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* WasOnceAMan: [[FirstEpisodeSpoiler Wheatley]]. He was once an accountant that worked for Aperture and managed to appropriate billions of non-existent funds for their projects.
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* WasOnceAMan: [[FirstEpisodeSpoiler [[FirstEpisodeTwist Wheatley]]. He was once an accountant that worked for Aperture and managed to appropriate billions of non-existent funds for their projects.
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* CantKillYouStillNeedYou: The first chapter describes an AlternateEnding to Portal 2, where [[spoiler: [=GLaDOS=] saves Wheatley from space.]] In the [[spoiler: 10th Chapter]] this describes why.
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* CantKillYouStillNeedYou: The first chapter describes an AlternateEnding alternate ending to Portal 2, where [[spoiler: [=GLaDOS=] saves Wheatley from space.]] In the [[spoiler: 10th Chapter]] this describes why.
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Wheatley has been brought back from space by GLaDOS for an unspecified punishment. She informs him he used to be human though he has no memories of his existence before he was first activated as a core. After GLaDOS destroys his metal form, he awakens alone in a relaxation chamber in his old human body, confused and disoriented.
He spends some time getting acquainted with the nuisances and ''perks'' of his organic body—reintroduced to hormones, he quickly develops a strong infatuation at the memory of Chell and sets out to find her. Chell soon stalks and attacks him, having also been re-imprisoned in Aperture by GLaDOS. Luckily for Wheatley, Chell takes pity on him in his now-helpless and remorseful state and agrees to let him accompany her in her escape.
Over the course of their journey, Wheatley struggles to understand the propriety of personal boundaries and physical attraction, and Chell struggles with conflicted feelings of trust, wanting independence and craving intimacy with another human. GLaDOS does her best to complicate things further in many manipulative and increasingly threatening ways.
He spends some time getting acquainted with the nuisances and ''perks'' of his organic body—reintroduced to hormones, he quickly develops a strong infatuation at the memory of Chell and sets out to find her. Chell soon stalks and attacks him, having also been re-imprisoned in Aperture by GLaDOS. Luckily for Wheatley, Chell takes pity on him in his now-helpless and remorseful state and agrees to let him accompany her in her escape.
Over the course of their journey, Wheatley struggles to understand the propriety of personal boundaries and physical attraction, and Chell struggles with conflicted feelings of trust, wanting independence and craving intimacy with another human. GLaDOS does her best to complicate things further in many manipulative and increasingly threatening ways.
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Wheatley has been brought back from space by GLaDOS [=GLaDOS=] for an unspecified punishment. She informs him he used to be human though he has no memories of his existence before he was first activated as a core. After GLaDOS [=GLaDOS=] destroys his metal form, he awakens alone in a relaxation chamber in his old human body, confused and disoriented.
He spends some time getting acquainted with the nuisances and ''perks'' of his organic body—reintroduced to hormones, he quickly develops a strong infatuation at the memory of Chell and sets out to find her. Chell soon stalks and attacks him, having also been re-imprisoned in Aperture byGLaDOS.[=GLaDOS=]. Luckily for Wheatley, Chell takes pity on him in his now-helpless and remorseful state and agrees to let him accompany her in her escape.
Over the course of their journey, Wheatley struggles to understand the propriety of personal boundaries and physical attraction, and Chell struggles with conflicted feelings of trust, wanting independence and craving intimacy with another human.GLaDOS [=GLaDOS=] does her best to complicate things further in many manipulative and increasingly threatening ways.
He spends some time getting acquainted with the nuisances and ''perks'' of his organic body—reintroduced to hormones, he quickly develops a strong infatuation at the memory of Chell and sets out to find her. Chell soon stalks and attacks him, having also been re-imprisoned in Aperture by
Over the course of their journey, Wheatley struggles to understand the propriety of personal boundaries and physical attraction, and Chell struggles with conflicted feelings of trust, wanting independence and craving intimacy with another human.
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* AllJustADream: [[spoiler: GLaDOS frightens, harasses, and tortures Wheatley in his dreams.]]
* AllMenArePerverts: [[spoiler: A concept that is exploited by GLaDOS due to Wheatley's confusion and insecurity in his new body.]]
* AllMenArePerverts: [[spoiler: A concept that is exploited by GLaDOS due to Wheatley's confusion and insecurity in his new body.]]
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* AllJustADream: [[spoiler: GLaDOS [=GLaDOS=] frightens, harasses, and tortures Wheatley in his dreams.]]
* AllMenArePerverts: [[spoiler: A concept that is exploited byGLaDOS [=GLaDOS=] due to Wheatley's confusion and insecurity in his new body.]]
* AllMenArePerverts: [[spoiler: A concept that is exploited by
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* BadDreams: Wheatley receives these [[spoiler: courtesy of GLaDOS.]]
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* BadDreams: Wheatley receives these [[spoiler: courtesy of GLaDOS.[=GLaDOS=].]]
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* BrainUploading: Wheatley, the other cores, and GLaDOS were all humans turned into AI.
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* BrainUploading: Wheatley, the other cores, and GLaDOS [=GLaDOS=] were all humans turned into AI.
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* CantKillYouStillNeedYou: The first chapter describes an AlternateEnding to Portal 2, where [[spoiler: GLaDOS saves Wheatley from space.]] In the [[spoiler: 10th Chapter]] this describes why.
--> GLaDOS: [[spoiler: You are my [[TitleDrop punishment]] for her.]]
--> GLaDOS: [[spoiler: You are my [[TitleDrop punishment]] for her.]]
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* CantKillYouStillNeedYou: The first chapter describes an AlternateEnding to Portal 2, where [[spoiler: GLaDOS [=GLaDOS=] saves Wheatley from space.]] In the [[spoiler: 10th Chapter]] this describes why.
-->GLaDOS: [=GLaDOS=]: [[spoiler: You are my [[TitleDrop punishment]] for her.]]
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* Hallucinations: [[spoiler: GLaDOS manipulates Wheatley through auditory, visual, and tactile hallucinations.]]
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* Hallucinations: [[spoiler: GLaDOS [=GLaDOS=] manipulates Wheatley through auditory, visual, and tactile hallucinations.]]
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* HearingVoices: [[spoiler: GLaDOS speaks to Wheatley in his sleep, and later when he's awake as well.]]
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* HearingVoices: [[spoiler: GLaDOS [=GLaDOS=] speaks to Wheatley in his sleep, and later when he's awake as well.]]
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* InelegantBlubbering: After [[spoiler: GLaDOS mindrapes Wheatley]], he turns into a heaping mess and can't tell [[spoiler: her apart from Chell]] and ends up pushing her on the floor by mistake. It's not until he actually sees that it's Chell is when he starts to calm down.
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* InelegantBlubbering: After [[spoiler: GLaDOS [=GLaDOS=] mindrapes Wheatley]], he turns into a heaping mess and can't tell [[spoiler: her apart from Chell]] and ends up pushing her on the floor by mistake. It's not until he actually sees that it's Chell is when he starts to calm down.
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* KickTheDog: GLaDOS's continued efforts to hurt Wheatley when he is completely helpless.
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* KickTheDog: GLaDOS's [=GLaDOS=]'s continued efforts to hurt Wheatley when he is completely helpless.
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* ManipulativeBastard: GLaDOS.
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* ManipulativeBastard: GLaDOS.[=GLaDOS=].
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* ParalyzingFearOfSexuality: GLaDOS attempts to invoke this in Wheatley. [[spoiler: It doesn't last.]]
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* ParalyzingFearOfSexuality: GLaDOS [=GLaDOS=] attempts to invoke this in Wheatley. [[spoiler: It doesn't last.]]
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* {{Revenge}}: GLaDOS seeks revenge, especially it seems against Wheatley.
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* {{Revenge}}: GLaDOS [=GLaDOS=] seeks revenge, especially it seems against Wheatley.
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* YourWorstNightmare: [[spoiler: GLaDOS gives Wheatley bad dreams, eventually appearing in them herself.]]
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* YourWorstNightmare: [[spoiler: GLaDOS [=GLaDOS=] gives Wheatley bad dreams, eventually appearing in them herself.]]
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* WomanInBlack: [[spoiler: GLaDOS appears in Wheatley's dreams as a frightening woman in a black dress.]]
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[[http://thepunishment.tumblr.com The Punishment]] is a Portal fanfic written by [[http://conquerorwurm.tumblr.com conquerorwurm]] and actively illustrated by [[http://rubitrightintomyeyes.tumblr.com rubitrightintomyeyes]]. It first appeared on the Portal kink meme as the first fill listed and has since continued for eighteen chapters running. It is considered by many to be one of the best Portal fics out there, though it is still a work in progress.
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[[http://thepunishment.tumblr.com The Punishment]] is a Portal ''Portal'' fanfic written by [[http://conquerorwurm.tumblr.com conquerorwurm]] and actively illustrated by [[http://rubitrightintomyeyes.tumblr.com rubitrightintomyeyes]]. It first appeared on the Portal ''Portal'' kink meme as the first fill listed and has since continued for eighteen chapters running. It is considered by many to be one of the best Portal ''Portal'' fics out there, though it is still a work in progress.
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Over the course of their journey, Wheatley struggles to understand the propriety of personal boundaries and physical attraction, and Chell struggles with conflicted feelings of trust, wanting independence and craving intimacy with another human. GLaDOS does Her best to complicate things further in many manipulative and increasingly threatening ways.
In the short story prequel [[http://thepunishment.tumblr.com/post/7430283171/the-punishment-prequel-daisy Daisy]], Doug Rattmann meets Wheatley shortly after his mind had been transferred to the ID core. Wheatley still vaguely identifies as a living person and is frightened and confused by the change. To ease his pain, Rattmann erases all of Wheatley's remaining memories of being human.
