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''The Archmage's Last Bow'' is an ongoing ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfiction written by [[Website/FIMFictionDotNet FIMFiction]] [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/Rytex user]] (and [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Tropers/Rytex troper]]) Rytex, and is the sequel to ''FanFic/TheApprenticeTheStudentAndTheCharlatan'', taking the place of a separate sequel that had taken too long to write and been overwritten by canon in the process. It can be found [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/451442/the-archmages-last-bow here]].

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''The Archmage's Last Bow'' is an ongoing ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfiction written by [[Website/FIMFictionDotNet FIMFiction]] Platform/{{FIMFiction|DotNet}} [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/Rytex user]] (and [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Tropers/Rytex troper]]) Rytex, and is the sequel to ''FanFic/TheApprenticeTheStudentAndTheCharlatan'', taking the place of a separate sequel that had taken too long to write and been overwritten by canon in the process. It can be found [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/451442/the-archmages-last-bow here]].
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* TheHecateSisters:
** Bright Gleam is the unambiguous maiden, being a tiny bit ditzy, starstruck over Nova and Twilight, and simply wanting to learn magic from her idols, not get caught up in a grand adventure.
** Twilight is the Matron, trying her damnedest to hold everyone together as everything around them goes to hell in a handbasket.
** The role of the Crone typically falls to Trixie, despite her not being any older than anyone else, but being particularly sarcastic and not afraid to snark to anyone and everyone, but also willing to comfort Nova and Twilight whenever they need it. At times, Captain Cinnabar acts this way, being an experienced soldier who previously served Sombra, who is professional and deadpan on the best of occasions, but does still earnestly believe Nova is the best teacher for Gleam.
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* ContrastingSequelAntagonist: While she still is pitted firmly against Nova, Envy is Sombra's personal thrall this time around, and while Envy was an AxCrazy LargeHam and very much a CardCarryingVillain, Sombra is subdued, pragmatic, and is convinced he is doing everything towards a greater goal only he knows.
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* EnergyBall: In addition to his uses from the previous fic, Nova now uses them as physical stepping stones to gain altitude and as shields. Their shape boils down to personal preference, as Lord Star Swirl uses his in the shape of lines, which he can form into a magic whip.
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* AsleepForDays: Subverted. Nova wakes up after suffering his energy crash and finds Trixie there waiting for him to come to. His first instinct is to ask how long he was out. Trixie hesitates, looking like she doesn't want to answer, and reveals it's only been eight hours. Nova tries to chuck a pillow at her for it.
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* ChildAbuseIsASpecialKindOfEvil: Envy implicitly threatens Gleam to get to Nova in their first meeting, and when Nova finds out about their meeting, he hurries off and tries his damnedest to smush Envy to a pulp without playing the usual banter game that Envy is expecting. This lasts until Envy drops the bombshell that [[spoiler:[[GrandTheftMe she's Shimmer Silvermane and has been possessing Summer all along]]]], where Nova's anger gives way to desperation instead.
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* ShapeshiftingSeducer: Zig-zagged. While she can change shapes at will and flirts with Nova relentlessly, and even tried to use this against him in the previous story, it's never genuine. Envy is always trying to unsettle him.
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* VerticalPowerPlay: During the Trial of Black and White, Nova Shine finds himself face-to-face with a much harsher version of himself, who [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech lays into him about every way he's not fit to be the archmage]], and who caps it off by causing statues of all previous archmages to erupt from the ground, cover him in their shadows, and look down on him while he stands atop one of them.
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* IDidWhatIHadToDo: Sombra justifies his actions to himself with TheNeedsOfTheMany. It remains to be seen who "the many" are.
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* AscendToAHigherPlaneOfExistence: Implied. Harmonia once was a pony of flesh and blood, but something happened to her and she ended up becoming the Spirit of Harmony.


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* GodIsFlawed: To call her a god would be quite the stretch, but Harmonia represents the closest thing in the story, and she herself freely admits that due to Harmony being a reactive force and due to her [[WasOnceAMan still being equine in mind and soul if not in body]], she is still fallible and prone to errors. Nova Shine's current predicament is due to a miscalculation on her part, as she did not know that her gift to him would accelerate so quickly.


