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* TheLostLenore: This trope comes into play not once but twice, both times involving [[spoiler: jinchūriki, though both were of different villages]]. Each time, Chinatsu was only met with [[spoiler: heartbreak when both were killed]] by the [[spoiler: Akatsuki]]. These events had a lasting effect on Chinatsu's [[mental health and personality]], from the likes of which she has not recovered.
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* TheLostLenore: This trope comes into play not once but twice, both times involving [[spoiler: jinchūriki, jinchÅ«riki, though both were of different villages]]. Each time, Chinatsu was only met with [[spoiler: heartbreak when both were killed]] by the [[spoiler: Akatsuki]]. These events had a lasting effect on Chinatsu's [[mental health and personality]], from the likes of which she has not recovered.recovered.
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* TheLostLenore: This trope comes into play not once but twice, both times involving [[spoiler: jinchūriki, though both were of different villages]]. Each time, Chinatsu was only met with [[spoiler: heartbreak when both were killed]] by the [[spoiler: Akatsuki]]. These events had a lasting effect on Chinatsu's [[mental health and personality]], from the likes of which she has not recovered.
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* TheLostLenore: This trope comes into play not once but twice, both times involving [[spoiler: jinchÅ«riki, jinchūriki, though both were of different villages]]. Each time, Chinatsu was only met with [[spoiler: heartbreak when both were killed]] by the [[spoiler: Akatsuki]]. These events had a lasting effect on Chinatsu's [[mental health and personality]], from the likes of which she has not recovered.
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* [[spoiler:BeserkButton]]: As seen when Chinatsu repeatedly grows enraged at the mere mention of [[spoiler: Mangetsu.]]
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* [[spoiler:BeserkButton]]: [[spoiler:BerserkButton]]: As seen when Chinatsu repeatedly grows enraged at the mere mention of [[spoiler: Mangetsu.]]
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* AntiHero: Chinatsu.
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* AntiHero: Chinatsu.
* BadassBookworm: Chinatsu.Chinatsu, who hates all that is good in her world, can't seem to let evil fully take-over.
* BadassBookworm: Chinatsu.
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* StartOfDarkness: Chinatsu's dark past explains her [[spoiler: eventual madness]] so well that it's hard to argue any other way.
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* StartOfDarkness: Chinatsu's dark past explains her [[spoiler: eventual madness]] so well that it's hard to argue better than any other way.of her comrades could have.
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: Given Akane's treatment of Chinatsu, it's not surprising that she turned out [[spoiler: so emotionally traumatized and closed-off]].
* StartOfDarkness: Chinatsu's dark past explains her [[spoiler: eventual madness]] so well that it's hard to argue any other way.
* TheLostLenore: This trope comes into play not once but twice, both times involving [[spoiler: jinchūriki, though both were of different villages]]. Each time, Chinatsu was only met with [[spoiler: heartbreak when both were killed]] by the [[spoiler: Akatsuki]]. These events had a lasting effect on Chinatsu's [[mental health and personality]], from the likes of which she has not recovered.
* StartOfDarkness: Chinatsu's dark past explains her [[spoiler: eventual madness]] so well that it's hard to argue any other way.
* TheLostLenore: This trope comes into play not once but twice, both times involving [[spoiler: jinchūriki, though both were of different villages]]. Each time, Chinatsu was only met with [[spoiler: heartbreak when both were killed]] by the [[spoiler: Akatsuki]]. These events had a lasting effect on Chinatsu's [[mental health and personality]], from the likes of which she has not recovered.
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* [[spoiler:BeserkButton]]: As seen when Chinatsu repeatedly grows enraged at [[spoiler: the mere mention of Mangetsu.]]:
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* [[spoiler:BeserkButton]]: As seen when Chinatsu repeatedly grows enraged at [[spoiler: the mere mention of [[spoiler: Mangetsu.]]:]]
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* BadassBookworm: Chinatsu.
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* BadassBookworm: Chinatsu.Chinatsu.
* [[spoiler:BeserkButton]]: As seen when Chinatsu repeatedly grows enraged at [[spoiler: the mere mention of Mangetsu.]]:
* [[spoiler:BeserkButton]]: As seen when Chinatsu repeatedly grows enraged at [[spoiler: the mere mention of Mangetsu.]]:
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* Anti-Hero: AntiHero: Chinatsu.
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-->''My father had once called our village "the Land of Bloody Tears" and it is only now that I understand why. It is not the land that is crying, but the people within it.
-->I was born in the Era of Yagura, when bloodshed was as common as breathing air. The Mizukage was vicious, strong and unstoppable. His demon was known as Isobu, a piece of hell sealed within a tiny, child-like man. But appearances can be deceiving.''