In the short story prequel [[http://thepunishment.tumblr.com/post/7430283171/the-punishment-prequel-daisy Daisy]], Doug Rattmann meets Wheatley shortly after his mind had been transferred to the ID core. Wheatley still vaguely identifies as a living person and is frightened and confused by the change. To ease his pain, Rattmann erases all of Wheatley's remaining memories of being human.
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Over the course of their journey, Wheatley struggles to understand the propriety of personal boundaries and physical attraction, and Chell struggles with conflicted feelings of trust, wanting independence and craving intimacy with another human. GLaDOS does Her her best to complicate things further in many manipulative and increasingly threatening ways.
In the short story prequel[[http://thepunishment.''[[http://thepunishment.tumblr.com/post/7430283171/the-punishment-prequel-daisy Daisy]], Daisy]]'', Doug Rattmann meets Wheatley shortly after his mind had been transferred to the ID core. Wheatley still vaguely identifies as a living person and is frightened and confused by the change. To ease his pain, Rattmann erases all of Wheatley's remaining memories of being human.
In the short story prequel
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[[http://thepunishment.tumblr.com The Punishment]] is a Portal fanfic written by [[http://conquerorwurm.tumblr.com conquerorwurm]] and actively illustrated by [[http://rubitrightintomyeyes.tumblr.com rubitrightintomyeyes]]. It first appeared on the portal kink meme as the first fill listed and has since continued for eighteen chapters running. It is considered by many to be one of the best portal fics out there though it is still a work in progress.
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[[http://thepunishment.tumblr.com The Punishment]] is a Portal fanfic written by [[http://conquerorwurm.tumblr.com conquerorwurm]] and actively illustrated by [[http://rubitrightintomyeyes.tumblr.com rubitrightintomyeyes]]. It first appeared on the portal Portal kink meme as the first fill listed and has since continued for eighteen chapters running. It is considered by many to be one of the best portal Portal fics out there there, though it is still a work in progress.
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* I'mCryingButIDon'tKnowWhy: Wheatley breaks down after being attacked by Chell and doesn't understand what's happening to him.
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* I'mCryingButIDon'tKnowWhy: ImCryingButIDontKnowWhy: Wheatley breaks down after being attacked by Chell and doesn't understand what's happening to him.
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* AbandonedLaboratory: Aperture in general, especially in more recent chapters
* ADateWithRosiePalms: Wheatley needs to, to accommodate for his 'itch'. [[spoiler: Chell is also an offender of this trope]]
* AllJustADream: [[spoiler: GLaDOS frightens, harasses, and tortures Wheatley in his dreams]]
* AllMenArePerverts: [[spoiler: A concept that is exploited by GLaDOS due to Wheatley's confusion and insecurity in his new body]]
* ADateWithRosiePalms: Wheatley needs to, to accommodate for his 'itch'. [[spoiler: Chell is also an offender of this trope]]
* AllJustADream: [[spoiler: GLaDOS frightens, harasses, and tortures Wheatley in his dreams]]
* AllMenArePerverts: [[spoiler: A concept that is exploited by GLaDOS due to Wheatley's confusion and insecurity in his new body]]
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* AbandonedLaboratory: Aperture in general, especially in more recent chapters
chapters.
* ADateWithRosiePalms: Wheatley needs to, to accommodate for his 'itch'. [[spoiler: Chell is also an offender of thistrope]]
trope.]]
* AllJustADream: [[spoiler: GLaDOS frightens, harasses, and tortures Wheatley in hisdreams]]
dreams.]]
* AllMenArePerverts: [[spoiler: A concept that is exploited by GLaDOS due to Wheatley's confusion and insecurity in his newbody]]body.]]
* ADateWithRosiePalms: Wheatley needs to, to accommodate for his 'itch'. [[spoiler: Chell is also an offender of this
* AllJustADream: [[spoiler: GLaDOS frightens, harasses, and tortures Wheatley in his
* AllMenArePerverts: [[spoiler: A concept that is exploited by GLaDOS due to Wheatley's confusion and insecurity in his new
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* AmnesiacsAreInnocent: Wheatley has many innocent and childlike traits due to his lack of any memories from his life as a human; on the other hand, this trope is inverted in many ways by Chell who, while also suffering memory loss, isn't as innocent
* AnonymousBenefactor: [[spoiler: Maps left by Doug Rattmann help guide them through the facility]]
* AnonymousBenefactor: [[spoiler: Maps left by Doug Rattmann help guide them through the facility]]
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* AmnesiacsAreInnocent: Wheatley has many innocent and childlike traits due to his lack of any memories from his life as a human; on the other hand, this trope is inverted in many ways by Chell who, while also suffering memory loss, isn't as innocent
innocent.
* AnonymousBenefactor: [[spoiler: Maps left by Doug Rattmann help guide them through thefacility]]facility.]]
* AnonymousBenefactor: [[spoiler: Maps left by Doug Rattmann help guide them through the
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* BeingHumanSucks: Wheatley was excited about the change at first (primarily for the chance to have limbs and escape his broken core body) but not so much anymore
* BizarreTasteInFood: It's revealed Wheatley was eating toothpaste before he was reunited with Chell
* BrainUploading: Wheatley, the other cores, and GLaDOS were all humans turned into AI
* BizarreTasteInFood: It's revealed Wheatley was eating toothpaste before he was reunited with Chell
* BrainUploading: Wheatley, the other cores, and GLaDOS were all humans turned into AI
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* BeingHumanSucks: Wheatley was excited about the change at first (primarily for the chance to have limbs and escape his broken core body) but not so much anymore
anymore.
* BizarreTasteInFood: It's revealed Wheatley was eating toothpaste before he was reunited withChell
Chell.
* BrainUploading: Wheatley, the other cores, and GLaDOS were all humans turned intoAIAI.
* BizarreTasteInFood: It's revealed Wheatley was eating toothpaste before he was reunited with
* BrainUploading: Wheatley, the other cores, and GLaDOS were all humans turned into
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* ComfortFood: Seemingly any food is comfort food for Wheatley
* ContemplateOurNavels: Chell has done a lot of this throughout the story, and Wheatley has been doing a lot of it more recently as he has had more to worry about and more to hide from Chell
* CoolAndUnusualPunishment or Unishment: Wheatley was a little disturbed by the change to a human body (primarily grossed out and confused by it) but he was also excited and hopeful that it might help him help Chell. Over the course of the story his opinion of having a body has taken a nosedive
* ContemplateOurNavels: Chell has done a lot of this throughout the story, and Wheatley has been doing a lot of it more recently as he has had more to worry about and more to hide from Chell
* CoolAndUnusualPunishment or Unishment: Wheatley was a little disturbed by the change to a human body (primarily grossed out and confused by it) but he was also excited and hopeful that it might help him help Chell. Over the course of the story his opinion of having a body has taken a nosedive
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* ComfortFood: Seemingly any food is comfort food for Wheatley
Wheatley.
* ContemplateOurNavels: Chell has done a lot of this throughout the story, and Wheatley has been doing a lot of it more recently as he has had more to worry about and more to hide fromChell
Chell.
* CoolAndUnusualPunishment or Unishment: Wheatley was a little disturbed by the change to a human body (primarily grossed out and confused by it) but he was also excited and hopeful that it might help him help Chell. Over the course of the story his opinion of having a body has taken anosedivenosedive.
* ContemplateOurNavels: Chell has done a lot of this throughout the story, and Wheatley has been doing a lot of it more recently as he has had more to worry about and more to hide from
* CoolAndUnusualPunishment or Unishment: Wheatley was a little disturbed by the change to a human body (primarily grossed out and confused by it) but he was also excited and hopeful that it might help him help Chell. Over the course of the story his opinion of having a body has taken a
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* DynamicEntry; Chell tackles Wheatley down during their cat and mouse game in the corridors.
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* DynamicEntry; DynamicEntry: Chell tackles Wheatley down during their cat and mouse game in the corridors.
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* GuiltComplex: Wheatley continues to feel guilty and insecure having not yet redeemed himself for betraying Chell
* Hallucinations: [[spoiler: GLaDOS manipulates Wheatley through auditory, visual, and tactile hallucinations]]
* HandSignals: Chell's means of communication
* HearingVoices: [[spoiler: GLaDOS speaks to Wheatley in his sleep, and later when he's awake as well]]
* HeroicMime: Chell
* Hallucinations: [[spoiler: GLaDOS manipulates Wheatley through auditory, visual, and tactile hallucinations]]
* HandSignals: Chell's means of communication
* HearingVoices: [[spoiler: GLaDOS speaks to Wheatley in his sleep, and later when he's awake as well]]
* HeroicMime: Chell
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* GuiltComplex: Wheatley continues to feel guilty and insecure having not yet redeemed himself for betraying Chell
Chell.
* Hallucinations: [[spoiler: GLaDOS manipulates Wheatley through auditory, visual, and tactilehallucinations]]
hallucinations.]]
* HandSignals: Chell's means ofcommunication
communication.
* HearingVoices: [[spoiler: GLaDOS speaks to Wheatley in his sleep, and later when he's awake aswell]]
well.]]
* HeroicMime:ChellChell.
* Hallucinations: [[spoiler: GLaDOS manipulates Wheatley through auditory, visual, and tactile
* HandSignals: Chell's means of
* HearingVoices: [[spoiler: GLaDOS speaks to Wheatley in his sleep, and later when he's awake as
* HeroicMime:
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* HumanityEnsues: Wheatley
* HumanityIsInfectious: In a sense Chell is humanizing Wheatley just by being there as an example and through her efforts to communicate, though she does lack some understanding of humanity herself
* HumanityIsInfectious: In a sense Chell is humanizing Wheatley just by being there as an example and through her efforts to communicate, though she does lack some understanding of humanity herself
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* HumanityEnsues: Wheatley
Wheatley.
