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* AccidentalGoodOutcome: Princess Luna [[CreatingLifeIsUnforeseen accidentally created an artificial intelligence]] instead of her intended unthinking robot, who she accepts as her daughter by the third story, and said daughter still achieves the intended goal of reducing her workload. Zigzagged, however, as while it ended up happily, Luna wasn't pleased at first.

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ZCE comment-outs.


** And also Franchise/{{Discworld}}, with variations on "effortlessly pronounced a row of dashes", as said in [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Minced_oaths_in_media Wikipedia on Minced Oaths, "effortlessly pronouncing a row of dashes."]]
** To ''Literature/{{Twilight}}'''s sparkly vampires, in ''How the Tantabus Parses Sleep'': "Source Incantations: Unit Testing":
--> “I, I’m sorry, can we go back a step?” said Moondog, making a flicking gesture. “Something about me ''not having a reflection''? I’m not a vampire, you know! Not at the moment, anyway. I’m too…” She looked at her starry leg. “…sparkly.”

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** And also Franchise/{{Discworld}}, ''Franchise/{{Discworld}}'', with variations on "effortlessly pronounced a row of dashes", as said in [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Minced_oaths_in_media Wikipedia on Minced Oaths, "effortlessly pronouncing a row of dashes."]]
** To ''Literature/{{Twilight}}'''s sparkly vampires, in ''How the Tantabus Parses Sleep'': "Source Incantations: Unit Testing":
--> “I, I’m sorry, can we go back a step?” said Moondog, making a flicking gesture. “Something about me ''not having a reflection''? I’m not
Moondog denies being a vampire, you know! Not at the moment, anyway. I’m too…” She looked at her starry leg. “…sparkly.”on account of being [[Literature/TheTwilightSaga "too sparkly."]]



* TuxedoAndMartini: Lyra's dream is the climax of one of these sorts of stories.
* ATwinkleInTheSky: How Sombra leaves Rainbow's dream.

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* %%* TuxedoAndMartini: Lyra's dream is the climax of one of these sorts of stories.
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* DyingToWakeUp: The only way [[DreamWeaver Moondog]] can make a dreamer wake up is to kill them in the dream, which she does by hitting them with things like hammers.
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* BrickJoke: Tantabus briefly muses about Fancy Pants' name, as he doesn't wear pants, so a better name would be Fancy Jacket. [[spoiler:At the end of the story, Coranto is approached by a smooth dreamboat named Fancy Jacket]].

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* BrickJoke: ''Tantabus Communication Protocol'': Tantabus briefly muses about Fancy Pants' name, as he doesn't wear pants, so a better name would be Fancy Jacket. [[spoiler:At the end of the story, Coranto is approached by a smooth dreamboat named Fancy Jacket]].
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* ItCanThink: Playerd straight, then inverted with one of the antagonists. Despite being eloquent and genuinely threatening, [[spoiler:the alternate Tantabus]] turns out to not be truly sapient.

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* ItCanThink: Playerd straight, then When Eschaton summons Tantabus and tries to get it to do his bidding, he initially believes it to be a non-sapient automaton. [[OhCrap Realization of his folly]] hits much later. Later inverted with one of the antagonists. Despite being eloquent and genuinely threatening, [[spoiler:the alternate Tantabus]] turns out to not be truly sapient.sapient, merely trying to evoke as much fear as possible at the present.
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* PaintingTheMedium: Bits of computer code, offset from the main text and in a different font, are sprinkled throughout ''How the Tantabus Parses Sleep'', indicating the Tantabus' mental processes and the changes it makes to ponies' dreams.

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* PaintingTheMedium: Bits of computer code, offset from the main text and in a different font, are sprinkled throughout ''How the Tantabus Parses Sleep'', indicating Sleep''. These indicate the Tantabus' mental processes and the changes it makes to ponies' dreams.dreams and to itself, and are sometimes PlayedForLaughs.
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Using an inversion of It Can Think, because Not Even Human seems too vague to me.

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* ItCanThink: Playerd straight, then inverted with one of the antagonists. Despite being eloquent and genuinely threatening, [[spoiler:the alternate Tantabus]] turns out to not be truly sapient.

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It currently has three sequels:
* [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/342603/aunthood-issues Aunthood Issues]], in which the Tantabus says hello to Princess Celestia. Unfortunately, Luna had neglected to tell her about it, and curious interrogations follow. Complete.
* [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/363882/tantabus-communication-protocol Tantabus Communication Protocol]]. Following the final joke of Aunthood Issues, a reporter who believes that Luna has had a child, but not the explanation that it's a dream construct, decides to hound Luna until she gets the truth. This annoys Luna, and attracts the attention of the Tantabus itself. Complete.
* [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/428991/how-the-tantabus-parses-sleep How the Tantabus Parses Sleep]]. Now free to explore the dreamscape on its own, the Tantabus begins to learn more about Equestria, test its abilities, and have fun messing with a few ponies along the way. In progress.

