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* IsThatCuteKidYours: Essentially, anyway; in "Planet of the Dead", when Christina meets the Doctor and Donna, she admits that she initially assumed Donna was the Doctor's ''mother'', as his current incarnation looks young enough that Donna could have given birth to him when she was a teenager. Naturally, the Doctor and Donna find this hilarious.
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** The most notable difference shown here is in the [=CyberKing=]'s destruction, where instead of it being sent into the Time Vortex so it can self-destruct harmlessly, [[spoiler: Miss Hartigan [[HeroicSacrifice willingly]] sends the Cyberking away.]] Notibly, this is similar to the alternate version of the scene that Davies envisioned for the actual episode.
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** The most notable difference shown here is in the [=CyberKing=]'s destruction, where instead of it being sent into the Time Vortex so it can self-destruct harmlessly, [[spoiler: Miss Hartigan [[HeroicSacrifice willingly]] sends the Cyberking away.]] Notibly, Notably, this is similar to the alternate version of the scene that Davies envisioned for the actual episode.
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* SkewedPriorities: The Doctor decided to put off persuing the [=CyberKing=]... so that he can find some clothes in a school.
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* SkewedPriorities: The Doctor decided to put off persuing pursuing the [=CyberKing=]... so that he can find some clothes in a school.
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* FamousLastWords: In "Always Another Way", the Tenth Doctor goes out while shouting "''[[{{Catchphrase}} ALLONS-Y!]]''"
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And thus, we have [[http://www.whofic.com/viewstory.php?sid=41953 "The Next Doctors"]], the first of a [[http://www.whofic.com/series.php?seriesid=3411 series of stories]] concerning the Eleventh Doctor and Donna taking part [[Recap/DoctorWhoS30E14TheNextDoctor in]] [[Recap/DoctorWhoS30E15PlanetOfTheDead the]] [[Recap/DoctorWhoS30E16TheWatersOfMars 2009]] [[DoctorWhoS30E17E18TheEndOfTime specials]].
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And thus, we have [[http://www.whofic.com/viewstory.php?sid=41953 "The Next Doctors"]], the first of a [[http://www.whofic.com/series.php?seriesid=3411 series of stories]] concerning the Eleventh Doctor and Donna taking part [[Recap/DoctorWhoS30E14TheNextDoctor in]] [[Recap/DoctorWhoS30E15PlanetOfTheDead the]] [[Recap/DoctorWhoS30E16TheWatersOfMars 2009]] [[DoctorWhoS30E17E18TheEndOfTime [[Recap/DoctorWhoS30E17E18TheEndOfTime specials]].
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The catch?
[[HeroicSacrifice The Tenth Doctor ended up regenerating in order to save her.]]
From there, he and Donna continue adventuring, making their first stop together in [[Recap/DoctorWhoS30E14TheNextDoctor Victorian England, Christmas eve]].
[[HeroicSacrifice The Tenth Doctor ended up regenerating in order to save her.]]
From there, he and Donna continue adventuring, making their first stop together in [[Recap/DoctorWhoS30E14TheNextDoctor Victorian England, Christmas eve]].
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The catch?
catch? [[HeroicSacrifice The Tenth Doctor ended up regenerating in order to save her.]]
]] From there, he and Donna continue adventuring, making their first stop together in [[Recap/DoctorWhoS30E14TheNextDoctor Victorian England, Christmas eve]].
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Near the end of the story, the Doctor notices [[spoiler:[[Recap/DoctorWhoS31E1TheEleventhHour a crack]] [[Recap/DoctorWhoS31E12ThePandoricaOpens in the wall]] [[Recap/DoctorWhoS31E13TheBigBang of a building]]]].
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Near the end of the story, the Doctor notices [[spoiler:[[Recap/DoctorWhoS31E1TheEleventhHour [[Recap/DoctorWhoS31E1TheEleventhHour a crack]] [[Recap/DoctorWhoS31E12ThePandoricaOpens in the wall]] [[Recap/DoctorWhoS31E13TheBigBang of a building]]]].building]].
