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* ConfusionFu: How Pinkie Pie fights. It's highly effective.
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* GambitRoulette: [[spoiler:Celestia is implied to have orchestrated events to cause the current situation just to bring the mane Six together, and some of them are quite difficult to predict. Among other things, she planted Big Macintosh on Rarity's ship, predicted where Daring and Braeburn were going to be, and Spike stowing away, possibly.]]
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* GambitRoulette: [[spoiler:Celestia is implied to have orchestrated events to cause the current situation just to bring the mane Mane Six together, and some of them are quite difficult to predict. Among other things, she planted Big Macintosh on Rarity's ship, predicted where Daring and Braeburn were going to be, and Spike stowing away, possibly.]]
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* InformationBroker: The gryphons, since they run the postal service.
* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: Pinkie, of course. For example, when the story finally updated after a long hiatus, she suggests a recap to get everyone up to speed.
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* AdventurerArchaeologist: Daring Do, as always.
* AnchorsAway: [[spoiler:How Dash distracts the ''Falling Feather''.]]
* CastingAShadow: The Shadowbolts, naturally.
* TheChessmaster: Rarity. [[spoiler:And Princess Celestia.]]
* AnchorsAway: [[spoiler:How Dash distracts the ''Falling Feather''.]]
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* DisproportionateRetribution: The Dread Pirate Derpy is on a hunt for the stallion who stole her muffin. Not, contrary to what some readers thought, an euphemism for her daughter. An actual regular muffin.
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* DisproportionateRetribution: The Dread Pirate Derpy is on a hunt for the stallion who stole her muffin. Not, contrary to what some readers thought, The muffin isn't an euphemism for her daughter. An daughter, but an actual regular muffin.
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* TheMole: [[spoiler: Big Macintosh was planted in Rarity's crew by Celestia as part of her plan to defeat Nightmare Moon.]]
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* AdventurerArchaeologist: Daring Do, as always.
* AFatherToHisMen: Rarity and, to a lesser extent, Rainbow Dash.CastingAShadow: The Shadowbolts, naturally.
* AFatherToHisMen: Rarity and, to a lesser extent, Rainbow Dash.
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* PirateGirl: ''Upon A Falling Feather'' has a cast populated entirely by MLP's main and secondary characters, most of whom are female, so several pirates are female -- primarily Rarity (a noblemare forced into the position), Pinkie Pie (who embraces the role completely) and Trixie (who has a minor role and mostly acts like herself).
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* PirateGirl: ''Upon A a Falling Feather'' has a cast populated entirely by MLP's main and secondary characters, most of whom are female, so several pirates are female -- primarily Rarity (a noblemare forced into the position), Pinkie Pie (who embraces the role completely) and Trixie (who has a minor role and mostly acts like herself).
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* AnchorsAway / CarFu: [[spoiler:How Dash distracts the ''Falling Feather''.]]
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* OhCrap: Rainbow Dash and Iron Will when they realize the only way they'll get paid for their services is to help fight Nightmare Moon.
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* OhCrap: OhCrap:
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* PirateGirl: ''Upon A Falling Feather'' has a cast populated entirely by MLP's main and secondary characters, most of whom are female, so several pirates are female - -- primarily Rarity (a noblemare forced into the position), Pinkie Pie (who embraces the role completely) and Trixie (who has a minor role and mostly acts like herself).
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* WholePlotReference: To ''PiratesOfTheCaribbean'', along with some elements of ''ThePrincessBride'' and ''SkiesOfArcadia''.
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* WholePlotReference: To ''PiratesOfTheCaribbean'', ''Franchise/PiratesOfTheCaribbean'', along with some elements of ''ThePrincessBride'' ''Film/ThePrincessBride'' and ''SkiesOfArcadia''.''VideoGame/SkiesOfArcadia''.
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* ShoutOut: Several to ''ThePrincessBride''''Film/ThePrincessBride''
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* PirateGirl: ''Upon A Falling Feather'' has a cast populated entirely by MLP's main and secondary characters, most of whom are female, so several pirates are female - primarily Rarity (a noblemare forced into the position), Pinkie Pie (who embraces the role completely) and Trixie (who has a minor role and mostly acts like herself).
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* EldritchLocation: The Amaranthine Tempest, a massive storm that's been ongoing for over 1200 years.
* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: Pinkie, of course. For example, when the story finally updated after a long hiatus, she suggests a recap to get everyone up to speed.
** There's one both ways when Rainbow Dash and the others realize that the prisoners they've been tricked into helping free are Rarity and Pinkie, who they helped lock up in the first place.
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* SealedEvilInASixPack: Not only is Nightmare Moon's essence sealed in the moon, but her physical body is sealed aboard the Midnight Moon.
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* SealedEvilInASixPack: Not only is Nightmare Moon's essence sealed in the moon, but her physical body is sealed aboard the Midnight Moon.''Midnight Moon''.
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A ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fan fiction. It is an AlternateUniverseFic that takes place in an Equestria where Air Ships were invented, and SkyPirates are everywhere.
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A ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fan fiction.fiction by ezra09. It is an AlternateUniverseFic that takes place in an Equestria where Air Ships were invented, and SkyPirates are everywhere.
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* GambitRoulette: [[spoiler:Celestia is implied to have orchestrated events to cause the current situation just to bring the mane Six together, and some of them are quite difficult to predict. Among other things, she planted Big Macintosh on Rarity's ship, predicted where Daring and Braeburn were going to be, and Spike stowing away, possibly.]]
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* TheMole: [[spoiler:Big Macintosh is secretly working for Celestia.]]
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* XanatosRoulette: [[spoiler:Celestia is implied to have orchestrated events to cause the current situation just to bring the mane Six together, and some of them are quite difficult to predict. Among other things, she planted Big Macintosh on Rarity's ship, predicted where Daring and Braeburn were going to be, and Spike stowing away, possibly.]]
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Flying Dutchmare is Derpy\'s ship.
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* SealedEvilInASixPack: Not only is Nightmare Moon's essence sealed in the moon, but her physical body is sealed aboard the Flying Dutchmare.
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* SealedEvilInASixPack: Not only is Nightmare Moon's essence sealed in the moon, but her physical body is sealed aboard the Flying Dutchmare.Midnight Moon.
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* XanathosRoulette: [[spoiler:Celestia is implied to have orchestrated events to cause the current situation just to bring the mane Six together. Among other things, she planted Big macintosh on Rarity's ship.]]
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* XanathosRoulette: XanatosRoulette: [[spoiler:Celestia is implied to have orchestrated events to cause the current situation just to bring the mane Six together. together, and some of them are quite difficult to predict. Among other things, she planted Big macintosh Macintosh on Rarity's ship.ship, predicted where Daring and Braeburn were going to be, and Spike stowing away, possibly.]]
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* CastingAShadow: The Shadowbolts, naturally
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* DisproportionateRetribution: The Dread Pirate Derpy is on a hunt for the stallion who stole her muffin. Not, contrary to what some readers thought, an euphemism for her daughter. An actual regular muffin.
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* LeftTheBackgroundMusicOn: In the beginning of the first chapter, readers may assume the interspersed song lines in italics are just there to set the mood. Until Rarity asks Pinkie to stop singing sea shanties.
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* TheMole: [[spoiler:Big Macintosh is secretly working for Celestia.]]
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* ClearMyName: Shining Armor has to do this after [[spoiler: the Shadowbolts impersonate him and attack Cadence]].
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* FalseFlagOperation: [[spoiler:The Shadowbolts disguise themselves as Shining Armor and then attack Princess Cadance.]]
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* AnchorsAway / CarFu: [[spoiler:how Dash distracts the ''Falling Feather''.]]
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* [[AFatherToHisMen A Mother To Her Men]]: Rarity and, to a lesser extent, Rainbow Dash.
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* OhCrap: Rainbow Dash and Iron Will when they realize the only way they'll get paid for their services is to help fight Nightmare Moon.
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* AnchorsAway / CarFu: [[spoiler:how Dash distracts the ''Falling Feather''.]]
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* TrueCompanions: Rarity and Pinkie, Dash and Fluttershy, Twilight and Applejack
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* IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming: All the chapter titles form rhyming couplets, InTheStyleOf a Pirate Song[=/=]DrunkenSong
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* TragicVillain: As indicated in the summary, Rarity, who only became a pirate to try and restore her family name and fortune. It's hard not to feel sorry for her [[spoiler: when she's caught and facing the gallows.]]
