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* AnythingThatMoves:
** John Hart and the poodle are regularly mentioned.
** Jack, naturally - both of them.
** John Hart and the poodle are regularly mentioned.
** Jack, naturally - both of them.
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* BadassAdorable: Team Torchwood as kids.
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* MistakenForGay: Jack is scandalized that anyone thinks he would restrict himself to [[AnythingThatMoves one gender]].
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* MistakenForGay: Jack is scandalized that anyone thinks he would restrict himself to [[AnythingThatMoves [[ExtremeOmnisexual one gender]].
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* NoteToSelf: Jack to Team Torchwood before they go back in time, then Gwen in the Adam chapter to assure herself not to worry about her lost memory.
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* NoteToSelf: NoteToSelf:
** Jack to Team Torchwood before they go back in time, then Gwen in the Adam chapter to assure herself not to worry about her lost memory.
** Jack to Team Torchwood before they go back in time, then Gwen in the Adam chapter to assure herself not to worry about her lost memory.
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* OhCrap: Everyone in the April Fools chapter.
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* OhCrap: OhCrap:
** Everyone in the April Fools chapter.
** Everyone in the April Fools chapter.
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** Also [[spoiler: Umbridge]]. The narration of [[spoiler: her arrest]] includes this gem:
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** Also [[spoiler: Umbridge]]. The narration of [[spoiler: her arrest]] includes this gem:
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* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking:
** Dumbledore, Jack and Voldemort - the former and latter are exceptionally powerful wizards, while Jack is a formidable fighter and an immortal.
** Harry to a certain degree as head of the DA, as he's the single most able duellist in their membership, if not the school.
** Dumbledore, Jack and Voldemort - the former and latter are exceptionally powerful wizards, while Jack is a formidable fighter and an immortal.
** Harry to a certain degree as head of the DA, as he's the single most able duellist in their membership, if not the school.
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* RankScalesWithAsskicking:
** Dumbledore, Jack and Voldemort - the former and latter are exceptionally powerful wizards, while Jack is a formidable fighter and an immortal.
** Harry to a certain degree as head of the DA, as he's the single most able duellist in their membership, if not the school.
** Dumbledore, Jack and Voldemort - the former and latter are exceptionally powerful wizards, while Jack is a formidable fighter and an immortal.
** Harry to a certain degree as head of the DA, as he's the single most able duellist in their membership, if not the school.
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* FiveManBand: There are a couple of these.
** Harry and Friends.
*** TheHero: Harry
*** TheLancer: Jack, who doubles as a BigBrotherMentor.
*** TheSmartGuy: Hermione/Ianto
*** TheBigGuy: Ron
*** TheChick: Hermione
** Team Torchwood.
*** TheHero: Jack. He [[{{Lampshade}} lampshades]] this to Harry after the Graveyard, saying he can play the hero to his team when he wants to.
*** TheLancer: Gwen/Owen
*** TheSmartGuy: Tosh/Owen (the latter skilled in potions and medical knowledge)
*** TheBigGuy: Ianto, as the most skilled wizard out of all of them.
*** TheChick: Gwen
*** TokenEvilTeammate: Draco (for a given value of evil).
** Harry and Friends.
*** TheHero: Harry
*** TheLancer: Jack, who doubles as a BigBrotherMentor.
*** TheSmartGuy: Hermione/Ianto
*** TheBigGuy: Ron
*** TheChick: Hermione
** Team Torchwood.
*** TheHero: Jack. He [[{{Lampshade}} lampshades]] this to Harry after the Graveyard, saying he can play the hero to his team when he wants to.
*** TheLancer: Gwen/Owen
*** TheSmartGuy: Tosh/Owen (the latter skilled in potions and medical knowledge)
*** TheBigGuy: Ianto, as the most skilled wizard out of all of them.
*** TheChick: Gwen
*** TokenEvilTeammate: Draco (for a given value of evil).
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* NoodleIncident: A given with Jack, such as a time John Hart wore a suit during a murder trial (so significant that the two Jacks agree to use that when choosing a face for the one responsible for a dark event in Jack’s fake childhood). Jack aside, a few examples of these taking place at Hogwarts are also mentioned, such as the time James and Sirius somehow turned the Slytherin table in the Great Hall into a herd of badgers, or how Sirius is listed as a "sex offender" for streaking at a Quidditch match when he was nineteenth (something Jack notes he might have done himself).