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** Instead of choosing "John Smith" as his name, the Doctor goes with "[[Recap/DoctorWhoS1E1AnUnearthlyChild Ian Foreman]]".
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** Instead of choosing "John Smith" as his name, the Doctor goes with "[[Recap/DoctorWhoS1E1AnUnearthlyChild Ian Foreman]]".Foreman]]", a reference to two of the First Doctor's companions.
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--> '''The Doctor:''' "Dunno. I just don't feel like a 'Smith' in this body."
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--> '''The Doctor:''' "Dunno. I just don't feel like a 'Smith' in this body."" [[note]]Also an ironic ActorAllusion, as this is Creator/MattSmith's Doctor.[[/note]]
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And thus, we have [[http://www.whofic.com/viewstory.php?sid=41953 "The Next Doctors"]], the first of a [[http://www.whofic.com/series.php?seriesid=3411 series of stories]] concerning the Eleventh Doctor and Donna taking part [[Recap/DoctorWhoS30E14TheNextDoctor in]] [[Recap/DoctorWhoS30E15PlanetOfTheDead thr]] [[Recap/DoctorWhoS30E16TheWatersOfMars 2009]] [[DoctorWhoS30E17E18TheEndOfTime specials]].
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And thus, we have [[http://www.whofic.com/viewstory.php?sid=41953 "The Next Doctors"]], the first of a [[http://www.whofic.com/series.php?seriesid=3411 series of stories]] concerning the Eleventh Doctor and Donna taking part [[Recap/DoctorWhoS30E14TheNextDoctor in]] [[Recap/DoctorWhoS30E15PlanetOfTheDead thr]] the]] [[Recap/DoctorWhoS30E16TheWatersOfMars 2009]] [[DoctorWhoS30E17E18TheEndOfTime specials]].
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And thus, we have [[http://www.whofic.com/viewstory.php?sid=41953 "The Next Doctors"]], the first of a [[http://www.whofic.com/series.php?seriesid=3411 series of stories]] concerning the Eleventh Doctor and Donna taking part in the [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Recap/DoctorWhoS30E14TheNextDoctor last]] [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Recap/DoctorWhoS30E15PlanetOfTheDead few]] [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Recap/DoctorWhoS30E16TheWatersOfMars episodes]] [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Recap/DoctorWhoS30E17E18TheEndOfTime of Series 4]].
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And thus, we have [[http://www.whofic.com/viewstory.php?sid=41953 "The Next Doctors"]], the first of a [[http://www.whofic.com/series.php?seriesid=3411 series of stories]] concerning the Eleventh Doctor and Donna taking part in the [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Recap/DoctorWhoS30E14TheNextDoctor last]] [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Recap/DoctorWhoS30E15PlanetOfTheDead few]] [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Recap/DoctorWhoS30E16TheWatersOfMars episodes]] [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Recap/DoctorWhoS30E17E18TheEndOfTime of Series 4]].
[[Recap/DoctorWhoS30E14TheNextDoctor in]] [[Recap/DoctorWhoS30E15PlanetOfTheDead thr]] [[Recap/DoctorWhoS30E16TheWatersOfMars 2009]] [[DoctorWhoS30E17E18TheEndOfTime specials]].
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A fanfiction author was upset with how [[Recap/DoctorWhoS30E13JourneysEnd "Journey's End"]] had written [[LaserGuidedAmnesia Donna]] out of the show. So, he decided to [[http://www.whofic.com/viewstory.php?sid=41791 redo the ending]] so that [[FixFic Donna didn't have to leave with her memory erased.]]
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A ''Series/DoctorWho'' fanfiction author was upset with how [[Recap/DoctorWhoS30E13JourneysEnd "Journey's End"]] had written [[LaserGuidedAmnesia Donna]] out of the show. So, he decided to [[http://www.whofic.com/viewstory.php?sid=41791 redo the ending]] so that [[FixFic Donna didn't have to leave with her memory erased.]]
