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** It is stated that an unknown group, [[spoiler: which the next chapter indicates consisted of [[WesternAnimation/GeneratorRex Rex Salazar]], [[WesternAnimation/RandyCunninghamNinthGradeNinja the Ninja of Norrisville]], [[Anime/{{Symphogear}} several Symphogear wielders]], and [[VideoGame/DevilMayCry Nero]], Nero]],]] inflicted one on the guards attacking Lurolona village, and without killing any of them to boot. The King is surprised to hear that the worst injuries sustained were some broken bones.
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** It is stated that an unknown group, [[spoiler: which the next chapter indicates consisted of [[WesternAnimation/GeneratorRex Rex Salazar]], [[WesternAnimation/RandyCunninghamNinthGradeNinja the Ninja of Norrisville]], [Anime/{{Symphogear}} [[Anime/{{Symphogear}} several Symphogear wielders]], and [[VideoGame/DevilMayCry Nero]],]] Nero]], inflicted one on the guards attacking Lurolona village, and without killing any of them to boot. The King is surprised to hear that the worst injuries sustained were some broken bones.
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** It is stated that an unknown group, [[spoiler: which the next chapter indicates consisted of [[WesternAnimation/GeneratorRex Rex Salazar]], [[WesternAnimation/RandyCunninghamNinthGradeNinja the Ninja of Norrisville]], several [[Anime/{{Symphogear}} [Anime/{{Symphogear}} several Symphogear wielders]], and [[VideoGame/DevilMayCry Nero]],]] inflicted one on the guards attacking Lurolona village, and without killing any of them to boot. The King is surprised to hear that the worst injuries sustained were some broken bones.
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* ScrewThisImOutOfHere: Once it became clear Malty was lying, Ren straight up just walked out of the trail, not even bothering to hear the verdict of a obvious KangarooCourt.
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* ScrewThisImOutOfHere: Once it became clear Malty was lying, Ren straight up just walked out of the trail, trial, not even bothering to hear the verdict of a obvious KangarooCourt.
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** It is stated that an unknown group, [[spoiler: which the next chapter indicates consisted of [[WesternAnimation/GeneratorRex Rex Salazar]], [[WesternAnimation/RandyCunninghamNinthGradeNinja the Ninja of Norrisville]], several [[Anime/{{Symphogear}} several women in armor fighting while singing]], Symphogear wielders]], and [[VideoGame/DevilMayCry Nero]],]] inflicted one on the guards attacking Lurolona village, and without killing any of them to boot. The King is surprised to hear that the worst injuries sustained were some broken bones.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13847628/1/The-coming-of-the-True-Heroes The coming of the True Heroes]]'' by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6429435/Rougedragon Rougedragon]] is a ''WesternAnimation/Ben10''/''LightNovel/TheRisingOfTheShieldHero'' crossover featuring the [[FandomSpecificPlot common setup]] of someone taking Naofumi's place as the shield hero, in this case, a nineteen-year-old Ben Tennyson. It's also notable in that it serves as a distant sequel the authors other crossover between ''WesternAnimation/Ben10'' and ''Franchise/LyricalNanoha'', found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13533936/1/Aliens-and-Magic here]], as Ben is accompanied by his cousin Nanoha and her friend Fate.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13847628/1/The-coming-of-the-True-Heroes The coming of the True Heroes]]'' by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6429435/Rougedragon Rougedragon]] is a ''WesternAnimation/Ben10''/''LightNovel/TheRisingOfTheShieldHero'' ''WesternAnimation/Ben10''/''Literature/TheRisingOfTheShieldHero'' crossover featuring the [[FandomSpecificPlot common setup]] of someone taking Naofumi's place as the shield hero, in this case, a nineteen-year-old Ben Tennyson. It's also notable in that it serves as a distant sequel the authors other crossover between ''WesternAnimation/Ben10'' and ''Franchise/LyricalNanoha'', found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13533936/1/Aliens-and-Magic here]], as Ben is accompanied by his cousin Nanoha and her friend Fate.
