:Robin ''willingly'' let Validar claim him right after Chrom's death, despite the canonical implications that he was ''completely possessed''.]] Or that he'll adjust details to suit himself rather than work with what he has - like suggesting that [[KnightTemplar the previous Exalt]] started his crusade due to his wife's death, when Chrom explicitly states in the game that he's been at it for ''years'' (on that note, bonus demerit points for not even ''trying'' to research stuff he doesn't know, which leads to Gangrel being retconned into being of royal blood rather than a nihilistic former-street-rat). I liked how ''Wraith of the Lorca'' (below) adapted [=FE7=]; I am disappointed by how this one does [=FE13=] and consider it overrated, beating ''many'' more worthy fics to this Rec list just because it stood out more than them...
** I'm going to have to agree with the above reviewer. The author adds in too many unnecessary things (such as a LoveTriangle between Lucina, Say'ri and Robin that does very little for the narrative), turns Robin into a borderline Shonen protagonist, including a harem of girls who want him, frequent power-ups and an EnemyWithin SuperpoweredEvilSide, and has a tendency to make the plot drag by introducing other plot arcs mid-way through. And like the above reviewer said, he changes the characters to suit him and doesn't do his research, to the detriment of the characters involved. I definitely wouldn't call it "the greatest adaption of a Fire Emblem game", or even an adaption at all--it reads more like, well, a fanfiction, and I don't think it lives up to its reputation.
** I agree with all three reviews above, putting me somewhere in the middle. I do appreciate the little twists and turns the author takes with the plot of ''Awakening'' while following the general plotline. The usage of Priam was a welcome addition, and the humor was spot-on at times. I do ''not'' appreciate, however, the excessive liberties taken. Robin barely seems like Robin. Sure, he's a VanillaProtagonist, but if that's all you have, that's all you have. But, if you are going to add things, at least keep the basic character intact. Robin went through a DorkAge at one point that, while entertaining when my brain was off, made the character barely recognizable to me with my brain on. It's cool, no doubt about it (otherwise, I wouldn't have read the whole thing within three days), but in a post-completion analysis, it doesn't live up to the hype.
** Invisible Ties is a fairly shallow story that often bends its characters, its plotlines, and its own rules to keep moving. It's not unenjoyable to read, but it does not hold up very well.
** I'm going to have to agree with the above reviewer. The author adds in too many unnecessary things (such as a LoveTriangle between Lucina, Say'ri and Robin that does very little for the narrative), turns Robin into a borderline Shonen protagonist, including a harem of girls who want him, frequent power-ups and an EnemyWithin SuperpoweredEvilSide, and has a tendency to make the plot drag by introducing other plot arcs mid-way through. And like the above reviewer said, he changes the characters to suit him and doesn't do his research, to the detriment of the characters involved. I definitely wouldn't call it "the greatest adaption of a Fire Emblem game", or even an adaption at all--it reads more like, well, a fanfiction, and I don't think it lives up to its reputation.
** I agree with all three reviews above, putting me somewhere in the middle. I do appreciate the little twists and turns the author takes with the plot of ''Awakening'' while following the general plotline. The usage of Priam was a welcome addition, and the humor was spot-on at times. I do ''not'' appreciate, however, the excessive liberties taken. Robin barely seems like Robin. Sure, he's a VanillaProtagonist, but if that's all you have, that's all you have. But, if you are going to add things, at least keep the basic character intact. Robin went through a DorkAge at one point that, while entertaining when my brain was off, made the character barely recognizable to me with my brain on. It's cool, no doubt about it (otherwise, I wouldn't have read the whole thing within three days), but in a post-completion analysis, it doesn't live up to the hype.
** Invisible Ties is a fairly shallow story that often bends its characters, its plotlines, and its own rules to keep moving. It's not unenjoyable to read, but it does not hold up very well.
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** I'm going to have to agree with the above reviewer. The author adds in too many unnecessary things (such as a LoveTriangle between Lucina, Say'ri and Robin that does very little for the narrative), turns Robin into a borderline Shonen protagonist, including a harem of girls who want him, frequent power-ups and an EnemyWithin SuperpoweredEvilSide, and has a tendency to make the plot drag by introducing other plot arcs mid-way through. And like the above reviewer said, he changes the characters to suit him and doesn't do his research, to the detriment of the characters involved. I definitely wouldn't call it "the greatest adaption of a Fire Emblem game", or even an adaption at all--it reads more like, well, a fanfiction, and I don't think it lives up to its reputation.
** I agree with all three reviews above, putting me somewhere in the middle. I do appreciate the little twists and turns the author takes with the plot of ''Awakening'' while following the general plotline. The usage of Priam was a welcome addition, and the humor was spot-on at times. I do ''not'' appreciate, however, the excessive liberties taken. Robin barely seems like Robin. Sure, he's a VanillaProtagonist, but if that's all you have, that's all you have. But, if you are going to add things, at least keep the basic character intact. Robin went through a DorkAge at one point that, while entertaining when my brain was off, made the character barely recognizable to me with my brain on. It's cool, no doubt about it (otherwise, I wouldn't have read the whole thing within three days), but in a post-completion analysis, it doesn't live up to the hype.
** Invisible Ties is a fairly shallow story that often bends its characters, its plotlines, and its own rules to keep moving. It's not unenjoyable to read, but it does not hold up very well.
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** [[FanFic/ADayInTheLife [[Fanfic/ADayInTheLifeSmileplease91 Now has a Tropes page.]]
