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* CurbStompBattle: Asuka against the Angel that appeared in chapter 3. The giant alien was crushing her fellow pilots when she came along, pushed it away with a hand, and helped Shinji and Rei to kill it with a single attack.
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To compare with other Eva fics from that era go to ''Fanfic/NeonGenesisEvangelionR'', ''Fanfic/{{HERZ}}'', ''Fanfic/TheOneILoveIs'', ''Fanfic/ChildrenOfAnElderGod'' or ''Fanfic/HigherLearning''.
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* InferioritySuperiorityComplex: In chapter 2 Misato tells Shinji about Asuka's past and her mother issues, and how her so-called arrogance is a mask to hide how fragile she is.
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* TalkingInBed: In chapter 9 Shinji and Asuka talk about their inminent parenthood and the future of their relationship. Asuka also tells Shinji she is at last sure she truly loves him.
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In the early days of ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'' fanfiction, a writer named Zaku Gandi wrote a -forgotten long ago- lemon called "Wet Dreams" ([[https://mega.nz/#!WFJEAYLa!1ywQgJPrXKMhRKCjDVZ3a6hD1OSHWpdH-2rrU10jRl8 click here for a copy of "Wet Dreams"]] and its [[https://mega.nz/#!vZoTHALJ!-eZ1r1IyC3_Rwp1_tc7Ss6gVHRlfojP5NdOMqTPL4GI sequel]]). At the end of the first chapter Asuka asks Shinji: "Shinji-kun, I'm bored. Want to fuck?". Inspired by it, another writer named [=TheFlashman=] wrote a -forgotten long ago- short-fic called "She's WHAT?" where Shinji had got Asuka pregnant. Similarly inspired by it, another writer called Axel Terizaki penned an AlternateUniverse {{WAFF}} story that became one of the classics of Evangelion fanfiction: ''The Child of Love''.
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In the early days of ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'' fanfiction, a writer named Zaku Gandi wrote a -forgotten long ago- lemon called "Wet Dreams" ([[https://mega.nz/#!WFJEAYLa!1ywQgJPrXKMhRKCjDVZ3a6hD1OSHWpdH-2rrU10jRl8 click here for a copy of "Wet Dreams"]] and its [[https://mega.nz/#!vZoTHALJ!-eZ1r1IyC3_Rwp1_tc7Ss6gVHRlfojP5NdOMqTPL4GI sequel]]). At the end of the first chapter Asuka asks Shinji: "Shinji-kun, I'm bored. Want to fuck?". Inspired by it, another writer named [=TheFlashman=] wrote a -forgotten long ago- short-fic called [[https://mega.nz/#!jBAWkQ5B!cSwRLBd0a6NFes_EOGlM6G_N1-AJGeTrfNmLUdScoYw "She's WHAT?" WHAT?"]] where Shinji had got Asuka pregnant. Similarly inspired by it, another writer called Axel Terizaki penned an AlternateUniverse {{WAFF}} story that became one of the classics of Evangelion fanfiction: ''The Child of Love''.
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In the early days of ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'' fanfiction, a writer named Zaku Gandi wrote a -forgotten long ago- lemon called "Wet Dreams" ([https://mega.nz/#!WFJEAYLa!1ywQgJPrXKMhRKCjDVZ3a6hD1OSHWpdH-2rrU10jRl8 copy of "Wet Dreams"] and its [https://mega.nz/#!vZoTHALJ!-eZ1r1IyC3_Rwp1_tc7Ss6gVHRlfojP5NdOMqTPL4GI sequel]). At the end of the first chapter Asuka asks Shinji: "Shinji-kun, I'm bored. Want to fuck?". Inspired by it, another writer named [=TheFlashman=] wrote a -forgotten long ago- short-fic called "She's WHAT?" where Shinji had got Asuka pregnant. Similarly inspired by it, another writer called Axel Terizaki penned an AlternateUniverse {{WAFF}} story that became one of the classics of Evangelion fanfiction: ''The Child of Love''.
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In the early days of ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'' fanfiction, a writer named Zaku Gandi wrote a -forgotten long ago- lemon called "Wet Dreams" ([https://mega.([[https://mega.nz/#!WFJEAYLa!1ywQgJPrXKMhRKCjDVZ3a6hD1OSHWpdH-2rrU10jRl8 click here for a copy of "Wet Dreams"] Dreams"]] and its [https://mega.[[https://mega.nz/#!vZoTHALJ!-eZ1r1IyC3_Rwp1_tc7Ss6gVHRlfojP5NdOMqTPL4GI sequel]).sequel]]). At the end of the first chapter Asuka asks Shinji: "Shinji-kun, I'm bored. Want to fuck?". Inspired by it, another writer named [=TheFlashman=] wrote a -forgotten long ago- short-fic called "She's WHAT?" where Shinji had got Asuka pregnant. Similarly inspired by it, another writer called Axel Terizaki penned an AlternateUniverse {{WAFF}} story that became one of the classics of Evangelion fanfiction: ''The Child of Love''.
