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* NinetiesAntiHero: Harry is a [[ParodySue hilariously over-the-top example]].
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* AnimateInanimateObject: There are many of them.
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* LastOfHisKind: The Rape Ape, after the subjugation of the rapeforest.
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* ParodySue: Harry, who is also a GodModeSue ''and'' a VillainSue.[[invoked]]
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* PowerMetal: Used in manwithoutabody's DramaticReading.
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* WordSaladHorror: The writing style which makes up ninety percent of the story.
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* YeOldeButcheredeEnglishe: Dumblecop, but only for one instance. See SophisticatedAsHell.
* YouAreNumberSix: The 5.8 children are treated as such.
* YouAreNumberSix: The 5.8 children are treated as such.
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-->--'''[[EstablishingSeriesMoment The very first line]]'''
There are some {{Fan Fic}}s that you won't forget. This is one of them. If you took Creator/JamesJoyce, Creator/WilliamSBurroughs, Creator/AlejandroJodorowsky, Creator/ThomasPynchon, Creator/DavidCronenberg, and every death metal lyricist ever, locked them in a room with a typewriter and 20 tins of instant coffee, and gave them one sleepless weekend to rewrite ''Fanfic/MyImmortal'', you might get something like this.
There are some {{Fan Fic}}s that you won't forget. This is one of them. If you took Creator/JamesJoyce, Creator/WilliamSBurroughs, Creator/AlejandroJodorowsky, Creator/ThomasPynchon, Creator/DavidCronenberg, and every death metal lyricist ever, locked them in a room with a typewriter and 20 tins of instant coffee, and gave them one sleepless weekend to rewrite ''Fanfic/MyImmortal'', you might get something like this.
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There are some {{Fan Fic}}s that you won't forget. This is one of them. If you took Creator/JamesJoyce, Creator/WilliamSBurroughs, Creator/AlejandroJodorowsky, Creator/ThomasPynchon, Creator/DavidCronenberg, and every death metal lyricist ever, locked them in a room with a typewriter and 20 tins of instant coffee, and gave them one sleepless weekend to rewrite ''Fanfic/MyImmortal'', you
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* IncendiaryExponent: Holy fuckfire. For when you absitively, posolutely have to kill the fuck out of everything. Accept no substitutes.
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* IncendiaryExponent: Holy fuckfire. For when [[Film/JackieBrown When you absitively, posolutely have to kill the fuck out of everything. Accept everything, accept no substitutes.]]
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* AerithAndBob: The names of the Inquisitors -- Ignatius and Billy.
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* AerithAndBob: The names of the Inquisitors -- Inquisitors, Ignatius and Billy.
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* BlackComedyRape: The rape ape and Rape Radbury. The astronauts in the first chapter wound up getting raped by demonic spheres in Hell, although the author later went back and changed it to "torture" to avoid this trope.
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* BlackComedyRape: The rape ape and Rape Radbury. The astronauts in the first chapter originally wound up getting raped by demonic spheres in Hell, although the author later went back and changed it to "torture" to avoid this trope.trope. There's also the fact the word "rape" is used in the names of The Rape Ape and Rape Radbury, although those are just names.
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* ChainsawGood: The groinsaw, essentially a chainsaw mounted to one's groin.
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* ChainsawGood: The groinsaw, essentially a chainsaw mounted to the groin of one's groin.armour.
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* CoversAlwaysLie: Well, not exactly a cover, but the page image is the most commonly circulated image describing the fic. It depicts Harry with a groinsaw -- except Harry never had his own groinsaw.
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* CoversAlwaysLie: Well, not exactly a cover, but the page image is the most commonly circulated image describing the fic. It depicts Harry with a groinsaw -- groinsaw, except Harry never had his own groinsaw.is not referred to as having a groinsaw, only Dobby is.
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* FaceHeelTurn: Dumbledore goes through something vaguely resembling one -- he and Harry kill things and screw around with continuity, until the worlds shift and he becomes Dumblecop of the Darkmeal. Then he becomes a bad guy (kinda).
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* FaceHeelTurn: Dumbledore goes through something vaguely resembling one -- he one. He and Harry kill things and screw around with continuity, until the worlds shift and he becomes Dumblecop of the Darkmeal. Then he becomes a bad guy (kinda).
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* GratuitousNinja: At one point, Harry winds up on a planet entirely populated by "Surf Ninjas", who are repeatedly mentioned, but never actually show up -- possibly because they have annihilated their environment to the point that their last batch of food is a nasty sandwich.
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* GratuitousNinja: At one point, Harry winds up on a planet entirely populated by "Surf Ninjas", who are repeatedly mentioned, but never actually show up -- up, possibly because they have annihilated their environment to the point that their last batch of food is a nasty sandwich.
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** The scientist of the diapers, [[GlamourFailure though he fails at being a convincing humanoid]].
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** The scientist of the diapers, [[GlamourFailure though thought he fails at being a convincing humanoid]].humanoid]].
** Possibly Rape Radbury, who is ten feet tall with a head shrouded in clouds, and wears a tuxedo.
** Possibly Rape Radbury, who is ten feet tall with a head shrouded in clouds, and wears a tuxedo.
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* RefugeInAudacity: According to the disclaimer that now precedes the fic, this was the intent -- to be so over-the-top in offensiveness as to become a caricature, something that the author [[OldShame now regrets]]. By all accounts, he succeeded.