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* NoodleIncident: A given with Jack, such as a time John Hart wore a suit during a murder trial (so significant that the two Jacks agree to use that when choosing a face for the one responsible for a dark event in Jack’s fake childhood). Jack aside, a few examples of these taking place at Hogwarts are also mentioned, such as the time James and Sirius somehow turned the Slytherin table in the Great Hall into a herd of badgers, or how Sirius is listed as a "sex offender" for streaking at a Quidditch match when he was nineteenth nineteen (something Jack notes he might have done himself).
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* WeaponOfChoice: Jack's Webley and Owen's fork.
** For everyone, their wands.
* WhamEpisode: Chapter 113.
** For everyone, their wands.
* WhamEpisode: Chapter 113.
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** For everyone, their wands.
*
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** There are semi-frequent references to ''Literature/ThePictureOfDorianGray,'' with Jack being compared (or comparing himself) to the titular character. Dumbledore takes it UpToEleven, trolling Jack from beyond the grave by referring to him in his will as 'Jack Dorian Harkness'.
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** There are semi-frequent references to ''Literature/ThePictureOfDorianGray,'' with Jack being compared (or comparing himself) to the titular character. Dumbledore takes it UpToEleven, up to eleven, trolling Jack from beyond the grave by referring to him in his will as 'Jack Dorian Harkness'.
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* AscendedExtra: Archie, head of Torchwood 2.
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* AscendedExtra: Archie, head of Torchwood 2. For one thing, he's [[spoiler: a wizard]].
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* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: Dumbledore, Jack and Voldemort. Harry to a certain degree as head of the DA.
* AnythingThatMoves: John Hart and the poodle is regularly mentioned. Jack [[note]]refers to both past and present Jack, who will be otherwise distinguished if a trope applies to only one of them, of course.[[/note]]
* AnythingThatMoves: John Hart and the poodle is regularly mentioned. Jack [[note]]refers to both past and present Jack, who will be otherwise distinguished if a trope applies to only one of them, of course.[[/note]]
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* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: AuthorityEqualsAsskicking:
** Dumbledore, Jack andVoldemort. Voldemort - the former and latter are exceptionally powerful wizards, while Jack is a formidable fighter and an immortal.
** Harry to a certain degree as head of theDA.
DA, as he's the single most able duellist in their membership, if not the school.
*AnythingThatMoves: AnythingThatMoves:
** John Hart and the poodleis are regularly mentioned. Jack [[note]]refers to both past and present mentioned.
** Jack,who will be otherwise distinguished if a trope applies to only one naturally - both of them, of course.[[/note]]them.
** Dumbledore, Jack and
** Harry to a certain degree as head of the
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** John Hart and the poodle
** Jack,
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: Ianto. Just because he happens to be in Hufflepuff and is apparently harmless doesn't mean he isn't extremely dangerous, especially when he shows just how easily he could poison the entire school.
** Everyone smart is absolutely terrified of Ianto.
** Jack. People underestimate him at their peril.
** Everyone smart is absolutely terrified of Ianto.
** Jack. People underestimate him at their peril.
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: BewareTheNiceOnes:
** Ianto. Just because he happens to be in Hufflepuff and is apparently harmless doesn't mean he isn't extremely dangerous, especially when he shows just how easily he could poison the entireschool.
** Everyoneschool. In fact, everyone smart is absolutely terrified of Ianto.
**Jack. Jack is pretty friendly and very charming. People underestimate him at their peril.peril, as the smarter characters occasionally get a glimpse at something very dangerous underneath.
** Harry's friendly and goodnatured. He's also an exceptional duellist and has a ruthless streak.
** Ianto. Just because he happens to be in Hufflepuff and is apparently harmless doesn't mean he isn't extremely dangerous, especially when he shows just how easily he could poison the entire
** Everyone
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** Harry's friendly and goodnatured. He's also an exceptional duellist and has a ruthless streak.
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* CloudCuckoolander: Luna.
** Actually, This is how Luna is portrayed in a LOT of Fanfics, and the movies too, if I'm remembering right...
** Actually, This is how Luna is portrayed in a LOT of Fanfics, and the movies too, if I'm remembering right...
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* CloudCuckoolander: Luna.
** Actually, This is how Luna is portrayed in a LOT of Fanfics, and the movies too, if I'm remembering right...Luna, as per usual.
** Actually, This is how Luna is portrayed in a LOT of Fanfics, and the movies too, if I'm remembering right...
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* CreepyChild: Team Torchwood tend to come off as this to those not in the know thanks to their being OlderThanTheyLook, their [[BlackComedy sense of humour]] and their habit of communicating without apparently saying a word. As a result, Draco Malfoy at one point internally notes that he'd learned from experience that the funnier Team Torchwood find something, the less he wants to know what it is.