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In the early days of ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'' fanfiction, a writer named Zaku Gandi wrote a -forgotten long ago- lemon called "Wet Dreams".Dreams" ([https://mega.nz/#!WFJEAYLa!1ywQgJPrXKMhRKCjDVZ3a6hD1OSHWpdH-2rrU10jRl8 copy of "Wet Dreams"] and its [https://mega.nz/#!vZoTHALJ!-eZ1r1IyC3_Rwp1_tc7Ss6gVHRlfojP5NdOMqTPL4GI sequel]). At the end of the first chapter Asuka asks Shinji: "Shinji-kun, I'm bored. Want to fuck?". Inspired by it, another writer named [=TheFlashman=] wrote a -forgotten long ago- short-fic called "She's WHAT?" where Shinji had got Asuka pregnant. Similarly inspired by it, another writer called Axel Terizaki penned an AlternateUniverse {{WAFF}} story that became one of the classics of Evangelion fanfiction: ''The Child of Love''.
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* ItsAllMyFault: In the epilogue that happens several years after the end of the story, Asuka blames herself for[[spoiler:her daughter Teri having PsychicPowers,]] even though [[spoiler:Teri has powers because Gendo altered her DNA.]] It is true Ritsuko prescribed her pills to nullify [[spoiler:Gendo's modifications]] and Asuka blames herself because she stopped taking them, but the doctor never warmed her about the consequences.
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* ShoutOut: It has its own page.
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* ShoutOut: It has its own page.ShellShockedVeteran: As seen in the sequels, Shinji and Asuka tried to put so much distance as possible between them and NERV after the war for their and their daughter's sake. However the ordeals of the past still affects them, and they still are forced to deploy their giant robots every so often, despite of Shinji telling they are sick of killing people.
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* FollowTheLeader: This story started the trend of Shinji and Asuka having a daughter in fanfiction. When they have offspring in any fanwork, ninety percent of time it is a girl: ''[[Fanfic/{{HERZ}} Akiko, Sakiko]]'', their two unnamed children in ''Manga/ReTake'', ''[[Fanfic/TheSecondTry Aki]]'', ''[[Fanfic/ThousandShinji Kali]]'', ''[[Fanfic/WalkingInTheShadowOfDreams Ariel]]'', their unborn daughter in ''Fanfic/LastChildOfKrypton'', ''[[Fanfic/ACrownOfStars Misato]]'', Ryuko in ''[[http://forum.evageeks.org/thread/16236/Ghosts-of-Evangelion/? Ghosts of Evangelion]]''…
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* FollowTheLeader: This story started the trend of Shinji and Asuka having a daughter in fanfiction. When they have offspring in any fanwork, ninety percent of time it is a girl: ''[[Fanfic/{{HERZ}} Akiko, Sakiko]]'', their two unnamed children in ''Manga/ReTake'', ''[[Fanfic/TheSecondTry Aki]]'', ''[[Fanfic/ThousandShinji Kali]]'', ''[[Fanfic/WalkingInTheShadowOfDreams Ariel]]'', their unborn daughter in ''Fanfic/LastChildOfKrypton'', ''[[Fanfic/ACrownOfStars Misato]]'', Ryuko in ''[[http://forum.evageeks.org/thread/16236/Ghosts-of-Evangelion/? org/thread/16236/Ghosts-of-Evangelion/ Ghosts of Evangelion]]''…
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* FirstGirlWins: Asuka is the first girl shows up in the story. Shinji got her pregnant and throughout her pregnancy they must come to terms with their inminent parenthood and repair their strained relationship, eventually getting together.
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* ExpendableClone:
** Gendo was not worried about Rei interfering with his plans because he treated her as an expendable tool who would follow his orders to the letter and would never rebel. He was [[spoiler:wrong. Very, very wrong.]]
** Ironically Rei's clone status is treated as something good in the sequel. NERV's new leadership is more decent than Gendo, but when [[spoiler:Rei II dies as fighting Armisael,]] they are relieved because [[spoiler:she can be brought back]] since she has several dozens of spare bodies.
** Gendo was not worried about Rei interfering with his plans because he treated her as an expendable tool who would follow his orders to the letter and would never rebel. He was [[spoiler:wrong. Very, very wrong.]]
** Ironically Rei's clone status is treated as something good in the sequel. NERV's new leadership is more decent than Gendo, but when [[spoiler:Rei II dies as fighting Armisael,]] they are relieved because [[spoiler:she can be brought back]] since she has several dozens of spare bodies.