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* RefugeInAudacity: According to the disclaimer that now precedes the fic, this was the intent -- intent, to be so over-the-top in offensiveness as to become a caricature, something that the author [[OldShame now regrets]]. By all accounts, he succeeded.
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* SatiatingSandwich: [[SubvertedTrope Subverted]] -- Harry does not like the "cabbagewich", which might explain why it was the last piece of food on the planet of Surf Ninjas.
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* SatiatingSandwich: [[SubvertedTrope Subverted]] -- Subverted]], Harry does not like the "cabbagewich", which might explain why it was the last piece of food on the planet of Surf Ninjas.
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* VillainProtagonist: Harry -- so [[VillainSue evil]] he distorts reality. The closest one gets to a proper antagonist is the rape ape, who apparently shackled Harry, and the "scientist" in the seventh chapter, who has apparently imprisoned him in a foul-smelling pit within his nose.
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* VillainProtagonist: Harry -- Harry, so [[VillainSue evil]] he distorts reality. The closest one gets to a proper antagonist is the rape ape, who apparently shackled Harry, and the "scientist" in the seventh chapter, who has apparently imprisoned him in a foul-smelling pit within his nose.
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** The astral vampires may be a reference to the Creator/ColinWilson novel ''The Space Vampires'' and its film adaptation ''Film/{{Lifeforce}}''.
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** The astral vampires may be a reference to the Creator/ColinWilson novel ''The Space Vampires'' and its film adaptation ''Film/{{Lifeforce}}''.''Film/{{Lifeforce|1985}}''.
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** The astral vampires may be a reference to the Creator/ColinWilson novel ''The Space Vampires'' and its film adaptation ''Film/{{Lifeforce}}''.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GVFIxz4B6Js This one of the first five chapters]] is wondefully disturbing.
* Prolific dramatic reader manwithoutabody has an [[LargeHam incredibly hammy]] one. Here are the [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2V4VxlsMuQ4 the first six chapters,]] [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ap4pYT3chzQ the seventh,]] [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O08ZEN51wBA the eighth,]] and [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kZGOVJTU2Pg the ninth.]]
* Prolific dramatic reader manwithoutabody has an [[LargeHam incredibly hammy]] one. Here are the [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2V4VxlsMuQ4 the first six chapters,]] [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ap4pYT3chzQ the seventh,]] [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O08ZEN51wBA the eighth,]] and [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kZGOVJTU2Pg the ninth.]]
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GVFIxz4B6Js This one of the first five chapters]] is wondefully wonderfully disturbing.
*Prolific A LargeHam rendition by prolific dramatic reader manwithoutabody mutant museum (formerly manwithoutabody) was fairly popular at the time, and gave us the picture for this article, but has an [[LargeHam incredibly hammy]] one. Here are been lost to channel termination. However, there's a remake over [[https://youtu.be/LUPVO4Lm8Cw here]], consisting of the [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2V4VxlsMuQ4 the first six chapters,]] [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ap4pYT3chzQ the seventh,]] [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O08ZEN51wBA the eighth,]] and [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kZGOVJTU2Pg the ninth.]]entire fic
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* BadBoss: Harry beheads his loyal servant Dobby in chapter 2.
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* BadBoss: Harry beheads his loyal servant Dobby in chapter 2. Dobby [[FaceDeathWithDignity seems okay with it]], though.
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* BlackComedyRape: The rape ape and Rape Radbury. The astronauts in the first chapter wound up getting raped by demonic spheres in Hell before the spheres were {{Bowdlerize}}d out of the story.
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* BlackComedyRape: The rape ape and Rape Radbury. The astronauts in the first chapter wound up getting raped by demonic spheres in Hell before Hell, although the spheres were {{Bowdlerize}}d out of the story.author later went back and changed it to "torture" to avoid this trope.
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* KillEmAll: Harry's objective. Notable in that he has done so several times, intentionally or otherwise. The hat in chapter 9 manages to accomplish this after it turns the sun into a giant ball of chocolate and extinguish all life on Earth.
-->'''Harry:''' Gumbledorp, if you don't stop, we'll starve, and no one will be around to kill everyone in the universe if we get around to bringing everyone back to life after we killed them.
-->'''Harry:''' Gumbledorp, if you don't stop, we'll starve, and no one will be around to kill everyone in the universe if we get around to bringing everyone back to life after we killed them.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GVFIxz4B6Js This one of the first five chapters]] is [[CreepyAwesome wondefully disturbing]].
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GVFIxz4B6Js This one of the first five chapters]] is [[CreepyAwesome wondefully disturbing]].disturbing.
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** Dumbledore's epithet "faggart of a thousand suns" may be a reference to the Music/LinkinPark album ''A Thousand Suns.''
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* WordSaladHorror: The writing style which makes up [[UpToEleven ninety percent of the story]].
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* WordSaladHorror: The writing style which makes up [[UpToEleven ninety percent of the story]].story.
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* SpotOfTea: [[RunningGag Chumblebort]] offers Harry tea and "chumpits". Harry declines, as he hates chumpits.