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--> '''Phoenix''':"Oh, I understand perfectly. You're trying to build a wall. You're trying to shut me out. You're the Master of Kurain and you've resigned yourself to a sad and lonely existence. You're doing this to protect me. Send me away so I don't try to solve your problems by making them my own."
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--> '''Phoenix''':"Oh, '''Phoenix''': "Oh, I understand perfectly. You're trying to build a wall. You're trying to shut me out. You're the Master of Kurain and you've resigned yourself to a sad and lonely existence. You're doing this to protect me. Send me away so I don't try to solve your problems by making them my own."
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* LoveHurts: To pretty much every single canon pairing in the fanfic.
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* LoveHurts: To pretty much every single canon pairing in everyone, and not only the fanfic.romantically involved either.
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* StarCrossedLovers: Our poor dorks juat want to be together but the universe keeps on throwing bricks at them.
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* StarCrossedLovers: Our poor dorks juat just want to be together but the universe keeps on throwing bricks at them.
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* TookALevelInBadass: After all the studying and building her resolve to be the Master of Kurain, Maya managed to deliver an epic verbal smackdown to the elders of the village. Even Phoenix was left flabbergasted by her eloquence.
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--> ''Phoenix'':"Oh, '''Phoenix''':"Oh, I understand perfectly.perfectly. You're trying to build a wall. You're trying to shut me out. You're the Master of Kurain and you've resigned yourself to a sad and lonely existence. You're doing this to protect me. Send me away so I don't try to solve your problems by making them my own."
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* ExtremeDoormat: Maya was in the brink of becoming one earlier (trying to cope with her recent traumas alongside it doesn't help) thankfully, Phoenix helped her [[TookALevelInBadass grow a spine first...]] Until the WhamLine.
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* ExtremeDoormat: Maya was in the brink of becoming one earlier in regards to becoming the Khurain Master (trying to cope with her recent traumas alongside it doesn't help) thankfully, Phoenix helped her [[TookALevelInBadass grow a spine first...]] Until the WhamLine.
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--> ''Phoenix'':"Oh, I understand perfectly.You're trying to build a wall. You're trying to shut me out. You're the Master of Kurain and you've resigned yourself to a sad and lonely existence. You're doing this to protect me. Send me away so I don't try to solve your problems by making them my own."
* ExtremeDoormat: Maya was in the brink of becoming one earlier (trying to cope with her recent traumas alongside it doesn't help) thankfully, Phoenix helped her [[TookALevelInBadass grow a spine first...]] Until the WhamLine.
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Phoenix and Maya got to switch [[StraightManAndWiseGuy their usual]] [[SavvyGuyEnergeticGirl roles]] several times in the story as Maya started to take her duty too seriously and Phoenix began to worry she was letting herself being pushed around by her clan's expectations.
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Phoenix and Maya got to switch [[StraightManAndWiseGuy their usual]] [[SavvyGuyEnergeticGirl roles]] several times in the story as Maya started to take her duty too seriously and Phoenix began to worry she was letting herself being pushed around by her clan's family's expectations.
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* StupidSexyFriend: Phoenix spent a handful of the earlier chapters trying to come to terms with the fact that he is starting to see Maya as a woman and not the teenage girl when he first met her.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4960134/1/ The Rest Of The Pieces]] is an ''Franchise/AceAttorney'' fanfic by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1878039/ purplepjs]]. It's a shipping fanfic mostly directed to Maya X Phoenix, though it also wraps around the mystery of the [[BigScrewedUpFamily Fey family]] and it's dark past.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4960134/1/ The Rest Of The Pieces]] is an ''Franchise/AceAttorney'' fanfic by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1878039/ purplepjs]]. It's a shipping fanfic mostly directed to Maya X Phoenix, though it also wraps around the mystery of the [[BigScrewedUpFamily Fey family]] and it's its dark past.
* BreakHisHeartToSaveHim: Maya tried this to Phoenix, it failed miserably.
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* IHaveNoSon: Sister Bikini [[spoiler: aka Audrina Fey was disowned by her own mother, Althea, after thinking she was the one who caused the Hazakurain Temple fire 25 years ago.]]
