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* EverythingsBetterWithPenguins: Pen Pen tends to make the scenes way funnier. Examples include Misato arguing with him about a beer can as Shinji mutters Pen Pen is not even talking about it and Asuka Ikari wonders if she is the [[OnlySaneMan Only Sane Person]] in the apartment.
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* IsThatWhatTheyreCallingItNow: Logical reaction from someone who doesn't know what a plug suit is.
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* OneOfTheKids: It is... pretty disturbing, but ''[[spoiler:Gendo Ikari]]'' shows traits of being one.
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[[http://www.jimmys-desktop.de/nge.php?ikaris The Ikaris]] is a ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'' fanfiction created by Jimmy Wolk, author of ''Fanfic/TheSecondTry'', ''Webcomic/AkiChansLife'' and ''Fanfic/LongTimeNoSee''.
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[[http://www.jimmys-desktop.de/nge.php?ikaris The Ikaris]] is a ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'' Fanfiction created by Jimmy Wolk, author of ''Fanfic/TheSecondTry'' and ''[[Webcomic/AkiChansLife Aki-chan's Life]]''. Unfortunately it has been dead for a while, but the author has expressed he would like to finish it. [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1430808/1/The_Ikaris It also can be found in FF.Net]]. It was cross-posted on [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/28935921/chapters/70997451 Archive Of Our Own]] in January 2021, with minor edits for spelling and grammar, but no new chapters at the time.
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[[http://www.jimmys-desktop.de/nge.php?ikaris The Ikaris]] is a ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'' Fanfiction created by Jimmy Wolk, author of ''Fanfic/TheSecondTry'' and ''[[Webcomic/AkiChansLife Aki-chan's Life]]''. Unfortunately it has been dead for a while, but the author has expressed he would like to finish it. [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1430808/1/The_Ikaris It also can be found in FF.Net]].Net]] and [[https://www.jimmys-desktop.de/nge.php?ikaris Jimmy's site]]. It was cross-posted on [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/28935921/chapters/70997451 Archive Of Our Own]] in January 2021, with minor edits for spelling and grammar, but no new chapters at the time.
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Check ''Fanfic/AdviceAndTrust'', ''Fanfic/TheChildOfLove'', ''Fanfic/HigherLearning'', ''Manga/{{Evangelion303}}'', ''Fanfic/NobodyDies'', ''Fanfic/TheOneILoveIs'', or ''Fanfic/MobileFighterEvangelion'' to see other AU Eva fics. Check ''Fanfic/ACrownOfStars'', ''Fanfic/{{HERZ}}'', ''Fanfic/NeonGenesisEvangelionR'', ''Fanfic/ScarTissue'' and ''Fanfic/WalkingInTheShadowOfDreams'' to see other Eva continuation fics. Check ''Fanfic/DoingItRightThisTime'', ''Fanfic/OnceMoreWithFeeling'', ''Manga/ReTake'', ''Fanfic/TheSecondTry'' to see PeggySue Eva stories. Go to ''Fanfic/ChildrenOfAnElderGod'', ''Fanfic/GodsAngelsAndKings'', ''Fanfic/LastChildOfKrypton'', ''Fanfic/ShinjiAndWarhammer40K'', ''Fanfic/SOE2LoneHeirOfKrypton'' and ''Fanfic/ThousandShinji'' if you are interested in crossovers.
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* NotSoDifferent: In one chapter, Maya informs Asuka now they are married, she has access to Shinji's personal file. Asuka considers to reading for a second... and then she declines. Maya then invokes the trope, stating she and Shinji are quite alike. Shinji had also decided against looking in Asuka's file.
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* NotSoDifferent: NotSoDifferentRemark: In one chapter, Maya informs Asuka now they are married, she has access to Shinji's personal file. Asuka considers to reading for a second... and then she declines. Maya then invokes the trope, stating she and Shinji are quite alike. Shinji had also decided against looking in Asuka's file.
