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''Thomas Joshman'' is a series of six books which straddle the line between literature and fanfiction. On the one hand, they contain no characters from other works. However, the series is a [[WholePlotReference blatant copy of]] ''Literature/HarryPotter'', full of {{Captain Ersatz}}es, half the tropes on the BadWritingIndex, and [[RandomEventsPlot very little plot that makes any sense.]] As a whole, it is an excellent example of StylisticSuck... [[PoesLaw Probably.]]
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''Thomas Joshman'' is a series of six books which straddle the line between literature and fanfiction. On the one hand, they contain no characters from other works. However, the series is a [[WholePlotReference blatant copy of]] ''Literature/HarryPotter'', full of {{Captain Ersatz}}es, half the tropes on the BadWritingIndex, and [[RandomEventsPlot very little plot that makes any sense.]] As a whole, it is an excellent example of StylisticSuck... [[PoesLaw Probably.]]
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This is the story of a young boy named [[CharacterTitle ThomasJoshman]]. Tom lives at home with his parents Reginald and Ebony, and his bully of an older brother, Pat. His life is miserable and he has no friends... but everything changes when he finds out he's a wizard! He hops on a plane to Hogwarts Schoo... erm, National Magical Academy of Milkenshland, where he finds friends, learns magic, and discovers the truth about his past and his relationship with the evil wizard Mirumorz.
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This is the story of a young boy named [[CharacterTitle ThomasJoshman]].Thomas Joshman]]. Tom lives at home with his parents Reginald and Ebony, and his bully of an older brother, Pat. His life is miserable and he has no friends... but everything changes when he finds out he's a wizard! He hops on a plane to Hogwarts Schoo... erm, National Magical Academy of Milkenshland, where he finds friends, learns magic, and discovers the truth about his past and his relationship with the evil wizard Mirumorz.
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''Thomas Joshman'' is a series of six books which straddle the line between literature and fanfiction. On the one hand, they contain no characters from other works. However, the series is a [[WholePlotReference blatant copy of]] ''Literature/HarryPotter'', full of {{Captain Ersatz}}es, half the tropes on the BadWritingIndex, and [[RandomEventsPlot very little plot that makes any sense.]] As a whole, it is an excellent example of StylisticSuck... [[PoesLaw Probably.]] It has a wiki, which can be found [[http://thomasjoshmanplace.wikia.com/wiki/Home_Page here.]]
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''Thomas Joshman'' is a series of six books which straddle the line between literature and fanfiction. On the one hand, they contain no characters from other works. However, the series is a [[WholePlotReference blatant copy of]] ''Literature/HarryPotter'', full of {{Captain Ersatz}}es, half the tropes on the BadWritingIndex, and [[RandomEventsPlot very little plot that makes any sense.]] As a whole, it is an excellent example of StylisticSuck... [[PoesLaw Probably.]] ]]
This is the story of a young boy named [[CharacterTitle ThomasJoshman]]. Tom lives at home with his parents Reginald and Ebony, and his bully of an older brother, Pat. His life is miserable and he has no friends... but everything changes when he finds out he's a wizard! He hops on a plane to Hogwarts Schoo... erm, National Magical Academy of Milkenshland, where he finds friends, learns magic, and discovers the truth about his past and his relationship with the evil wizard Mirumorz.
It has a wiki, which can be found [[http://thomasjoshmanplace.wikia.com/wiki/Home_Page here.]]]]
This is the story of a young boy named [[CharacterTitle ThomasJoshman]]. Tom lives at home with his parents Reginald and Ebony, and his bully of an older brother, Pat. His life is miserable and he has no friends... but everything changes when he finds out he's a wizard! He hops on a plane to Hogwarts Schoo... erm, National Magical Academy of Milkenshland, where he finds friends, learns magic, and discovers the truth about his past and his relationship with the evil wizard Mirumorz.
It has a wiki, which can be found [[http://thomasjoshmanplace.wikia.com/wiki/Home_Page here.
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''Thomas Joshman'' is a series of six books which straddle the line between literature and fanfiction. On the one hand, they contain no characters from other works. However, the series is a [[WholePlotReference blatant copy of]] ''Literature/HarryPotter'', full of {{Captain Ersatz}}es, half the tropes on the BadWritingIndex, and [[RandomEventsPlot very little plot that makes any sense.]] As a whole, it is an excellent example of StylisticSuck... [[PoesLaw Probably.]] It has a wiki, which can be found [[http://thomasjoshmanplace.wikia.com/wiki/Home_Page here.]]
The six books, in order, are:
[[index]]
#''[[http://thomasjoshmanplace.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:Donut4/Thomas_Joshman_and_the_Mirror_of_Dreams Thomas Joshman and the Mirror of Dreams]]''
#''[[http://thomasjoshmanplace.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:Donut4/Thomas_Joshman_and_the_Duel_of_Darkness Thomas Joshman and the Duel of Darkness]]''
#''[[http://thomasjoshmanplace.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:Donut4/Thomas_Joshman_and_the_Stone_of_Immortality Thomas Joshman and the Stone of Immortality]]''
#''[[http://thomasjoshmanplace.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:Donut4/Thomas_Joshman_and_the_Tomb_of_the_Government Thomas Joshman and the Tomb of the Government]]''
#''[[http://thomasjoshmanplace.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:Donut4/Thomas_Joshman_and_the_Secrets_of_Wizardry Thomas Joshman and the Secrets of Wizardry]]''
#''[[http://thomasjoshmanplace.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:Donut4/Thomas_Joshman_and_the_Quest_of_Death Thomas Joshman and the Quest of Death]]''
The six books, in order, are:
[[index]]
#''[[http://thomasjoshmanplace.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:Donut4/Thomas_Joshman_and_the_Mirror_of_Dreams Thomas Joshman and the Mirror of Dreams]]''
#''[[http://thomasjoshmanplace.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:Donut4/Thomas_Joshman_and_the_Duel_of_Darkness Thomas Joshman and the Duel of Darkness]]''
#''[[http://thomasjoshmanplace.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:Donut4/Thomas_Joshman_and_the_Stone_of_Immortality Thomas Joshman and the Stone of Immortality]]''
#''[[http://thomasjoshmanplace.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:Donut4/Thomas_Joshman_and_the_Tomb_of_the_Government Thomas Joshman and the Tomb of the Government]]''
#''[[http://thomasjoshmanplace.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:Donut4/Thomas_Joshman_and_the_Secrets_of_Wizardry Thomas Joshman and the Secrets of Wizardry]]''
#''[[http://thomasjoshmanplace.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:Donut4/Thomas_Joshman_and_the_Quest_of_Death Thomas Joshman and the Quest of Death]]''