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* HowWeGotHere: The entire chapter 1 to 28 are flashbacks leading to the very first scene of the story where Phoenix sat in the office and got distracted by Maya's presence.
* IHaveNoSon: Sister Bikini [[spoiler: aka Audrina Fey was disowned by her own mother, Althea, after thinking she was the one who caused theHazakurain Hazakura Temple fire 25 years ago.]]
* IHaveNoSon: Sister Bikini [[spoiler: aka Audrina Fey was disowned by her own mother, Althea, after thinking she was the one who caused the
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Phoenix and Maya got to switch [[StraightManAndWiseGuy their usual]] [[SavvyGuyEnergeticGirl roles]] several times in the story as Maya started to take her duty too seriously and Phoenix began to worry she was letting herself being pushed around by her clan's expectations.
* StarCrossedLovers: Our poor dorks juat want to be together but the universe keeps on throwing bricks at them.
* StarCrossedLovers: Our poor dorks juat want to be together but the universe keeps on throwing bricks at them.
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* DrowningMySorrows: Phoenix after [[spoiler: losing Maya to Althea's schemes and getting disbarred.]]
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* FrothyMugsOfWater: Averted. Instead of his infamous [[RunningGag 'Grape Juice']] Phoenix chugged on real wine.
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* TheAtoner: Iris. See IWantMyBelovedtobeHappy below.
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* TheAtoner: Iris. See IWantMyBelovedtobeHappy IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy below.
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* TheAtoner: Iris. See IWantMyBelovedtobeHappy below.
* ForcefulKiss: Phoenix delivers an angry one to Maya when [[spoiler: she tries to push him away to spare him the heartbreak of being tangled up with the Fey family's mess.]]
* IHaveNoSon: Sister Bikini [[spoiler: aka Audrina Fey was disowned by her own mother, Althea, after thinking she was the one who caused the Hazakurain Temple fire 25 years ago.]]
* IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy: Iris' reason for becoming a ShipperOnDeck for Phoenix and Maya. Thinking it's the least she can do to make up for all the bad things she had done in the past.
* IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy: Iris' reason for becoming a ShipperOnDeck for Phoenix and Maya. Thinking it's the least she can do to make up for all the bad things she had done in the past.
* TraumaCongaLine: Both our main characters got put through the wringer during the course of the story.
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* WorldOfChaos: ''Nothing'' will ''ever'' go right in this fic.
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-->'''Young Diego Armando''': "Thanks Miss Angel!"
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-->'''Young Diego Armando''': "Thanks Thanks, Miss Angel!"Angel!
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-->'''Diego Armando''': "Angel always believed I was destined to be this great man who would change the world, but I failed her."
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-->'''Diego Armando''': "Angel Angel always believed I was destined to be this great man who would change the world, but I failed her."
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* EvilAunt: [[spoiler: Morgan Fey, of course]]
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* WickedStepmother: Not really a stepmother, but Morgan's pretty much an evil aunt of some sort.
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Where exactly does it say that Althea is Andre's real mother? I've searched through the fic several times and can't find anything supporting this claim. If anyone is able to find actual evidence in the fic to substantiate this claim, feel free to add that back into the article.
** [[spoiler: Subverted as he survives, albeit badly bruised.]]
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* WellDoneSonGuy: Andre to [[spoiler: Morgan]]. Though it actually turns out that [[spoiler:[[LukeIAmYourFather his real mother is Althea]].]]
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* WellDoneSonGuy: Andre to [[spoiler: Morgan]]. Though it actually turns out that [[spoiler:[[LukeIAmYourFather his real mother is Althea]].]]
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* TheMentor: Mia Fey, so much she's almost the leader for the entire operation. She's become Maya's Dr. Phil and Phoenix's beloved mentor once again.
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* TheObiWan: Mia Fey, so much she's almost the leader for the entire operation. She's become Maya's Dr. Phil and Phoenix's beloved mentor once again.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4960134/1/ The Rest Of The Pieces]] is an [[AceAttorney Ace Attorney]] fanfic by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1878039/ purplepjs]]. It's a shipping fanfic mostly directed to Maya X Phoenix, though it also wraps around the mystery of the [[BigScrewedUpFamily Fey family]] and it's dark past.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4960134/1/ The Rest Of The Pieces]] is an [[AceAttorney Ace Attorney]] ''Franchise/AceAttorney'' fanfic by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1878039/ purplepjs]]. It's a shipping fanfic mostly directed to Maya X Phoenix, though it also wraps around the mystery of the [[BigScrewedUpFamily Fey family]] and it's dark past.