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* SemiDivine: Harmonia is not a god herself, but she considers herself a partner of Harmony. She speaks for it, she acts on its behalf, but she is still equine in mind and soul.
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** When Princess Luna and Princess Celestia reveal that they've known Nova had arcane oversaturation and didn't tell them, she goes into such a rage that her Flamelight form, normally red/yellow/orange/white, burns so hot that her fires are closer to blue, purple, and black.

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** When Princess Luna and Princess Celestia reveal that they've known Nova had arcane oversaturation and didn't tell them, she Twilight goes into such a rage that her Flamelight form, normally red/yellow/orange/white, burns so hot that her fires are closer to blue, purple, and black.



* ClingyJealousGirl: When Nova came back still with a soft spot for Clover, Twilight did not get over it so easily.

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* ClingyJealousGirl: When Nova came back still with a soft spot for Clover, Twilight did not get over it so easily.easily, and it causes a lot of friction between them.



* DrowningMySorrows: Alcoholism catches up to Nova ''hard'' this time round after mostly not being touched on in the previous story. Nova drinks to cope, and this has a serious effect on his relationships with Nova and Trixie.

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* DrowningMySorrows: Alcoholism catches up to Nova ''hard'' this time round after mostly not being touched on in the previous story. Nova drinks to cope, and this has a serious effect on his relationships with Nova Twilight and Trixie.
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* AbUrbeCondita: Nova and Imperius' first meeting has them try to establish when Imperius comes from, and the only date system they both know is ''ab urbe condita'' for the city of Roam nearly 12,000 years in the past, which allows Imperius to realize he woke up nearly 10,000 years after going into stasis.
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* BluntYes: Bright Gleam asks Harmonia rather directly if she is gambling on Nova Shine living up to the hopes she has placed on him. Harmonia responds thusly.

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** When Twilight sees him for the first time after his energy crash, she's just as angry at him for scaring her out of her mind.

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** After he wakes up from his energy crash, Trixie smacks him with a pillow over and over for making them all worry.
** When Twilight sees him for the first time after his energy crash, she's just as angry at him for scaring her out of her mind. Nova calms her down by flirting with her, and [[RefugeInAudacity she's so taken aback, she lets him off.]]



** For Nova, hurting children, or threatening Bright Gleam. When it looks as though either Flurry Heart or Gleam may be in danger, he becomes much more focused and serious in a given combat situation.
** When Princess Luna and Princess Celestia reveal that they've known Nova had arcane oversaturation and didn't tell them, she goes into such a rage that her normally-red/yellow/orange Flamelight form burns so hot that her fires are closer to blue, purple, and black.

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** For Nova, hurting children, children or threatening Bright Gleam. When it looks as though either Flurry Heart or Gleam may be in danger, he becomes much more focused and serious in a given combat situation.
** When Princess Luna and Princess Celestia reveal that they've known Nova had arcane oversaturation and didn't tell them, she goes into such a rage that her normally-red/yellow/orange Flamelight form form, normally red/yellow/orange/white, burns so hot that her fires are closer to blue, purple, and black.



* {{Bizarchitecture}}: Twilight notes that the city of Elysium has buildings that seem geometrically-impossible to build.

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* {{Bizarchitecture}}: Twilight notes that the city of Elysium has buildings that seem geometrically-impossible geometrically impossible to build.



** Gleam idolizes Nova and Twilight, and when she starts to see their flaws and their friction with one another, wrestles with it for a time, but ultimately remains totally starry-eyed with them.

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** Gleam idolizes Nova and Twilight, and when she starts to see their flaws and their friction with one another, wrestles with it for a time, but ultimately remains totally starry-eyed with them.



* CardCarryingVillain: Envy remains a Type-3, though she clearly has a distaste for it now that the circumstances of her villainy are known to the protagonists.

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* CardCarryingVillain: Envy remains a Type-3, though she clearly has a distaste for it now that the circumstances of her villainy are known to the protagonists.



* CharacterTic: As before, Nova has a tendency to rub around his horn whenever he's in deep thought. Similarly, Twilight taps her chin when doing some serious thinking. It rubs off on Nova, because he starts doing it too. As well, Bright Gleam picks up on the horn-rubbing from her master.

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* CharacterTic: As before, Nova has a tendency tends to rub around his horn whenever he's in deep thought. Similarly, Twilight taps her chin when doing some serious thinking. It rubs off on Nova, because he starts doing it too. As well, Bright Gleam picks up on the horn-rubbing from her master.