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* WrongContextMagic: Nanoha and Fate retain their Devices and TSAB style magic, which is vastly different from how magic operates in the ''Shield Hero'' world, catching many people off guard.
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* WrongContextMagic: Nanoha and Fate retain their Devices and TSAB style magic, which is vastly different from how magic operates in the ''Shield Hero'' world, catching many people off guard.guard.
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** Malty's attempts to frame Ben fall flat, since Nanoha and Fate point out the many holes within her testimony of events and her behavior afterwards. In addition, they provide several recordings that contradict her narration of events, and clearly show he went nowhere near her all night. Hell, they even catch her trying to break into their room on tape right before going straight to Motoyasu's.
** While the [[InSpiteOfANail King still declares that Ben is guilty]], absolutely no-one else is convinced, especially since the whole trial was broadcast nationwide.
** Malty and Motoyasu try to poison Nanoha and Fate against Ben by saying he may try to attack them as well, Malty as a desperate ploy to undermine him while Motoyasu genuinely believes Malty's accusations. All this does is piss them off (with Fate slapping Malty) and incredulously ask if they expected them to believe someone they've just met over a friend they've known for years.
** Relating to the above, while people were initially appalled to hear that the shield hero apparently raped someone, upon realizing it was [[SpoiledBrat Malty]] who made the accusations, no-one believes it. It's mentioned she's pulled [[FalseRapeAccusation the same stunt]] several times before, and the fact that that she is still known to [[ReallyGetsAround flirt and sleep with many men]] makes it abundantly clear that she was never a victim of rape.
** Malty's attempts to frame Ben fall flat, since Nanoha and Fate point out the many holes within her testimony of events and her behavior afterwards. In addition, they provide several recordings that contradict her narration of events, and clearly show he went nowhere near her all night. Hell, they even catch her trying to break into their room on tape right before going straight to Motoyasu's.
** While the [[InSpiteOfANail King still declares that Ben is guilty]], absolutely no-one else is convinced, especially since the whole trial was broadcast nationwide.
** Malty and Motoyasu try to poison Nanoha and Fate against Ben by saying he may try to attack them as well, Malty as a desperate ploy to undermine him while Motoyasu genuinely believes Malty's accusations. All this does is piss them off (with Fate slapping Malty) and incredulously ask if they expected them to believe someone they've just met over a friend they've known for years.
** Relating to the above, while people were initially appalled to hear that the shield hero apparently raped someone, upon realizing it was [[SpoiledBrat Malty]] who made the accusations, no-one believes it. It's mentioned she's pulled [[FalseRapeAccusation the same stunt]] several times before, and the fact that that she is still known to [[ReallyGetsAround flirt and sleep with many men]] makes it abundantly clear that she was never a victim of rape.
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** It is stated that an unknown group, [[spoiler: which the next chapter indicates consisted of [[WesternAnimation/GeneratorRex Rex Salazar]], [[WesternAnimation/RandyCunninghamNinthGradeNinja the Ninja of Norrisville]], several [[Anime/SenkiZesshouSymphogear several women in armor fighting while singing]], and [[VideoGame/DevilMayCry Nero]],]] inflicted one on the guards attacking Lurolona village, and without killing any of them to boot. The King is surprised to hear that the worst injuries sustained were some broken bones.
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** It is stated that an unknown group, [[spoiler: which the next chapter indicates consisted of [[WesternAnimation/GeneratorRex Rex Salazar]], [[WesternAnimation/RandyCunninghamNinthGradeNinja the Ninja of Norrisville]], several [[Anime/SenkiZesshouSymphogear [[Anime/{{Symphogear}} several women in armor fighting while singing]], and [[VideoGame/DevilMayCry Nero]],]] inflicted one on the guards attacking Lurolona village, and without killing any of them to boot. The King is surprised to hear that the worst injuries sustained were some broken bones.
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* WhamEpisode: Chapter 5, ''The First Wave'' is significantly darker than the any of the previous ones, featuring the first wave from a young Raphtalia's perspective [[spoiler: and [[VideoGame/DevilMayCry features]] [[WesternAnimation/GeneratorRex several]] [[WesternAnimation/RandyCunninghamNinthGradeNinja other]] [[Anime/SenkiZesshouSymphogear franchises]] being introduced to the story]].