* HumanityIsInfectious: In a sense Chell is humanizing Wheatley just by being there as an example and through her efforts to communicate, though she does lack some understanding of humanityherselfherself.
* HumanityIsInfectious: In a sense Chell is humanizing Wheatley just by being there as an example and through her efforts to communicate, though she does lack some understanding of humanity
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* IdentityAmnesia: Both Chell and Wheatley have experienced this
* IDidntMeanToTurnYouOn: Both Chell and Wheatley manage to unintentionally fluster each other on many occasions
* I'mCryingButIDon'tKnowWhy: Wheatley breaks down after being attacked by Chell and doesn't understand what's happening to him
* TheImmodestOrgasm: [[spoiler: One of only two times Wheatley has heard Chell's voice]] Also Wheatley, on many occasions.
* IDidntMeanToTurnYouOn: Both Chell and Wheatley manage to unintentionally fluster each other on many occasions
* I'mCryingButIDon'tKnowWhy: Wheatley breaks down after being attacked by Chell and doesn't understand what's happening to him
* TheImmodestOrgasm: [[spoiler: One of only two times Wheatley has heard Chell's voice]] Also Wheatley, on many occasions.
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* IdentityAmnesia: Both Chell and Wheatley have experienced this
this.
* IDidntMeanToTurnYouOn: Both Chell and Wheatley manage to unintentionally fluster each other on manyoccasions
occasions.
* I'mCryingButIDon'tKnowWhy: Wheatley breaks down after being attacked by Chell and doesn't understand what's happening tohim
him.
* TheImmodestOrgasm: [[spoiler: One of only two times Wheatley has heard Chell'svoice]] voice.]] Also Wheatley, on many occasions.
* IDidntMeanToTurnYouOn: Both Chell and Wheatley manage to unintentionally fluster each other on many
* I'mCryingButIDon'tKnowWhy: Wheatley breaks down after being attacked by Chell and doesn't understand what's happening to
* TheImmodestOrgasm: [[spoiler: One of only two times Wheatley has heard Chell's
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* KickTheDog: GLaDOS's continued efforts to hurt Wheatley when he is completely helpless
* LanguageOfLove: Chell and Wheatley grow closer though Chell can't talk and Wheatley often has a hard time understanding her
* LivingEmotionalCrutch: What Chell is to Wheatley; his happiness and his ability to survive depends on her
* LossOfIdentity: Both Chell and Wheatley have experienced this
* ManipulativeBastard: GLaDOS
* MasterOfTheMixedMessage: Chell is alternately hot or cold towards Wheatley, much to his confusion
* LanguageOfLove: Chell and Wheatley grow closer though Chell can't talk and Wheatley often has a hard time understanding her
* LivingEmotionalCrutch: What Chell is to Wheatley; his happiness and his ability to survive depends on her
* LossOfIdentity: Both Chell and Wheatley have experienced this
* ManipulativeBastard: GLaDOS
* MasterOfTheMixedMessage: Chell is alternately hot or cold towards Wheatley, much to his confusion
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* KickTheDog: GLaDOS's continued efforts to hurt Wheatley when he is completely helpless
helpless.
* LanguageOfLove: Chell and Wheatley grow closer though Chell can't talk and Wheatley often has a hard time understandingher
her.
* LivingEmotionalCrutch: What Chell is to Wheatley; his happiness and his ability to survive depends onher
her.
* LossOfIdentity: Both Chell and Wheatley have experiencedthis
this.
* ManipulativeBastard:GLaDOS
GLaDOS.
* MasterOfTheMixedMessage: Chell is alternately hot or cold towards Wheatley, much to hisconfusionconfusion.
* LanguageOfLove: Chell and Wheatley grow closer though Chell can't talk and Wheatley often has a hard time understanding
* LivingEmotionalCrutch: What Chell is to Wheatley; his happiness and his ability to survive depends on
* LossOfIdentity: Both Chell and Wheatley have experienced
* ManipulativeBastard:
* MasterOfTheMixedMessage: Chell is alternately hot or cold towards Wheatley, much to his
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* NonverbalMiscommunication: Wheatley often has a hard time understanding Chell's pantomimes, but he's getting better at it
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* NonverbalMiscommunication: Wheatley often has a hard time understanding Chell's pantomimes, but he's getting better at itit.
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* NoSocialSkills: Wheatley doesn't understand the nuances of appropriate human behavior
* NotSoStoic: Chell
* ObliviousToLove: Applies to both Chell and Wheatley, though more in relation to their understanding of relationship feelings in general than explicitly "love"
* ObsessedWithFood: Wheatley really enjoys tastes he likes
* NotSoStoic: Chell
* ObliviousToLove: Applies to both Chell and Wheatley, though more in relation to their understanding of relationship feelings in general than explicitly "love"
* ObsessedWithFood: Wheatley really enjoys tastes he likes
to:
* NoSocialSkills: Wheatley doesn't understand the nuances of appropriate human behavior
behavior.
* NotSoStoic:Chell
Chell.
* ObliviousToLove: Applies to both Chell and Wheatley, though more in relation to their understanding of relationship feelings in general than explicitly"love"
"love".
* ObsessedWithFood: Wheatley really enjoys tastes helikeslikes.
* NotSoStoic:
* ObliviousToLove: Applies to both Chell and Wheatley, though more in relation to their understanding of relationship feelings in general than explicitly
* ObsessedWithFood: Wheatley really enjoys tastes he
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* ParalyzingFearOfSexuality: GLaDOS attempts to invoke this in Wheatley. [[spoiler: It doesn't last]]
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* ParalyzingFearOfSexuality: GLaDOS attempts to invoke this in Wheatley. [[spoiler: It doesn't last]]last.]]
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* PrimalFear: Wheatley's fear of the dark, heights, silence, though those fears existed as a core too
* {{Revenge}}: GLaDOS seeks revenge, especially it seems against Wheatley
* RidiculouslyHumanRobots: Wheatley in the Punishment prequel [[http://thepunishment.tumblr.com/post/7430283171/the-punishment-prequel-daisy Daisy]], and even after, despite the modifications made during his development as the Intelligence Dampening Sphere
* {{Revenge}}: GLaDOS seeks revenge, especially it seems against Wheatley
* RidiculouslyHumanRobots: Wheatley in the Punishment prequel [[http://thepunishment.tumblr.com/post/7430283171/the-punishment-prequel-daisy Daisy]], and even after, despite the modifications made during his development as the Intelligence Dampening Sphere
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* PrimalFear: Wheatley's fear of the dark, heights, silence, though those fears existed as a core too
too.
* {{Revenge}}: GLaDOS seeks revenge, especially it seems againstWheatley
Wheatley.
* RidiculouslyHumanRobots: Wheatley in the Punishment prequel [[http://thepunishment.tumblr.com/post/7430283171/the-punishment-prequel-daisy Daisy]], and even after, despite the modifications made during his development as the Intelligence DampeningSphereSphere.
* {{Revenge}}: GLaDOS seeks revenge, especially it seems against
* RidiculouslyHumanRobots: Wheatley in the Punishment prequel [[http://thepunishment.tumblr.com/post/7430283171/the-punishment-prequel-daisy Daisy]], and even after, despite the modifications made during his development as the Intelligence Dampening
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* SwitchingPOV: Chapter perspectives switch between Chell's point of view and Wheatley's
* SugarandIcePersonality: Though Chell is always guarded, she can be warm and protective in certain situations
* TheMindIsAPlaythingOfTheBody: Wheatley's perception of the world around him and his feelings for Chell change under the influence of his new form
* TheSpeechless: Chell, though she is able to communicate nonverbally with limited success
* UnreliableNarrator: both characters are unreliable narrators due to their incomplete understanding of the situation and their inability to effectively communicate
* SugarandIcePersonality: Though Chell is always guarded, she can be warm and protective in certain situations
* TheMindIsAPlaythingOfTheBody: Wheatley's perception of the world around him and his feelings for Chell change under the influence of his new form
* TheSpeechless: Chell, though she is able to communicate nonverbally with limited success
* UnreliableNarrator: both characters are unreliable narrators due to their incomplete understanding of the situation and their inability to effectively communicate
to:
* SwitchingPOV: Chapter perspectives switch between Chell's point of view and Wheatley's
Wheatley's.
* SugarandIcePersonality: Though Chell is always guarded, she can be warm and protective in certainsituations
situations.
* TheMindIsAPlaythingOfTheBody: Wheatley's perception of the world around him and his feelings for Chell change under the influence of his newform
form.
* TheSpeechless: Chell, though she is able to communicate nonverbally with limitedsuccess
success.
* UnreliableNarrator:both Both characters are unreliable narrators due to their incomplete understanding of the situation and their inability to effectively communicatecommunicate.
* SugarandIcePersonality: Though Chell is always guarded, she can be warm and protective in certain
* TheMindIsAPlaythingOfTheBody: Wheatley's perception of the world around him and his feelings for Chell change under the influence of his new
* TheSpeechless: Chell, though she is able to communicate nonverbally with limited
* UnreliableNarrator:
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* WhatIsThisThingYouCallLove?: Both Chell and Wheatley have a hard time sorting out and defining their feelings for one another
* WistfulAmnesia: in [[http://thepunishment.tumblr.com/post/7430283171/the-punishment-prequel-daisy Daisy]] for Wheatley, but not since then; Chell experiences this as well, in that she recognizes that much of her past has been lost
* WomanInBlack: [[spoiler: GLaDOS appears in Wheatley's dreams as a frightening woman in a black dress]]
* YourWorstNightmare: [[spoiler: GLaDOS gives Wheatley bad dreams, eventually appearing in them herself]]
* YouWakeUpInARoom: Wheatley experiences this at the beginning of the story, Chell experiences this in-game
* WistfulAmnesia: in [[http://thepunishment.tumblr.com/post/7430283171/the-punishment-prequel-daisy Daisy]] for Wheatley, but not since then; Chell experiences this as well, in that she recognizes that much of her past has been lost
* WomanInBlack: [[spoiler: GLaDOS appears in Wheatley's dreams as a frightening woman in a black dress]]
* YourWorstNightmare: [[spoiler: GLaDOS gives Wheatley bad dreams, eventually appearing in them herself]]
* YouWakeUpInARoom: Wheatley experiences this at the beginning of the story, Chell experiences this in-game
to:
* WhatIsThisThingYouCallLove?: Both Chell and Wheatley have a hard time sorting out and defining their feelings for one another
another.