* CosmicChessGame: According to Harmonia, there is one being played between two mysterious players over the Gems of Being, neither of which are aware of the other's existence. This game has been going on for so long, it predates even Star Swirl and Sombra by ''millennia''. One of them is implied to be Ars Arcanum.

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* CosmicChessGame: According to Harmonia, there is one being played between two mysterious players over the Gems of Being, neither of which are aware of the other's existence. This game has been going on for so long, long that it predates even Star Swirl and Sombra by ''millennia''. One of them is implied to be Ars Arcanum.



* CryLaughing: Upon learning he is dying, the four mares in the room at the time (as well as the thestral guards outside) are startled to hear that Nova's first reaction to the news is to laugh. The laugh gets more and more unhinged, until he starts sobbing.
* CrystalPrison: Nova, when inside of Shimmer Silvermane's head, sees Summer Blossom's soul trapped in a crystal the same shade of red as Envy's pendant.

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* CryLaughing: Upon learning he is dying, the four mares in the room at the time (as well as the thestral guards outside) are startled to hear that Nova's first reaction to the news is to laugh. The laugh gets more and more unhinged, unhinged until he starts sobbing.
* CrystalPrison: Nova, when inside of Shimmer Silvermane's head, sees Summer Blossom's soul trapped in a crystal the same shade of red as Envy's pendant.



* DeadpanSnarker: [[WorldOfSnark Everyone has their moments]], but mostly Nova. Even Bright Gleam gets in on it, though it takes her a while to actually mouth off to Nova. Nova finds it ActuallyPrettyFunny and is glad she's loosening up around him.

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* DeadpanSnarker: [[WorldOfSnark Everyone has their moments]], but mostly Nova. Even Bright Gleam gets in on it, though it takes her a while to actually mouth off to Nova. Nova finds it ActuallyPrettyFunny and is glad she's loosening up around him.



* ExactlyExtyYearsAgo: Lampshaded, then justified. Harmonic Convergence happens every TenThousandYears. Nova finds it awfully convenient. Star Swirl then notes that it was an event so significant to the alicorns that they oriented their entire dating system around making it line up.

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* ExactlyExtyYearsAgo: Lampshaded, then justified. Harmonic Convergence happens every TenThousandYears. Nova finds it awfully convenient. Star Swirl then notes that it was an event so significant to the alicorns that they oriented their entire dating system around making it line up.



* ForgottenFirstMeeting: Averted. It takes him a bit of prodding, but Nova is able to remember the first time he met Bright Gleam, four years ago on the day of his visit to Celestia's School, when he came to talk with Tantalus Lulamoon and Thomas Hoofman.

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* ForgottenFirstMeeting: Averted. It takes him a bit of prodding, but Nova is able to can remember the first time he met Bright Gleam, four years ago on the day of his visit to Celestia's School, when he came to talk with Tantalus Lulamoon and Thomas Hoofman.



* FromHeroToMentor: Nova Shine becomes Equestria's latest Archmage, having previously been Princess Luna's Night Apprentice only a few years earlier in ''Fanfic/TheApprenticeTheStudentAndTheCharlatan'', and one of the first things he does is take on his own apprentice, Bright Gleam, a unicorn filly he had a brief encounter with in ''Apprentice'''s early chapters.

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* FromHeroToMentor: Nova Shine becomes Equestria's latest Archmage, having previously been Princess Luna's Night Apprentice only a few years earlier in ''Fanfic/TheApprenticeTheStudentAndTheCharlatan'', and one of the first things he does is take on his own apprentice, Bright Gleam, a unicorn filly he had a brief encounter with briefly encountered in ''Apprentice'''s early chapters.



** Trixie also goes out of her way to annoy Twilight every chance she can when it isn't a serious moment.

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** Trixie also goes out of her way to annoy Twilight every chance she can when it isn't a serious moment. And when Nova wakes up after [[HeroicRROD a catastrophic energy crash]], she scares him by making him think he's been AsleepForDays, when in reality, it's only been an evening.



** Ars Arcanum's arcanosmithing talent is apparently prodigious in nature, to the point where it's implied he advances arcanosmithing forward by centuries working on the Crown of Life.

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** Ars Arcanum's arcanosmithing talent is apparently prodigious in nature, prodigious, to the point where it's implied he advances states that he would have to advance arcanosmithing forward by centuries when working on the Crown of Life.Life, something that he ultimately succeeded in doing.