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[[http://www.jimmys-desktop.de/nge.php?ikaris The Ikaris]] is a ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'' Fanfiction created by Jimmy Wolk, author of ''Fanfic/TheSecondTry'' and ''[[Webcomic/AkiChansLife Aki-chan's Life]]''. Unfortunately it has been dead for a while, but the author has expressed he would like finishing it. [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1430808/1/The_Ikaris It also can be found in FF.Net]].
Compare with the ''The Sohryus'' sub-saga of ''FanFic/ALittleAngelOnMyShoulder''.
Compare with the ''The Sohryus'' sub-saga of ''FanFic/ALittleAngelOnMyShoulder''.
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[[http://www.jimmys-desktop.de/nge.php?ikaris The Ikaris]] is a ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'' Fanfiction created by Jimmy Wolk, author of ''Fanfic/TheSecondTry'' and ''[[Webcomic/AkiChansLife Aki-chan's Life]]''. Unfortunately it has been dead for a while, but the author has expressed he would like finishing to finish it. [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1430808/1/The_Ikaris It also can be found in FF.Net]].
Net]]. It was cross-posted on [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/28935921/chapters/70997451 Archive Of Our Own]] in January 2021, with minor edits for spelling and grammar, but no new chapters at the time.
Compare with the ''The Sohryus'' sub-saga of''FanFic/ALittleAngelOnMyShoulder''.
''Fanfic/ALittleAngelOnMyShoulder''.
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* EverythingsBetterWithPenguins: Pen Pen tends to make the scenes way funnier. Examples include Misato arguing with him about a beer can as Shinji mutteres Pen Pen is not even talking about it and Asuka Ikari wonders if she is the [[OnlySaneMan Only Sane Person]] in the apartment.
* FailureIsTheOnlyOption: Asuka wants a divorce (or so she claims). Keeping in mind Gendo is scheming against it, their [[BunnyEarsLawyer marriage counsellor]]'s motto is ''"We never fail, you hear me?"'' and the author is an Asuka/Shinji shipper, you just ''know'' she will not get it.
* FailureIsTheOnlyOption: Asuka wants a divorce (or so she claims). Keeping in mind Gendo is scheming against it, their [[BunnyEarsLawyer marriage counsellor]]'s motto is ''"We never fail, you hear me?"'' and the author is an Asuka/Shinji shipper, you just ''know'' she will not get it.
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* EverythingsBetterWithPenguins: Pen Pen tends to make the scenes way funnier. Examples include Misato arguing with him about a beer can as Shinji mutteres mutters Pen Pen is not even talking about it and Asuka Ikari wonders if she is the [[OnlySaneMan Only Sane Person]] in the apartment.
* FailureIsTheOnlyOption: Asuka wants a divorce (or so she claims). Keeping in mind Gendo is scheming against it, their [[BunnyEarsLawyer marriagecounsellor]]'s counselor]]'s motto is ''"We never fail, you hear me?"'' and the author is an Asuka/Shinji shipper, you just ''know'' she will not get it.
* FailureIsTheOnlyOption: Asuka wants a divorce (or so she claims). Keeping in mind Gendo is scheming against it, their [[BunnyEarsLawyer marriage
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* WideEyedIdealist: Saori Tagawa, the Ikaris marriage counsellor boasts she has NEVER failed on saving a marriage. She also has a very idealistic outlook about love and marriage. Attempts to talk her out of it are met with a ShutUpHannibal sharp retort.
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* WideEyedIdealist: Saori Tagawa, the Ikaris marriage counsellor counselor boasts she has NEVER failed on saving a marriage. She also has a very idealistic outlook about love and marriage. Attempts to talk her out of it are met with a ShutUpHannibal sharp retort.
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* {{WAFF}}: Apparently, Commander Ikari likes writing waffy fics.