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* WhatYearIsThis: Averted, as the Doctor not only already knows that he and Donna landed in Victorian England, but also figures out that it's Christmas (eve) thanks to hearing carolers.
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* WhatYearIsThis: Averted, as the Doctor not only already knows that he and Donna landed in Victorian England, but also figures out that it's Christmas (eve) thanks to hearing carolers.carolers.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Near the end of the story, the Doctor notices [[spoiler: [[Recap/DoctorWhoS31E01TheEleventhHour a crack]] [[Recap/DoctorWhoS31E12ThePandoricaOpens in the wall]] [[Recap/DoctorWhoS31E13TheBigBang of a building]]]].
* HaveWeMetYet: When Rostia makes her claim that "there can't be two of [the Doctor]", The Doctor tries to figure out ''which one'' she's referring to:
--> "But... which one? Is it the one with the [[Creator/TomBaker scarf]]? [[Creator/PeterDavison Celery]]? [[Creator/PatrickTroughton Recorder]]? Any of these things ringing a bell?"
* HaveWeMetYet: When Rostia makes her claim that "there can't be two of [the Doctor]", The Doctor tries to figure out ''which one'' she's referring to:
--> "But... which one? Is it the one with the [[Creator/TomBaker scarf]]? [[Creator/PeterDavison Celery]]? [[Creator/PatrickTroughton Recorder]]? Any of these things ringing a bell?"
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Near the end of the story, the Doctor notices [[spoiler: [[Recap/DoctorWhoS31E01TheEleventhHour [[spoiler:[[Recap/DoctorWhoS31E1TheEleventhHour a crack]] [[Recap/DoctorWhoS31E12ThePandoricaOpens in the wall]] [[Recap/DoctorWhoS31E13TheBigBang of a building]]]].
* HaveWeMetYet: WhenRostia Rosita makes her claim that "there can't be two of [the Doctor]", The the Doctor tries to figure out ''which one'' she's referring to:
--> "But...-->'''The Doctor:''' But... which one? Is it the one with the [[Creator/TomBaker scarf]]? [[Creator/PeterDavison Celery]]? [[Creator/PatrickTroughton Recorder]]? Any of these things ringing a bell?"
* HaveWeMetYet: When
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A fanfiction author was upset with how [[Recap/DoctorWhoNSS4E13JourneysEnd "Jorney's End"]] had written [[LaserGuidedAmnesia Donna]] out of the show. So, he decided to [[http://www.whofic.com/viewstory.php?sid=41791 redo the ending]] so that [[FixFic Donna didn't have to leave with her memory erased.]]
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A fanfiction author was upset with how [[Recap/DoctorWhoNSS4E13JourneysEnd "Jorney's [[Recap/DoctorWhoS30E13JourneysEnd "Journey's End"]] had written [[LaserGuidedAmnesia Donna]] out of the show. So, he decided to [[http://www.whofic.com/viewstory.php?sid=41791 redo the ending]] so that [[FixFic Donna didn't have to leave with her memory erased.]]
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From there, he and Donna continue adventuring, making their first stop together in [[Recap/DoctorWhoNSS4E14TheNextDoctor Victorian England, Christmas eve]].
And thus, we have [[http://www.whofic.com/viewstory.php?sid=41953 "The Next Doctors"]], the first of a [[http://www.whofic.com/series.php?seriesid=3411 series of stories]] concerning the Eleventh Doctor and Donna taking part in the [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Recap/DoctorWhoNSS4E14TheNextDoctor last]] [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Recap/DoctorWhoNSS4E15PlanetOfTheDead few]] [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Recap/DoctorWhoNSS4E16TheWatersOfMars episodes]] [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Recap/DoctorWhoNSS4E17E18TheEndOfTime of Series 4]].