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* CreepyChild: Team Torchwood tend to come off as this to those not in the know thanks to their being know. Given that they're all OlderThanTheyLook, this is unsurprising, though it's cemented by their [[BlackComedy sense of humour]] and their habit of communicating without apparently saying a word. As a result, Draco Malfoy at one point internally notes that he'd learned from experience that the funnier Team Torchwood find something, the less he wants to know what it is.
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** A brief one features when Narcissa is appointed as Harry's "counsellor" by Umbridge in response to [[spoiler:accusations that Dumbledore has abused Harry]]; Narcissa makes it clear that they both know nothing happened and she doesn't like Umbridge any more than Harry does.
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** A brief one features when Narcissa is appointed as Harry's "counsellor" by Umbridge in response to [[spoiler:accusations that Dumbledore has abused Harry]]; Narcissa makes it clear that they both know nothing happened and she doesn't like Umbridge any more than Harry does. More to the point, political differences aside, she intends to approach it entirely professionally - apparently, she is actually a counsellor, and good enough that Harry comes to like her.
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* FriendlyEnemy: When Harry is forced to attend a ‘counselling session’ with Narcissa Malfoy in response to [[spoiler:claims that Dumbledore sexually abused him]], they both agree that they aren’t exactly on the same side, but at least Narcissa won’t ask Harry awkward questions about something he never wants to think about even if it never happened.
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* FriendlyEnemy: When Harry is forced to attend a ‘counselling session’ with Narcissa Malfoy in response to [[spoiler:claims that Dumbledore sexually abused him]], they both agree that they aren’t exactly on the same side, but at least Narcissa - who approaches it entirely professionally - won’t ask Harry awkward questions about something he never wants to think about even if it never happened.
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** There are semi-frequent references to ''Literature/ThePictureOfDorianGray,'' with Jack being compared (or comparing himself) to the titular character.
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** There are semi-frequent references to ''Literature/ThePictureOfDorianGray,'' with Jack being compared (or comparing himself) to the titular character. Dumbledore takes it UpToEleven, trolling Jack from beyond the grave by referring to him in his will as 'Jack Dorian Harkness'.
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* SuperReflexes: Jack.
* SuperSpeed: Jack, connected to his SuperReflexes. He's not exactly the Flash, but he moves a fair bit faster than should be possible.
* SuperSpeed: Jack, connected to his SuperReflexes. He's not exactly the Flash, but he moves a fair bit faster than should be possible.
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* SuperReflexes: Jack.Jack, to a limited extent.
* SuperSpeed: Jack, connected to his SuperReflexes. He's not exactly the Flash, but he moves a fair bit faster than should bepossible.possible for an ordinary human.
* SuperSpeed: Jack, connected to his SuperReflexes. He's not exactly the Flash, but he moves a fair bit faster than should be
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* FunnyAneurysmMoment: InUniverse. Jack jokes lightly about Dumbledore's attempts at getting in his head, after the third task, comparing it to sexual assault. Then Harry sort of curls up and says Voldemort essentially {{mind rape}}d him.
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* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: Jack's Torchwood contract includes the phrases "''high-risk situation''", "''dangerous artifact''", "''hostile forces''" and "''terrible flirt.''"
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* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: ArsonMurderAndJaywalking:
** Jack's Torchwood contract includes the phrases "''high-risk situation''", "''dangerous artifact''", "''hostile forces''" and "''terrible flirt.''"''"
** Of wizarding Britain’s four living sex offenders, Sirius just went streaking at a Quidditch match and Aberforth charmed goats to talk and says it was consensual, while Greyback and Dolohov are acknowledged as monsters.
** Jack's Torchwood contract includes the phrases "''high-risk situation''", "''dangerous artifact''", "''hostile forces''" and "''terrible flirt.
** Of wizarding Britain’s four living sex offenders, Sirius just went streaking at a Quidditch match and Aberforth charmed goats to talk and says it was consensual, while Greyback and Dolohov are acknowledged as monsters.
* EvenEvilHasStandards: When the Slytherins learn one of their own [[spoiler:inspired the rumour that Dumbledore sexually molested Harry]], basically everyone else in the House all express distaste at that lie, as many of them still respected the Headmaster even if they didn’t like him.
** Jack makes it clear that he’d never do goats, even if they were able to give consent, after hearing the reports about Aberforth.