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->''Were they so afraid of being left on the shelf that they actually thought marriage was something good? Well, they were free to switch places with her!''\\
''Not that anyone would want this idiot. Who would want to be married to someone who was always excusing and whining and a coward and a wimp and [[FreudianSlip hers]]... uhm... her - s...stinging pain in the neck...''
-->--'''Asuka Langley Ikari'''.
''Not that anyone would want this idiot. Who would want to be married to someone who was always excusing and whining and a coward and a wimp and [[FreudianSlip hers]]... uhm... her - s...stinging pain in the neck...''
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''Not that anyone would want this idiot. Who would want to be married to someone who was always excusing and whining and a coward and a wimp and [[FreudianSlip hers]]... uhm... her - s...stinging pain in the neck...
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-->-- '''Asuka Langley
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Check ''Fanfic/AdviceAndTrust'', ''Fanfic/TheChildOfLove'', ''Fanfic/HigherLearning'', ''Fanfic/TheIkaris'', ''Fanfic/NobodyDies'', ''Fanfic/TheOneILoveIs'', or ''Fanfic/MobileFighterEvangelion'' to see other AU Eva fics. Check ''Fanfic/ACrownOfStars'', ''Fanfic/{{HERZ}}'', ''Fanfic/NeonGenesisEvangelionR'', ''Fanfic/ScarTissue'' and ''Fanfic/WalkingInTheShadowOfDreams'' to see other Eva continuation fics. Check ''Fanfic/DoingItRightThisTime'', ''Fanfic/OnceMoreWithFeeling'', ''Manga/ReTake'', ''Fanfic/TheSecondTry'' to see PeggySue Eva stories. Go to ''Fanfic/ChildrenOfAnElderGod'', ''Fanfic/GodsAngelsAndKings'', ''Fanfic/LastChildOfKrypton'', ''Fanfic/ShinjiAndWarhammer40K'', ''Fanfic/SOE2LoneHeirOfKrypton'' and ''Fanfic/ThousandShinji'' if you are interested in crossovers.
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Check ''Fanfic/AdviceAndTrust'', ''Fanfic/TheChildOfLove'', ''Fanfic/HigherLearning'', ''Fanfic/TheIkaris'', ''Manga/{{Evangelion303}}'', ''Fanfic/NobodyDies'', ''Fanfic/TheOneILoveIs'', or ''Fanfic/MobileFighterEvangelion'' to see other AU Eva fics. Check ''Fanfic/ACrownOfStars'', ''Fanfic/{{HERZ}}'', ''Fanfic/NeonGenesisEvangelionR'', ''Fanfic/ScarTissue'' and ''Fanfic/WalkingInTheShadowOfDreams'' to see other Eva continuation fics. Check ''Fanfic/DoingItRightThisTime'', ''Fanfic/OnceMoreWithFeeling'', ''Manga/ReTake'', ''Fanfic/TheSecondTry'' to see PeggySue Eva stories. Go to ''Fanfic/ChildrenOfAnElderGod'', ''Fanfic/GodsAngelsAndKings'', ''Fanfic/LastChildOfKrypton'', ''Fanfic/ShinjiAndWarhammer40K'', ''Fanfic/SOE2LoneHeirOfKrypton'' and ''Fanfic/ThousandShinji'' if you are interested in crossovers.