And thus, we have [[http://www.whofic.com/viewstory.php?sid=41953 "The Next Doctors"]], the first of a [[http://www.whofic.com/series.php?seriesid=3411 series of stories]] concerning the Eleventh Doctor and Donna taking part in the [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Recap/DoctorWhoNSS4E14TheNextDoctor last]] [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Recap/DoctorWhoNSS4E15PlanetOfTheDead few]] [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Recap/DoctorWhoNSS4E16TheWatersOfMars episodes]] [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Recap/DoctorWhoNSS4E17E18TheEndOfTime of Series 4]].
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From there, he and Donna continue adventuring, making their first stop together in [[Recap/DoctorWhoNSS4E14TheNextDoctor [[Recap/DoctorWhoS30E14TheNextDoctor Victorian England, Christmas eve]].
And thus, we have [[http://www.whofic.com/viewstory.php?sid=41953 "The Next Doctors"]], the first of a [[http://www.whofic.com/series.php?seriesid=3411 series of stories]] concerning the Eleventh Doctor and Donna taking part in the [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Recap/DoctorWhoNSS4E14TheNextDoctor php/Recap/DoctorWhoS30E14TheNextDoctor last]] [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Recap/DoctorWhoNSS4E15PlanetOfTheDead php/Recap/DoctorWhoS30E15PlanetOfTheDead few]] [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Recap/DoctorWhoNSS4E16TheWatersOfMars php/Recap/DoctorWhoS30E16TheWatersOfMars episodes]] [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Recap/DoctorWhoNSS4E17E18TheEndOfTime php/Recap/DoctorWhoS30E17E18TheEndOfTime of Series 4]].
And thus, we have [[http://www.whofic.com/viewstory.php?sid=41953 "The Next Doctors"]], the first of a [[http://www.whofic.com/series.php?seriesid=3411 series of stories]] concerning the Eleventh Doctor and Donna taking part in the [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.
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(It is recommended you watch "The Next Doctor" or go [[Recap/DoctorWhoNSS4E14TheNextDoctor here]] first before reading this story/page.)
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(It is recommended you watch "The Next Doctor" or go [[Recap/DoctorWhoNSS4E14TheNextDoctor here]] [[Recap/DoctorWhoS30E14TheNextDoctor to the recap page]] first before reading this story/page.)
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* ChristmasCarolers: Tells the Doctor he's arrived at Christmas Eve at one point.
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(It is recommended you watch "The Next Doctors" Doctor" or go [[Recap/DoctorWhoNSS4E14TheNextDoctor here]] first before reading this story/page.)
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--> "But... which one? Is it the one with the [[TomBaker scarf]]? [[PeterDavison Celery]]? [[PatrickTroughton Recorder]]? Any of these things ringing a bell?"
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--> "But... which one? Is it the one with the [[TomBaker [[Creator/TomBaker scarf]]? [[PeterDavison [[Creator/PeterDavison Celery]]? [[PatrickTroughton [[Creator/PatrickTroughton Recorder]]? Any of these things ringing a bell?"
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--> "But... which one? Is it the one with the [[scarf TomBaker]]? [[Celery PeterDavison]]? [[Recorder PatrickTroughton]]? Any of these things ringing a bell?"
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--> "But... which one? Is it the one with the [[scarf TomBaker]]? [[Celery PeterDavison]]? [[Recorder PatrickTroughton]]? [[TomBaker scarf]]? [[PeterDavison Celery]]? [[PatrickTroughton Recorder]]? Any of these things ringing a bell?"
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--> "But... which one? Is it the one with the scarf? Celery? Recorder? Any of these things ringing a bell?"
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--> "But... which one? Is it the one with the scarf? Celery? Recorder? [[scarf TomBaker]]? [[Celery PeterDavison]]? [[Recorder PatrickTroughton]]? Any of these things ringing a bell?"