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* WhamEpisode: Chapter 5, ''The First Wave'' is significantly darker than the any of the previous ones, featuring the first wave from a young Raphtalia's perspective [[spoiler: and [[VideoGame/DevilMayCry features]] [[WesternAnimation/GeneratorRex several]] [[WesternAnimation/RandyCunninghamNinthGradeNinja other]] [[Anime/SenkiZesshouSymphogear [[Anime/{{Symphogear}} franchises]] being introduced to the story]].
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** It is stated that an unknown group, [[spoiler: which the next chapter indicates consisted of [[WesternAnimation/GeneratorRex Rex Salazar]], [[WesternAnimation/RandyCunninghamNinthGradeNinja the Ninja of Norrisville]], several [[Anime/Symphogear several women in armor fighting while singing]], and [[VideoGame/DevilMayCry Nero]],]] inflicted one on the guards attacking Lurolona village, and without killing any of them to boot. The King is surprised to hear that the worst injuries sustained were some broken bones.
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** It is stated that an unknown group, [[spoiler: which the next chapter indicates consisted of [[WesternAnimation/GeneratorRex Rex Salazar]], [[WesternAnimation/RandyCunninghamNinthGradeNinja the Ninja of Norrisville]], several [[Anime/Symphogear [[Anime/SenkiZesshouSymphogear several women in armor fighting while singing]], and [[VideoGame/DevilMayCry Nero]],]] inflicted one on the guards attacking Lurolona village, and without killing any of them to boot. The King is surprised to hear that the worst injuries sustained were some broken bones.
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* WhamEpisode: Chapter 5, ''The First Wave'' is significantly darker than the any of the previous ones, featuring the first wave from a young Raphtalia's perspective [[spoiler: and [[VideoGame/DevilMayCry features]] [[WesternAnimation/GeneratorRex several]] [[WesternAnimation/RandyCunninghamNinthGradeNinja other]] [[Anime/Symphogear [[Anime/SenkiZesshouSymphogear franchises]] being introduced to the story]].
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** It is stated that an unknown group, [[spoiler: which the next chapter indicates consisted of [[WesternAnimation/GeneratorRex Rex Salazar]], [[WesternAnimation/RandyCunninghamNinthGradeNinja the Ninja of Norrisville]], several [[{{Anime}}/{{Symphogear}} several women in armor fighting while singing]], and [[VideoGame/DevilMayCry Nero]],]] inflicted one on the guards attacking Lurolona village, and without killing any of them to boot. The King is surprised to hear that the worst injuries sustained were some broken bones.
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** It is stated that an unknown group, [[spoiler: which the next chapter indicates consisted of [[WesternAnimation/GeneratorRex Rex Salazar]], [[WesternAnimation/RandyCunninghamNinthGradeNinja the Ninja of Norrisville]], several [[{{Anime}}/{{Symphogear}} [[Anime/Symphogear several women in armor fighting while singing]], and [[VideoGame/DevilMayCry Nero]],]] inflicted one on the guards attacking Lurolona village, and without killing any of them to boot. The King is surprised to hear that the worst injuries sustained were some broken bones.
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* WhamEpisode: Chapter 5, ''The First Wave'' is significantly darker than the any of the previous ones, featuring the first wave from a young Raphtalia's perspective [[spoiler: and [[VideoGame/DevilMayCry features]] [[WesternAnimation/GeneratorRex several]] [[WesternAnimation/RandyCunninghamNinthGradeNinja other]] [[{{Anime}}/{{Symphogear}} franchises]] being introduced to the story]].
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* WhamEpisode: Chapter 5, ''The First Wave'' is significantly darker than the any of the previous ones, featuring the first wave from a young Raphtalia's perspective [[spoiler: and [[VideoGame/DevilMayCry features]] [[WesternAnimation/GeneratorRex several]] [[WesternAnimation/RandyCunninghamNinthGradeNinja other]] [[{{Anime}}/{{Symphogear}} [[Anime/Symphogear franchises]] being introduced to the story]].