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* PlotCoupons: The seven pieces of eight Daring and Caramel are tasked to find.
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* PlotCoupons: The seven pieces of eight Daring and Caramel Braeburn are tasked to find.
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* SealedEvilInASixPack: Not only is Nightmare Moon's essence sealed in the moon, but her physical body is sealed aboard the Flying Dutchmare.
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When Princess Celestia learns of Twilight and Applejack's abduction, she doesn't agree to pay the ransom. No, she hires the sky's greatest tactical mind, the Daring Swordspony Rainbow Dash, and her sidekick, Fluttershy. As the two groups engage in a game of cat and mouse, more dangerous threats hang on the horizon. Aztec Curses, angry gods, and a mysterious figure known only as the Derp Pirate Roberts.
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When Princess Celestia learns of Twilight and Applejack's abduction, she doesn't agree to pay the ransom. No, Instead, she hires the sky's greatest tactical mind, the Daring Swordspony Rainbow Dash, and her sidekick, Fluttershy. Together with Shining Armor, they track down Rarity's ship in order to save Twilight. As the two groups engage in a game of cat and mouse, more dangerous threats hang on slowly bubble to the horizon.surface. Aztec Curses, angry gods, and a mysterious figure known only as the Derp Pirate Roberts.
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* EverythingsBetterWihSpinning: How pony swords work.
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* EverythingsBetterWihSpinning: EverythingsBetterWithSpinning: How pony non-unicorn swords work.
* RunningGag: Don't call Daring "Miss Do"
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Can be read [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/60052/upon-a-falling-feather here]]
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Can be read [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/60052/upon-a-falling-feather here]]
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A ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fan fiction. It is an AlternateUniverseFic that takes place in an Equestria where Air Ships were invented, and SkyPirates are everywhere.
After losing her family fortune, Rarity, along with her best friend Pinkie Pie, turns to piracy to make ends meet. The two of them commandeer a magical airship and kidnap the princess's personal student.
When Princess Celestia learns of Twilight and Applejack's abduction, she doesn't agree to pay the ransom. No, she hires the sky's greatest tactical mind, the Daring Swordspony Rainbow Dash, and her sidekick, Fluttershy. As the two groups engage in a game of cat and mouse, more dangerous threats hang on the horizon. Aztec Curses, angry gods, and a mysterious figure known only as the Derp Pirate Roberts.
Can be read [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/60052/upon-a-falling-feather here]]
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!!This Fan Fic provides examples of:
* AdventurerArcheologist: Daring Do, as always.
* TheChessmaster: Rarity.
* CoolAirship
* ConfusionFu: How Pinkie Pie fights.
* IndyPloy: Rainbow Dash's specialty.
* InformationBroker: The gryphons, since they run the postal service.
* NooneGetsLeftBehind: Rainbow Dash again, although only for her own crew.
* ShoutOut: Several to ''ThePrincessBride''
* SkyPirate
* WholePlotReference: To ''PiratesOfTheCaribbean'', along with some elements of ''ThePrincessBride'' and ''SkiesOfArcadia''.
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After losing her family fortune, Rarity, along with her best friend Pinkie Pie, turns to piracy to make ends meet. The two of them commandeer a magical airship and kidnap the princess's personal student.
When Princess Celestia learns of Twilight and Applejack's abduction, she doesn't agree to pay the ransom. No, she hires the sky's greatest tactical mind, the Daring Swordspony Rainbow Dash, and her sidekick, Fluttershy. As the two groups engage in a game of cat and mouse, more dangerous threats hang on the horizon. Aztec Curses, angry gods, and a mysterious figure known only as the Derp Pirate Roberts.
Can be read [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/60052/upon-a-falling-feather here]]
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!!This Fan Fic provides examples of:
* AdventurerArcheologist: Daring Do, as always.
* TheChessmaster: Rarity.
* CoolAirship
* ConfusionFu: How Pinkie Pie fights.
* IndyPloy: Rainbow Dash's specialty.
* InformationBroker: The gryphons, since they run the postal service.
* NooneGetsLeftBehind: Rainbow Dash again, although only for her own crew.
* ShoutOut: Several to ''ThePrincessBride''
* SkyPirate
* WholePlotReference: To ''PiratesOfTheCaribbean'', along with some elements of ''ThePrincessBride'' and ''SkiesOfArcadia''.
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