* GoodHurtsEvil: At one point, Harmonia herself uses some kind of spell of pure piercing light on Shimmer, and it actually causes Shimmer to suffer excruciating pain. According to Harmonia, it's because she is attempting to [[spoiler:forcibly remove Sombra's soul from corrupting her, but it wouldn't let go]] which causes the pain as Shimmer's soul is being torn apart.

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* GoodHurtsEvil: At one point, Harmonia herself uses some kind of spell of pure piercing light on Shimmer, Shimmer and it actually causes Shimmer to suffer excruciating pain. According to Harmonia, it's because she is attempting to [[spoiler:forcibly remove Sombra's soul from corrupting her, but it wouldn't let go]] which causes the pain as Shimmer's soul is being torn apart.



** In a desperate attempt to squeeze more time out of his [[LivingOnBorrowedTime limited supply]], Nova overdoses on Elixir of Energy, suffering from a catastrophic energy crash in which he doesn't even have enough energy in his body to keep his own heart pumping. The only reason he's even still alive is because of his HealingFactor just barely keeping him so. The end of Chapter 9 sees him whisked away to the hospital to deal with this.

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** In a desperate attempt to squeeze more time out of his [[LivingOnBorrowedTime limited supply]], Nova overdoses on Elixir of Energy, suffering from a catastrophic energy crash in which he doesn't even have enough energy in his body to keep his own heart pumping. The only reason he's even still alive is because of his HealingFactor just barely keeping him so. The end of Chapter 9 sees him whisked away to the hospital to deal with this.



* HopeIsScary: Lord Star Swirl cautions Nova that hope of survival to someone condemned to die can be more dangerous than helpful, because it can drive a being to [[SlowlySlippingIntoEvil do worse and worse things for the sake of staying alive.]]

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* HopeIsScary: Lord Star Swirl cautions Nova that hope of survival to for someone condemned to die can be more dangerous than helpful, because it can drive a being to [[SlowlySlippingIntoEvil do worse and worse things for the sake of staying alive.]]



** Envy starts calling Nova "bonehead" early-on, and it becomes less and less of a genuine insult over the course of the story.

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** Envy starts calling Nova "bonehead" early-on, early on, and it becomes less and less of a genuine insult over the course of the story.



* LivingLieDetector: Anyone who has basic energy-sensing, apparently. A being who lies generates a physical reaction that causes a change in the energy the body is giving off, referred to as "the telltale flareup," that an energy-senser can detect. But it's not infallible. If someone knows what to shield, then there's no telling whether or not they're lying, but the presence of shielding magic makes it suspicious all the same.

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* LivingLieDetector: Anyone who has basic energy-sensing, apparently. energy-sensing. A being who lies generates a physical reaction that causes a change in the energy the body is giving off, referred to as "the telltale flareup," that an energy-senser energy-sensor can detect. But it's not infallible. If someone knows what to shield, then there's no telling whether or not they're lying, but the presence of shielding magic makes it suspicious all the same.



* LivingShadow: Envy, and apparently Sombra.
* LostTechnology: Orichalcum-mining. Modern ponies are able to shape it, but nearly all orichalcum was extracted from alicorn ruins.

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* LivingShadow: Envy, the result of her curse from the Elements in the previous story, and apparently Sombra.
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* LostTechnology: Orichalcum-mining. Modern ponies are able to can shape it, but nearly all orichalcum was extracted from alicorn ruins.



* LoveTriangle: An interesting case. Nova and Twilight clearly love each other, but Nova still can't get over Clover despite her being gone from his life for years, and Twilight has been leading Flash Sentry on to make Nova jealous because of this, despite feeling no attraction to him.

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* LoveTriangle: An interesting case. Nova and Twilight clearly love each other, other very dearly, but Nova still can't get over Clover despite her being gone from his life for years, and Twilight has been leading Flash Sentry on to make Nova jealous because of this, this despite feeling no attraction to him.



* OneSteveLimit: Thoroughly averted, and even lampshaded by Shimmer Silvermane, who wonders aloud why unicorns seem confined to the same several names, coupled with how there's supposedly two Shimmers running around (herself and Sunset Shimmer), and then wonders if there's a third out there somewhere (there is, Nova Shine's mother Shimmer Novus).

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* OneSteveLimit: Thoroughly averted, and even lampshaded by Shimmer Silvermane, who wonders aloud why unicorns seem confined to the same several names, coupled with how there's there are supposedly two Shimmers running around (herself and Sunset Shimmer), and then wonders if there's a third out there somewhere (there is, Nova Shine's mother Shimmer Novus).