* WistfulAmnesia: in [[http://thepunishment.tumblr.com/post/7430283171/the-punishment-prequel-daisy Daisy]] for Wheatley, but not since then; Chell experiences this as well, in that she recognizes that much of her past has beenlost
lost.
* WomanInBlack: [[spoiler: GLaDOS appears in Wheatley's dreams as a frightening woman in a blackdress]]
dress.]]
* YourWorstNightmare: [[spoiler: GLaDOS gives Wheatley bad dreams, eventually appearing in themherself]]
herself.]]
* YouWakeUpInARoom: Wheatley experiences this at the beginning of the story, Chell experiences thisin-gamein-game.
* WistfulAmnesia: in [[http://thepunishment.tumblr.com/post/7430283171/the-punishment-prequel-daisy Daisy]] for Wheatley, but not since then; Chell experiences this as well, in that she recognizes that much of her past has been
* WomanInBlack: [[spoiler: GLaDOS appears in Wheatley's dreams as a frightening woman in a black
* YourWorstNightmare: [[spoiler: GLaDOS gives Wheatley bad dreams, eventually appearing in them
* YouWakeUpInARoom: Wheatley experiences this at the beginning of the story, Chell experiences this
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Nothing in the game says that the cores weren\'t human. Its actually implied to a degree, with Cave Johnson mentioning that A Is are created via brain uploading.
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* AlternateContinuity: The story has an alternate continuity from the game; the cores were once human, unlike in stated continuity for Portal 2
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* AlternateContinuity: The story has an alternate continuity from Chell never was put on the game; the cores were once human, surface, unlike in stated continuity for Portal 22. Instead she ended up back at the Extended Relaxation Annex.
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* DynamicEntry; Chell tackles Wheatley down during their cat and mouse game in the corridors.
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* EscapeFromTheCrazyPlace: Follows the Portal games, however it's a side focus of the plot.
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* AllJustADream: [[spoiler: GLaDOS frightens, harasses and tortures Wheatley in his dreams]]
* AllMenArePerverts: [[spoiler: not really true, but a concept that's exploited by GLaDOS due to Wheatley's confusion and insecurity]]
* AlternateContinuity: Alternate from the game; the cores were once human, unlike in stated continuity for Portal 2
* AllMenArePerverts: [[spoiler: not really true, but a concept that's exploited by GLaDOS due to Wheatley's confusion and insecurity]]
* AlternateContinuity: Alternate from the game; the cores were once human, unlike in stated continuity for Portal 2
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* AllJustADream: [[spoiler: GLaDOS frightens, harasses harasses, and tortures Wheatley in his dreams]]
* AllMenArePerverts: [[spoiler:not really true, but a A concept that's that is exploited by GLaDOS due to Wheatley's confusion and insecurity]]
insecurity in his new body]]
* AlternateContinuity:Alternate The story has an alternate continuity from the game; the cores were once human, unlike in stated continuity for Portal 2
* AllMenArePerverts: [[spoiler:
* AlternateContinuity:
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* AmnesiacsAreInnocent: invoked in some ways by Wheatley, inverted in some ways by Chell who isn't as innocent
* AnonymousBenefactor: [[spoiler: Maps left by Doug Rattmann help guide them]]
* AnonymousBenefactor: [[spoiler: Maps left by Doug Rattmann help guide them]]
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* AmnesiacsAreInnocent: invoked in some ways by Wheatley, Wheatley has many innocent and childlike traits due to his lack of any memories from his life as a human; on the other hand, this trope is inverted in some many ways by Chell who who, while also suffering memory loss, isn't as innocent
* AnonymousBenefactor: [[spoiler: Maps left by Doug Rattmann help guidethem]]them through the facility]]
* AnonymousBenefactor: [[spoiler: Maps left by Doug Rattmann help guide
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* BeingHumanSucks: Wheatley was excited about the change at first (having limbs, not being in a broken core body) but not so much anymore
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* BeingHumanSucks: Wheatley was excited about the change at first (having limbs, not being in a (primarily for the chance to have limbs and escape his broken core body) but not so much anymore
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* ContemplateOurNavels: Chell has done a lot of this throughout the story, and Wheatley has been doing a lot of it more recently as he has had more to worry about and more to hide
* CoolAndUnusualPunishment or Unishment: Wheatley was a little freaked out about having a body (grossed out and confused by it) but he was also excited and hopeful that it might help him help Chell. Over the course of the story his opinion of having a body has taken a nosedive
* CoolAndUnusualPunishment or Unishment: Wheatley was a little freaked out about having a body (grossed out and confused by it) but he was also excited and hopeful that it might help him help Chell. Over the course of the story his opinion of having a body has taken a nosedive
to:
* ContemplateOurNavels: Chell has done a lot of this throughout the story, and Wheatley has been doing a lot of it more recently as he has had more to worry about and more to hide
hide from Chell
* CoolAndUnusualPunishment or Unishment: Wheatley was a littlefreaked out about having disturbed by the change to a human body (grossed (primarily grossed out and confused by it) but he was also excited and hopeful that it might help him help Chell. Over the course of the story his opinion of having a body has taken a nosedive
* CoolAndUnusualPunishment or Unishment: Wheatley was a little
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* EmotionallyTongueTied: Wheatley again.
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* EmotionallyTongueTied: Both Wheatley again.and Chell.
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* HumanityIsInfectious: In a sense chell is humanizing Wheatley just by being there as an example and through her efforts to communicate, though she does lack some understanding of humanity herself
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* HumanityIsInfectious: In a sense chell Chell is humanizing Wheatley just by being there as an example and through her efforts to communicate, though she does lack some understanding of humanity herself
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* TheImmodestOrgasm: [[spoiler: One of only two times Wheatley has heard Chell's voice]]
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* TheImmodestOrgasm: [[spoiler: One of only two times Wheatley has heard Chell's voice]]voice]] Also Wheatley, on many occasions.
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* MundaneLuxury: Chell's reaction to Wheatley's company, despite her more logical side; also things like the bathroom, blankets, etc.
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* MundaneLuxury: Chell's reaction to Wheatley's company, despite her more logical side; also things like the such luxuries as bathroom, blankets, etc.and beds.
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* OrgasmicallyDelicious: Food has a strong effect on Wheatley, which has an effect on Chell.
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* OrgasmicallyDelicious: Food has a strong effect on Wheatley, which in turn has an effect on Chell.
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* RidiculouslyHumanRobots: Wheatley in the Punishment prequel [[http://thepunishment.tumblr.com/post/7430283171/the-punishment-prequel-daisy Daisy]], and even after, despite core modifications
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* RidiculouslyHumanRobots: Wheatley in the Punishment prequel [[http://thepunishment.tumblr.com/post/7430283171/the-punishment-prequel-daisy Daisy]], and even after, despite core modificationsthe modifications made during his development as the Intelligence Dampening Sphere
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* SenseFreak: Wheatley
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* SenseFreak: WheatleyWheatley is easily overwhelmed by the senses he has gained as a human, particularly touch and taste.
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* SugarandIcePersonality: Though Chell is always guarded, she can be warm and protective in certain situations of perceived safety
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* SugarandIcePersonality: Though Chell is always guarded, she can be warm and protective in certain situations of perceived safetysituations
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* TheSpeechless: Chell, though she IS able to communicate nonverbally
* UnreliableNarrator: both characters are unreliable narrators due to lack of understanding of the situation (or incomplete understanding) from both sides
* UnreliableNarrator: both characters are unreliable narrators due to lack of understanding of the situation (or incomplete understanding) from both sides
to:
* TheSpeechless: Chell, though she IS is able to communicate nonverbally
nonverbally with limited success
* UnreliableNarrator: both characters are unreliable narrators due tolack of their incomplete understanding of the situation (or incomplete understanding) from both sidesand their inability to effectively communicate
* UnreliableNarrator: both characters are unreliable narrators due to
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* WistfulAmnesia: in [[http://thepunishment.tumblr.com/post/7430283171/the-punishment-prequel-daisy Daisy]] for Wheatley, but not since then; Chell too, in some ways
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* WistfulAmnesia: in [[http://thepunishment.tumblr.com/post/7430283171/the-punishment-prequel-daisy Daisy]] for Wheatley, but not since then; Chell too, experiences this as well, in some waysthat she recognizes that much of her past has been lost
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* YouWakeUpInARoom: Wheatley experiences this in the story, Chell experiences this in-game
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* YouWakeUpInARoom: Wheatley experiences this in at the beginning of the story, Chell experiences this in-game
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Wheatley has been brought back from space by GLaDOS for an unspecified punishment. She informs him he used to be human though he has no memories of his existence before he was first activated as a core. After GLaDOS destroys his metal form, he awakes alone in a relaxation chamber in his old human body, confused and disoriented. After spending some time getting acquainted with the nuisances and more... ''enjoyable'' functions of his new organic form, he sets out to make his escape. He runs into Chell who has also been imprisoned once more by GLaDOS, and together they delve into Aperture to try to make their escape. Wheatley has no knowledge of proper human discourse, leading to many awkward situations.