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Check ''Fanfic/AdviceAndTrust'', ''Fanfic/TheChildOfLove'', ''Manga/{{Evangelion 303}}'', ''Fanfic/HigherLearning'', ''Fanfic/NobodyDies'' and ''Fanfic/TheOneILoveIs'' ''Fanfic/TheIkaris'', ''Fanfic/NobodyDies'', ''Fanfic/TheOneILoveIs'', or ''Fanfic/MobileFighterEvangelion'' to see other AU Eva fics. Check ''Fanfic/ACrownOfStars'', ''Fanfic/{{HERZ}}'', ''Fanfic/NeonGenesisEvangelionR'', ''Fanfic/ScarTissue'' and ''Fanfic/WalkingInTheShadowOfDreams'' to see other Eva continuation fics. Check ''Fanfic/DoingItRightThisTime'', ''Fanfic/OnceMoreWithFeeling'', ''Manga/ReTake'', ''Fanfic/TheSecondTry'' to see PeggySue Eva stories. Go to ''Fanfic/ChildrenOfAnElderGod'', ''Fanfic/GodsAngelsAndKings'', ''Fanfic/LastChildOfKrypton'', ''Fanfic/ShinjiAndWarhammer40K'', ''Fanfic/SOE2LoneHeirOfKrypton'' and ''Fanfic/ThousandShinji'' if you are interested in crossovers.
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* BedmateReveal: In the first scene, Shinji and Asuka wake up, realize they're sleeping on the same bed, and scream.
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* ShoutOut:
** In episode 3 there is a shout out to ''Fanfic/TheChildOfLove'' when Gendo mentions a possible ploy to keep his son and Asuka together.
** [[SuperMarioBrosSuperShow The name of the Super Gendo Super Show, anyone?]]
** In episode 3 there is a shout out to ''Fanfic/TheChildOfLove'' when Gendo mentions a possible ploy to keep his son and Asuka together.
** [[SuperMarioBrosSuperShow The name of the Super Gendo Super Show, anyone?]]
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* ShoutOut:
** In episode 3 there is a shout out to ''Fanfic/TheChildOfLove'' when Gendo mentions a possible ploy to keep his son and Asuka together.
** [[SuperMarioBrosSuperShow The name of the Super Gendo Super Show, anyone?]]ShoutOut: It has its own subpage.
** In episode 3 there is a shout out to ''Fanfic/TheChildOfLove'' when Gendo mentions a possible ploy to keep his son and Asuka together.
** [[SuperMarioBrosSuperShow The name of the Super Gendo Super Show, anyone?]]
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* HighSchoolSweethearts: Shinji and Asuka liked each other but they were in denial and oblivious to each other's feelings. Then one night they got drunk and got married. To Asuka's distress and annoyance she found out the marriage was legal even if they were only fourteen.
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-->-- Asuka Langley Ikari.
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-->--'''Asuka Langley
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* ShoutOut: Several. In episode there is a shout out to ''The Child Of Love'', a classic Asuka/Shinji fic by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/4917/Axel_Terizaki Axel Terizaki]].
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* ShoutOut: Several. ShoutOut:
** In episode 3 there is a shout out to''The Child Of Love'', ''Fanfic/TheChildOfLove'' when Gendo mentions a classic Asuka/Shinji fic by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/4917/Axel_Terizaki Axel Terizaki]].possible ploy to keep his son and Asuka together.
** In episode 3 there is a shout out to
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->Nother!\\
Not that anyone would want this idiot. Who would want to be married to someone who was always excusing and whining and a coward and a wimp and [[FreudianSlip hers]]... uhm... her - s...stinging pain in the neck...
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Not that anyone would want this idiot. Who would want to be married to someone who was always excusing and whining and a coward and a wimp and [[FreudianSlip hers]]... uhm... her - s...stinging pain in the neck...
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* NoExportForYou: Averted, though not as much as his usual fics. Besides English, the story is [[http://jimmywolk.studenten-froendenberg.de/eng/nge.php?lang also available to read]] in -so far- German and Spanish.
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->Not that anyone would want this idiot. Who would want to be married to someone who was always excusing and whining and a coward and a wimp and hers...[[FreudianSlip hers]]... uhm... her - s...stinging pain in the neck...
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* TheDeterminator: Saori Tagawa. What else can you call a councilor whose business motto is "'''We never fail, you hear me?'''"
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* EveryoneCanSeeIt: Maybe the thing Asuka is most annoyed about is the number of people thinking it was going to happen sooner or later.
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