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* TookALevelInBadass: Due to [[spoiler:Gendo messing up with her unborn's daughter DNA,]] Asuka became fiercer and more dangerous when she fought. She single-handedly held back and pushed away a giant moster who almost crushed both Shinji and Rei.
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* TookALevelInCheerfulness:
** After finding out she was pregnant, Asuka spent several weeks feeling angrier and more depressed than usual. After that time her mood changed again due to her physical shifts and she started to behave in a more joyful, cheerier fashion.
** Shinji also became happier after Asuka and him got together.
** After finding out she was pregnant, Asuka spent several weeks feeling angrier and more depressed than usual. After that time her mood changed again due to her physical shifts and she started to behave in a more joyful, cheerier fashion.
** Shinji also became happier after Asuka and him got together.
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* TookALevelInKindness: Due to the changes she undergoes through her pregnancy, Asuka's behaviour becomes softer. After hooking up with Shinji she is way nicer to him, at the beginning privately but later openly. When Touji muses Asuka is nicer than she used to, Shinji replies that is the real Asuka and the mean girl was a façade.
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* BonusMaterial: This story has two omakes: in one of them Asuka berates the author for not updating his site. In the other the pilots and their friends play an arcade.
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* YoureNotMyFather: After the events of the story Shinji calls his father out on everything he did to himself, Asuka and their daughter and tells him as far as he is concerned, he is a stranger. Several years later he still refuses to refer to Gendo as his father.
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In the early days of ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'' fanfiction, a writer named Zaku Gandi wrote a -forgotten long ago- lemon called "Wet Dreams". At the end of the first chapter Asuka asks Shinji: "Shinji-kun, I'm bored. Want to fuck?". Inspired by it, another writer named [=TheFlashman=] wrote a -forgotten long ago- short-fic called "She's WHAT?" where Shinji had got Asuka pregnant. Similarly inspired by it, another writer called Axel Terizaki penned an an AlternateUniverse {{WAFF}} story that became one of the classics of Evangelion fanfiction: ''The Child of Love''.
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In the early days of ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'' fanfiction, a writer named Zaku Gandi wrote a -forgotten long ago- lemon called "Wet Dreams". At the end of the first chapter Asuka asks Shinji: "Shinji-kun, I'm bored. Want to fuck?". Inspired by it, another writer named [=TheFlashman=] wrote a -forgotten long ago- short-fic called "She's WHAT?" where Shinji had got Asuka pregnant. Similarly inspired by it, another writer called Axel Terizaki penned an an AlternateUniverse {{WAFF}} story that became one of the classics of Evangelion fanfiction: ''The Child of Love''.
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* LoveTriangle: Shinji liked Asuka but he was too afraid of being rejected to confess, Asuka liked Shinji but she was too afraid of being rejected to admit it to herself, and Rei liked Shinji and she was jealous, but she did not want to interfere. After a while Shinji and Asuka got together, and Rei made Asuka jealous until Rei explained she did not intend to take Shinji away her.
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In the early days of Evangelion fanfiction, a writer named Zaku Gandi wrote a -forgotten long ago- lemon called "Wet Dreams". At the end of the first chapter Asuka asks Shinji: "Shinji-kun, I'm bored. Want to fuck?". Inspired by it, another writer named [=TheFlashman=] wrote a -forgotten long ago- short-fic called "She's WHAT?" where Shinji had got Asuka pregnant. Similarly inspired by it, another writer called Axel Terizaki penned one of the classics of Evangelion fanfiction.
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* BattleCouple: It took a good while for them to open up to each other, but Shinji and Asuka got together and kept fighting giant monsters together. In chapter 3 it is not until Asuka rushes in the battlefield that the team gains the upper hand. In chapter 7 she does not fight directly due to her pregnancy, but she provides tactical support. After giving birth she and Shinji fight in tandem.
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* ItsNotYouItsMe: After losing badly against an Angel, Shinji gets depressed because he thinks he is unable to protect Asuka and their child, ergo, he is unfit to be her boyfriend and Teri's father, so he breaks up, thinking she will find someone better and stronger. [[ArmorPiercingSlap Asuka reacts as calmly as you would expect]], and Misato and she spend an entire month trying to reason with him until [[spoiler:Asuka had a long talk with him and they reconciled.]]
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* AcePilot: Among the main characters, Asuka is the best HumongousMecha pilot. She even [[spoiler:fought and killed an EldritchAbomination while pregnant. She fought that battle so hard her teammates were amazed.]]
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* AdaptationalCurves: Due to her pregnancy, Asuka becomes bustier that she was in the proper series. In the sequel, Rei notes her breasts are now bigger and her bra size has increased by at least three sizes, much to Asuka's embarrassment and anger.