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And thus, we have [[http://www.whofic.com/viewstory.php?sid=41953 "The Next Doctors"]], the first of a series of stories concerning the Eleventh Doctor and Donna taking part in the [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Recap/DoctorWhoNSS4E14TheNextDoctor last]] [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Recap/DoctorWhoNSS4E15PlanetOfTheDead few]] [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Recap/DoctorWhoNSS4E16TheWatersOfMars episodes]] [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Recap/DoctorWhoNSS4E17E18TheEndOfTime of Series 4]].
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And thus, we have [[http://www.whofic.com/viewstory.php?sid=41953 "The Next Doctors"]], the first of a [[http://www.whofic.com/series.php?seriesid=3411 series of stories stories]] concerning the Eleventh Doctor and Donna taking part in the [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Recap/DoctorWhoNSS4E14TheNextDoctor last]] [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Recap/DoctorWhoNSS4E15PlanetOfTheDead few]] [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Recap/DoctorWhoNSS4E16TheWatersOfMars episodes]] [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Recap/DoctorWhoNSS4E17E18TheEndOfTime of Series 4]].
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How much does this change the sotry? Let's find out...
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How much does this change the sotry? story? Let's find out...
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Edited to go with a recent discovery of mine.
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A Fanfiction.net member called garfieldodie was upset with how [[Recap/DoctorWhoNSS4E13JourneysEnd "Jorney's End"]] had written [[LaserGuidedAmnesia Donna]] out of the show. So, he decided to [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6988647/1/Always_Another_Way redo the ending]] so that [[FixFic Donna didn't have to leave with her memory erased.]]
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A Fanfiction.net member called garfieldodie fanfiction author was upset with how [[Recap/DoctorWhoNSS4E13JourneysEnd "Jorney's End"]] had written [[LaserGuidedAmnesia Donna]] out of the show. So, he decided to [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6988647/1/Always_Another_Way whofic.com/viewstory.php?sid=41791 redo the ending]] so that [[FixFic Donna didn't have to leave with her memory erased.]]
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And thus, we have [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7011869/1/The_Next_Doctors "The Next Doctors"]], which is in short "The Next Doctor" but starring The Eleventh Doctor and Donna Noble. How much of a difference does this make? Let's find out...
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And thus, we have [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7011869/1/The_Next_Doctors whofic.com/viewstory.php?sid=41953 "The Next Doctors"]], which is in short "The Next Doctor" but starring The the first of a series of stories concerning the Eleventh Doctor and Donna Noble. How much taking part in the [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Recap/DoctorWhoNSS4E14TheNextDoctor last]] [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Recap/DoctorWhoNSS4E15PlanetOfTheDead few]] [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Recap/DoctorWhoNSS4E16TheWatersOfMars episodes]] [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Recap/DoctorWhoNSS4E17E18TheEndOfTime of a difference does this make? Series 4]].
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From there, he and Donna continue adventuring, making their first stop together in [[Recap/DoctorWhoNSS4E14TheNextDoctor Victorian Englind, Christmas eve]].
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From there, he and Donna continue adventuring, making their first stop together in [[Recap/DoctorWhoNSS4E14TheNextDoctor Victorian Englind, England, Christmas eve]].
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--> "He hated it so much he smiled back and waved. He was so revolted he rang the bell joyously. [[LampshadeHanging Okay, maybe he liked it a little, but not much at all.]]
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--> "He hated it so much he smiled back and waved. He was so revolted he rang the bell joyously. [[LampshadeHanging Okay, maybe he liked it a little, but not much at all.]]]]"
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** [[spoiler: Need we mention the crack again?]]
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* WhatYearIsThis: Averted, as the Doctor not only already knows they he and Donna landed in Victorian England, but also figures out that it's Christmas (eve) thanks to hearing carolers.
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* WhatYearIsThis: Averted, as the Doctor not only already knows they that he and Donna landed in Victorian England, but also figures out that it's Christmas (eve) thanks to hearing carolers.