* FriendlyEnemy: When Harry is forced to attend a ‘counselling session’ with Narcissa Malfoy in response to [[spoiler:claims that Dumbledore sexually abused him]], they both agree that they aren’t exactly on the same side, but at least Narcissa won’t ask Harry awkward questions about something he never wants to think about even if it never happened.
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Jack, by his refusal to [[spoiler: let Harry die in order to destroy the last horcrux]] accidentally kicks off a monumentally awful BadFuture.
* NoodleIncident: A given with Jack, such as a time John Hart wore a suit during a murder trial (so significant that the two Jacks agree to use that when choosing a face for the one responsible for a dark event in Jack’s fake childhood). Jack aside, a few examples of these taking place at Hogwarts are also mentioned, such as the time James and Sirius somehow turned the Slytherin table in the Great Hall into a herd of badgers.
* NoodleIncident: A given with Jack, such as a time John Hart wore a suit during a murder trial (so significant that the two Jacks agree to use that when choosing a face for the one responsible for a dark event in Jack’s fake childhood). Jack aside, a few examples of these taking place at Hogwarts are also mentioned, such as the time James and Sirius somehow turned the Slytherin table in the Great Hall into a herd of badgers.
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: NiceJobBreakingItHero:
** Jack starting a rumour about Voldemort having sexual relations with the Death Eaters inspires a Slytherin student to create [[spoiler:a similar rumour about Dumbledore and Harry]].
** Jack, by his refusal to [[spoiler: let Harry die in order to destroy the last horcrux]] accidentally kicks off a monumentally awful BadFuture.
* NoodleIncident: A given with Jack, such as a time John Hart wore a suit during a murder trial (so significant that the two Jacks agree to use that when choosing a face for the one responsible for a dark event in Jack’s fake childhood). Jack aside, a few examples of these taking place at Hogwarts are also mentioned, such as the time James and Sirius somehow turned the Slytherin table in the Great Hall into a herd ofbadgers.badgers, or how Sirius is listed as a "sex offender" for streaking at a Quidditch match when he was nineteenth (something Jack notes he might have done himself).
** Jack starting a rumour about Voldemort having sexual relations with the Death Eaters inspires a Slytherin student to create [[spoiler:a similar rumour about Dumbledore and Harry]].
** Jack, by his refusal to [[spoiler: let Harry die in order to destroy the last horcrux]] accidentally kicks off a monumentally awful BadFuture.
* NoodleIncident: A given with Jack, such as a time John Hart wore a suit during a murder trial (so significant that the two Jacks agree to use that when choosing a face for the one responsible for a dark event in Jack’s fake childhood). Jack aside, a few examples of these taking place at Hogwarts are also mentioned, such as the time James and Sirius somehow turned the Slytherin table in the Great Hall into a herd of
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: Since Jack is the ‘official’ Hogwarts champion rather than Cedric Diggory, Cedric doesn’t get killed by Wormtail.
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** A brief one features when Narcissa is appointed as Harry's "counsellor" by Umbridge in response to [[spoiler:accusations that Dumbledore has abused Harry]]; Narcissa makes it clear that they both know nothing happened and she doesn't like Umbridge any more than Harry does.
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** One chapter is called "[[Literature/TheDemonHeadmaster The Demon Headmistress]]", and someone (apparently Owen) has told some of the students to say "The Headmistress is a marvelous woman and this is the best school I've ever been to!" as a near-direct quote from the book.
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* BigDamnHero: Luna Lovegood gets a small version of this when she distracts a bully who was attacking Tosh long enough for Tosh to get the drop on the bully in turn.
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* TheCloudcuckoolanderWasRight: When Tosh starts reading the ''Quibbler'', she notes that a few of the creatures discussed in the magazine are actually aliens, and also finds the magazine’s arithmancy puzzles more challenging than those in the Daily Prophet.
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* EveryoneHasStandards: Someone even Jack won't do? Umbridge. Owen and Tosh revel in the incredibility of this.
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* EveryoneHasStandards: Someone EveryoneHasStandards:
** Discussed regarding Jack’s sexual activities; when the gang are contemplating going back to the flat of Jack’s past self for their first Christmas holidays, Jack observes that his younger self might be willing to seduce Tosh if she goes back on her own, as while he wouldn’t do anything without consent and wouldn’t go after someone too young, Tosh is more mature than the eleven-year-old she currently appears to be and ‘consent’ includes seduction while under the influence of Jack’s 51st-century pheromones. Ianto does privately reflect that Jack tries to conform to the standards of whatever era he’s visiting, and people are more resistant to such pheromones in the future so it's not that serious an issue, but it’s still enough that the group decide to stay at Hogwarts for the moment.
