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* DeployableCover: Thanks to the engineering expertise of both Ruby and Shen, the Titan Armor is eventually upgrafed with a collapsible blast shield that can (barely) withstand the full volley from a mechtoid. MECs get a similar upgrade in the form of Juggernaut plating, which can also shield other operatives.

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* DeployableCover: Thanks to the engineering expertise of both Ruby and Shen, the Titan Armor is eventually upgrafed with a collapsible blast shield that can (barely) withstand the full volley from a mechtoid. MECs [=MECs=] get a similar upgrade in the form of Juggernaut plating, which can also shield other operatives.

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** [[spoiler: Torchwick isn't eaten by a Grimm, and survives his fall off the Atlesian cruiser, only to be captured by Taiyang]].
* TheyWouldCutYouUp: Subverted. Despite first impressions, Vahlen simply interviews the Huntresses and performs a couple of non-invasive medical tests. Even after discovering Blake is a Faunus, she only implores Blake to give permission to use her genetics.

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** [[spoiler: Torchwick isn't eaten by a Grimm, and survives his fall off the Atlesian cruiser, only to be captured by Taiyang]].
Taiying.]]
* SplitPersonalityMerge: The original plan for XCOM!Penny was for her to be re-uploaded back into the original Penny so she could learn from the memories and experiences of her other self. After the battle of Beacon, the two Pennies decided to stay separated, with XCOM!Penny taking up the name Nichole.
* TheyWouldCutYouUp: Subverted. Despite first impressions, Vahlen simply interviews the Huntresses and performs a couple of non-invasive medical tests. Even after discovering Blake is a Faunus, she only implores Blake to give permission to use her genetics.genetics, which she does after she gets accidentally “outed” during a mission.
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There's also ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11820682/1/Tales-From-The-Anthill Tales from the Anthill]]'', a collection of tales which take place in-between various chapters of ''RWBY Within''. It also has ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12990105/1/Tales-From-The-Avenger Tales from the Avenger]]'' which presents various stories set between the chapters of ''Remnant Unknown''. However, these stories aren't written by DrAmishMD but by other authors from his Discord server.

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There's also ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11820682/1/Tales-From-The-Anthill Tales from the Anthill]]'', a collection of tales which take place in-between various chapters of ''RWBY Within''. It also has ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12990105/1/Tales-From-The-Avenger Tales from the Avenger]]'' which presents various stories set between the chapters of ''Remnant Unknown''. However, these stories aren't written by DrAmishMD [=DrAmishMD=] but by other authors from his Discord server.



* AlternateUniverse: WordOfGod has stated that the backstory of Remnant will be significantly different from canon in this story

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* AlternateUniverse: WordOfGod [[invoked]] has stated that the backstory of Remnant will be significantly different from canon in this story



* {{Retcon}}: ''RWBY Within'' established that Blake was an orphan who grew up on the streets. ''Remnant Unknown'', and WordOfGod, has established that this is no longer true, with Ghira and Kali both being alive, and Blake not growing up on the streets.

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* {{Retcon}}: ''RWBY Within'' established that Blake was an orphan who grew up on the streets. ''Remnant Unknown'', and WordOfGod, WordOfGod [[invoked]], has established that this is no longer true, with Ghira and Kali both being alive, and Blake not growing up on the streets.



*** "You expected a gift from RWBY's resident pyro, [[Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventure BUT IT]] [[MemeticMutation WAS ME, NORA]].

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*** "You expected a gift from RWBY's resident pyro, [[Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventure BUT IT]] [[MemeticMutation WAS ME, NORA]].NORA]] [[invoked]].
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*** "You expected a gift from RWBY's resident pyro, [[JoJosBizarreAdventure BUT IT]] [[MemeticMutation WAS ME, NORA]].

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*** "You expected a gift from RWBY's resident pyro, [[JoJosBizarreAdventure [[Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventure BUT IT]] [[MemeticMutation WAS ME, NORA]].