Over the course of their journey, Wheatley struggles to understand the propriety of personal boundaries and physical attraction, and Chell struggles with conflicted feelings of trust, wanting independence and craving physical intimacy with another human. GLaDOS does Her best to complicate things further in many manipulative and increasingly threatening ways.
In the short story prequel [[http://thepunishment.tumblr.com/post/7430283171/the-punishment-prequel-daisy Daisy]], Doug Rattmann met Wheatley shortly after his mind had been transferred to the ID core. At that point Wheatley still vaguely identified as a living person and was frightened and confused by the change. To ease his pain, Rattmann erased all of Wheatley's remaining memories of being human.
Over the course of their journey, Wheatley struggles to understand the propriety of personal boundaries and physical attraction, and Chell struggles with conflicted feelings of trust, wanting independence and craving physical intimacy with another human. GLaDOS does Her best to complicate things further in many manipulative and increasingly threatening ways.
In the short story prequel [[http://thepunishment.tumblr.com/post/7430283171/the-punishment-prequel-daisy Daisy]], Doug Rattmann met Wheatley shortly after his mind had been transferred to the ID core. At that point Wheatley still vaguely identified as a living person and was frightened and confused by the change. To ease his pain, Rattmann erased all of Wheatley's remaining memories of being human.
to:
Wheatley has been brought back from space by GLaDOS for an unspecified punishment. She informs him he used to be human though he has no memories of his existence before he was first activated as a core. After GLaDOS destroys his metal form, he awakes awakens alone in a relaxation chamber in his old human body, confused and disoriented. After spending some time getting acquainted with the nuisances and more... ''enjoyable'' functions of his new organic form, he sets out to make his escape. He runs into Chell who has also been imprisoned once more by GLaDOS, and together they delve into Aperture to try to make their escape. Wheatley has no knowledge of proper human discourse, leading to many awkward situations.disoriented.
He spends some time getting acquainted with the nuisances and ''perks'' of his organic body—reintroduced to hormones, he quickly develops a strong infatuation at the memory of Chell and sets out to find her. Chell soon stalks and attacks him, having also been re-imprisoned in Aperture by GLaDOS. Luckily for Wheatley, Chell takes pity on him in his now-helpless and remorseful state and agrees to let him accompany her in her escape.
Over the course of their journey, Wheatley struggles to understand the propriety of personal boundaries and physical attraction, and Chell struggles with conflicted feelings of trust, wanting independence and cravingphysical intimacy with another human. GLaDOS does Her best to complicate things further in many manipulative and increasingly threatening ways.
In the short story prequel [[http://thepunishment.tumblr.com/post/7430283171/the-punishment-prequel-daisy Daisy]], Doug Rattmannmet meets Wheatley shortly after his mind had been transferred to the ID core. At that point Wheatley still vaguely identified identifies as a living person and was is frightened and confused by the change. To ease his pain, Rattmann erased erases all of Wheatley's remaining memories of being human.
He spends some time getting acquainted with the nuisances and ''perks'' of his organic body—reintroduced to hormones, he quickly develops a strong infatuation at the memory of Chell and sets out to find her. Chell soon stalks and attacks him, having also been re-imprisoned in Aperture by GLaDOS. Luckily for Wheatley, Chell takes pity on him in his now-helpless and remorseful state and agrees to let him accompany her in her escape.
Over the course of their journey, Wheatley struggles to understand the propriety of personal boundaries and physical attraction, and Chell struggles with conflicted feelings of trust, wanting independence and craving
In the short story prequel [[http://thepunishment.tumblr.com/post/7430283171/the-punishment-prequel-daisy Daisy]], Doug Rattmann
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I was given a ton of trope recommendations to add!
In the short story prequel [[http://thepunishment.tumblr.com/post/7430283171/the-punishment-prequel-daisy Daisy]], Doug Rattmann met Wheatley shortly after his mind had been transferred to the ID core. At that point Wheatley still vaguely identified as a living person and was frightened and confused by the change. To ease his pain, Rattmann erased all of Wheatley's remaining memories of being human.
*AbandonedLaboratory: Aperture in general, especially in more recent chapters
*AllJustADream: [[spoiler: GLaDOS frightens, harasses and tortures Wheatley in his dreams]]
*AllMenArePerverts: [[spoiler: not really true, but a concept that's exploited by GLaDOS due to Wheatley's confusion and insecurity]]
*AlternateContinuity: Alternate from the game; the cores were once human, unlike in stated continuity for Portal 2
*AllMenArePerverts: [[spoiler: not really true, but a concept that's exploited by GLaDOS due to Wheatley's confusion and insecurity]]
*AlternateContinuity: Alternate from the game; the cores were once human, unlike in stated continuity for Portal 2
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* BadDreams: Wheatley receives these courtesy of GLaDOS.
* CantKillYouStillNeedYou: The first chapter describes an AlternateEnding to Portal 2, where [[spoiler: GLaDOS saves Wheatley from spaces.]] In the [[spoiler: 10th Chapter]] this describes why.
* CantKillYouStillNeedYou: The first chapter describes an AlternateEnding to Portal 2, where [[spoiler: GLaDOS saves Wheatley from spaces.]] In the [[spoiler: 10th Chapter]] this describes why.
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*AmnesiacsAreInnocent: invoked in some ways by Wheatley, inverted in some ways by Chell who isn't as innocent
*AnonymousBenefactor: [[spoiler: Maps left by Doug Rattmann help guide them]]
* BadDreams: Wheatley receives these [[spoiler: courtesy ofGLaDOS.
GLaDOS.]]
*BadLiar: Wheatley is bad at hiding his feelings.
*BeingHumanSucks: Wheatley was excited about the change at first (having limbs, not being in a broken core body) but not so much anymore
*BizarreTasteInFood: It's revealed Wheatley was eating toothpaste before he was reunited with Chell
*BrainUploading: Wheatley, the other cores, and GLaDOS were all humans turned into AI
* CannotSpitItOut: Played with. It's not that Wheatley can't, it's that he doesn't know the right words since he has no proper social human experience to find the words to describe his attraction to Chell.
* CantKillYouStillNeedYou: The first chapter describes an AlternateEnding to Portal 2, where [[spoiler: GLaDOS saves Wheatley fromspaces.space.]] In the [[spoiler: 10th Chapter]] this describes why.
*AnonymousBenefactor: [[spoiler: Maps left by Doug Rattmann help guide them]]
* BadDreams: Wheatley receives these [[spoiler: courtesy of
*BadLiar: Wheatley is bad at hiding his feelings.
*BeingHumanSucks: Wheatley was excited about the change at first (having limbs, not being in a broken core body) but not so much anymore
*BizarreTasteInFood: It's revealed Wheatley was eating toothpaste before he was reunited with Chell
*BrainUploading: Wheatley, the other cores, and GLaDOS were all humans turned into AI
* CannotSpitItOut: Played with. It's not that Wheatley can't, it's that he doesn't know the right words since he has no proper social human experience to find the words to describe his attraction to Chell.
* CantKillYouStillNeedYou: The first chapter describes an AlternateEnding to Portal 2, where [[spoiler: GLaDOS saves Wheatley from
*ComfortFood: Seemingly any food is comfort food for Wheatley
*ContemplateOurNavels: Chell has done a lot of this throughout the story, and Wheatley has been doing a lot of it more recently as he has had more to worry about and more to hide
*CoolAndUnusualPunishment or Unishment: Wheatley was a little freaked out about having a body (grossed out and confused by it) but he was also excited and hopeful that it might help him help Chell. Over the course of the story his opinion of having a body has taken a nosedive
*ContemplateOurNavels: Chell has done a lot of this throughout the story, and Wheatley has been doing a lot of it more recently as he has had more to worry about and more to hide
*CoolAndUnusualPunishment or Unishment: Wheatley was a little freaked out about having a body (grossed out and confused by it) but he was also excited and hopeful that it might help him help Chell. Over the course of the story his opinion of having a body has taken a nosedive
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* CannotSpitItOut: Played with. It's not that Wheatley can't, it's that he can't find the right words since he has no proper social human experience to find the words to describe his attraction to Chell.
*{{Forgiveness}}: Chell has forgiven Wheatley though she still remains guarded in many ways.
*GuiltComplex: Wheatley continues to feel guilty and insecure having not yet redeemed himself for betraying Chell
*Hallucinations: [[spoiler: GLaDOS manipulates Wheatley through auditory, visual, and tactile hallucinations]]
*HandSignals: Chell's means of communication
*HearingVoices: [[spoiler: GLaDOS speaks to Wheatley in his sleep, and later when he's awake as well]]
*HeroicMime: Chell
*GuiltComplex: Wheatley continues to feel guilty and insecure having not yet redeemed himself for betraying Chell
*Hallucinations: [[spoiler: GLaDOS manipulates Wheatley through auditory, visual, and tactile hallucinations]]
*HandSignals: Chell's means of communication
*HearingVoices: [[spoiler: GLaDOS speaks to Wheatley in his sleep, and later when he's awake as well]]
*HeroicMime: Chell
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* IAmNotPretty: Somehow Wheatley mentally conceives the notion of attractiveness, having compared himself to Chell, believe he's quite ordinary.
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*HumanityEnsues: Wheatley
*HumanityIsInfectious: In a sense chell is humanizing Wheatley just by being there as an example and through her efforts to communicate, though she does lack some understanding of humanity herself
* IAmNotPretty: Somehow Wheatley mentally conceives the notion ofattractiveness, attractiveness; having compared himself to Chell, believe he's quite ordinary.ordinary.