** Umbridge is so hideous that even Jackwon't do? Umbridge. reflects that he would rather kiss a Weevil than do ''anything'' with her. Owen and Tosh revel in the incredibility of this.the idea that there's someone Jack wouldn't do.
** Discussed regarding Jack’s sexual activities; when the gang are contemplating going back to the flat of Jack’s past self for their first Christmas holidays, Jack observes that his younger self might be willing to seduce Tosh if she goes back on her own, as while he wouldn’t do anything without consent and wouldn’t go after someone too young, Tosh is more mature than the eleven-year-old she currently appears to be and ‘consent’ includes seduction while under the influence of Jack’s 51st-century pheromones. Ianto does privately reflect that Jack tries to conform to the standards of whatever era he’s visiting, and people are more resistant to such pheromones in the future so it's not that serious an issue, but it’s still enough that the group decide to stay at Hogwarts for the moment.
** Umbridge is so hideous that even Jack
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* TeamMom: Gwen and Mrs Weasley.
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* TeamMom: Gwen takes on this role despite being de-aged, and Mrs Weasley.Weasley obviously takes on this role as normal.
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** Dumbledore, postmortem. Jack has never taken a middle name, so Dumbledore, aware of Jack's immortality, having a firm grasp on Jack's personality, and with tongue apparently firmly in cheek, gives Jack one when leaving him his Tarot cards in his will: [[Literature/ThePictureOfDorianGray Dorian.]] Jack, recognising the reference, is not amused.
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** Dumbledore, postmortem. Jack has never taken a middle name, so Dumbledore, aware of Jack's immortality, having a firm grasp on Jack's personality, and with tongue apparently firmly in cheek, gives Jack one when leaving him his Tarot cards in his will: [[Literature/ThePictureOfDorianGray Dorian.]] Dorian]]. Jack, recognising the reference, is not amused.
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: Slytherin Theodore Nott is opposed to the pure-blood philosophies of his house because such a philosophy led to his squib sister being killed when she was four years old and most records of her existence subsequently erased; add in the fact that Nott is able to see Thestrals...
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: DarkAndTroubledPast:
**Jack, naturally; among other referred moments, he mentions how he saw his best friend get tortured to death as a child, and adapts that to be the incident that caused him to have such a bad reaction to Dementors on the initial train-ride.
** Slytherin Theodore Nott is opposed to the pure-blood philosophies of his house because such a philosophy led to his squib sister being killed when she was four years old and most records of her existence subsequently erased; add in the fact that Nott is able to see Thestrals...
**Jack, naturally; among other referred moments, he mentions how he saw his best friend get tortured to death as a child, and adapts that to be the incident that caused him to have such a bad reaction to Dementors on the initial train-ride.
** Slytherin Theodore Nott is opposed to the pure-blood philosophies of his house because such a philosophy led to his squib sister being killed when she was four years old and most records of her existence subsequently erased; add in the fact that Nott is able to see Thestrals...
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* INeedToGoIronMyDog: Jack and Harry get out of taking photographs of the Triwizard Champions when Jack sarcastically claims to be a vampire and Harry protetss that he's allergic to the smoke used in flash photography (Krum refuses to be photographed without all four champions and Fleur just leaves); ironically, Skeeter prints these claims as true rather than realise Jack and Harry were just joking.
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* INeedToGoIronMyDog: Jack and Harry get out of taking photographs of the Triwizard Champions when Jack sarcastically claims to be a vampire and Harry protetss protests that he's allergic to the smoke used in flash photography (Krum refuses to be photographed without all four champions present and Fleur just leaves); ironically, Skeeter prints these claims as true rather than realise Jack and Harry were just joking.
* MagicAIsMagicA: A minor but still significant example; Jack finds it easy to navigate around Hogwarts by adapting his experience from learning his way around the TARDIS while he travelled with the Doctor, as both are essentially semi-sentient buildings with shifting interior architecture.
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* NoodleIncident: A given with Jack, but a few at Hogwarts are also mentioned, such as the time James and Sirius somehow turned the Slytherin table in the Great Hall into a herd of badgers.
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* NoodleIncident: A given with Jack, but such as a time John Hart wore a suit during a murder trial (so significant that the two Jacks agree to use that when choosing a face for the one responsible for a dark event in Jack’s fake childhood). Jack aside, a few examples of these taking place at Hogwarts are also mentioned, such as the time James and Sirius somehow turned the Slytherin table in the Great Hall into a herd of badgers.
