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* AdaptationInducedPlothole: Not the author's fault, since this is relatively new information (as of March 2012), but TetsuyaNomura [[WordOfGod revealed]] that none of the other Organization members' [[TheHeartless Heartless counterparts]] were humanoid except for that of Xehanort, and at least many had been killed coincidentally during the course of the series. There is probably a logical explanation for how the KingdomHearts series can continue, but it has yet to be determined as of the current time.
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* AdaptationInducedPlothole: Not the author's fault, since this is relatively new information (as of March 2012), but TetsuyaNomura [[WordOfGod revealed]] that none of the other Organization members' [[TheHeartless Heartless counterparts]] were humanoid except for that of Xehanort, and at least many had been killed coincidentally during the course of the series. There is probably a logical explanation for how the KingdomHearts ''VideoGame/KingdomHearts'' series can continue, but it has yet to be determined as of the current time.
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** Alex's case is kinda strange - he starts off with normal hair, but then the trope comes into effect when the [[SleepingBeauty three fairies]] give him his new costume.
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* EquivalentExchange:[[spoiler:Alex loses [[DeadpanSnarker Joumae]] temporarily in the second story as exchange for "learning" alchemy when [[DieOrFly Scar used his "Touch of Destruction" on the Lockshield]].]]
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* {{Expy}}: [[spoiler:Since gaining a body, [[EnemyWithout Jou]][[EvilFormerFriend mae]] has become a pretty solid expy of [[KingdomHeartsBirthBySleep Vanitas]], in part likely due to the FridgeBrilliance.]]
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* {{Expy}}: [[spoiler:Since gaining a body, [[EnemyWithout Jou]][[WeUsedToBeFriend Jou]][[EvilFormerFriend mae]] has become a pretty solid expy of [[KingdomHeartsBirthBySleep Vanitas]], in part likely due to the FridgeBrilliance.]]
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* WeUsedToBeFriends: [[spoiler:Joumae, formerly a SourSupporter or SarcasticDevotee in the first three stories, has become basically his new EvilCounterpart as of gaining a body of his own, even [[KickTheDog poisoning his body with Kingdom Hearts Darkness by unlocking his heart and making all of his powers and very being unstable]].]]
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** GoodOldFistcuffs: [[spoiler:His fighting style as a result.]]
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* AnthropomorphicPersonification:[[spoiler:[[TalkingToThemself Joumae]], the manifestation of the [[WeaponOfChoice Lockshield's]] will, takes the form of Alex, but with GreenEyes and [[TwentyFourHourArmor strange green armor]]. He has his own [[MorphWeapon Lockshield design]], the Kingdom Copy, which takes cues from the [[KingdomHearts Kingdom Key Keyblade]].]]
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* AnthropomorphicPersonification:[[spoiler:[[TalkingToThemself AnthropomorphicPersonification: [[spoiler:[[TalkingToThemself Joumae]], the manifestation of the [[WeaponOfChoice Lockshield's]] will, takes the form of Alex, but with GreenEyes and [[TwentyFourHourArmor strange green armor]]. He has his own [[MorphWeapon Lockshield design]], the Kingdom Copy, which takes cues from the [[KingdomHearts Kingdom Key Keyblade]].]]
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** [[spoiler:Joumae in the fourth. [[BackFromTheDead Or not.]]]]
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* BadassLongcoat: [[spoiler:[[SubvertedTrope Subverted]] with Erica Karsath. She wears a black trenchcoat, but...she's [[AnnoyingYoungerSibling Erica]]. Later DoubleSubverted when she [[FaceHeelTurn willingly]] [[DrivenToSuicide becomes]] one of TheHeartless.]]
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* BadassLongcoat: [[spoiler:[[SubvertedTrope [[spoiler:[[NotSoBadassLongcoat Subverted]] with Erica Karsath. She wears a black trenchcoat, but...she's [[AnnoyingYoungerSibling Erica]]. Later DoubleSubverted when she [[FaceHeelTurn willingly]] [[DrivenToSuicide becomes]] one of TheHeartless.]]