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* ForWantOfANail: The most notable difference shown here is in the [=CyberKing=]'s destruction, where instead of it being sent into the Time Vortex so it can self-destruct harmlessly, [[spoiler: Miss Hartigan [[HeroicSacrifice willingly]] sends the Cyberking away.]] Notibly, this is similar to the alternate version of the scene that Davies envisioned for the actual episode.
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* FamousLastWords: In "Always Another Way", the Tenth Doctor goes out while shouting "''[[{{Catchphrase}} ALLONS-Y!]]''"
* ForWantOfANail: The Tenth Doctor regenerating before stopping in Victorian England.
** The most notable difference shown here is in the [=CyberKing=]'s destruction, where instead of it being sent into the Time Vortex so it can self-destruct harmlessly, [[spoiler: Miss Hartigan [[HeroicSacrifice willingly]] sends the Cyberking away.]] Notibly, this is similar to the alternate version of the scene that Davies envisioned for the actual episode.
* ForWantOfANail: The Tenth Doctor regenerating before stopping in Victorian England.
** The most notable difference shown here is in the [=CyberKing=]'s destruction, where instead of it being sent into the Time Vortex so it can self-destruct harmlessly, [[spoiler: Miss Hartigan [[HeroicSacrifice willingly]] sends the Cyberking away.]] Notibly, this is similar to the alternate version of the scene that Davies envisioned for the actual episode.
* InSpiteOfANail: The Eleventh Doctor is the same one as in the show.
** The [=CyberKing=] still runs rampant.
* ProlongedPrologue: "Always Another Way" acts as this to "The Next Doctors".
** The [=CyberKing=] still runs rampant.
* ProlongedPrologue: "Always Another Way" acts as this to "The Next Doctors".
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* SkewedPriorities: The Doctor decided to put off persuing the Cyberking... so that he can find some clothes in a school.
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* SkewedPriorities: The Doctor decided to put off persuing the Cyberking...[=CyberKing=]... so that he can find some clothes in a school.
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* TalkativeLoon: True to form, the Eleventh Doctor still has the problem for talking too much. A good example is during the scene mentioned for HaveWeMetYet, where the Doctor keeping going on about his past selves, all while ignoring the ''shaking, banging door''.
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* TalkativeLoon: True to form, the Eleventh Doctor still has the problem for talking too much. A good example is during the scene mentioned for HaveWeMetYet, where the Doctor keeping going on about his past selves, all while ignoring the ''shaking, banging door''.door''.
* WhatYearIsThis: Averted, as the Doctor not only already knows they he and Donna landed in Victorian England, but also figures out that it's Christmas (eve) thanks to hearing carolers.
* WhatYearIsThis: Averted, as the Doctor not only already knows they he and Donna landed in Victorian England, but also figures out that it's Christmas (eve) thanks to hearing carolers.
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--> ''Donna:'' "Well, what about 'Ian Foreman'? Where'd that come from? What about John Smith?"
--> ''TheDoctor:'' "Dunno. I just don't feel like a 'Smith' in this body."
--> ''TheDoctor:'' "Dunno. I just don't feel like a 'Smith' in this body."
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--> ''Donna:'' '''Donna:''' "Well, what about 'Ian Foreman'? Where'd that come from? What about John Smith?"
-->''TheDoctor:'' '''The Doctor:''' "Dunno. I just don't feel like a 'Smith' in this body."
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** Instead of choosing "John Smith" as his name, the Doctor goes with "[[Recap/DoctorWhoS1E1AnUnearthlyChild Ian Foreman]]".
--> ''Donna:'' "Well, what about 'Ian Foreman'? Where'd that come from? What about John Smith?"
--> ''TheDoctor:'' "Dunno. I just don't feel like a 'Smith' in this body."
** Instead of choosing "John Smith" as his name, the Doctor goes with "[[Recap/DoctorWhoS1E1AnUnearthlyChild Ian Foreman]]".
--> ''Donna:'' "Well, what about 'Ian Foreman'? Where'd that come from? What about John Smith?"
--> ''TheDoctor:'' "Dunno. I just don't feel like a 'Smith' in this body."