* PowerAtAPrice: Soulular magic, a branch of Dark Magic that actually takes a "Blood Cost" from its caster.

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* PowerAtAPrice: Soulular magic, a branch of Dark Magic that actually takes a "Blood Cost" from its caster.



* PraetorianGuard: The Crystal Guard to Sombra and Cadance after him. Two of them are able to take down a {{Nuckelavee}} on their own.

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* PraetorianGuard: The Crystal Guard to Sombra and Cadance after him. Two of them are able to take down a {{Nuckelavee}} on their own.own, while the third holds her ground against Envy for a brief time, before having her eye slashed out.



* TheProphecy: See the page quote. Empress Verita left one final prophecy that young Prince Imperius stumbled upon that has haunted him ever since, as it speaks of a doom and "the final emperor", and Imperius wishes to defy it. It is unclear whether the prophecy has been fulfilled yet (given the first flashback to finding the prophecy was 10,000 year prior to the present day), or whether it remains unfulfilled.

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* TheProphecy: See the page quote. Empress Verita left one final prophecy that young Prince Imperius stumbled upon that has haunted him ever since, as it speaks of a doom and "the final emperor", and Imperius wishes to defy it. it, or at the very least, he doesn't want it to be speaking to him. It is unclear whether the prophecy has been fulfilled yet (given the first flashback to finding the prophecy was 10,000 year prior to years before the present day), or whether it remains unfulfilled.



** Twilight continuing to press the Flash Sentry issue as Nova tries to cool down eventually goads him into screaming at her.

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** Twilight continuing continues to press the Flash Sentry issue as Nova tries to cool down down, and this eventually goads him into screaming at her.



* SummonMagic: Envy has apparently been taught how to summon shadow nuckelavees by Sombra.

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* SummonMagic: Envy has apparently been taught how to summon shadow nuckelavees by Sombra.



* SwitchingPOV: Thus far, we have had point of view chapters for the following:
** Nova Shine, with his slowly-unraveling psyche over the course of the story.

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* SwitchingPOV: Thus far, we have had point of view point-of-view chapters for the following:
** Nova Shine, with his slowly-unraveling psyche slowly unraveling over the course of the story.Part 1.



** Aegis, worrying about the large changes going on in Equestria and how they affect him and his loved ones.



* SwordOfDamocles: The wearer of the Crown of Life becomes this to literally everyone in the world, just due to their sheer magical power. Who could stand against them, and who would deny them what they want?

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* SwordOfDamocles: The wearer of the Crown of Life becomes this to literally everyone in the world, just due to their sheer magical power. Who could stand against them, and who would deny them what they want?



** Sombra's seven servants are titled after the SevenDeadlySins, but three of their names are after precious stones (Rubeus for Ruby, Saphira for Sapphire, and Esmeralda for Emerald), and four of them are named after precious metals (Shimmer Silvermane, Platina, Pronssi for bronze, and Auric for gold).

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** Sombra's seven servants are titled after the SevenDeadlySins, but three of their names are after precious stones (Rubeus for Ruby, Saphira for Sapphire, (Rubeus, Saphira, and Esmeralda for Emerald), Esmeralda), and four of them are named after precious metals (Shimmer Silvermane, Platina, Pronssi for bronze, Pronssi, and Auric for gold).Auric).



** Bright Gleam is the Child, as the young, wide-eyed and naive character who slowly realizes that the ponies she looked up to have flaws.

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** Bright Gleam is the Child, as the young, wide-eyed wide-eyed, and naive character who slowly realizes that the ponies she looked up to have flaws.



* VitriolicBestBuds: Nova and Aegis, Nova and Twilight, Nova and Trixie, Twilight and Trixie... Basically, Nova's friendships are built upon mutual insults.

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* VitriolicBestBuds: Nova and Aegis, Nova and Twilight, Nova and Trixie, Twilight and Trixie... Trixie, and that's just scratching the surface. Basically, Nova's friendships are built upon mutual insults.



* WhamEpisode: just like the previous story, every chapter in some way alters things, though there are several moments that hit particularly hard.
** Chapter 2 - [[spoiler: Envy is actually Shimmer Silvermane, and Summer Blossom has been trapped in her Spirit Gem this entire time.]]
** Chapter 4 - [[spoiler: Nova and Twilight engage in a shouting match that takes a sledge hammer to their relationship.]]

