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On July 1st, 2023. The author posted a message announcing his intention to rewrite the story.
On July 8th, 2023, the first chapter of the rewrite was posted and can be found here.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10757282/1/The-Ice-Queen-Cometh The Ice Queen Cometh]]'' is a ''Anime/YuGiOhZEXAL'' AlternateUniverseFic written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4202909/Nox-Descious Nox Descious]].
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10757282/1/The-Ice-Queen-Cometh The Ice Queen Cometh]]'' is a ''Anime/YuGiOhZEXAL'' AlternateUniverseFic written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4202909/Nox-Descious net/u/4202909/Nox-Barian Nox Descious]].
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* AdaptationDistillation: The fic's events are set during the events of the anime's World Duel Carnival arc, but with elements from the Barian arc added in to relflect the Barian Emperors' early involvement in the story.
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* AdaptationDistillation: The majority of the fic's events are set during the events of the anime's World Duel Carnival arc, but with elements from the Barian arc added in to relflect reflect the Barian Emperors' early earlier involvement in the story.
* AdaptationalBackstoryChange: Several details throughout have changed, though some characters moreso, particularly in the backstory of ZEXAL's overall lore.
** Eliphas in canon was said to have been a creation of the Astral World itself to act as its will. In this story, he was an already-existing member of the Astral beings who was also a disciple of the Numeron Dragon alongside Don Thousand, chosen to master the power of Order. Thus, he grew into his canon role rather than being created for it. His hatred of Chaos is also recontextualized; not because of his status as a being of Order, but because of the trauma of the war against Don Thousand.
** [[spoiler:Astral gets one of the more significant changes. In canon, he was also a creation of the Astral World, attributed to Eliphas as a being to take on the power of the Numbers. In this story, like Eliphas, Astral was merely another resident of the Astral World, with confirmed family, losing his parents, who died to Don Thousand's powers. The role of taking on the Numbers is thus treated as a supersoldier program he volunteered for rather than being made for, and instead of Kazuma directing him to Yuma, Number 100: Numeron Dragon, does so instead.]]
** Eliphas in canon was said to have been a creation of the Astral World itself to act as its will. In this story, he was an already-existing member of the Astral beings who was also a disciple of the Numeron Dragon alongside Don Thousand, chosen to master the power of Order. Thus, he grew into his canon role rather than being created for it. His hatred of Chaos is also recontextualized; not because of his status as a being of Order, but because of the trauma of the war against Don Thousand.
** [[spoiler:Astral gets one of the more significant changes. In canon, he was also a creation of the Astral World, attributed to Eliphas as a being to take on the power of the Numbers. In this story, like Eliphas, Astral was merely another resident of the Astral World, with confirmed family, losing his parents, who died to Don Thousand's powers. The role of taking on the Numbers is thus treated as a supersoldier program he volunteered for rather than being made for, and instead of Kazuma directing him to Yuma, Number 100: Numeron Dragon, does so instead.]]
** In canon, Don Thousand was a CardCarryingVillain, a prime example of ChaosIsEvil. In this story's backstory, he used to be much kinder, and according to Eliphas, playful, before the Numeron Dragon assigned him to master the power of Chaos, a thankless role that he hated and [[AllOfTheOtherReindeer saw him shunned by his people]]. This ultimately drove him insane, his power corrupted him, and he declared war on the people of the Astral World. Though still obviously a villain, he's more of a posthumous TragicVillain with this context.
** [[spoiler:Astral in this story's backstory. In canon, he was a deliberate creation of Eliphas meant to take on the power of the Numbers until Kazuma interfered with his programming and sent him to Yuma. In this story, Astral was merely another resident of the Astral World, who grew hateful and vengeful against the Barian World for killing his parents, to the point of volunteering for the super-soldier program to bring him into his canon role.]]
** In canon, Black Mist, when empowered by Chaos energy, nearly succeeded in destroying all three worlds, with his duel against Yuma and Astral appropriately reflecting his increased strength. [[spoiler:Here, he never gets to that level of power; the first time said form is utilized, it is adapted as a further-corrupted form of Kotori while under his control, and the outcome of the duel weakens Black Mist greatly. The second time, the form properly appears, but only as an upgrade Number 43 gave him, and though Black Mist puts up a good fight, he is ultimately defeated by both ZEXAL and Kotori working together, rather than a full-powered ZEXAL II form. He also fails to pull a TakingYouWithMe moment as in canon; the duel drains what's left of his strength and Number 43 [[YouHaveFailedMe kills Black Mist for his failure.]]]]