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** It is stated that the trio (though no one in Melromarc knows its them) inflicted one on the guards attacking Lute village, and without killing any of them to boot. The King is surprised to hear that the worst injuries sustained were some broken bones.
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** It is stated that an unknown group, [[spoiler: which the trio (though no one next chapter indicates consisted of [[WesternAnimation/GeneratorRex Rex Salazar]], [[WesternAnimation/RandyCunninghamNinthGradeNinja the Ninja of Norrisville]], several [[{{Anime}}/{{Symphogear}} several women in Melromarc knows its them) armor fighting while singing]], and [[VideoGame/DevilMayCry Nero]],]] inflicted one on the guards attacking Lute Lurolona village, and without killing any of them to boot. The King is surprised to hear that the worst injuries sustained were some broken bones.
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* WhamEpisode: Chapter 5, ''The First Wave'' is significantly darker than the any of the previous ones, featuring the first wave from a young Raphtalia's perspective [[spoiler: and [[VideoGame/DevilMayCry features]] [[WesternAnimation/GeneratorRex several]] [[WesternAnimation/RandyCunninghamNinthGradeNinja other]] [[{{Anime}}/{{Symphogear}} franchises]] being introduced to the story]].
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* ScrewThisIAmOutOfHere: Once it became clear Malty was lying, Ren straight up just walked out of the trail, not even bothering to hear the verdict of a obvious KangarooCourt.
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* ScrewThisIAmOutOfHere: ScrewThisImOutOfHere: Once it became clear Malty was lying, Ren straight up just walked out of the trail, not even bothering to hear the verdict of a obvious KangarooCourt.
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* OnlySaneMan: Ren is the only one of the other Three Heroes who accepts that Malty lied.
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* ScrewThisIAmOutOfHere: Once it became clear Malty was lying, Ren straight up just walked out of the trail, not even bothering to hear the verdict of a obvious KangarooCourt.
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** It is stated that the trio (though no one in Melromarc knows its them) inflicted one on the guards attacking Lute village, and without killing any of them to boot. The King is surprised to hear that the worst injuries sustained were some broken bones
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** It is stated that the trio (though no one in Melromarc knows its them) inflicted one on the guards attacking Lute village, and without killing any of them to boot. The King is surprised to hear that the worst injuries sustained were some broken bonesbones.
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* CurbStompBattle: WordOdGod has stated that this is pretty much the premise of the fic, with the protagonists doling them out quite frequently.
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* CurbStompBattle: WordOdGod WordOfGod has stated that this is pretty much the premise of the fic, with the protagonists doling them out quite frequently.
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** Shadows from the Church of the Three Heroes attempted to ambush Ben, Nanoha and Fate individually, and are effortlessly subdued each time.
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* CurbStompBattle: WordOdGod has stated that this is pretty much the premise of the fic, with the protagonists doling them out quite frequently.
** After the trio show up before the King in the midst of Malty's 'accusations' they bind all the guards (and Motoyasu when he attempts to intervene) within ''seconds''. Nanoha and Fate do so with magic, while Ben does so using [[GreenThumb vines from his shield.]]
** It is stated that the trio (though no one in Melromarc knows its them) inflicted one on the guards attacking Lute village, and without killing any of them to boot. The King is surprised to hear that the worst injuries sustained were some broken bones
** After the trio show up before the King in the midst of Malty's 'accusations' they bind all the guards (and Motoyasu when he attempts to intervene) within ''seconds''. Nanoha and Fate do so with magic, while Ben does so using [[GreenThumb vines from his shield.]]
** It is stated that the trio (though no one in Melromarc knows its them) inflicted one on the guards attacking Lute village, and without killing any of them to boot. The King is surprised to hear that the worst injuries sustained were some broken bones
* NiceJobFixingItVillain: The Church shadow sent to spy on the trio gets caught by what seems to be Pesky Dust, giving Ben a goldmine of information about the Church of the Three Heroes.