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* WhamEpisode: just like the previous story, every chapter in some way alters things, though there are several moments that hit particularly hard.
** Chapter 2 - [[spoiler: Envy is actually Shimmer Silvermane, and Summer Blossom has been trapped in her the Spirit Gem around her neck this entire time.]]
** Chapter 4 - [[spoiler: Nova and Twilight engage in a shouting match that takes a sledge hammer sledgehammer to their relationship.]]



** Chapter 6 - [[spoiler: Harmonia, the Consciousness of Magic/Spirit of Harmony, takes control of Bright Gleam to save her life. Nova discovers he has a healing factor. He then undertakes the Trial of Black and White and fails completely.]]

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** Chapter 6 - [[spoiler: Harmonia, the Consciousness of Magic/Spirit of Harmony, takes control of Bright Gleam to save her life. Nova discovers he has a healing factor. He then undertakes the Trial of Black and White and fails completely.fails.]]



** In terms of physical prowess, the Crystal Guard are established to be a badass PraetorianGuard for both Princess Cadance and King Sombra before her, and their leader is Captain Cinnabar, personally trained by Sombra and a self-described Master of the Seven Styles. She holds her own against Envy at first, but Envy is still able to easily defeat her and slash out her eye.

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** In terms of physical prowess, the Crystal Guard are is established to be a badass PraetorianGuard for both Princess Cadance and King Sombra before her, and their leader is Captain Cinnabar, personally trained by Sombra and a self-described Master of the Seven Styles. She holds her own against Envy at first, but Envy is still able to easily defeat her and slash out her eye.



* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: Lord Star Swirl totally believes in Nova Shine, as do Twilight, Cadance, Luna, Celestia, and so on, but Nova just cannot see or accept their insights.
* YourDaysAreNumbered: Nova Shine is informed that he is dying because [[PowerIncontinence there is too much magical energy in his body, and it's only growing]]. He [[CryLaughing starts laughing, which rapidly turns to sobbing]], and even a few weeks later, he is still completely despondent, from which Star Swirl is able to glean that Nova fears dying and offers him a small, fragile chance at survival.

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* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: Lord Star Swirl totally believes has unshakeable faith in Nova Shine, as do Twilight, Cadance, Luna, Celestia, and so on, but Nova just cannot see or accept their insights.
* YourDaysAreNumbered: Nova Shine is informed that he is dying because [[PowerIncontinence there is too much magical energy in his body, and it's only growing]]. He [[CryLaughing starts laughing, which rapidly turns to sobbing]], and even a few weeks later, he is still completely despondent, from which Star Swirl is able to glean gleans that Nova fears dying and offers him a small, fragile chance at survival.
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** Sombra is also pondering its meaning, though unlike Imperius, who is implied to have believed the god-shattering star would destroy the Alicorn Empire, Sombra believes the god-shattering star could be something he could control and use, and he even believes the god-shattering star may not be some''thing'' and may instead be some''one''.

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* MeaningfulName: It turns out Shimmer Silvermane isn't called Envy for nothing. She's King Sombra's Envy, one of his seven servants named after the SevenDeadlySins.



* SevenDeadlySins: Sombra has seven servants titled after each one. Only three have been explicitly named so far.
** Most obviously, Shimmer Silvermane is King Sombra's '''Envy'''.
** A mare named Esmeralda is referred to as King Sombra's '''Lust'''.
** A near-invisible pony named Auric is called King Sombra's '''Pride'''.
** The other four, yet to be titled, are named Pronssi, Saphira, Rubeus, and Platina.



* ThemeNaming: The Knightmare Brigade, with the exception of [[Fanfic/ToLoveTheMoon Starstep]], are named after the Lunar Mares.

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The Knightmare Brigade, with the exception of [[Fanfic/ToLoveTheMoon Starstep]], are named after the Lunar Mares.Mares.
** Sombra's seven servants are titled after the SevenDeadlySins, but three of their names are after precious stones (Rubeus for Ruby, Saphira for Sapphire, and Esmeralda for Emerald), and four of them are named after precious metals (Shimmer Silvermane, Platina, Pronssi for bronze, and Auric for gold).
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* {{Catchphrase}}: It's practically [[OncePerEpisode once a chapter]] that Gleam will go off on a mental tangent, before stopping and telling herself "Focus, Gleam." to get herself back on track.