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* OneSceneWonder: Agatha Harkness, whose sole appearance has her effortlessly put several Death Eaters in their place with some well-chosen words, scare Jack into a Hogwarts carriage, and reveal that she's discovered quite a lot about him, and before departing, hints that she knows about [[Series/TorchwoodMiracleDay Three Families]] and something of their plans, enough to know that it's likely a fate worse than any she could cook up for Jack (who she blames for descendant's death. [[MakeItLookLikeAnAccident Apparently the training accident, the night after Jack kissed the original Jack in public, was no accident).]]
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* OneSceneWonder: Agatha Harkness, whose sole appearance has her effortlessly put several Death Eaters in their place with some well-chosen words, scare Jack into a Hogwarts carriage, and reveal that she's discovered quite a lot about him, and before departing, hints that she knows about [[Series/TorchwoodMiracleDay the Three Families]] and something of their plans, enough to know that it's likely a fate worse than any she could cook up for Jack (who she blames for her descendant's death. [[MakeItLookLikeAnAccident Apparently the training accident, the night after Jack kissed the original Jack in public, was no accident).]]
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* OperationJealousy: Ginny tries to pull one on Harry via Jack. Jack sees straight through this, and gives her some fatherly advice. Ginny and Harry hook up. [[ChessMaster Just as]] [[TheMatchmaker Jack planned]].
* PreAsskickingOneLiner: An awesome one in chapter 94, when Jack takes on Voldemort.
* PreAsskickingOneLiner: An awesome one in chapter 94, when Jack takes on Voldemort.
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* OneSceneWonder: Agatha Harkness, whose sole appearance has her effortlessly put several Death Eaters in their place with some well-chosen words, scare Jack into a Hogwarts carriage, and reveal that she's discovered quite a lot about him, and before departing, hints that she knows about [[Series/TorchwoodMiracleDay Three Families]] and something of their plans, enough to know that it's likely a fate worse than any she could cook up for Jack (who she blames for descendant's death. [[MakeItLookLikeAnAccident Apparently the training accident, the night after Jack kissed the original Jack in public, was no accident).]]
* OperationJealousy: Ginny tries to pull one on Harry via Jack. Jack sees straight through this, and gives her some fatherly advice. Ginny and Harry hook up.[[ChessMaster Just as]] [[TheMatchmaker Just as Jack planned]].
* PreAsskickingOneLiner:An awesome one in chapter 94, when When Jack takes on Voldemort.Voldemort in the air during the Battle of the Seven Potters.
* OperationJealousy: Ginny tries to pull one on Harry via Jack. Jack sees straight through this, and gives her some fatherly advice. Ginny and Harry hook up.
* PreAsskickingOneLiner:
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* PopCulturalOsmosisFailure: On a few occasions the Torchwood team make reference to films that will only come out in the future, such as ''Film/MenInBlack'' or ''Franchise/PiratesOfTheCaribbean'', but fortunately on both occasions there is a more 'conventional' explanation (Hermione assumed Jack was referring to the original comics and some Ravenclaws assumed it was just a reference to the original myth).
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* PopCulturalOsmosisFailure: On a few occasions the Torchwood team make reference to films that will only come out in the future, such as ''Film/MenInBlack'' or ''Franchise/PiratesOfTheCaribbean'', but fortunately on both occasions there is a more 'conventional' explanation (Hermione (respectively, Hermione assumed Jack was referring to the original comics comics, and some Ravenclaws assumed it was just a reference to the original Flying Dutchman myth).
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* ShoutOut: Torchwood One are working on ''Project: Rebirth''. And Jack has mentioned in the past that they tried to build a supersoldier out of him in the 70's. [[HilarityEnsues Apparently it went hilariously wrong.]]
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* ShoutOut: ShoutOut:
** Torchwood One are working on ''Project: Rebirth''. And Jack has mentioned in the past that they tried to build a supersoldier out of him in the 70's. [[HilarityEnsues Apparently it went hilariously wrong.]]]]
** Everyone assumes that Jack is related to [[Characters/ScarletWitch Agatha Harkness]], thanks to his surname and apparently American accent. He's not - but as it turns out, the original bearer of that name was...
** Torchwood One are working on ''Project: Rebirth''. And Jack has mentioned in the past that they tried to build a supersoldier out of him in the 70's. [[HilarityEnsues Apparently it went hilariously wrong.