* OutsideContextProblem: Ben alone would have qualified for this, being an [[ExperiencedProtagonist experienced superhero]] armed with the [[VoluntaryShapeshifting Omnitrix]], but Nanoha and Fate accompanying him throws an even bigger wrench into the mix, especially given what their magic [[PersonOfMassDestruction makes them capable of]] compared to that found in Melromarc.
* OutsideContextProblem: Ben alone would have qualified for this, being an [[ExperiencedProtagonist experienced superhero]] armed with the [[VoluntaryShapeshifting Omnitrix]], but Nanoha and Fate accompanying him throws an even bigger wrench into the mix, especially given what their magic [[PersonOfMassDestruction makes them capable of]] compared to that found in Melromarc.
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** Relating to the above, while people were initially appalled to hear that the shield hero apparently raped someone, upon realizing it was [[SpoiledBrat Malty]] who made the accusations, no-one believes it. It's mentioned she's pulled [[FalseRapeAccusation the same stunt]] several times before, and the fact that that she is still known to [[ReallyGetsAround flirt and sleep with many men]] makes it abundantly clear that she was never a victim of
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** Relating to the above, while people were initially appalled to hear that the shield hero apparently raped someone, upon realizing it was [[SpoiledBrat Malty]] who made the accusations, no-one believes it. It's mentioned she's pulled [[FalseRapeAccusation the same stunt]] several times before, and the fact that that she is still known to [[ReallyGetsAround flirt and sleep with many men]] makes it abundantly clear that she was never a victim of rape.
* TranquilFury: Sums up Ben, Nanoha and Fates attitude when appearing before the King after Malty's FalseRapeAccusation. The three are quiet, never raise their voices, yet their tone of voice is seething and they give Motoyasu a collective DeathGlare that (in his own words) 'feels like being stared down by three apex predators' when he parrots the accusations.
** From the same scene, Bens words to Aultcry after the latter threatens to have Nanoha and Fate executed merely for being his companions are full of this, delivering a death threat in a cold tone, while holding the King in a headlock.
* TranquilFury: Sums up Ben, Nanoha and Fates attitude when appearing before the King after Malty's FalseRapeAccusation. The three are quiet, never raise their voices, yet their tone of voice is seething and they give Motoyasu a collective DeathGlare that (in his own words) 'feels like being stared down by three apex predators' when he parrots the accusations.
** From the same scene, Bens words to Aultcry after the latter threatens to have Nanoha and Fate executed merely for being his companions are full of this, delivering a death threat in a cold tone, while holding the King in a headlock.
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** Ben, Nanoha and Fate call out the other heroes for demanding compensation immediately upon arrival before agreeing to help anyone. They agree that they need resources to accomplish their objectives but point out the trio were acting more like mercenaries than heroes in doing so.
** For a very loose definition of 'hero', but the trio call out the king for summoning all four cardinal heroes behind the rest of the worlds back, potentially risking starting a war.
** For a very loose definition of 'hero', but the trio call out the king for summoning all four cardinal heroes behind the rest of the worlds back, potentially risking starting a war.
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** Ben, Nanoha and Fate call out the other heroes for demanding compensation immediately upon arrival before agreeing to help anyone. They agree that they need resources to accomplish their objectives but point out the trio 'heroes' were acting more like mercenaries than proper heroes in doing so.
** For a very loose definition of 'hero', but the trio call out the king for summoning all four cardinal heroes behind the rest of the worlds back, potentially risking starting awar.war, especially when they're already dealing with the waves of calamity.
* WrongContextMagic: Nanoha and Fate retain their Devices and TSAB style magic, which is vastly different from how magic operates in the ''Shield Hero'' world, catching many people off guard.