-->I was born in the Era of Yagura, when bloodshed was as common as breathing air. The Mizukage was vicious, strong and unstoppable. His demon was known as Isobu, a piece of hell sealed within a tiny, child-like man. But appearances can be deceiving.''
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-->''My father had once called our village "the Land of Bloody Tears" and it is only now that I understand why. It is not the land that is crying, but the people within it.
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-->''I was born in the Era of Yagura, when bloodshed was as common as breathing air. The Mizukage was vicious, strong and unstoppable. His demon was known as Isobu, a piece of hell sealed within a tiny, child-like man. But appearances can be deceiving.''
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-->''I was born in the Era of Yagura, when bloodshed was as common as breathing air. The Mizukage was vicious, strong and unstoppable. His demon was known as Isobu, a piece of hell sealed within a tiny, child-like man. But appearances can be deceiving.''
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-->''My father had once called our village "the Land of Bloody Tears" and it is only now that I understand why. It is not the land that is crying, but the people within it...''
I was born in the Era of Yagura, when bloodshed was as common as breathing air. The Mizukage was vicious, strong and unstoppable. His demon was known as Isobu, a piece of hell sealed within a tiny, child-like man. But appearances can be deceiving.''
I was born in the Era of Yagura, when bloodshed was as common as breathing air. The Mizukage was vicious, strong and unstoppable. His demon was known as Isobu, a piece of hell sealed within a tiny, child-like man. But appearances can be deceiving.''
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-->''My father had once called our village "the Land of Bloody Tears" and it is only now that I understand why. It is not the land that is crying, but the people within it...''
Iit.
-->I was born in the Era of Yagura, when bloodshed was as common as breathing air. The Mizukage was vicious, strong and unstoppable. His demon was known as Isobu, a piece of hell sealed within a tiny, child-like man. But appearances can be deceiving.''
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-->I was born in the Era of Yagura, when bloodshed was as common as breathing air. The Mizukage was vicious, strong and unstoppable. His demon was known as Isobu, a piece of hell sealed within a tiny, child-like man. But appearances can be deceiving.''
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-->''My father had once called our village "the Land of Bloody Tears" and it is only now that I understand why. It is not the land that is crying, but the people within it.it...''
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* BadassBookworm: Shikako.
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* BadassBookworm: Shikako.Chinatsu.
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A ''Manga/{{Naruto}}'' FanFic with an otherwise unprecedented approach to the genre of OC fan-fiction, ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10101566/1/Visibility-Zero Visibility Zero]]'' avoids many of the more common pitfalls associated with the poorer examples via a bitingly realistic first-person perspective and a plot that remains centered around the inner-workings of the protagonist's bizarre life as an observer.
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A ''Manga/{{Naruto}}'' FanFic with an otherwise unprecedented approach to the genre of OC fan-fiction, ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10101566/1/Visibility-Zero Visibility Zero]]'' avoids many of the more common pitfalls associated with the poorer examples via a bitingly realistic first-person realistic, never-before-seen perspective and a plot that remains centered around the inner-workings of the protagonist's bizarre life as an observer.observer.
* BadassBookworm: Shikako.
* BadassBookworm: Shikako.
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' ' My father had once called our village "the Land of Bloody Tears" and it is only now that I understand why. It is not the land that is crying, but the people within it.
I was born in the Era of Yagura, when bloodshed was as common as breathing air. The Mizukage was vicious, strong and unstoppable. His demon was known as Isobu, a piece of hell sealed within a tiny, child-like man. But appearances can be deceiving. ' '
Hozuki Chinatsu is a catty, self-important kunoichi-in-training who hails from the Village Hidden in the Mist. She is the only daughter of Akane "the Bloodthirsty" and Makoto "the Brave" Hozuki and a cousin of Mangetsu and Suigetsu. Originally, Chinatsu had but a simple plan- graduate, surpass her cousin, and eventually become Mizukage- but her plans were derailed with the arrival of none other than Uchiha Madara, who is hellbent on getting what he wants out of none other than Chinatsu herself.
I was born in the Era of Yagura, when bloodshed was as common as breathing air. The Mizukage was vicious, strong and unstoppable. His demon was known as Isobu, a piece of hell sealed within a tiny, child-like man. But appearances can be deceiving. ' '
Hozuki Chinatsu is a catty, self-important kunoichi-in-training who hails from the Village Hidden in the Mist. She is the only daughter of Akane "the Bloodthirsty" and Makoto "the Brave" Hozuki and a cousin of Mangetsu and Suigetsu. Originally, Chinatsu had but a simple plan- graduate, surpass her cousin, and eventually become Mizukage- but her plans were derailed with the arrival of none other than Uchiha Madara, who is hellbent on getting what he wants out of none other than Chinatsu herself.