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* BigBadWannabe: Number 96. He is under the false impression that he is The Strongest Number and worth being called a God. [[spoiler: When in reality he is merely being used by Number 43 as a scapegoat and as a pawn in his plans]]
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* BigBadWannabe: Number 96. He is under the false impression that he is The Strongest Number and worth being called a God. [[spoiler: When in reality he is merely being used by Number 43 as a scapegoat and as a pawn in his plans]]plans. After being defeated by a ZEXAL-empowered Yuma and Astral, Number 43 gives Number 96 a ''very'' brutal reality check.]]
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* DeathByAdaptation: Don Thousand is explicitly stated to have perished long before the events of the fic, with WordOfGod confirming he won't be appearing in the fic at all.
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* DeathByAdaptation: Don Thousand is explicitly stated to have perished long before the events of the fic, with WordOfGod confirming he won't be appearing in the fic at all. He is mentioned however, and remains as a GreaterScopeVillain in the story due to his part in the series' backstory.
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* ForWantOfANail: The premise of the fic itself, at first, is that Shark got burned instead of Rio, and the Barians got involved much sooner. However, later chapters show several major changes to the backstory.
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* ForWantOfANail: The premise of the fic itself, at first, is that Shark got burned instead of Rio, and the Barians got involved much sooner. However, later chapters show several major changes to the backstory.backstory as well, slowly taking it out of this territory.
* GreaterScopeVillain: Don Thousand is this, due to suffering from DeathByAdaptation; having legitimately perished in his duel with Astral, aside from a sliver of his power, which, as in canon, took on the form of Number 96. Likewise, his actions that necessitated the creation of the Barian World in the first place ensure that he still maintains influence in the story's backstory and present-day.
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* HowDoIShootWeb: The power of ZEXAL comes from order, and so Yuma and Astral are unable to activate while in the chaos-filled Barian Sphere Field duel against [[spoiler:Merag]].
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* HowDoIShootWeb: The power of ZEXAL comes from order, Order, and so Yuma and Astral are unable to activate while in the chaos-filled Chaos-filled Barian Sphere Field duel against [[spoiler:Merag]].
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* SealedGoodInACan: [[spoiler:Number 100, owing to the actions of Number 43 weakening him greatly.]]
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** Tron/Byron Arclight lacks the redeeming qualities he had in canon with his worst traits turned UpToEleven. To top it all of he doesn't even [[spoiler: receive a HeelFaceTurn as he did in canon and dies alone as as a mere shell of his former self.]]
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** Tron/Byron Arclight lacks the redeeming qualities he had in canon with his worst traits turned UpToEleven.up to eleven. To top it all of he doesn't even [[spoiler: receive a HeelFaceTurn as he did in canon and dies alone as as a mere shell of his former self.]]
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* LadyOfWar: Rio, befitting her title as the IceQueen. [[spoiler: Taken UpToEleven once she regains her memories of Merag.]]
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* UndyingLoyalty: The Barian Emperors (save for Vector) towards Nasch and Merag, but Durbe takes this UpToEleven with his complete and utter to devotion to Merag.
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* UndyingLoyalty: The Barian Emperors (save for Vector) towards Nasch and Merag, but Durbe takes this UpToEleven up a notch with his complete and utter to devotion to Merag.
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* NotSoDifferent: Tron sees himself and [[spoiler:Merag]] in this light in Chapter 38. [[spoiler:Merag]] on the other hand proves him very wrong.
** Yuma later points out that Eliphas isn't acting much different than Don Thousand, obsessing over a type of power and considering everyone who opposes it to be worse than scum.
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* NotSoDifferent: Tron sees himself and [[spoiler:Merag]] in this light in Chapter 38. [[spoiler:Merag]] on the other hand proves him very wrong.
**NotSoDifferentRemark: Yuma later points out that Eliphas isn't acting much different than Don Thousand, obsessing over a type of power and considering everyone who opposes it to be worse than scum.
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* RealityEnsues: Unlike most of the characters from the previous series who act like everything is okay after being brainwashed/mind controlled, [[spoiler:Kotori is ''not'' someone who can immediately recover from her ordeal of being possessed by Number 96]].
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* RealityEnsues: PossessionBurnout: Unlike most of the characters from the previous series who act like everything is okay after being brainwashed/mind controlled, [[spoiler:Kotori is ''not'' someone who can immediately recover from her ordeal of being possessed by Number 96]].
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* ShoutOut/TakeThat: When Yuma uses Rainbow Kuriboh to halt Ragna Infinity's attack, Merag scoffs at the sight of it before sarcastically asking if it's going to teach her that [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Friendship is Magic]] or hover around her and shout [[Franchise/TheLegendOfZelda "Hey! Listen!"]]
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* ShoutOut/TakeThat: TakeThat: When Yuma uses Rainbow Kuriboh to halt Ragna Infinity's attack, Merag scoffs at the sight of it before sarcastically asking if it's going to teach her that [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Friendship is Magic]] or hover around her and shout [[Franchise/TheLegendOfZelda "Hey! Listen!"]]