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* HumanoidAbomination: Rei looks a mostly normal teen girl (even if a tad weird and emotionless), but in reality she is a piece of the soul of an ancient alien goddess stuck inside Shinji's mother's cloned body. The main characters found about it when she [[spoiler:slammed Gendo with her A T Field.]]
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* TurnOutLikeHisFather: Inverted during a DreamSequence where a frightened and despaired Shinji cries out that he will turn out like his father because they are just ''too'' alike, and his mother reassures him that he will not be like Gendo when he grows up.
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* FestivalEpisode: In episode 5 Shinji and Asuka go to Obon festival. They wear kimono, spend the afternoon together, hang out with their friends in the local arcade and watch fireworks together. As they are doing the latter activity they have a serious talk, open up and get together officially.
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: Rei is usually tranquil and passive. Then [[spoiler:Gendo threatened her niece, Shinji's daughter.]] Explosions followed.
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: It took a lot to make kind, non-confrontational Shinji snapping... but after his father Gendo [[spoiler:nearly got Asuka killed, schemed to turn their baby daughter into a war weapon]] Shinji was most ''unhappy''. Finding out Gendo had lied to him about burning all his mother's pictures was the last Straw. Shinji marched in his cell, called him out on everything and said he wanted nothing to do with him anymore and that would be their final conversation (understand Shinji is usually ''terrified'' of his father).
* BewareTheQuietOnes: Rei is usuallytranquil tranquil, quiet and passive. Then [[spoiler:Gendo threatened her niece, Shinji's daughter.]] Explosions and violence followed.
* BewareTheQuietOnes: Rei is usually
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The story -complete with spin-offs and sequels- could formerly be found in Axel's website -together with his other stories-, [[http://asuka.teri-chan.net/ Asuka's notebook]]: [[http://asuka.teri-chan.net/english/index.html here]]. It can still be found in [[http://fanbards.net/stories/12226 Darkscribes]] (although chapter 2 is missing for some reason) and [[http://web.archive.org/web/20071203212823/http://www.geocities.com/aa_chan01/archive/tcol/index.htm here]] (thankfully complete). [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/85116/David-Templar Child of Love 2]] also can be found in ff.net, and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4917/Axel-Terizaki Axel's ff.net profile]] also keeps several of his stories.
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The story -complete with spin-offs and sequels- could formerly be found in Axel's website -together with his other stories-, [[http://asuka.teri-chan.net/ Asuka's notebook]]: [[http://asuka.teri-chan.net/english/index.html here]]. It can still be found in [[http://fanbards.net/stories/12226 Darkscribes]] (although chapter 2 is missing for some reason) and reason), [[http://web.archive.org/web/20071203212823/http://www.geocities.com/aa_chan01/archive/tcol/index.htm here]] (thankfully complete).complete), [[http://www.reocities.com/aa_chan01/archive/tcol/TCoL01.html here]] and [[http://leviathanltd.tripod.com/id44.htm here]]. [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/85116/David-Templar Child of Love 2]] also can be found in ff.net, and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4917/Axel-Terizaki Axel's ff.net profile]] also keeps several of his stories.
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* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: Asuka was going to be killed after fulfilling her purpose to carry Gendo’s plans forward.
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* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: Gendo planned [[spoiler:to get Asuka was going to be killed after fulfilling getting her purpose to carry Gendo’s plans forward.his scheme forward]] because he would have not use for her afterwards.
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* TheDogBitesBack: After using, manipulating and treating his subordinates like crap, Gendo’s plans to [[spoiler:use Asuka as a test tube to create a genetically-enhanced super-soldier with little regard for the mother’s survival or the baby’s welfare]] were the straw broke the camel’s back. Everyone turned on him, including [[spoiler:Rei]] and he [[spoiler:got ousted and locked.]]
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* TheDogBitesBack: After using, manipulating and treating his subordinates like crap, Gendo’s plans to [[spoiler:use Asuka as a test tube to create a genetically-enhanced super-soldier with little regard for the mother’s survival or the baby’s welfare]] were the straw broke the camel’s camel’s back. Everyone turned on him, including [[spoiler:Rei]] and he [[spoiler:got ousted and locked.]]
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* WillTheyOrWontThey: Shinji and Asuka. In chapter 5 [[spoiler:they do.]]
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* WillTheyOrWontThey: Shinji and Asuka. Asuka loved each other but due to their multiple psychological issues did not dare to display openly their feelings. Then they slept together and Asuka got pregnant, which made their relationship harder for a while. In chapter 5 5, after several months of arguments and keeping an uneasy relationship, [[spoiler:they do.got together.]]