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* {{Forshadowing}}: Near the end of the story, the Doctor notices [[spoiler: [[Recap/DoctorWhoS31E01TheEleventhHour a crack]] [[Recap/DoctorWhoS31E12ThePandoricaOpens in the wall]] [[Recap/DoctorWhoS31E13TheBigBang of a building]]]].
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* {{Forshadowing}}: {{Foreshadowing}}: Near the end of the story, the Doctor notices [[spoiler: [[Recap/DoctorWhoS31E01TheEleventhHour a crack]] [[Recap/DoctorWhoS31E12ThePandoricaOpens in the wall]] [[Recap/DoctorWhoS31E13TheBigBang of a building]]]].
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* Forshadowing: Near the end of the story, the Doctor notices [[spoiler: [[Recap/DoctorWhoS31E01TheEleventhHour a crack]] [[Recap/DoctorWhoS31E12ThePandoricaOpens in the wall]] [[Recap/DoctorWhoS31E13TheBigBang of a building]]]].
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* Forshadowing: {{Forshadowing}}: Near the end of the story, the Doctor notices [[spoiler: [[Recap/DoctorWhoS31E01TheEleventhHour a crack]] [[Recap/DoctorWhoS31E12ThePandoricaOpens in the wall]] [[Recap/DoctorWhoS31E13TheBigBang of a building]]]].
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* TheStationsOfTheCanon: The Doctor still finds his signature outfit (this time in a school), and [[spoiler: the cracks still exist]].
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* TheStationsOfTheCanon: The Doctor still finds his signature outfit (this time in a school), and [[spoiler: the cracks in time still exist]].
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To best explain this story, we should start at the beginning:
A Fanfiction.net member called garfieldodie was upset with how [[Recap/DoctorWhoNSS4E13JourneysEnd "Jorney's End"]] had written [[LaserGuidedAmnesia Donna]] out of the show. So, he decided to [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6988647/1/Always_Another_Way redo the ending]] so that [[FixFic Donna didn't have to leave with her memory erased.]]
The catch?
[[HeroicSacrifice The Tenth Doctor ended up regenerating in order to save her.]]
From there, he and Donna continue adventuring, making their first stop together in [[Recap/DoctorWhoNSS4E14TheNextDoctor Victorian Englind, Christmas eve]].
And thus, we have [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7011869/1/The_Next_Doctors "The Next Doctors"]], which is in short "The Next Doctor" but starring The Eleventh Doctor and Donna Noble. How much of a difference does this make? Let's find out...
(It is recommended you watch "The Next Doctors" or go [[Recap/DoctorWhoNSS4E14TheNextDoctor here]] first before reading this story/page.)
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!! This fanfic provides examples of:
* BlatantLies: The narrator explains how the Doctor hated the cheers he has getting for what he did... except not really:
--> "He hated it so much he smiled back and waved. He was so revolted he rang the bell joyously. [[LampshadeHanging Okay, maybe he liked it a little, but not much at all.]]
* ForWantOfANail: The most notable difference shown here is in the [=CyberKing=]'s destruction, where instead of it being sent into the Time Vortex so it can self-destruct harmlessly, [[spoiler: Miss Hartigan [[HeroicSacrifice willingly]] sends the Cyberking away.]] Notibly, this is similar to the alternate version of the scene that Davies envisioned for the actual episode.
* Forshadowing: Near the end of the story, the Doctor notices [[spoiler: [[Recap/DoctorWhoS31E01TheEleventhHour a crack]] [[Recap/DoctorWhoS31E12ThePandoricaOpens in the wall]] [[Recap/DoctorWhoS31E13TheBigBang of a building]]]].
* HaveWeMetYet: When Rostia makes her claim that "there can't be two of [the Doctor]", The Doctor tries to figure out ''which one'' she's referring to:
--> "But... which one? Is it the one with the scarf? Celery? Recorder? Any of these things ringing a bell?"