*IdentityAmnesia: Both Chell and Wheatley have experienced this
*IDidntMeanToTurnYouOn: Both Chell and Wheatley manage to unintentionally fluster each other on many occasions
*I'mCryingButIDon'tKnowWhy: Wheatley breaks down after being attacked by Chell and doesn't understand what's happening to him
*TheImmodestOrgasm: [[spoiler: One of only two times Wheatley has heard Chell's voice]]
*HumanityIsInfectious: In a sense chell is humanizing Wheatley just by being there as an example and through her efforts to communicate, though she does lack some understanding of humanity herself
* IAmNotPretty: Somehow Wheatley mentally conceives the notion of
*IdentityAmnesia: Both Chell and Wheatley have experienced this
*IDidntMeanToTurnYouOn: Both Chell and Wheatley manage to unintentionally fluster each other on many occasions
*I'mCryingButIDon'tKnowWhy: Wheatley breaks down after being attacked by Chell and doesn't understand what's happening to him
*TheImmodestOrgasm: [[spoiler: One of only two times Wheatley has heard Chell's voice]]
*IntimateHealing: On several occasions, Chell calms Wheatley down by holding him. [[spoiler: She later takes a more enthusiastic approach to his comfort.]]
*KickTheDog: GLaDOS's continued efforts to hurt Wheatley when he is completely helpless
*LanguageOfLove: Chell and Wheatley grow closer though Chell can't talk and Wheatley often has a hard time understanding her
*LivingEmotionalCrutch: What Chell is to Wheatley; his happiness and his ability to survive depends on her
*LossOfIdentity: Both Chell and Wheatley have experienced this
*ManipulativeBastard: GLaDOS
*MasterOfTheMixedMessage: Chell is alternately hot or cold towards Wheatley, much to his confusion
*LanguageOfLove: Chell and Wheatley grow closer though Chell can't talk and Wheatley often has a hard time understanding her
*LivingEmotionalCrutch: What Chell is to Wheatley; his happiness and his ability to survive depends on her
*LossOfIdentity: Both Chell and Wheatley have experienced this
*ManipulativeBastard: GLaDOS
*MasterOfTheMixedMessage: Chell is alternately hot or cold towards Wheatley, much to his confusion
*MundaneLuxury: Chell's reaction to Wheatley's company, despite her more logical side; also things like the bathroom, blankets, etc.
*NonverbalMiscommunication: Wheatley often has a hard time understanding Chell's pantomimes, but he's getting better at it
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* NoSocialSkills
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* NoSocialSkillsNoSocialSkills: Wheatley doesn't understand the nuances of appropriate human behavior
*NotSoStoic: Chell
*ObliviousToLove: Applies to both Chell and Wheatley, though more in relation to their understanding of relationship feelings in general than explicitly "love"
*ObsessedWithFood: Wheatley really enjoys tastes he likes
*OrgasmicallyDelicious: Food has a strong effect on Wheatley, which has an effect on Chell.
*NotSoStoic: Chell
*ObliviousToLove: Applies to both Chell and Wheatley, though more in relation to their understanding of relationship feelings in general than explicitly "love"
*ObsessedWithFood: Wheatley really enjoys tastes he likes
*OrgasmicallyDelicious: Food has a strong effect on Wheatley, which has an effect on Chell.
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* WasOnceAMan: [[FirstEpisodeSpoiler Wheatley]]. He was once an accountant that worked for Aperture and managed to appropriate billions of non-existent funds for their projects.
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*PleaseDontLeaveMe: Though he wants Chell to escape [[spoiler: and thinks his presence will only slow her down,]] he is terrified of being alone again.
*PrimalFear: Wheatley's fear of the dark, heights, silence, though those fears existed as a core too
*{{Revenge}}: GLaDOS seeks revenge, especially it seems against Wheatley
*RidiculouslyHumanRobots: Wheatley in the Punishment prequel [[http://thepunishment.tumblr.com/post/7430283171/the-punishment-prequel-daisy Daisy]], and even after, despite core modifications
*RomanceInducingSmudge: It sure induced something!
*SecurityCling
*SenseFreak: Wheatley
*SwitchingPOV: Chapter perspectives switch between Chell's point of view and Wheatley's
*SugarandIcePersonality: Though Chell is always guarded, she can be warm and protective in certain situations of perceived safety
*TheMindIsAPlaythingOfTheBody: Wheatley's perception of the world around him and his feelings for Chell change under the influence of his new form
*TheSpeechless: Chell, though she IS able to communicate nonverbally
*UnreliableNarrator: both characters are unreliable narrators due to lack of understanding of the situation (or incomplete understanding) from both sides
* WasOnceAMan: [[FirstEpisodeSpoiler Wheatley]]. He was once an accountant that worked for Aperture and managed to appropriate billions of non-existent funds for theirprojects.projects.
*WhatIsThisThingYouCallLove?: Both Chell and Wheatley have a hard time sorting out and defining their feelings for one another
*WistfulAmnesia: in [[http://thepunishment.tumblr.com/post/7430283171/the-punishment-prequel-daisy Daisy]] for Wheatley, but not since then; Chell too, in some ways
*WomanInBlack: [[spoiler: GLaDOS appears in Wheatley's dreams as a frightening woman in a black dress]]
*YourWorstNightmare: [[spoiler: GLaDOS gives Wheatley bad dreams, eventually appearing in them herself]]
*YouWakeUpInARoom: Wheatley experiences this in the story, Chell experiences this in-game
*PrimalFear: Wheatley's fear of the dark, heights, silence, though those fears existed as a core too
*{{Revenge}}: GLaDOS seeks revenge, especially it seems against Wheatley
*RidiculouslyHumanRobots: Wheatley in the Punishment prequel [[http://thepunishment.tumblr.com/post/7430283171/the-punishment-prequel-daisy Daisy]], and even after, despite core modifications
*RomanceInducingSmudge: It sure induced something!
*SecurityCling
*SenseFreak: Wheatley
*SwitchingPOV: Chapter perspectives switch between Chell's point of view and Wheatley's
*SugarandIcePersonality: Though Chell is always guarded, she can be warm and protective in certain situations of perceived safety
*TheMindIsAPlaythingOfTheBody: Wheatley's perception of the world around him and his feelings for Chell change under the influence of his new form
*TheSpeechless: Chell, though she IS able to communicate nonverbally
*UnreliableNarrator: both characters are unreliable narrators due to lack of understanding of the situation (or incomplete understanding) from both sides
* WasOnceAMan: [[FirstEpisodeSpoiler Wheatley]]. He was once an accountant that worked for Aperture and managed to appropriate billions of non-existent funds for their
*WhatIsThisThingYouCallLove?: Both Chell and Wheatley have a hard time sorting out and defining their feelings for one another
*WistfulAmnesia: in [[http://thepunishment.tumblr.com/post/7430283171/the-punishment-prequel-daisy Daisy]] for Wheatley, but not since then; Chell too, in some ways
*WomanInBlack: [[spoiler: GLaDOS appears in Wheatley's dreams as a frightening woman in a black dress]]
*YourWorstNightmare: [[spoiler: GLaDOS gives Wheatley bad dreams, eventually appearing in them herself]]
*YouWakeUpInARoom: Wheatley experiences this in the story, Chell experiences this in-game
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Wheatley has been brought back from space by GLaDOS for an unspecified punishment. She informs him he used to be human though he has no memories of his existence before he was first activated as a core. After GLaDOS destroys his metal form, he awakes alone in a relaxation chamber in his old human body, confused and disoriented. After spending some time getting acquainted with the nuisances and more ''enjoyable'' functions of his new organic form, he sets out to make his escape. He runs into Chell who has also been imprisoned once more by GLaDOS, and together they delve into Aperture to try to make their escape. Wheatley has no knowledge of proper human discourse, leading to many awkward situations.
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Wheatley has been brought back from space by GLaDOS for an unspecified punishment. She informs him he used to be human though he has no memories of his existence before he was first activated as a core. After GLaDOS destroys his metal form, he awakes alone in a relaxation chamber in his old human body, confused and disoriented. After spending some time getting acquainted with the nuisances and more more... ''enjoyable'' functions of his new organic form, he sets out to make his escape. He runs into Chell who has also been imprisoned once more by GLaDOS, and together they delve into Aperture to try to make their escape. Wheatley has no knowledge of proper human discourse, leading to many awkward situations.
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* WasOnceAMan: [[FirstEpisodeSpoiler: Wheatley]]. He was once an accountant that worked for Aperture and managed to appropriate billions of non-existent funds into their accounts.
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* WasOnceAMan: [[FirstEpisodeSpoiler: [[FirstEpisodeSpoiler Wheatley]]. He was once an accountant that worked for Aperture and managed to appropriate billions of non-existent funds into for their accounts.projects.
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Just want to smooth out some of the wording and keep it more vague while still getting across the mature themes. I hope that\'s okay.
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[[http://thepunishment.tumblr.com The Punishment]] is a Portal fanfic written by [[http://conquerorwurm.tumblr.com conquerorwurm]] and actively illustrated by [[http://rubitrightintomyeyes.tumblr.com rubitrightintomyeyes]]. It first appeared on the portal kink meme as the first fill listed and has since continued for eighteen chapters running. It is considered by many to be one of the best portal fics out there though it is still a work in progress.
Wheatley has been brought back from space by GLaDOS for an unspecified punishment. She informs him he used to be human though he has no memories of his existence before he was first activated as a core. After GLaDOS destroys his metal form, he awakes alone in a relaxation chamber in his old human body, confused and disoriented. After spending some time getting acquainted with the nuisances and more ''enjoyable'' functions of his new organic form, he sets out to make his escape. He runs into Chell who has also been imprisoned once more by GLaDOS, and together they delve into Aperture to try to make their escape. Wheatley has no knowledge of proper human discourse, leading to many awkward situations. It's revealed that GLaDOS is manipulating Wheatley's mind the entire time, to a particularly vicious degree in his sleep. Wheatley and Chell, he with lack of knowledge and she with her need for social interaction, wind up having sex. So far the fic has focused on Wheatley's experiences as a human, Chell's introspection upon his actions and how GLaDOS will deal with them in the future.