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!!This VisualNovel/AceAttorney FanFic provides examples of the following tropes:
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!!This VisualNovel/AceAttorney ''Franchise/AceAttorney'' FanFic provides examples of the following tropes:
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* OriginalCharacter: Oh, plenty, but a fitting plenty. Mostly in the Fey family, like Andre, Althea, [[spoiler: Sebastian]], Lillian, ect.
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* OriginalCharacter: Oh, plenty, but a fitting plenty. Mostly in the Fey family, like Andre, Althea, [[spoiler: Sebastian]], Lillian, ect.etc.
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* DisneyVillainDeath: [[spoiler: Andre falls into Eagle River at the climax.]]
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-->--'''Miles Edgeworth''', Chapter 1: Edgeworth Knows[[hottip:*: He sure does.]]
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-->--'''Miles Edgeworth''', Chapter 1: Edgeworth Knows[[hottip:*: He Knows[[note]]He sure does.]]
[[/note]]
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* WellDoneSonGuy: Andre to [[spoiler: Morgan]]. Though it actually turns out that [[spoiler:[[LukeIAmYourFather his real mother is Althea]]]]
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* WellDoneSonGuy: Andre to [[spoiler: Morgan]]. Though it actually turns out that [[spoiler:[[LukeIAmYourFather his real mother is Althea]]]]Althea]].]]
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->''"You crossed a burning bridge, Wright. You crossed it for her."''
-->--'''Miles Edgeworth''', ''Chapter 1: Edgeworth Knows'' [[hottip:*: He sure does.]]
-->--'''Miles Edgeworth''', ''Chapter 1: Edgeworth Knows'' [[hottip:*: He sure does.]]
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-->--'''Miles Edgeworth''',
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* ThisIsReality:
-->'''Phoenix''': Stupid Edgeworth. Where does he get off being so cool, whipping out lines like that and then disappearing off into the sunset. That doesn't happen in real life. It's like something out of a movie.
* WellDoneSonGuy: Andre to [[spoiler: Morgan]]. Though it actually turns out that[[spoiler: [[LukeIAmYourFather [[spoiler:[[LukeIAmYourFather his real mother is Althea]]]]
-->'''Phoenix''': Stupid Edgeworth. Where does he get off being so cool, whipping out lines like that and then disappearing off into the sunset. That doesn't happen in real life. It's like something out of a movie.
* WellDoneSonGuy: Andre to [[spoiler: Morgan]]. Though it actually turns out that
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* JerkassWoobie: Despite him being such a bastard, you really can't help but to feel bad for Andre.
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* TearJerker: This entire story should be considered a Tragedy fic. Maya and Phoenix's entire relationship just makes you cry the way everyone just keeps burning it down.
** Diego's past. See below.
** ''Every. Single. Thing. [[spoiler: Morgan]]. Causes.''
** Diego's past. See below.
** ''Every. Single. Thing. [[spoiler: Morgan]]. Causes.''
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* TheWoobie: Diego, the way he lost his mother was [[TearJerker so... *sniff*]], it gets even worse when you remember that his girlfriend [[spoiler: and childhood friend]], Mia Fey, dies later in the story as well. Oh and all of the events that happen ''after that''...
** Oh, and we can't forget about our dear main protagonists, Maya and Phoenix.
** Then there's Bikini [[spoiler: who's actually Audrina Fey]] since she's been thinking that she [[spoiler: killed Luciana Armando]] for twenty five years. [[spoiler: Even though it was actually Morgan Fey.]]
** Oh, and we can't forget about our dear main protagonists, Maya and Phoenix.
** Then there's Bikini [[spoiler: who's actually Audrina Fey]] since she's been thinking that she [[spoiler: killed Luciana Armando]] for twenty five years. [[spoiler: Even though it was actually Morgan Fey.]]
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* DeadGuyJunior: [[spoiler: Phoenix and Maya had a daughter named Mia in the DistantFinale]].