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** I've got to agree with WillyFourEyes. The author was clearly a teenager when he wrote this because his idea of what's tough and cool are just so juvenile, and there's way too much focus on making things DarkerAndEdgier to the point where the setting couldn't even exist (deleting the sun?!). - @/IndustriousArc, a.k.a. Death Dealer Inc (author of ''A Brighter Dark'')
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** I've got to agree with WillyFourEyes.@/WillyFourEyes. The author was clearly a teenager when he wrote this because his idea of what's tough and cool are just so juvenile, and there's way too much focus on making things DarkerAndEdgier to the point where the setting couldn't even exist (deleting the sun?!). - @/IndustriousArc, a.k.a. Death Dealer Inc (author of ''A Brighter Dark'')
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** I've got to agree with WillyFourEyes. The author was clearly a teenager when he wrote this because his idea of what's tough and cool are just so juvenile, and there's way too much focus on making things DarkerAndEdgier to the point where the setting couldn't even exist (deleting the sun?!). - @/IndustriousArc, a.k.a. Death Dealer Inc (author of ''A Brighter Dark'')
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* Comments: After being defeated by Fujimaru, Goetia ends up stranded on Foldlan. under the disguise of [[DarkSkinnedBlond Solomon]], he decides to observe humanity once more when he senses unknown magic being cast as he discover a woman reverse time to dodge a blow. read as the [[HandicappedBadass one-armed]] mage becomes the librarian assistant on the monastery as he tries to solve its mysteries which has intrigued him...
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* Comments: After being defeated by Fujimaru, Goetia ends up stranded on Foldlan. under Under the disguise of [[DarkSkinnedBlond Solomon]], he decides to observe humanity once more when he senses unknown magic being cast as he discover a woman reverse time cast, leading him to dodge a blow. read as meet Byleth and the three House Leaders in Remire Village. Soon the [[HandicappedBadass one-armed]] mage becomes the librarian assistant on in the monastery as he tries to solve its mysteries which has intrigued him...
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* ''Pairings'': F/M F/F Robin/Chrom, Robin/Lon'qu
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* ''Pairings'': F/M F/F Robin/Chrom, Robin/Lon'qu
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* Comments: After being defeated by Fujimaru, Goetia ends up stranded on Foldlan. under the disguise of [[DarkSkinnedBlond Solomon]], he decides to observe humanity once more when he senses unknown magic being cast when as he discover a woman reverse time to dodge a blow. read as the [[HandicappedBadass one-armed]] mage becomes the librarian assistant on the monastery as he tries to solve its mysteries which has intrigued him...
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13938272/1/Demon-in-Fodlan Demon in Fodlan]]'' by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/14443864/Mundatorem Mundatorem]]
* Recommended by: VictorioMWolff-Haddock
* Status: Ongoing
* Crossover with: VideoGame/FateGrandOrder
* Synopsis: Goetia, surviving his failure at the Temple of Time, finds himself in a new world. Despite the rather unusual nature of it, he finds himself disappointed that he see's much of the same human nature that he saw on Earth. Determined to discover what it was that made human life worth the struggle, he decides to use his second chance to find the meaning of his own life.
* Comments: After being defeated by Fujimaru, Goetia ends up stranded on Foldlan. under the disguise of [[DarkSkinnedBlond Solomon]], he decides to observe humanity once more when he senses unknown magic being cast when he discover a woman reverse time to dodge a blow. read as the [[HandicappedBadass one-armed]] mage becomes the librarian assistant on the monastery as he tries to solve its mysteries which has intrigued him...
* Recommended by: VictorioMWolff-Haddock
* Status: Ongoing
* Crossover with: VideoGame/FateGrandOrder
* Synopsis: Goetia, surviving his failure at the Temple of Time, finds himself in a new world. Despite the rather unusual nature of it, he finds himself disappointed that he see's much of the same human nature that he saw on Earth. Determined to discover what it was that made human life worth the struggle, he decides to use his second chance to find the meaning of his own life.
* Comments: After being defeated by Fujimaru, Goetia ends up stranded on Foldlan. under the disguise of [[DarkSkinnedBlond Solomon]], he decides to observe humanity once more when he senses unknown magic being cast when he discover a woman reverse time to dodge a blow. read as the [[HandicappedBadass one-armed]] mage becomes the librarian assistant on the monastery as he tries to solve its mysteries which has intrigued him...
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** Still recommended, but YMMV. While the attention paid to the LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters is great, the protagonist skirts dangerously close to being a Stu at times, ParodyRetcon notwithstanding: everyone's attracted to him, he can do magic nobody else can, he solves everyone's personal problems with his infinite wisdom etc... At times it seems to morph into a rant by the author about his (real) life, and the constant references get really annoying. It's down to the reader whether this detracts from the story or not.
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** Still recommended, but YMMV. While the attention paid to the LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters large cast is great, the protagonist skirts dangerously close to being a Stu at times, ParodyRetcon notwithstanding: everyone's attracted to him, he can do magic nobody else can, he solves everyone's personal problems with his infinite wisdom etc... At times it seems to morph into a rant by the author about his (real) life, and the constant references get really annoying. It's down to the reader whether this detracts from the story or not.
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** I disagree. The "not all sunshine and rainbows" Corrin as depicted in ''A Brighter Dark'' is unbearable as a viewpoint character, and the changes the story makes to the worlds of Hoshido and Nohr for the sake of "realism" makes both sides even ''less'' believable and relatable [[spoiler:(removing Valla from the setting but still sticking closely to TheStationsOfTheCanon brings up its own set of issues)]]. The constant slamming of the Hoshido side (and ''Fates'' as a game in general) is also grating, as is the overall grimdark tone--the attempted "WarIsHell" message doesn't work when the narrative revels in describing the gruesome deaths inflicted by Nohr's war machine. All in all, not one I'd ever want to read again, or recommend to others. - @/WillyFourEyes.
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