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** [[spoiler: After Coco made a joke to [=XCOM's=] therapist about how "if she died, at least she wouldn't be gunning down anymore stadiums full of people", he makes a note to Bradford recommending that she be put on suicide watch, since even a joke can hint at something worse]]

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** [[spoiler: After Coco made a joke to [=XCOM's=] therapist about how "if she died, at least she wouldn't be gunning down anymore stadiums full of people", he makes a note to Bradford recommending that she be put on suicide watch, since even a joke can hint at something worse]]worse]].
** [[spoiler:Cinder's attempt to suggest that XCOM wasn't really involved in the defense of Menagerie due to taking very few casualties is shot down on the grounds that number of casualties does not correlate to level of involvement]].


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** Bradford's rebuke to Liza Lavender is based off of the interview Shepherd and al-Jilani from ''VideoGame/MassEffect2'', specifically the Paragon option.

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** [[spoiler: Not necessarily ''token'', but the Aliens on Remnant are not only not hostile, but end up becoming allies with XCOM soon after they meet, and were already not hostile to humans (so long as they were left alone)]].

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** [[spoiler: Not necessarily ''token'', but the Aliens Vipers on Remnant are not only not hostile, but end up becoming allies with XCOM soon after they meet, and were already not hostile to humans (so and Faunus(so long as they were left alone)]].



** WaxingLyrical: ...and despite that, he ends his speech quoting [[{{Disney/Mulan}} "I'll Make A Man Out Of You"]].



* WalkingDisasterArea: Captain Beagle, who's an expy of famous ''VideoGame/XCOMLong War'' Let's Player and Creator/ShackTactical alumnus Beaglerush, whose real-life insistence on cranking the difficulty level up to the point where the developers thought it was logically impossible to win [[BeyondTheImpossible and then doing it anyway]] is famous throughout the playerbase. The author turns this into an in-universe reputation for Beagle as the Strike Team leader who ''always'' has seemingly routine missions go spectacularly awry through no fault of his own, yet somehow manages to come through with no worse casualties than average for [=XCOM=].
* WaxingLyrical: ...and despite that, he ends his speech quoting [[{{Disney/Mulan}} "I'll Make A Man Out Of You"]].

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* WalkingDisasterArea: Captain Beagle, who's an expy of famous ''VideoGame/XCOMLong War'' ''VideoGame/XCOMLongWar'' Let's Player and Creator/ShackTactical alumnus Beaglerush, whose real-life insistence on cranking the difficulty level up to the point where the developers thought it was logically impossible to win [[BeyondTheImpossible and then doing it anyway]] is famous throughout the playerbase. The author turns this into an in-universe reputation for Beagle as the Strike Team leader who ''always'' has seemingly routine missions go spectacularly awry through no fault of his own, yet somehow manages to come through with no worse casualties than average for [=XCOM=]. \n* WaxingLyrical: ...and despite that, he ends his speech quoting [[{{Disney/Mulan}} "I'll Make A Man Out Of You"]].
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* WalkingDisasterArea: Captain Beagle, who's an expy of famous ''VideoGame/XCOMLong War'' Let's Player and Creator/ShackTactical alumnus Beaglerush, whose real-life insistence on cranking the difficulty level up to the point where the developers thought it was logically impossible to win [[BeyondTheImpossible and then doing it anyway]] is famous throughout the playerbase. The author turns this into an in-universe reputation for Beagle as the Strike Team leader who ''always'' has seemingly routine missions go spectacularly awry through no fault of his own, yet somehow manages to come through with no worse casualties than average for [=XCOM=].
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* {{Retcon}}: ''RWBY Within'' established that Blake was an orphan who grew up on the streets. ''Remnant Unknown'', and WordOfGod, has established that this is no longer true, with at least Ghira still being alive in the story.

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* {{Retcon}}: ''RWBY Within'' established that Blake was an orphan who grew up on the streets. ''Remnant Unknown'', and WordOfGod, has established that this is no longer true, with at least Ghira still and Kali both being alive in alive, and Blake not growing up on the story.streets.
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** [[spoiler: After Coco made a joke to [=XCOM's=] therapist about how "if she died, at least she wouldn't be gunning down anymore stadiums full of people", he makes a note to Bradford recommending that she be put on suicide watch, since even a joke can hint at something worse]]