* ResurrectionSickness: Like in "The Eleventh Hour", the Doctor still has the same post-regeneration problems he had then, like the cramps. [[spoiler: Which really comes to bite him in the ass when running away from a Cyberman in Chapter 3.]]
--> "[[{{Understatement}} Oh blimey, this is]] ''[[{{Understatement}} not]]'' [[{{Understatement}} a good time.]]"
* SkewedPriorities: The Doctor decided to put off persuing the Cyberking... so that he can find some clothes in a school.
* TheStationsOfTheCanon: The Doctor still finds his signature outfit (this time in a school), and [[spoiler: the cracks still exist]].
* TalkativeLoon: True to form, the Eleventh Doctor still has the problem for talking too much. A good example is during the scene mentioned for HaveWeMetYet, where the Doctor keeping going on about his past selves, all while ignoring the ''shaking, banging door''.
A Fanfiction.net member called garfieldodie was upset with how [[Recap/DoctorWhoNSS4E13JourneysEnd "Jorney's End"]] had written [[LaserGuidedAmnesia Donna]] out of the show. So, he decided to [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6988647/1/Always_Another_Way redo the ending]] so that [[FixFic Donna didn't have to leave with her memory erased.]]
The catch?
[[HeroicSacrifice The Tenth Doctor ended up regenerating in order to save her.]]
From there, he and Donna continue adventuring, making their first stop together in [[Recap/DoctorWhoNSS4E14TheNextDoctor Victorian Englind, Christmas eve]].
And thus, we have [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7011869/1/The_Next_Doctors "The Next Doctors"]], which is in short "The Next Doctor" but starring The Eleventh Doctor and Donna Noble. How much of a difference does this make? Let's find out...
(It is recommended you watch "The Next Doctors" or go [[Recap/DoctorWhoNSS4E14TheNextDoctor here]] first before reading this story/page.)
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!! This fanfic provides examples of:
* BlatantLies: The narrator explains how the Doctor hated the cheers he has getting for what he did... except not really:
--> "He hated it so much he smiled back and waved. He was so revolted he rang the bell joyously. [[LampshadeHanging Okay, maybe he liked it a little, but not much at all.]]
* ForWantOfANail: The most notable difference shown here is in the [=CyberKing=]'s destruction, where instead of it being sent into the Time Vortex so it can self-destruct harmlessly, [[spoiler: Miss Hartigan [[HeroicSacrifice willingly]] sends the Cyberking away.]] Notibly, this is similar to the alternate version of the scene that Davies envisioned for the actual episode.
* Forshadowing: Near the end of the story, the Doctor notices [[spoiler: [[Recap/DoctorWhoS31E01TheEleventhHour a crack]] [[Recap/DoctorWhoS31E12ThePandoricaOpens in the wall]] [[Recap/DoctorWhoS31E13TheBigBang of a building]]]].
* HaveWeMetYet: When Rostia makes her claim that "there can't be two of [the Doctor]", The Doctor tries to figure out ''which one'' she's referring to:
--> "But... which one? Is it the one with the scarf? Celery? Recorder? Any of these things ringing a bell?"
* ResurrectionSickness: Like in "The Eleventh Hour", the Doctor still has the same post-regeneration problems he had then, like the cramps. [[spoiler: Which really comes to bite him in the ass when running away from a Cyberman in Chapter 3.]]
--> "[[{{Understatement}} Oh blimey, this is]] ''[[{{Understatement}} not]]'' [[{{Understatement}} a good time.]]"
* SkewedPriorities: The Doctor decided to put off persuing the Cyberking... so that he can find some clothes in a school.
* TheStationsOfTheCanon: The Doctor still finds his signature outfit (this time in a school), and [[spoiler: the cracks still exist]].
* TalkativeLoon: True to form, the Eleventh Doctor still has the problem for talking too much. A good example is during the scene mentioned for HaveWeMetYet, where the Doctor keeping going on about his past selves, all while ignoring the ''shaking, banging door''.