** Everyone assumes that Jack is related to [[Characters/ScarletWitch Agatha Harkness]], thanks to his surname and apparently American accent. He's not - but as it turns out, the original bearer of that name was...
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* CassandraTruth: A very literal example; for one Divination lesson, Jack writes that [[Recap/DoctorWhoS29E13LastOfTheTimeLords the world will end Friday 2 March, 2008, at 8:02 a.m. and nobody would notice]].
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* NoodleIncident: A given with Jack.
* NoteToSelf: Jack to Team Torchwood, then Gwen in the Adam chapter.
* NoteToSelf: Jack to Team Torchwood, then Gwen in the Adam chapter.
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* NoodleIncident: A given with Jack.
Jack, but a few at Hogwarts are also mentioned, such as the time James and Sirius somehow turned the Slytherin table in the Great Hall into a herd of badgers.
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* PopCultureOsmosisFailure: On a few occasions the Torchwood team make reference to films that will only come out in the future, such as ''Film/MenInBlack'' or ''Franchise/PiratesOfTheCaribbean'', but fortunately on both occasions there is a more 'conventional' explanation (Hermione assumed Jack was referring to the original comics and some Ravenclaws assumed it was just a reference to the original myth).
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* PopCultureOsmosisFailure: PopCulturalOsmosisFailure: On a few occasions the Torchwood team make reference to films that will only come out in the future, such as ''Film/MenInBlack'' or ''Franchise/PiratesOfTheCaribbean'', but fortunately on both occasions there is a more 'conventional' explanation (Hermione assumed Jack was referring to the original comics and some Ravenclaws assumed it was just a reference to the original myth).
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* SecretTestOfCharacter: Dumbledore appears to consider Jack as having passed one when he asks Jack to teach Harry in mental defence and Jack asks if Dumbledore really wants ''him'' to train Harry by showing the headmaster some of the darkest parts of his past; as Dumbledore observes, Jack was just as repelled by those memories as he was, which tells Dumbledore everything he needs to know about what Jack is as a person.
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* INeedToGoIronMyDog: Jack and Harry get out of taking photographs of the Triwizard Champions when Jack sarcastically claims to be a vampire and Harry protetss that he's allergic to the smoke used in flash photography (Krum refuses to be photographed without all four champions and Fleur just leaves); ironically, Skeeter prints these claims as true rather than realise Jack and Harry were just joking.
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In [[http://www.''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7151727/1/The_Magic_b_Of_bTorchwood_b net/s/7151727/1/The_Magic_Of_Torchwood The Magic of Torchwood]], Torchwood]]'', Team Torchwood (Jack, Ianto, Owen, Tosh, Gwen, continuity compatible until after 'Adam') find an unusual artifact, which de-ages them to 11 years old. Then they receive a NoteToSelf from Jack, which says that they are about to experience something wonderful. The artifact, a crystal, takes them to Jack's apartment during the Summer of 1993, whereupon they receive Hogwarts letters. Let the magic begin...
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* BiTheWay: Jack, since no alien species have turned up to provide credence to his [[AnythingThatMoves omnisexuality]]. Then again, [[spoiler: he did flirt with the dragon...]]
** Ianto Jones.
** Theo Nott.
** Draco Malfoy.
*** In a bonus scene, Jack describes Draco as straight, even while seducing him.
*** This would make Draco's interest in Jack an IfItsYouItsOkay situation, not a BiTheWay.
** Harry. Sort of. He's perfectly happy to kiss Jack just to see what kissing is like, but Jack dissuades him because Harry is LikeASonToMe.
** Ianto Jones.
** Theo Nott.
** Draco Malfoy.
*** In a bonus scene, Jack describes Draco as straight, even while seducing him.
*** This would make Draco's interest in Jack an IfItsYouItsOkay situation, not a BiTheWay.
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* GoodWithNumbers: Toshiko quickly demonstrates such a strong skill with numbers that she can keep track of the cost of their five wands ''and'' translate that into muggle currency as well, prompting Ollivander to observe that she will certainly find Arithmancy interesting when she gets the chance to take it.
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** John Hart and [[spoiler: Salazar Slytherin]] get on disturbingly well, with a StraightManAndWiseGuy routine that horrifies practically everyone.
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* ScaryBlackMan: Kingsley, according to Gwen.
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** Hermione and Ron belong together, according to the Clarity Concoction.
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*** Even [[spoiler: John Hart]] is impressed, and disturbed.
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** He can cast the Killing Curse. This is not something easily done, and it requires a certain sort of hatred.