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** After [[spoiler: accidentally killing numerous civilians and starting the Downfall of Beacon]], Coco develops some serious issues, [[spoiler: and it's revealed that [=XCOM's=] therapist has put her on suicide watch]].
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* DramaticIrony:The first hint XCOM gets of the [[spoiler: White Fang's presence during the Battle of Beacon is when someone knocks on the door of REMCOM's comms room using the wrong knock (they use the one for shift changes, despite XCOM's standing procedures saying that they don't do shift changes in the middle of an emergency)]]. The first hint the White Fang get that XCOM [[spoiler:has tracked down where they are interrogating a captured operative is when someone knocks on the door of the interrogation room, but fails to use the correct knock]]
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** Blake's semblance allows her to create shadow copies of her body. [[spoiler: After losing her limbs, her shadow copies also lack limbs, in part due to her subconsciously thinking of her artificial limbs as not being part of her. Vahlen eventually creates a small, portable hologram projector for Blake to wear that projects limbs onto her copies, allowing her to cover up her accident]].
** Regardless of how well Vahlen makes artificial limbs, they lack any sort of false skin, and hitting metal sounds different from hitting flesh. Because of this, Arslan is able to tell that Blake and Yang have artificial limbs, as she could hear the sound of metal being struck whenever she hit Yang's limbs during the match between their teams.


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** [[spoiler: No matter how hard Cinder works or how many resources she expends, nothing will change the fact that XCOM is primarily made up of elite commandos who just came out of a brutal war for the survival of their planet backed up by some of the most brilliant scientists and engineers on Earth, while the ADVENT peacekeepers are primarily just highly motivated volunteers with very little in the way of actual experience. Also, while some Hunters have joined ADVENT, the majority haven't, partially because of her speech denouncing them]].

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* AbnormalAmmo: After given an opportunity to study Dust, Doctor Vahlen manages to invent a new type of Dust that uses Elerium as an essence. The result is a weapon that's capable of reducing both aliens [[spoiler:and grimm]] into LudicrousGibs.

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* AbnormalAmmo: After given an opportunity to study Dust, Doctor Vahlen manages to invent a new type of Dust that uses Elerium as an essence. The result is a weapon that's capable of reducing both aliens [[spoiler:and grimm]] Grimm]] into LudicrousGibs.


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* AlternateUniverse: WordOfGod has stated that the backstory of Remnant will be significantly different from canon in this story
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** [[spoiler: Just before dropping [[MiniMecha Hammer]] into Menagerie, Tech Sergeant Ryder tells the team in Menagerie to [[VideoGame/{{Titanfall}} stand by for titanfall]]]].
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* HearingVoices: Throughout ''Remnant Unknown'', Annette hears another voice in her head, giving her advice. Chapter 38 reveals that it is '''[[spoiler:[[VideoGame/TheBureauXCOMDeclassified ASARU]]''']].
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* NoodleIncident: In the sequel fic when Weiss goes to show [[spoiler:Winter her progress with her semblance, she summons a small ordinary sparrow. Considering how it's only supposed to summon enemies she's slain...]]
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* Doorstopper: With RWBY Within finishing at nearly 237k words and Remnant Unknown nowhere close to being finished at 300k words, be prepared to be reading for a while.

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* Doorstopper: With RWBY Within finishing at nearly 237k words and Remnant Unknown nowhere close to being finished at 300k words, be prepared to be reading for a while.
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* MeaningfulName: The codenames of the two XCOM operatives working with Junior are Omerta and Ochoa. [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Omertà Omertà]] is the name of the Mafia's code of honour and silence, while Ochoa is the family name of the [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jorge_Luis_Ochoa_Vásquez Ochoa brothers]], three important founding members of [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Medellín_Cartel Pablo Escobar's Medellín Cartel]].
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* GagPenis: When an XCOM squad separated from the main force in the sequel try to regain contact with the organization, they notice an oddity in the radio patterns. To quote a squad member explaining it to his officer: "It looks like a cock and balls, sir. Centered on the 69 MHz bandwidth". Turned out, another squad has gone dark and tried to pass a secret message that people familiar with a squad member's dick jokes will notice and has even further encrypted the transmission. Upon learning that, the officer asks if the comm specialist can "look for another Johnson".
* GameplayAndStorySegregation: In ''VideoGame/LongWar'', psychic soldiers cannot be promoted to officers, but here, Annette reached the rank of captain prior to the start of the story, and later reaches the rank of major.