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* MeaningfulName: [[spoiler:Joumae, whose name means 'lock'.]]
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* OfficialCouple: Aside from the canon couples in the games, [[spoiler:Alex gets paired with Lucca in the third story!]]
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* OfficialCouple: Aside from the canon couples in the games, [[spoiler:Alex gets paired with Lucca in the third story!]]story.]]
** [[spoiler:However, the author has stated that since he was away being torture for what he considers two consecutive years, the spark is probably very much diminished.]]
** [[spoiler:However, the author has stated that since he was away being torture for what he considers two consecutive years, the spark is probably very much diminished.]]
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** GoodOldFistcuffs: [[spoiler:Alex's combat style as a result.]]
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* FunnyAneurysmMoment: [[spoiler:Joumae is ''Alex's darkness in human form''. A few years later, a character fitting a similar origin appears in ''BirthBySleep'' - [[CompleteMonster Va]][[AlwaysChaoticEvil ni]][[EnemyWithout tas]].]]
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* HilariousInHindsight: [[spoiler:The process by which Roxas gives Kairi a Keyblade via Alex in the first story is identical to the [[TakeUpMySword Keyblade Inheritance Ceremory]] in BirthBySleep.]]
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* TearJerker: [[spoiler:Joumae 'fading away'.]]
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* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: Pretty much every fight with a Boss is one of these; the Final Bosses even more so.
* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: The reunion with [[spoiler:Alex]] in the third story as well as the scene when the [[OfficialCouple Official Couple]] became, well, official.
* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: The reunion with [[spoiler:Alex]] in the third story as well as the scene when the [[OfficialCouple Official Couple]] became, well, official.
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* EverythingFades: As per the original games.games, but ''not'' [[JakAndDaxter Jak II]].
** [[spoiler:[[FaceHeelTurn Joumae]] in the fourth story, [[EnemyWithout not as literally.]]
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3055278/1/The_Interference_Final_Mix The Interference]] by Newbie-Spud of [[http://www.fanfiction.net/ Fanfiction.net]] is a series of {{FanFic}}s that centers around the exploits of the author's [[AuthorAvatar self insert]] 'Alexander Karsath' as he ventures through different video game worlds and making alterations to the expected storyline. The series started with the original story set in the [[KingdomHearts Kingdom Hearts]] universe and has such [[MassiveMultiplayerCrossover moved through]] the game worlds of [[FullMetalAlchemist Full Metal Alchemist: Curse of the Crimson Elixir]], ChronoTrigger, and is currently in the game-verse of [[JakAndDaxter Jak II]].
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3055278/1/The_Interference_Final_Mix The Interference]] by Newbie-Spud of [[http://www.fanfiction.net/ Fanfiction.net]] is a series of {{FanFic}}s that centers around the exploits of the author's [[AuthorAvatar self insert]] 'Alexander Karsath' as he ventures through different video game worlds and making alterations to the expected storyline. The series started with the original story set in the [[KingdomHearts Kingdom Hearts]] universe and has such [[MassiveMultiplayerCrossover moved through]] the game worlds of [[FullMetalAlchemist Full Metal Alchemist: Curse of the Crimson Elixir]], ChronoTrigger, VideoGame/ChronoTrigger, and is currently in the game-verse of [[JakAndDaxter Jak II]].
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* AchillesHeel: [[spoiler: Attacks that hit [[TheHero Alex]] and enter the keyhole on [[WeaponOfChoice the Lockshield]] deal direct damage to his heart, and are far more damaging than other attacks. Except that one from [[EldritchAbomination La]][[ChronoTrigger vos]] that [[OurHeroIsDead killed him]] in the third story, [[CaptainObvious of course]].]]
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* AchillesHeel: [[spoiler: Attacks that hit [[TheHero Alex]] and enter the keyhole on [[WeaponOfChoice the Lockshield]] deal direct damage to his heart, and are far more damaging than other attacks. Except that one from [[EldritchAbomination La]][[ChronoTrigger La]][[VideoGame/ChronoTrigger vos]] that [[OurHeroIsDead killed him]] in the third story, [[CaptainObvious of course]].]]