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** When it comes to Team Torchwood, Draco Malfoy inwardly notes that "the funnier this group of children found something, the less he wanted to know what it was."
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** He can castup, by casting the Killing Curse. This is not something easily done, and it requires a certain sort of hatred.
*** Evenhatred, to the point where even [[spoiler: John Hart]] is impressed, and disturbed.
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Having started as a fairly standard crossover between the two fandoms, following the path of the Harry Potter books, it becomes considerably more complex, with the addition of several unexpected characters, including [[spoiler: Salazar Slytherin]].characters. More generally, Team Torchwood don't immediately get involved with Harry and company, and have their own goals and their own adventures, and they still work with the non-magical world, usually via Jack's past self.
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* ContrivedCoincidence: Time travel is involved, so this is perhaps unsurprising.
* CreepyChild: Team Torchwood tend to come off as this to those not in the know thanks to their being OlderThanTheyLook, their [[BlackComedy sense of humour]] and their habit of communicating without apparently saying aword, with word. As a result, Draco Malfoy's inner monologue Malfoy at one point remarking internally notes that he'd learned from experience that the funnier Team Torchwood find something, the less he wants to know what it is.
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* DoingInTheWizard: [[spoiler: John Hart]]'s explanation of magic as understood by the 51st century. [[spoiler: Yes, John Hart is a wizard, and a powerful one. Tremble ye mortals!]]
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* FakingTheDead: Team Torchwood pull this on [[spoiler: Draco Malfoy]].
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* FakingTheDead: Team Torchwood pull this on [[spoiler: Draco Malfoy]].
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* HiddenDepths: It Apparently, it takes a special kind of hatred to cast the killing curse, with Lucius Malfoy grudgingly admitting that he can't do it. Jack can, which ever even John Hart, a renowned sociopath John Hart expresses shock at.sociopath, is shocked by.
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* OperationJealousy: Ginny tries to pull one on Harry via Jack. Jack sees through this, and gives her some fatherly advice. Ginny and Harry hook up. [[ChessMaster Just as]] [[TheMatchmaker Jack planned]].
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** One of the songs that [[spoiler: John Hart]] enchanted the senior Slytherins to sing in the equivalent of ''Deathly Hallows'' (others including songs in flawless 18th century French, then Latin, about how their parents were siblings and 'something disgusting about House Elves'), is [[{{Literature/Discworld}} The Hedgehog Song]], perhaps better known by its constant refrain [[BestialityIsDepraved "But the Hedgehog can never be buggered at all."]]
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** One of the songs that [[spoiler: John Hart]] enchanted the senior Slytherins to sing in the equivalent of ''Deathly Hallows'' (others including songs (others, in flawless 18th century French, then Latin, are about how their parents were siblings and 'something disgusting about House Elves'), is [[{{Literature/Discworld}} The Hedgehog Song]], perhaps better known by its constant refrain refrain, [[BestialityIsDepraved "But the Hedgehog can never be buggered at all."]]
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** Dumbledore. Jack has never taken a middle name. So Dumbledore, knowing of Jack's immortality, having a firm grasp of Jack's personality, and with tongue apparently firmly in cheek, gives Jack one when leaving him his Tarot cards in his will: [[Literature/ThePictureOfDorianGray Dorian.]] Jack, recognising the reference, is not amused.
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** Dumbledore. Dumbledore, postmortem. Jack has never taken a middle name. So name, so Dumbledore, knowing aware of Jack's immortality, having a firm grasp of on Jack's personality, and with tongue apparently firmly in cheek, gives Jack one when leaving him his Tarot cards in his will: [[Literature/ThePictureOfDorianGray Dorian.]] Jack, recognising the reference, is not amused.
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** Be warned,At times, though like her colleague Creator/NimbusLlewelyn, she tends to use ExactWords. A ''lot.''
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** One of the songs that [[spoiler: John Hart]] enchanted the senior Slytherins to sing in the equivalent of ''Deathly Hallows'' (others including songs in flawless 18th century French, then Latin, about how their parents were siblings and 'something disgusting about House Elves'), is [[Series/{{Discworld}} [[{{Literature/Discworld}} The Hedgehog Song]], perhaps better known by its constant refrain [[BestialityIsDepraved "But the Hedgehog can never be buggered at all."]]
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* HiddenDepths: It takes a special kind of hatred to cast the killing curse, with Lucius Malfoy grudgingly admitting that he can't do it. [[NightmareFuel Jack can]], can, which ever renowned sociopath John Hart expresses shock at.