** For a very loose definition of 'hero', but the trio call out the king for summoning all four cardinal heroes behind the rest of the worlds back, potentially risking starting a
* WrongContextMagic: Nanoha and Fate retain their Devices and TSAB style magic, which is vastly different from how magic operates in the ''Shield Hero'' world, catching many people off guard.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13847628/1/The-coming-of-the-True-Heroes The coming of the True Heroes]]'' by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6429435/Rougedragon Rougedragon]] is a ''WesternAnimation/Ben10''/''LightNovel/TheRisingOfTheShieldHero'' crossover featuring the [[FandomSpecificPlot common setup]] of someone taking Naofumi's place as the shield hero, in this case, an eighteen-year-old Ben Tennyson. It's also notable in that it serves as a distant sequel the authors other crossover between ''WesternAnimation/Ben10'' and ''Franchise/LyricalNanoha'', found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13533936/1/Aliens-and-Magic here]], as Ben is accompanied by his cousin Nanoha and her friend Fate.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13847628/1/The-coming-of-the-True-Heroes The coming of the True Heroes]]'' by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6429435/Rougedragon Rougedragon]] is a ''WesternAnimation/Ben10''/''LightNovel/TheRisingOfTheShieldHero'' crossover featuring the [[FandomSpecificPlot common setup]] of someone taking Naofumi's place as the shield hero, in this case, an eighteen-year-old a nineteen-year-old Ben Tennyson. It's also notable in that it serves as a distant sequel the authors other crossover between ''WesternAnimation/Ben10'' and ''Franchise/LyricalNanoha'', found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13533936/1/Aliens-and-Magic here]], as Ben is accompanied by his cousin Nanoha and her friend Fate.
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* ExperiencedProtagonist: Ben, Nanoha and Fate are all eighteen here, and allude to the fact that they have faced plenty of world ending threats before.
* HeartIsAnAwesomePower: Ben's attitude regarding getting the shield, noting that just because it doesn't have any offensive abilities doesn't mean its useless. [[FridgeBrilliance Makes sense when you realize how many aliens with 'useless' powers he's unlocked by this point.]]*
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* HeartIsAnAwesomePower: Ben's attitude regarding getting the shield, noting that just because it doesn't have any offensive abilities doesn't mean its useless. [[FridgeBrilliance Makes sense when you realize how many aliens with 'useless' powers he's unlocked by this point.]]*
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* ExperiencedProtagonist: Ben, Nanoha and Fate are all eighteen nineteen here, and allude to the fact that they have faced plenty of world ending threats before.
* HeartIsAnAwesomePower: Ben's attitude regarding getting the shield, noting that just because it doesn't have any offensive abilities doesn't mean its useless. [[FridgeBrilliance Makes sense when you realize how many aliens with 'useless' powers he's unlocked by this point.]]*
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* RelatedInTheAdaptation: Nanoha and Ben are cousins.
* SerialKiller: Ren realizes that [[BitchInSheepsClothing Malty]] is essentially this, having made several FalseRapeAccusation's before, using her fathers influence to have them found guilty and thus giving them the death penalty.
* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome
* HeartIsAnAwesomePower: Ben's attitude regarding getting the shield, noting that just because it doesn't have any offensive abilities doesn't mean its useless. [[FridgeBrilliance Makes sense when you realize how many aliens with 'useless' powers he's unlocked by this point.
* RelatedInTheAdaptation: Nanoha and Ben are cousins.
* SerialKiller: Ren realizes that [[BitchInSheepsClothing Malty]] is essentially this, having made several FalseRapeAccusation's before, using her fathers influence to have them found guilty and thus giving them the death penalty.
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** Relating to the above, while people were initially appalled to hear that the shield hero apparently raped someone, upon realizing it was [[SpoiledBrat Malty]] who made the accusations, no-one believes it. It's mentioned she's pulled [[FalseRapeAccusation the same stunt]] several times before, and the fact that that she is still known to [[ReallyGetsAround flirt and sleep with many men]] makes it abundantly clear that she was never a victim of rape.
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** Relating to the above, while people were initially appalled to hear that the shield hero apparently raped someone, upon realizing it was [[SpoiledBrat Malty]] who made the accusations, no-one believes it. It's mentioned she's pulled [[FalseRapeAccusation the same stunt]] several times before, and the fact that that she is still known to [[ReallyGetsAround flirt and sleep with many men]] makes it abundantly clear that she was never a victim of rape.
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* CrackFic: By the authors own admission, with the story being told solely from the perspectives of the ''Shield Hero'' cast.