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* FinalBossNewDimension: In addition to the battle with [[KingdomHearts Xemnas]] in [[VeryDefinitelyFinalDungeon the Realm of Nothingness]], [[spoiler:Elaeus is followed to his own personal pocket dimension that he had used to TimeTravel in [[ChronoTrigger [[VideoGame/ChronoTrigger Guardia]] using Alex's newly created [[EleventhHourSuperpower Time Fracture design]].]]
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* RippleEffectProofMemory: Since the third story takes place in the ChronoTrigger game, the entire party gets this.
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* ShockAndAwe: The powers granted by the [[ChronoTrigger Lightning Guard]] [[MorphWeapon design]] [[spoiler:and [[EleventhHourSuperpower the Time Fracture]].]]
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* ShockAndAwe: The powers granted by the [[ChronoTrigger [[VideoGame/ChronoTrigger Lightning Guard]] [[MorphWeapon design]] [[spoiler:and [[EleventhHourSuperpower the Time Fracture]].]]
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* TimeMaster: Aside from the [[TimeTravel Gates]] in [[ChronoTrigger Guardia]], [[spoiler:the [[EleventhHourSuperpower Time Fracture design]] grants several time-related powers to Alex.]]
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* TimeMaster: Aside from the [[TimeTravel Gates]] in [[ChronoTrigger [[VideoGame/ChronoTrigger Guardia]], [[spoiler:the [[EleventhHourSuperpower Time Fracture design]] grants several time-related powers to Alex.]]
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* AlchemyIsMagic: As in [[Fullmetal Alchemist]].
* AnimeHair: Literally EVERY game protagonist and Alexander himself.
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* AdaptationInducedPlothole: Not the author's fault, since this is relatively new information (as of March 2012), but TetsuyaNomura [[WordOfGod revealed]] that none of the other Organization members' [[TheHeartless Heartless counterparts]] were humanoid except for that of Xehanort, and at least many had been killed coincidentally during the course of the series. There is probably a logical explanation for how the KingdomHearts series can continue, but it has yet to be determined as of the current time.
* Alchemy: From FullmetalAlchemist, yes.
** AlchemyIsMagic: As in[[Fullmetal Alchemist]].
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* BadassAbnormal: The [[spoiler:[[JakAndDaxter Seal of Mar]] [[MorphWeapon design]] doesn't give Alex any powers besides [[SuperStrength increased attack damage]]. But, granted, he still has [[KingdomHearts Growth]] [[ClothesMakeTheSuperman abilities]].]]
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* WordOfGod: Alex has played Jak 3. Confirmed in The Interference: Legends chatroom, on 4/15/11. He is very open with readers and friends about things like this and responds to questions.
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* AlchemyIsMagic: As in [[Fullmetal Alchemist]].
* EnemyWithout: [[spoiler:[[BackFromTheDead Joumae]].]]
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** Alexander, by accident - the name means 'Helper of Men', which perfectly describes the role he was originally intended to play.
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** Alexander, by accident - the name means either 'Helper of Men', which perfectly describes the role he was originally intended Men' or 'Defender of Men'. Alex wields a shield, and does his best to play.assist major characters rather than taking their spotlight.
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* EverythingFades: As per the original games. The author also notes that [[AvertedTrope this doesn't happen]] in ''[[JakAndDaxter Jak II]]''...
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* TheLoad: [[spoiler:[[{{Fangirl}} Erica]] [[AnnoyingYoungerSibling Karsath]] when she starts out. She becomes a [[{{Understatement}} somewhat]] [[CainAndAbel bigger]] [[TheHeartless problem]] later on.]]
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* TheLoad: [[spoiler:[[{{Fangirl}} Erica]] [[AnnoyingYoungerSibling Karsath]] when she starts out. She becomes a [[{{Understatement}} somewhat]] somewhat [[CainAndAbel bigger]] [[TheHeartless problem]] later on.]]