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sequels, all complete:
* [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/342603/aunthood-issues Aunthood Issues]], in which the Tantabus says hello to Princess Celestia. Unfortunately, Luna had neglected to tell her about it, and curious interrogations follow. Complete.\n
* [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/363882/tantabus-communication-protocol Tantabus Communication Protocol]]. Following the final joke of Aunthood Issues, a reporter who believes that Luna has had a child, but not the explanation that it's a dream construct, decides to hound Luna until she gets the truth. This annoys Luna, and attracts the attention of the Tantabus itself. Complete.\n
* [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/428991/how-the-tantabus-parses-sleep How the Tantabus Parses Sleep]]. Now free to explore the dreamscape on its own, the Tantabus begins to learn more about Equestria, test its abilities, and have fun messing with a few ponies along the way. In progress.
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* AffectionateNickname: Astral Mind often addresses Moondog as "Your Nibs." She originally did it out of spite, but Moondog came to like the name.
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** To ''VideoGame/AaaaaAAaaaAAAaaAAAAaAAAAAARecklessDisregardForGravity'', when Coranto and the Tantabus go sky-diving:

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** To ''VideoGame/AaaaaAAaaaAAAaaAAAAaAAAAAARecklessDisregardForGravity'', ''VideoGame/AaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaARecklessDisregardForGravity'', when Coranto and the Tantabus go sky-diving:
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** To ''Literature/{{Twilight}}'''s sparkly vampires, in ''How the Tantabus Parses Sleep'': "Source Incantations: Unit Testing":
--> “I, I’m sorry, can we go back a step?” said Moondog, making a flicking gesture. “Something about me ''not having a reflection''? I’m not a vampire, you know! Not at the moment, anyway. I’m too…” She looked at her starry leg. “…sparkly.”


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* StellarName: The ThemeNaming for most of the powerful female unicorns in this story and the source work, as said in ''How the Tantabus Parses Sleep'': "Arcane Postmare Interface":
--> “I just noticed… If you give a pony a stellar name,” Astral asked, “do they automatically become a prodigy?”\\\
Hundreds of miles away, Sunburst suddenly felt so incredibly inadequate he dropped Flurry Heart. (She thought it was great fun.)
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* MirrorCharacter: As established in ''HTTPS'', Moondog and Discord may hate each other, but even before [[spoiler:Discord gave Moondog access to Chaos Magic]] they had very similar power sets and senses of humour. Apparently, [[WithGreatPowerComesGreatInsanity with the same kind of great power comes the same kind of insanity]].
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* BlatantLies: Luna definitely didn't recognise Bon-Bon and call her by a different name, she just resembles someone Luna used to know. Honest.

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* BlatantLies: Luna definitely didn't recognise Bon-Bon and call her [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS5E9SliceOfLife by a different name, name]], she just resembles someone Luna used to know. Honest.
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Badass Mustache and Badass Beard are being merged into Manly Facial Hair. Examples that don't fit or are zero-context are removed. To qualify for Manly Facial Hair, the facial hair must be associated with masculinity in some way. Please read the trope description before readding to make sure the example qualifies.


* BadassMustache: The Tantabus gives [[EvilSorcerer King Sombra]] one in true villainous fashion, described as the handlebar mustache to end all handlebar mustaches.
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Not So Different has been renamed, and it needs to be dewicked/moved


* NotSoDifferent: As established in ''HTTPS'', Moondog and Discord may hate each other, but even before [[spoiler:Discord gave Moondog access to Chaos Magic]] they had very similar power sets and senses of humour. Apparently, [[WithGreatPowerComesGreatInsanity with the same kind of great power comes the same kind of insanity]].
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* NotSoDifferent: As established in ''HTTPS'', Moondog and Discord may hate each other, but even before [[spoiler:Discord gave Moondog access to Chaos Magic]] they had very similar power sets and senses of humour. Apparently, [[WithGreatPowerComesGreatInsanity with the same kind of great power comes the same kind of insanity]].
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* GilliganCut: One occurs in ''HTTPS'' chapter ''Magfault'', when Moondog begs Luna to tell her that thanking Meadow in person won't involve her going outside.

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Got name wrong and accidentally hit post button.


* SacrificedBasicSkillForAwesomeTraining: Due to the very specific purpose Luna programmed The Tantabus for it came out a bit like this. Note that The Tantabus itself sees no difference between having something having been explained to it and it having been built into it during this initial period before Luna discovered it was sapient.



* TradedBasicSkillForAwesomeTraining: Due to the very specific purpose Luna programmed The Tantabus for it came out a bit like this. Note that The Tantabus itself sees no difference between having something having been explained to it and it having been built into it during this initial period before Luna discovered it was sapient.
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New trope added. MIGHT have been borderline except for the in-universe dif
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New trope added. MIGHT have been borderline except for the in-universe dif
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* TradedBasicSkillForAwesomeTraining: Due to the very specific purpose Luna programmed The Tantabus for it came out a bit like this. Note that The Tantabus itself sees no difference between having something having been explained to it and it having been built into it during this initial period before Luna discovered it was sapient.
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Capitalization was fixed from FanFic.Tantabus Mark II to Fanfic.Tantabus Mark II. Null edit to update page. Page may need a mojibake cleanup after the fact


--->'''Tantabus:''' It's a term that means lacking distinction between male and female. You learn ''amazing'' things in the dreams of linguists! Did you know that some languages have a special verb formation to show that the speaker is surprised? It’s called mirativity!\\

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--->'''Tantabus:''' It's a term that means lacking distinction between male and female. You learn ''amazing'' things in the dreams of linguists! Did you know that some languages have a special verb formation to show that the speaker is surprised? It’s It's called mirativity!\\
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* TalkingApplianceSidekick: When Twilight brings Moondog through the portal into the human world to help sort out Sunset Shimmer's bad dreams, Moondog emerges as a smartwatch. They can hear her by plugging in a set of earbuds. She speculates that because Luna created her as a sort of machine, the portal turned her into a literal one.

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* TalkingApplianceSidekick: When Twilight brings Moondog through the portal into the human world to help sort out Sunset Shimmer's bad dreams, Moondog emerges as a smartwatch. They can hear her by plugging At first, they have to plug in a speaker or a set of earbuds. She earbuds to hear her, but Sci-Twi figures out how to enable the watch's built-in speaker. Moondog speculates that because Luna created her as a sort of machine, the portal turned her into a literal one.

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