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The fanfiction starts off at the point before the beginning of canon when IV (Quattro in the English Dub) attacked Shark and Rio Kamishiro and burned one of them alive. However, while it was Rio who was burned in canon, Shark is the one who gets burned in this fanfiction, which basically causes the twins to [[RoleSwaAU switch roles]]. Rio takes her brother's place as one of the main character in comparison to the very minor and under used role she had in canon. She becomes the main protagonist alongside Yuma Tsukumo and gains the same desire for vengeance against IV, all the while she is roped into the Number Monster Conflict and starts collecting Numbers of her own.
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The fanfiction starts off at the point before the beginning of canon when IV (Quattro in the English Dub) attacked Shark and Rio Kamishiro and burned one of them alive. However, while it was Rio who was burned in canon, Shark is the one who gets burned in this fanfiction, which basically causes the twins to [[RoleSwaAU [[RoleSwapAU switch roles]]. Rio takes her brother's place as one of the main character in comparison to the very minor and under used role she had in canon. She becomes the main protagonist alongside Yuma Tsukumo and gains the same desire for vengeance against IV, all the while she is roped into the Number Monster Conflict and starts collecting Numbers of her own.
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The fanfiction starts off at the point before the beginning of canon when IV (Quattro in the English Dub) attacked Shark and Rio Kamishiro and burned one of them alive. However, while it was Rio who was burned in canon, Shark is the one who gets burned in this fanfiction, which basically causes the twins to switch roles. Rio takes her brother's place as one of the main character in comparison to the very minor and under used role she had in canon. She becomes the main protagonist alongside Yuma Tsukumo and gains the same desire for vengeance against IV, all the while she is roped into the Number Monster Conflict and starts collecting Numbers of her own.
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The fanfiction starts off at the point before the beginning of canon when IV (Quattro in the English Dub) attacked Shark and Rio Kamishiro and burned one of them alive. However, while it was Rio who was burned in canon, Shark is the one who gets burned in this fanfiction, which basically causes the twins to [[RoleSwaAU switch roles.roles]]. Rio takes her brother's place as one of the main character in comparison to the very minor and under used role she had in canon. She becomes the main protagonist alongside Yuma Tsukumo and gains the same desire for vengeance against IV, all the while she is roped into the Number Monster Conflict and starts collecting Numbers of her own.
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* RealityEnsues: Unlike most of the characters from the previous series who act like everything is okay after being brainwashed/mind controlled, [[spoiler:Kotori is ''not'' someone who can immediately recover from her ordeal of being possessed by Number 96]].
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** Yuma and Kotori have one in Chapter 36.
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** The Gate of Numeron Cards. In canon, Number 4 Stealth Kraken, Number 3, Cicada King, Number 2, Shadow Mosquito Ninja, and Number 1 Infection Buzz King were fake Numbers created by Don Thousand, while the Gate of Numeron monsters were the real Numbers One, Two, Three, and Four. However in this story, the Gate of Numeron cards don't exist and the above mentioned Numbers are indeed real.
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* TakenForGranite: The fate of any duel monster that goes up against Gorgonic Guardian.
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* PieInTheFace: Vector demonstrates his twisted sense of humor by invoking this trope in Chapter 44, only he uses cakes instead of pies.
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* OfficialCouple: Rio and Durbe, Yuma and Kotori, [[CrackPairing Alito and Anna]].
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* OfficialCouple: Rio and Durbe, Yuma and Kotori, [[CrackPairing Alito and Anna]].Anna.
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** [[spoiler: Merag blatantly says this about Astral in Chapter 34]]
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The Author of the Fanfiction, Nox Descious, has so far completed more than 40 chapters of the story and is about 75% of the way done with the Fanfiction. His update schedule is ongoing and consistent, with updates varying from once every two weeks to once a month.
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* AndIMustScream: The fate of anyone turned into a mannequin and having their soul absorbed by Number 43 Manipulator of Souls.
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-->'''Rio/[[spoiler:Merag]]:''' You say you have no choice III? Don't make me laugh. Everyone has a choice! I made the choice to [[[spoiler:destroy my humnaity]] to save my home from people like you, and you made your choice to do nothing while your brother and your father hurt my brother and then kidnapped him and turned him into your little slave! You made your bed, III, and now you're going to sleep in it!
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-->'''Rio/[[spoiler:Merag]]:''' You say you have no choice III? Don't make me laugh. Everyone has a choice! I made the choice to [[[spoiler:destroy [[spoiler:destroy my humnaity]] to save my home from people like you, and you made your choice to do nothing while your brother and your father hurt my brother and then kidnapped him and turned him into your little slave! You made your bed, III, and now you're going to sleep in it!