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* HeroicRROD: Done oddly. [[spoiler:Alex transfers all of his LightTheWay power of his [[SuperMode Final Form]] into Dilan in the second story, causing ''him'' to self-destruct due to being [[MadeOfEvil composed of darkness]].]]
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* HeroicRROD: Done oddly. [[spoiler:Alex transfers all of his LightTheWay LightEmUp power of his [[SuperMode Final Form]] into Dilan in the second story, causing ''him'' to self-destruct due to being [[MadeOfEvil composed of darkness]].]]
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* LightTheWay: [[spoiler:Alex's [[SuperMode Final Form]] has powers to this effect.]]
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* TheCombatPragmatist: Alex pulled this in the first story by [[spoiler: cutting the seams holding Oogie Boogie together]] and then promptly [[LampshadeHanging lampshading]] it. And it happens even more later on once he acquires [[spoiler:[[FunctionalMagic Alchemy]]]].
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* TheCombatPragmatist: CombatPragmatist: Alex pulled this in the first story by [[spoiler: cutting the seams holding Oogie Boogie together]] and then promptly [[LampshadeHanging lampshading]] it. And it happens even more later on once he acquires [[spoiler:[[FunctionalMagic Alchemy]]]].
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* DePower: May cross into [[BroughtDownToNormal Brought Down To Normal]], but [[spoiler:Alex, after having his garments replaced be prisonwear at the beginning of the fourth story]] is noticeably weaker and more damage prone.
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* DePower: DeepImmersionGaming: The premise takes this UpToEleven and runs with it.
* {{Depower}}: May cross into [[BroughtDownToNormal Brought Down To Normal]], but [[spoiler:Alex, after having his garments replaced be prisonwear at the beginning of the fourth story]] is noticeably weaker and more damage prone.
* {{Depower}}: May cross into [[BroughtDownToNormal Brought Down To Normal]], but [[spoiler:Alex, after having his garments replaced be prisonwear at the beginning of the fourth story]] is noticeably weaker and more damage prone.
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* HeroicMime: Crono in the third story, in line with his game; though he still speaks a few times making this a partial subversion.
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* BadassLongcoat: [[spoiler:[[SubvertedTrope Subverted]] with Erica Karsath. She wears a black trenchcoat, but...she's [[AnnoyingYoungerSibling Erica]]. Later DoubleSubverted when she [[FaceHeelTurn willingly]] [[DrivenToSuicide becomes]] one of TheHeartless.]]
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* [[spoiler:FourIsDeath: The fourth story thus far has had the deaths of [[BreakTheCutie Alexander's remaining innocence]], [[DeadpanSnarker Joumae]], and [[OldMaster Azelas]]. [[{{Irony}} Ironically]], this is also the story with the [[TheHeartless Heartless]][[spoiler: villain being that of Ansem's fourth Apprentice to become a Heartless, Even.]]
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* [[spoiler:FourIsDeath: The fourth story thus far has had the deaths of [[BreakTheCutie Alexander's remaining innocence]], [[DeadpanSnarker Joumae]], and [[OldMaster Azelas]]. [[{{Irony}} Ironically]], this is also the story with the [[{{TheHeartless [[TheHeartless Heartless]][[spoiler: villain being that of Ansem's fourth Apprentice to become a Heartless, Even.]]
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* WaitWhatWhoa: The general reaction among readers to [[spoiler:Alex's HeroicSacrifice in the third story.]]
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*[[spoiler:CainAndAbel: [[TheCorruptible Erica]] and [[TheHero Alex]] respectively when the former becomes one of TheHeartless. [[YouShouldKnowThisAlready Abel wins]], but becomes TheStoic about the entire affair as a result.]]
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*[[spoiler:CainAndAbel: [[TheCorruptible Erica]] and [[TheHero Alex]] respectively when the former becomes one of TheHeartless. [[YouShouldKnowThisAlready Abel wins]], wins, but becomes TheStoic about the entire affair as a result.]]