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* {{Catchphrase}}: CharacterCatchphrase: It's practically [[OncePerEpisode once a chapter]] that Gleam will go off on a mental tangent, before stopping and telling herself "Focus, Gleam." to get herself back on track.
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* ExactlyExtyYearsAgo: Lampshaded, then justified. Harmonic Convergence happens every TenThousandYears. Nova finds it awfully convenient. Star Swirl then notes that it was an event so significant to the alicorns that they oriented their entire dating system around making it line up.
-->''[[BreakingTheFourthWall Twilight then felt the strangest sensation, the same she usually did whenever Pinkie went off on these long tangents about whoever these mysterious “readers” were, as if they were being directly addressed.]]''
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* CastFromCalories: Solidified, after being implied in the previous fic. The energy balance maintained by sleeping, resting, and eating factors into the amount of energy available for spellcasting, and Nova's catastrophic crash causes him to be barred from all but the most basic spellcasting until he's back on his hooves.
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--->Before any of them could respond, however, the most unexpected sound they could ever have expected rang out.\\

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--->Before any of them could respond, however, the most unexpected sound one reaction they never could ever have expected rang out.\\
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* EyeDentityGiveaway:
** [[spoiler:Envy taunts Nova over the fact that he never realized who she ''really'' was, given the pony Nova thought she was didn't have red eyes at all up until her supposed FaceHeelTurn.]]
** Bright Gleam's eyes are normally green, but after she allows Harmonia to take over in desperation as she's attacked by Envy, her eyes turn white when she's under Harmonia's influence.
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* AscendedFangirl: Bright Gleam, from the moment Nova Shine showed up at Celestia's school and wowed her and her classmates in [[Fanfic/TheApprenticeTheStudentAndTheCharlatan the previous fic]], practically worshipped the ground on which he and Princess Twilight walked. According to her mother, she never missed a guest lecture from either of them, and even was able to attend his Ascendancy Ceremony. She then used the opportunity to ask to be his apprentice (much to her own embarrassment), which amused and impressed Nova enough to accept. Unfortunately for her, this lets her see her idols up close [[BrokenPedestal and all of their flaws]], but being around them and witnessing what they're like even in their non-public moments [[RebuiltPedestal only reinforces her opinions of them despite this]].
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* BookEnds: Part 1 begins and ends with an echo of Nova laughing unexpectedly.
** In chapter 2, Gleam slams the door in Nova's face.
--->There was a single heartstopping moment, where she could feel her heart beating a mile a minute as she processed what she had just done, when the most unexpected sound she could imagine started coming from outside the door: ''laughter.''
** In chapter 7, Nova learns he is dying.
--->Before any of them could respond, however, the most unexpected sound they could ever have expected rang out.\\
''Laughter.''
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* RapidFireYes: Gleam, when Nova accepts her as his apprentice, goes [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E23TheCutieMarkChronicles full Twilight]] in her reaction. Twilight remarks on the similarities.
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* BetaCouple: Aegis and Trixie. Both are close friends of Nova and Twilight, but while Nova and Twilight are going through no shortage of trouble and their relationship is becoming more and more strained, Aegis and Trixie seem to have comparatively few troubles with each other in their relationship outside of the physical distance, with Aegis living and working in Canterlot and Trixie living and working in Ponyville. According to Aegis, they have needed a break at times, but they've never been shown to be anything less than completely enamored with each other when they've been together.
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* JoinTheArmyTheySaid: Gleam exclaims "Sign up to be the Archmage's apprentice, Gleam! It'll be so fun!" when she's lost in a maze of identical hallways in the Crystal Spire.
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** Nova's magical ability is expanded on to the point where he is a total savant with magic. As Twilight puts it, Nova could metaphorically sing with magic on his worst day. It turns out, however, to be a byproduct of his arcane oversaturation, and his greatest gift is ironically what will ultimately kill him.

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** Nova's magical ability is expanded on to the point where he is a total savant genius with magic. As Twilight puts it, Nova could metaphorically sing with magic on his worst day. It turns out, however, to be a byproduct of his arcane oversaturation, and his greatest gift is ironically what will ultimately kill him.

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[[folder:G-M]]
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* MajorGeneralSong: Not in song form, but the narrator puts together several sentences recreating the structure and rhyme of it to describe Twilight's magical knowledge and intelligence.

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