Wheatley has been brought back from space by GLaDOS for an unspecified punishment. She informs him he used to be human though he has no memories of his existence before he was first activated as a core. After GLaDOS destroys his metal form, he awakes alone in a relaxation chamber in his old human body, confused and disoriented. After spending some time getting acquainted with the nuisances and more ''enjoyable'' functions of his new organic form, he sets out to make his escape. He runs into Chell who has also been imprisoned once more by GLaDOS, and together they delve into Aperture to try to make their escape. Wheatley has no knowledge of proper human discourse, leading to many awkward situations. It's revealed that GLaDOS is manipulating Wheatley's mind the entire time, to a particularly vicious degree in his sleep. Wheatley and Chell, he with lack of knowledge and she with her need for social interaction, wind up having sex. So far the fic has focused on Wheatley's experiences as a human, Chell's introspection upon his actions and how GLaDOS will deal with them in the future.
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[[http://thepunishment.tumblr.com The Punishment]] is a Portal fanfic written by [[http://conquerorwurm.tumblr.com conquerorwurm]] and actively illustrated by [[http://rubitrightintomyeyes.tumblr.com rubitrightintomyeyes]]. It first appeared on the portal kink meme as the first fill listed and has since continued for eighteen chapters running. It is considered by many to be one of the best portal fics out there though it is still a work in progress.progress.
Wheatley has been brought back from space by GLaDOS for an unspecified punishment. She informs him he used to be human though he has no memories of his existence before he was first activated as a core. After GLaDOS destroys his metal form, he awakes alone in a relaxation chamber in his old human body, confused and disoriented. After spending some time getting acquainted with the nuisances and more ''enjoyable'' functions of his new organic form, he sets out to make his escape. He runs into Chell who has also been imprisoned once more by GLaDOS, and together they delve into Aperture to try to make their escape. Wheatley has no knowledge of proper human discourse, leading to many awkward situations.
[[spoiler: It's revealed that GLaDOS is manipulating Wheatley's mind the entire time, to a particularly vicious degree in his sleep. Wheatley and Chell, he with lack of knowledge and she with her need for social interaction, wind up having sex. So far the fic has focused on Wheatley's experiences as a human, Chell's introspection upon his actions and how GLaDOS will deal with them in thefuture.
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Wheatley has been brought back from space by GLaDOS for an unspecified punishment. She informs him he used to be human though he has no memories of his existence before he was first activated as a core. After GLaDOS destroys his metal form, he awakes alone in a relaxation chamber in his old human body, confused and disoriented. After spending some time getting acquainted with the nuisances and more ''enjoyable'' functions of his new organic form, he sets out to make his escape. He runs into Chell who has also been imprisoned once more by GLaDOS, and together they delve into Aperture to try to make their escape. Wheatley has no knowledge of proper human discourse, leading to many awkward situations.
[[spoiler: It's revealed that GLaDOS is manipulating Wheatley's mind the entire time, to a particularly vicious degree in his sleep. Wheatley and Chell, he with lack of knowledge and she with her need for social interaction, wind up having sex. So far the fic has focused on Wheatley's experiences as a human, Chell's introspection upon his actions and how GLaDOS will deal with them in the
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* CantKillYouStillNeedYou: The first chapter describes an AlternateEnding to Portal 2, where [[spoiler: GLaDOS saves Wheatley from spaces.]] In the [[spoiler: 10th Chapter]] this describes why.
--> GLaDOS: [[spoiler: You are my [[TitleDrop: punishment]] for her.]]
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* InelegantBlubbering: After GLaDOS mindrapes Wheatley, he turns into a heaping mess and can't tell her apart from Chell and ends up pushing her on the floor by mistake. It's not until he actually sees that it's Chell is when he starts to calm down.
* IntimatePsychotherapy: Chell for Wheatley. Since she can't get her point her across verbally, she uses sex to explain to him that she doesn't mind his body at all.
* MindRape: GLaDOS to Wheatley. She inserted something into his body to allow her to see through his eyes and visits him in his dreams to torment him.
* IntimatePsychotherapy: Chell for Wheatley. Since she can't get her point her across verbally, she uses sex to explain to him that she doesn't mind his body at all.
* MindRape: GLaDOS to Wheatley. She inserted something into his body to allow her to see through his eyes and visits him in his dreams to torment him.
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* InelegantBlubbering: After [[spoiler: GLaDOS mindrapes Wheatley, Wheatley]], he turns into a heaping mess and can't tell [[spoiler: her apart from Chell Chell]] and ends up pushing her on the floor by mistake. It's not until he actually sees that it's Chell is when he starts to calm down.
* IntimatePsychotherapy: Chell for Wheatley. [[spoiler: Since she can't get her point her across verbally, she uses sex to explain to him that she doesn't mind his body atall.
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* WasOnceAMan: [[FirstEpisodeSpoiler: Wheatley]]. He was once an accountant that worked for Aperture and managed to appropriate billions of non-existent funds into their accounts.
* WasOnceAMan: [[FirstEpisodeSpoiler: Wheatley]]. He was once an accountant that worked for Aperture and managed to appropriate billions of non-existent funds into their accounts.
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Wheatley has been brought back from space by GLaDOS for an unspecified punishment. She informs him he used to be human though he has no memories of his existence before he was first activated as a core. After GLaDOS destroys his metal form, he awakens alone in a relaxation chamber in his old human body, confused and disoriented.
He spends some time getting acquainted with the nuissances and ''perks'' of his organic body—suddenly reintroduced to hormones, he quickly develops a strong infatuation at the memory of Chell and sets out to find her. It turns out that’s a simple task as Chell soon stalks and attacks him, having also been re-imprisoned in Aperture by GLaDOS. Luckily for Wheatley, Chell takes pity on him in his now-helpless and remorseful state and agrees to let him accompany her in her escape.
Over the course of their journey, Wheatley struggles to understand the propriety of personal boundaries and physical attraction, and Chell struggles with conflicted feelings of trust, wanting independence and craving physical intimacy with another human. GLaDOS does Her best to complicate things further in many manipulative and increasingly threatening ways.
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* ADateWithRosiePalms: Wheatley needs to, to accommodate for his 'itch'. [[spoiler: Chell is also an offender of this trope]]
* BadDreams: Wheatley receives these courtesy of GLaDOS.
* CryIntoChest: Chell does this with Wheatley when they find a bathroom, indicating how long it'd been since she's had the luxuries of self-cleanliness.
* CannotSpitItOut: Played with. It's not that Wheatley can't, it's that he can't find the right words since he has no proper social human experience to find the words to describe his attraction to Chell.
* EmotionallyTongueTied: Wheatley again.
* HugeGuyTinyGirl: Though their exact heights are not determined, Chell is described as barely coming up to the level of Wheatley'schest. chest.
* IAmNotPretty: Somehow Wheatleylearns mentally conceives the notion of attractiveness, having compared himself to Chell, believe he's quite ordinary.
* InelegantBlubbering: After GLaDOS mindrapes Wheatley, hecan use his size to their advantage in their escape, though it makes him uncomfortable turns into a heaping mess and can't tell her apart from Chell and ends up pushing her on the floor by mistake. It's not until he actually sees that it's Chell is so much smaller than when he is.starts to calm down.
* IntimatePsychotherapy: Chell for Wheatley. Since she can't get her point her across verbally, she uses sex to explain to him that she doesn't mind his body at all.
* MindRape: GLaDOS to Wheatley. She inserted something into his body to allow her to see through his eyes and visits him in his dreams to torment him.
* NeverSleepAgain: See BadDreams above. As a result of these dreams, Wheatley tries to fight off fatigue by refusing to do so, but in the end always fails.
* NoSenseOfPersonalSpace: Wheatley towards Chell.
* NoSocialSkills
* ParalyzingFearOfSexuality: GLaDOS attempts to invoke this in Wheatley. [[spoiler: It doesn't last]]
* BadDreams: Wheatley receives these courtesy of GLaDOS.
* CryIntoChest: Chell does this with Wheatley when they find a bathroom, indicating how long it'd been since she's had the luxuries of self-cleanliness.
* CannotSpitItOut: Played with. It's not that Wheatley can't, it's that he can't find the right words since he has no proper social human experience to find the words to describe his attraction to Chell.
* EmotionallyTongueTied: Wheatley again.
* HugeGuyTinyGirl: Though their exact heights are not determined, Chell is described as barely coming up to the level of Wheatley's
* IAmNotPretty: Somehow Wheatley
* InelegantBlubbering: After GLaDOS mindrapes Wheatley, he
* IntimatePsychotherapy: Chell for Wheatley. Since she can't get her point her across verbally, she uses sex to explain to him that she doesn't mind his body at all.
* MindRape: GLaDOS to Wheatley. She inserted something into his body to allow her to see through his eyes and visits him in his dreams to torment him.
* NeverSleepAgain: See BadDreams above. As a result of these dreams, Wheatley tries to fight off fatigue by refusing to do so, but in the end always fails.
* NoSenseOfPersonalSpace: Wheatley towards Chell.
* NoSocialSkills
* ParalyzingFearOfSexuality: GLaDOS attempts to invoke this in Wheatley. [[spoiler: It doesn't last]]
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* HugeGuyTinyGirl: Though their exact heights are not determined, Chell is described as barely coming up to the level of Wheatley's chest.chest. Wheatley learns he can use his size to their advantage in their escape, though it makes him uncomfortable that Chell is so much smaller than he is.