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** Malty's attempts to frame Ben fall flat, since Nanoha and Fate provide several recordings that contradict her narration of events, and clearly show he went nowhere near her all night. Hell, they even catch her trying to set him up on tape.
* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome:
** Malty's attempts to frame Ben fall flat, since Nanoha and Fate provide several recordings that contradict her narration of events, and clearly show he went nowhere near her all night. Hell, they even catch her trying to set him up on tape.
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* HeartIsAnAwesomePower: Ben's attitude regarding getting the shield, noting that just because it doesn't have any offensive abilities doesn't mean its useless. [[FridgeBrilliance Makes sense when you realize how many aliens with minimal 'useless' powers he's unlocked by this point.]]
* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome:
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** Malty's attempts to frame Ben fall flat, since Nanoha and Fate point out the many holes within her testimony of events and her behavior afterwards. In addition, they provide several recordings that contradict her narration of events, and clearly show he went nowhere near her all night. Hell, they even catch her trying toset him up break into their room on tape.tape right before going straight to Motoyasu's.
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** Malty's attempts to frame Ben fall flat, since Nanoha and Fate point out the many holes within her testimony of events and her behavior afterwards. In addition, they provide several recordings that contradict her narration of events, and clearly show he went nowhere near her all night. Hell, they even catch her trying to
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** Relating to the above, while people were initially appalled to hear that the shield hero apparently raped someone, upon realizing it was [[SpoiledBrat Malty]] who made the accusations, no-one believes it since it's mentioned she's pulled [[FalseRapeAccusation the same stunt]] several times before, and they're well aware of her true character.
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** Relating to the above, while people were initially appalled to hear that the shield hero apparently raped someone, upon realizing it was [[SpoiledBrat Malty]] who made the accusations, no-one believes it. It's mentioned she's pulled [[FalseRapeAccusation the same stunt]] several times before, and the fact that that she is still known to [[ReallyGetsAround flirt and sleep with many men]] makes it abundantly clear that she was never a victim of rape.
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** Ben, Nanoha and Fate call out the other heroes for demanding compensation immediately upon arrival before agreeing to help anyone. They agree that they need resources to accomplish their objectives but point out the trio were acting more like mercenaries than heroes in doingso.so.
** For a very loose definition of 'hero', but the trio call out the king for summoning all four cardinal heroes behind the rest of the worlds back, potentially risking starting a war.
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** Ben, Nanoha and Fate call out the other heroes for demanding compensation immediately upon arrival before agreeing to help anyone. They agree that they need resources to accomplish their objectives but point out the trio were acting more like mercenaries than heroes in doing
** For a very loose definition of 'hero', but the trio call out the king for summoning all four cardinal heroes behind the rest of the worlds back, potentially risking starting a war.
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They were chosen to be the Heroes of this world. They were given weapons with unlimited strength and potential. They thought they were going to have fun. That they were now living in a game they enjoyed in their previous life. Then why were there individuals who constantly proven themself to be better than them, and why didn't they fit into the fantasy setting of the game.
''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13847628/1/The-coming-of-the-True-Heroes The coming of the True Heroes]]'' by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6429435/Rougedragon Rougedragon]] is a ''WesternAnimation/Ben10''/''LightNovel/TheRisingOfTheShieldHero'' crossover featuring the [[FandomSpecificPlot common setup]] of someone taking Naofumi's place as the shield hero, in this case, an eighteen-year-old Ben Tennyson. It's also notable in that it serves as a distant sequel the authors other crossover between ''WesternAnimation/Ben10'' and ''Franchise/LyricalNanoha'', found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13533936/1/Aliens-and-Magic here]], as Ben is accompanied by his cousin Nanoha and her friend Fate.
!''The coming of the True Heroes'' provides examples of:
* EvilIsPetty: Malty tried to have Nanoha and Fate captured and sold into slavery not only because they are allies to the shield hero, but because they're prettier than her.
* ExperiencedProtagonist: Ben, Nanoha and Fate are all eighteen here, and allude to the fact that they have faced plenty of world ending threats before.