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* GagPenis: When an XCOM squad separated from the main force in the sequel try to regain contact with the organization, they notice an oddity in the radio patterns. To quote a squad member explaining it to his officer: "It looks like a cock and balls, sir. Centered on the 69 MHz [=MHz=] bandwidth". Turned out, another squad has gone dark and tried to pass a secret message that people familiar with a squad member's dick jokes will notice and has even further encrypted the transmission. Upon learning that, the officer asks if the comm specialist can "look for another Johnson".
* GameplayAndStorySegregation: In ''VideoGame/LongWar'', ''VideoGame/XCOMLongWar'', psychic soldiers cannot be promoted to officers, but here, Annette reached the rank of captain prior to the start of the story, and later reaches the rank of major.



* GoodShepard: While he doesn't actually appear, Vahlen talks to Pyrrha about [[UsefulNotes/ThePope Pope Francis]], and makes it clear that she views him as this. [[spoiler: His actions are part of why Vahlen not only doesn't mind helping wash, feed, and exercise the paralysed Pyrrha, but actually looks forward to it, since she feels better knowing she's helping others]].

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* GoodShepard: GoodShepherd: While he doesn't actually appear, Vahlen talks to Pyrrha about [[UsefulNotes/ThePope Pope Francis]], and makes it clear that she views him as this. [[spoiler: His actions are part of why Vahlen not only doesn't mind helping wash, feed, and exercise the paralysed Pyrrha, but actually looks forward to it, since she feels better knowing she's helping others]].
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* CoolAirship: [[spoiler: The Avenger, a salvaged Atlesian cruiser that Torchwick was on during the Battle of Beacon. XCOM secured it while rescuing the team that was on-board when it crashed, got Ironwood's permission to keep it, repaired and modified it, and are currently using it as the headquarters of the XCOM forces stranded on Remnant]].


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* IntergenerationalFriendship:
** Ruby and Shen are close friends, bonding over their love of engineering.
** Weiss and Vahlen are also close friends, bonding when Weiss helps her deal with her reputation and lack of social skills, with Weiss becoming her closest friend outside of the Command Staff and developing an interest in science and research, and Vahlen being the one who gives Weiss her NomDeGuerre.
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* AscendedMeme: During [[spoiler: the Battle of Menagerie]], XCOM's reinforcements play what they call "XCOM's anthem". It's "X Gonna Give It To Ya" by Music/{{DMX}}.


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*** [[spoiler: After she becomes a MEC Trooper, [=MacAuley=] tries to get people to call her ComicBook/{{Wolverine}}, but it doesn't catch on]].
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** Ruby and Weiss excel at Terror missions where [[GlassCannon speed is essential]] which contrasts Jaune and Pyrrha's [[StoneWall slow and methodical pushes]] during Landed UFO missions.
** Blake and Yang due to being [[spoilers: turned into MECs and their own auras and semblances enhancing their new mechanical bodies]] excel at facing off against the stronger mechanical enemies of XCOM. This is contrasted by [[spoiler: Nora and Lie Ren]] being very adept at facing off against the psionic enemies of XCOM.

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** Ruby and Weiss excel at Terror missions where [[GlassCannon speed is essential]] which contrasts [[spoiler: Jaune and Pyrrha's Pyrrha's]] [[StoneWall slow and methodical pushes]] during Landed UFO missions.
** Blake and Yang due to being [[spoilers: [[spoiler: turned into MECs MEC troopers and their own auras and semblances enhancing their new mechanical bodies]] excel at facing off against the stronger mechanical enemies of XCOM. This is contrasted by [[spoiler: Nora and Lie Ren]] being very adept at facing off against the psionic enemies of XCOM.XCOM due to their personalities.

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* PragmaticVillainy: [[spoiler: Junior in the sequel. He may just be interested in expanding his operations, but he agrees to help Bradford and Vale, realising that, if Vale doesn't recover, there'll be nobody with enough money to go to his club or buy his goods]].