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Wheatley has been brought back from space by GLaDOS for an unspecified punishment. She informs him he used to be human though he has no memories of his existence before he was first activated as a core. After GLaDOS destroys his metal form, he awakes alone in a relaxation chamber in his old human body, confused and disoriented. After spending some time getting acquainted with the nuisances and more ''enjoyable'' functions of his new organic form, he sets out to make his escape. He runs into Chell who has also been imprisoned once more by GLaDOS, and together they delve into Aperture to try to make their escape. Wheatley has no knowledge of proper human discourse, leading to many awkward situations. It's revealed that GLaDOS is manipulating Wheatley's mind the entire time, to a particularly vicious degree in his sleep. Wheatley and Chell, he with lack of knowledge and she with her need for social interaction, wind up having sex. So far the fic has focused on Wheatley's experiences as a human, Chell's introspection upon his actions and how GLaDOS will deal with them in the future.
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Wheatley has been brought back from space by GLaDOS for an unspecified punishment. She informs him he used to be human though he has no memories of his existence before he was first activated as a core. After GLaDOS destroys his metal form, he
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[[http://thepunishment.tumblr.com The Punishment]] is a Portal fanfic written by [[http://conquerorwurm.tumblr.com conquerorwurm]] and actively illustrated by [[http://rubitrightintomyeyes.tumblr.com rubitrightintomyeyes]]. It first appeared on the portal kink meme as the first fill listed and has since continued for eighteen chapters running. It is considered by many to be one of the best portal fics and is currently ongoing.
Wheatley has been turned into a human by GLaDOS for an unspecified punishment. He awakes alone in a relaxation chamber and discovers ~things~ about humans and their anatomy. He runs into Chell who has also been imprisoned once more by GLaDOS, and together they delve into Aperture to try to make their escape. Wheatley has no knowledge of proper human discourse, leading to many awkward situations. It's revealed that GLaDOS is manipulating Wheatley's mind the entire time, to a particularly vicious degree in his sleep. Wheatley and Chell, he with lack of knowledge and she with her need for social interaction, wind up having sex. So far the fic has focused on Wheatley's experiences as a human and Chell's introspection upon his actions and how GLaDOS will deal with them in the future.
Wheatley has been turned into a human by GLaDOS for an unspecified punishment. He awakes alone in a relaxation chamber and discovers ~things~ about humans and their anatomy. He runs into Chell who has also been imprisoned once more by GLaDOS, and together they delve into Aperture to try to make their escape. Wheatley has no knowledge of proper human discourse, leading to many awkward situations. It's revealed that GLaDOS is manipulating Wheatley's mind the entire time, to a particularly vicious degree in his sleep. Wheatley and Chell, he with lack of knowledge and she with her need for social interaction, wind up having sex. So far the fic has focused on Wheatley's experiences as a human and Chell's introspection upon his actions and how GLaDOS will deal with them in the future.
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[[http://thepunishment.tumblr.com The Punishment]] is a Portal fanfic written by [[http://conquerorwurm.tumblr.com conquerorwurm]] and actively illustrated by [[http://rubitrightintomyeyes.tumblr.com rubitrightintomyeyes]]. It first appeared on the portal kink meme as the first fill listed and has since continued for eighteen chapters running. It is considered by many to be one of the best portal fics and out there though it is currently ongoing.still a work in progress.
Wheatley has beenturned into a human brought back from space by GLaDOS for an unspecified punishment. He punishment. She informs him he used to be human though he has no memories of his existence before he was first activated as a core. After GLaDOS destroys his metal form, he awakes alone in a relaxation chamber in his old human body, confused and discovers ~things~ about humans disoriented. After spending some time getting acquainted with the nuisances and their anatomy.more ''enjoyable'' functions of his new organic form, he sets out to make his escape. He runs into Chell who has also been imprisoned once more by GLaDOS, and together they delve into Aperture to try to make their escape. Wheatley has no knowledge of proper human discourse, leading to many awkward situations. It's revealed that GLaDOS is manipulating Wheatley's mind the entire time, to a particularly vicious degree in his sleep. Wheatley and Chell, he with lack of knowledge and she with her need for social interaction, wind up having sex. So far the fic has focused on Wheatley's experiences as a human and human, Chell's introspection upon his actions and how GLaDOS will deal with them in the future.
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*HugeGuyTinyGirl: Though their exact heights are not determined, Chell is described as barely coming up to the level of Wheatley's chest.
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The Pushment is a Fanfic for portal written by conquerorwurm and actively illustrated by rubitrightintomyeyes. it first appeared on the portal kink meme as the fist fill listed. It is considered to be one of the best portal fics and is currently ongoing.
wheatley has been turned into a human by GLaDOS for an unknown reason. she keeps him in a room where he soon discovers ~things~ about humans and their anatomy. He meets up with Chell along the way and they delve into aperture to try and find their way out. wheatley has no knowledge of proper human discourse and eventually shows this off to Chell rather bluntly. GLaDOS plays with wheatley's mind the entire time, making him and chell think things they ought not to. Wheatley and Chell, he with lack of knowledge and she with her need for social interaction, wind up having sex. the whole fic focuses on wheatley's experiences as a human and Chell's introspection upon his actions and how GLaDOS will deal with them in the future.
wheatley has been turned into a human by GLaDOS for an unknown reason. she keeps him in a room where he soon discovers ~things~ about humans and their anatomy. He meets up with Chell along the way and they delve into aperture to try and find their way out. wheatley has no knowledge of proper human discourse and eventually shows this off to Chell rather bluntly. GLaDOS plays with wheatley's mind the entire time, making him and chell think things they ought not to. Wheatley and Chell, he with lack of knowledge and she with her need for social interaction, wind up having sex. the whole fic focuses on wheatley's experiences as a human and Chell's introspection upon his actions and how GLaDOS will deal with them in the future.
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[[http://thepunishment.tumblr.com The Pushment Punishment]] is a Fanfic for portal Portal fanfic written by conquerorwurm [[http://conquerorwurm.tumblr.com conquerorwurm]] and actively illustrated by rubitrightintomyeyes. it [[http://rubitrightintomyeyes.tumblr.com rubitrightintomyeyes]]. It first appeared on the portal kink meme as the fist first fill listed. listed and has since continued for eighteen chapters running. It is considered by many to be one of the best portal fics and is currently ongoing.
wheatley Wheatley has been turned into a human by GLaDOS for an unknown reason. she keeps him unspecified punishment. He awakes alone in a room where he soon relaxation chamber and discovers ~things~ about humans and their anatomy. He meets up with runs into Chell along the way who has also been imprisoned once more by GLaDOS, and together they delve into aperture Aperture to try and find to make their way out. wheatley escape. Wheatley has no knowledge of proper human discourse and eventually shows this off discourse, leading to Chell rather bluntly. many awkward situations. It's revealed that GLaDOS plays with wheatley's is manipulating Wheatley's mind the entire time, making him and chell think things they ought not to.to a particularly vicious degree in his sleep. Wheatley and Chell, he with lack of knowledge and she with her need for social interaction, wind up having sex. So far the whole fic focuses has focused on wheatley's Wheatley's experiences as a human and Chell's introspection upon his actions and how GLaDOS will deal with them in the future.
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wheatley has been turned into a human by GLaDOS for an unknown reason. she keeps him in a room where he soon discovers ~things~ about humans and their anatomy. He meets up with Chell along the way and they delve into aperture to try and find their way out. wheatley has no knowledge of proper human discourse and eventually shows this off to Chell rather bluntly. GLaDOS plays with wheatley's mind the entire time, making him and chell think things they ought not to. Wheatley and Chell, he with lack of knowledge and she with her need for social interaction, wind up having sex. the whole fic focuses on wheatley's experiences as a human and Chell's introspection upon his actions and how GLaDOS will deal with them in the future.
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wheatley has been turned into a human by GLaDOS for an unknown reason. she keeps him in a room where he soon discovers ~things~ about humans and their anatomy. He meets up with Chell along the way and they delve into aperture to try and find their way out. wheatley has no knowledge of proper human discourse and eventually shows this off to Chell rather bluntly. GLaDOS plays with wheatley's mind the entire time, making him and chell think things they ought not to. Wheatley and Chell, he with lack of knowledge and she with her need for social interaction, wind up having sex. the whole fic focuses on wheatley's experiences as a human and Chell's introspection upon his actions and how GLaDOS will deal with them in the future.future.
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The Pushment is a Fanfic for portal written by conquerorwurm. it first appeared on the portal kink meme as the fist fill listed. It is considered to be one of the best portal fics and is currently ongoing.
wheatley has been turned into a human by GLaDOS for an unknown reason. she keeps him in a room where he soon discovers ~things~ about humans and their anatomy. He meets up with Chell along the way and they delve into aperture to try and find their way out. wheatley has no knowledge of proper human discourse and eventually shows this off to Chell rather bluntly. GLaDOS plays with wheatley's mind the entire time, making him and chell think things they ought not to. Wheatley and Chell, he with lack of knowledge and she with her need for social interaction, wind up having sex. the whole fic focuses on wheatley's experiences as a human and Chell's introspection upon his actions and how GLaDOS will deal with them in the future.
wheatley has been turned into a human by GLaDOS for an unknown reason. she keeps him in a room where he soon discovers ~things~ about humans and their anatomy. He meets up with Chell along the way and they delve into aperture to try and find their way out. wheatley has no knowledge of proper human discourse and eventually shows this off to Chell rather bluntly. GLaDOS plays with wheatley's mind the entire time, making him and chell think things they ought not to. Wheatley and Chell, he with lack of knowledge and she with her need for social interaction, wind up having sex. the whole fic focuses on wheatley's experiences as a human and Chell's introspection upon his actions and how GLaDOS will deal with them in the future.