* HeartIsAnAwesomePower: Ben's attitude regarding getting the shield, noting that just because it doesn't have any offensive abilities doesn't mean its useless. [[FridgeBrilliance Makes sense when you realize how many aliens with minimal powers he's unlocked by this point.]]
* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome:
** Malty's attempts to frame Ben fall flat, since Nanoha and Fate provide several recordings that contradict her narration of events, and clearly show he went nowhere near her all night. Hell, they even catch her trying to set him up on tape.
** While the [[InSpiteOfANail King still declares that Ben is guilty]], absolutely no-one else is convinced, especially since the whole trial was broadcast nationwide.
** Relating to the above, while people were initially appalled to hear that the shield hero apparently raped someone, upon realizing it was [[SpoiledBrat Malty]] who made the accusations, no-one believes it since it's mentioned she's pulled [[FalseRapeAccusation the same stunt]] several times before, and they're well aware of her true character.
** Malty and Motoyasu try to poison Nanoha and Fate against Ben by saying he may try to attack them as well, Malty as a desperate ploy to undermine him while Motoyasu genuinely believes Malty's accusations. All this does is piss them off (with Fate slapping Malty) and incredulously ask if they expected them to believe someone they've just met over a friend they've known for years.
* WhatTheHellHero: Ben, Nanoha and Fate call out the other heroes for demanding compensation immediately upon arrival before agreeing to help anyone. They agree that they need resources to accomplish their objectives but point out the trio were acting more like mercenaries than heroes in doing so.
''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13847628/1/The-coming-of-the-True-Heroes The coming of the True Heroes]]'' by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6429435/Rougedragon Rougedragon]] is a ''WesternAnimation/Ben10''/''LightNovel/TheRisingOfTheShieldHero'' crossover featuring the [[FandomSpecificPlot common setup]] of someone taking Naofumi's place as the shield hero, in this case, an eighteen-year-old Ben Tennyson. It's also notable in that it serves as a distant sequel the authors other crossover between ''WesternAnimation/Ben10'' and ''Franchise/LyricalNanoha'', found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13533936/1/Aliens-and-Magic here]], as Ben is accompanied by his cousin Nanoha and her friend Fate.
!''The coming of the True Heroes'' provides examples of:
* EvilIsPetty: Malty tried to have Nanoha and Fate captured and sold into slavery not only because they are allies to the shield hero, but because they're prettier than her.
* ExperiencedProtagonist: Ben, Nanoha and Fate are all eighteen here, and allude to the fact that they have faced plenty of world ending threats before.
* HeartIsAnAwesomePower: Ben's attitude regarding getting the shield, noting that just because it doesn't have any offensive abilities doesn't mean its useless. [[FridgeBrilliance Makes sense when you realize how many aliens with minimal powers he's unlocked by this point.]]
* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome:
** Malty's attempts to frame Ben fall flat, since Nanoha and Fate provide several recordings that contradict her narration of events, and clearly show he went nowhere near her all night. Hell, they even catch her trying to set him up on tape.
** While the [[InSpiteOfANail King still declares that Ben is guilty]], absolutely no-one else is convinced, especially since the whole trial was broadcast nationwide.
** Relating to the above, while people were initially appalled to hear that the shield hero apparently raped someone, upon realizing it was [[SpoiledBrat Malty]] who made the accusations, no-one believes it since it's mentioned she's pulled [[FalseRapeAccusation the same stunt]] several times before, and they're well aware of her true character.
** Malty and Motoyasu try to poison Nanoha and Fate against Ben by saying he may try to attack them as well, Malty as a desperate ploy to undermine him while Motoyasu genuinely believes Malty's accusations. All this does is piss them off (with Fate slapping Malty) and incredulously ask if they expected them to believe someone they've just met over a friend they've known for years.
* WhatTheHellHero: Ben, Nanoha and Fate call out the other heroes for demanding compensation immediately upon arrival before agreeing to help anyone. They agree that they need resources to accomplish their objectives but point out the trio were acting more like mercenaries than heroes in doing so.