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I was born in the Era of Yagura, when bloodshed was as common as breathing air. The Mizukage was vicious, strong and unstoppable. His demon was known as Isobu, a piece of hell sealed within a tiny, child-like man. But appearances can be deceiving.
Hozuki Chinatsu is a catty, self-important kunoichi-in-training who hails from the Village Hidden in the Mist. She is the only daughter of Akane "the Bloodthirsty" and Makoto "the Brave" Hozuki and a cousin of Mangetsu and Suigetsu. Originally, Chinatsu had but a simple plan- graduate, surpass her cousin, and eventually become Mizukage- but her plans were derailed with the arrival of none other than Uchiha Madara, who is hellbent on getting what he wants out of none other than Chinatsu
A ''Manga/{{Naruto}}'' FanFic with an otherwise unprecedented approach to the genre of OC fan-fiction, ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10101566/1/Visibility-Zero Visibility Zero]]'' avoids many of the more common pitfalls associated with the poorer examples via a bitingly realistic first-person perspective and a plot that remains centered around the inner-workings of the protagonist's bizarre life as an observer.
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''My father had once called our village "the Land of Bloody Tears" and it is only now that I understand why. It is not the land that is crying, but the people within it.
I was born in the Era of Yagura, when bloodshed was as common as breathing air. The Mizukage was vicious, strong and unstoppable. His demon was known as Isobu, a piece of hell sealed within a tiny, child-like man. But appearances can be deceiving.''
I was born in the Era of Yagura, when bloodshed was as common as breathing air. The Mizukage was vicious, strong and unstoppable. His demon was known as Isobu, a piece of hell sealed within a tiny, child-like man. But appearances can be deceiving.''
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I was born in the Era of Yagura, when bloodshed was as common as breathing air. The Mizukage was vicious, strong and unstoppable. His demon was known as Isobu, a piece of hell sealed within a tiny, child-like man. But appearances can be deceiving.
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"My father had once called our village "the Land of Bloody Tears" and it is only now that I understand why. It is not the land that is crying, but the people within it.
I was born in the Era of Yagura, when bloodshed was as common as breathing air. The Mizukage was vicious, strong and unstoppable. His demon was known as Isobu, a piece of hell sealed within a tiny, child-like man. But appearances can be deceiving."
I was born in the Era of Yagura, when bloodshed was as common as breathing air. The Mizukage was vicious, strong and unstoppable. His demon was known as Isobu, a piece of hell sealed within a tiny, child-like man. But appearances can be deceiving."
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I was born in the Era of Yagura, when bloodshed was as common as breathing air. The Mizukage was vicious, strong and unstoppable. His demon was known as Isobu, a piece of hell sealed within a tiny, child-like man. But appearances can be deceiving.
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"My father had once called our village "the Land of Bloody Tears" and it is only now that I understand why. It is not the land that is crying, but the people within it.
I was born in the Era of Yagura, when bloodshed was as common as breathing air. The Mizukage was vicious, strong and unstoppable. His demon was known as Isobu, a piece of hell sealed within a tiny, child-like man. But appearances can be deceiving."
Hozuki Chinatsu is a catty, self-important kunoichi-in-training who hails from the Village Hidden in the Mist. She is the only daughter of Akane "the Bloodthirsty" and Makoto "the Brave" Hozuki and a cousin of Mangetsu and Suigetsu. Originally, Chinatsu had but a simple plan- graduate, surpass her cousin, and eventually become Mizukage- but her plans were derailed with the arrival of none other than Uchiha Madara, who is hellbent on getting what he wants out of none other than Chinatsu herself.
I was born in the Era of Yagura, when bloodshed was as common as breathing air. The Mizukage was vicious, strong and unstoppable. His demon was known as Isobu, a piece of hell sealed within a tiny, child-like man. But appearances can be deceiving."
Hozuki Chinatsu is a catty, self-important kunoichi-in-training who hails from the Village Hidden in the Mist. She is the only daughter of Akane "the Bloodthirsty" and Makoto "the Brave" Hozuki and a cousin of Mangetsu and Suigetsu. Originally, Chinatsu had but a simple plan- graduate, surpass her cousin, and eventually become Mizukage- but her plans were derailed with the arrival of none other than Uchiha Madara, who is hellbent on getting what he wants out of none other than Chinatsu herself.