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* OpposingCombatPhilosophies: As Bradford has noted, RWBY and [[spoiler: JNPR]] are completely opposites of one another which he uses to great effect on deployments [[spoiler: once they regain their auras.]]
** Ruby and Weiss excel at Terror missions where [[GlassCannon speed is essential]] which contrasts Jaune and Pyrrha's [[StoneWall slow and methodical pushes]] during Landed UFO missions.
** Blake and Yang due to being [[spoilers: turned into MECs and their own auras and semblances enhancing their new mechanical bodies]] excel at facing off against the stronger mechanical enemies of XCOM. This is contrasted by [[spoiler: Nora and Lie Ren]] being very adept at facing off against the psionic enemies of XCOM.
* PragmaticVillainy: [[spoiler: Junior in the sequel. He may just be interested in expanding his operations, but he agrees to help Bradford and Vale, realising realizing that, if Vale doesn't recover, there'll be nobody with enough money to go to his club or buy his goods]].
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* EveryoneKnowsMorse: Inverted. After going to great lengths to encrypt and hide a transmission (see GagPenis), it turned out to be a message in morse code, specifically noted as a "communication protocol that the people of Remnant have never heard of".


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* GagPenis: When an XCOM squad separated from the main force in the sequel try to regain contact with the organization, they notice an oddity in the radio patterns. To quote a squad member explaining it to his officer: "It looks like a cock and balls, sir. Centered on the 69 MHz bandwidth". Turned out, another squad has gone dark and tried to pass a secret message that people familiar with a squad member's dick jokes will notice and has even further encrypted the transmission. Upon learning that, the officer asks if the comm specialist can "look for another Johnson".
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** [=XCOM=], after capturing Roman, start calling him a [[Film/AClockWorkOrange droog.]] Unsurprising, considering that Roman is based on Alex de Large.
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There's also ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11820682/1/Tales-From-The-Anthill Tales from the Anthill]]'', a collection of tales which take place in-between various chapters of ''RWBY Within''. It also has ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12990105/1/Tales-From-The-Avenger Tales from the Avenger]]'' which presents various stories set between the chapters of ''Remnant Unknown''. However, these stories aren't written by ''DrAmishMD'' but by other authors from his Discord server.

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There's also ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11820682/1/Tales-From-The-Anthill Tales from the Anthill]]'', a collection of tales which take place in-between various chapters of ''RWBY Within''. It also has ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12990105/1/Tales-From-The-Avenger Tales from the Avenger]]'' which presents various stories set between the chapters of ''Remnant Unknown''. However, these stories aren't written by ''DrAmishMD'' DrAmishMD but by other authors from his Discord server.
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There's also ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11820682/1/Tales-From-The-Anthill Tales from the Anthill]]'', a collection of tales which take place in-between various chapters of ''RWBY Within''.

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There's also ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11820682/1/Tales-From-The-Anthill Tales from the Anthill]]'', a collection of tales which take place in-between various chapters of ''RWBY Within''.
Within''. It also has ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12990105/1/Tales-From-The-Avenger Tales from the Avenger]]'' which presents various stories set between the chapters of ''Remnant Unknown''. However, these stories aren't written by ''DrAmishMD'' but by other authors from his Discord server.
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** Annette Durand gives their team lead another speech for sulking about the first one: [[spoiler: Feeling humiliated after your team gets a thrashing has ''nothing'' on seeing your friends and comrades KilledOffForReal]].

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** Annette Durand gives their team lead another speech for sulking about the first one: [[spoiler: Feeling humiliated after your team gets a thrashing has ''nothing'' on seeing your friends and comrades KilledOffForReal]].killed]].
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* DarkIsNotEvil: [[spoiler: The Reapers have the ability to use the essence of the Grimm [[HoistByHisOwnPetard against them]], with the idea of "not fearing the shadows" being brought up a lot when this is introduced]].


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* MutuallyExclusiveMagic: [[spoiler: The Reapers' Grimm-essence manipulation requires them to make a choice that damages their souls, preventing them from using aura]].
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** In Chapter 31, [[spoiler: the Alien Rulers and the Reapers from the ''Alien Hunters'' and ''War of the Chosen'' [=DLCs=] appear. In a twist, the Alien Rulers are actually ''[[DefectorFromDecadence good guys]]'']].

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** In Chapter 31, [[spoiler: the Alien Rulers and the Reapers from the ''Alien Hunters'' and ''War of the Chosen'' [=DLCs=] appear. In a twist, the Alien Rulers are actually ''[[DefectorFromDecadence good guys]]'']].guys]]'', and the Reapers are made up of humans they've rescued from Mountain Glenn]].

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