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* TheCameo: [[Manga/FullmetalAlchemist Sig Curtis]] is the "vice-commander" a butcher shop the party comes across.
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* TheCameo: [[Manga/FullmetalAlchemist Sig Curtis]] is the "vice-commander" of a butcher shop the party comes across.
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The story, consisting of 38 chapters and counting, is guilty of [[HaremGenre Harem Antics]], especially the [[MarshmallowHell marshmallow kind]], but like with ''Pawn'', has quite a few [[CerebusSyndrome dark and dramatic moments]], as well.
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The story, consisting of 38 39 chapters and counting, is guilty of [[HaremGenre Harem Antics]], especially the [[MarshmallowHell marshmallow kind]], but like with ''Pawn'', has quite a few [[CerebusSyndrome dark and dramatic moments]], as well.
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* StatuesqueStunner: All of Haru's haremettes tower over him (except Yukio, who's the same height), and are utterly gorgeous.
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The story, consisting of 37 chapters and counting, is guilty of [[HaremGenre Harem Antics]], especially the [[MarshmallowHell marshmallow kind]], but like with ''Pawn'', has quite a few [[CerebusSyndrome dark and dramatic moments]], as well.
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The story, consisting of 37 38 chapters and counting, is guilty of [[HaremGenre Harem Antics]], especially the [[MarshmallowHell marshmallow kind]], but like with ''Pawn'', has quite a few [[CerebusSyndrome dark and dramatic moments]], as well.
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* TheCameo: [[Manga/FullmetalAlchemist Sig Curtis]] is the "vice-commander" a butcher shop the party comes across.
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* CarryABigStick: Tionishia's weapon of choice is a mace. [[spoiler:She later uses a giant club she took off the corpse of a Great Ape she slew]].
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* DropTheHammer: Tionishia's weapon of choice is a mace. [[spoiler:She later uses a giant club she took off the corpse of a Great Ape she slew]].
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The story, consisting of 36 chapters and counting, is guilty of [[HaremGenre Harem Antics]], especially the [[MarshmallowHell marshmallow kind]], but like with ''Pawn'', has quite a few [[CerebusSyndrome dark and dramatic moments]], as well.
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The story, consisting of 36 37 chapters and counting, is guilty of [[HaremGenre Harem Antics]], especially the [[MarshmallowHell marshmallow kind]], but like with ''Pawn'', has quite a few [[CerebusSyndrome dark and dramatic moments]], as well.
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The story, consisting of 35 chapters and counting, is guilty of [[HaremGenre Harem Antics]], especially the [[MarshmallowHell marshmallow kind]], but like with ''Pawn'', has quite a few [[CerebusSyndrome dark and dramatic moments]], as well.
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The story, consisting of 35 36 chapters and counting, is guilty of [[HaremGenre Harem Antics]], especially the [[MarshmallowHell marshmallow kind]], but like with ''Pawn'', has quite a few [[CerebusSyndrome dark and dramatic moments]], as well.
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* SuperpoweredEvilSide: [[spoiler:Tionishia]] has one due to [[spoiler:her]] heritage, which turns [[spoiler:her]] into TheBerserker.
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* SuperpoweredEvilSide: SuperpoweredEvilSide:
** [[spoiler:Tionishia]] has one due to [[spoiler:her]] heritage, which turns [[spoiler:her]] intoTheBerserker.TheBerserker.
** [[spoiler:Haru]] displays one in Chapter 36.
** [[spoiler:Tionishia]] has one due to [[spoiler:her]] heritage, which turns [[spoiler:her]] into
** [[spoiler:Haru]] displays one in Chapter 36.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13179540/1/Tale-of-a-Thief-and-his-New-Party Tale of a Thief and His New Party]]'' is a crossover fanfiction between ''Manga/DailyLifeWithMonsterGirl'' and ''LightNovel/GrimgarOfFantasyAndAsh'' written initially by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4060153/dude932 dude932]] before being adopted by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/10055276/Curse-of-Whimsy Curse of Whimsy]], author of ''Fanfic/ThePawnOfGrisaia''.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13179540/1/Tale-of-a-Thief-and-his-New-Party Tale of a Thief and His New Party]]'' is a crossover fanfiction between ''Manga/DailyLifeWithMonsterGirl'' and ''LightNovel/GrimgarOfFantasyAndAsh'' ''Literature/GrimgarOfFantasyAndAsh'' written initially by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4060153/dude932 dude932]] before being adopted by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/10055276/Curse-of-Whimsy Curse of Whimsy]], author of ''Fanfic/ThePawnOfGrisaia''.
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** [[spoiler:Rachnera pleasures him in Chapter 34, though they don't go all the way]].
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** [[spoiler:Rachnera pleasures him in Chapter 34, though they don't go all the way]].way until the next chapter]].
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The story, consisting of 34 chapters and counting, is guilty of [[HaremGenre Harem Antics]], especially the [[MarshmallowHell marshmallow kind]], but like with ''Pawn'', has quite a few [[CerebusSyndrome dark and dramatic moments]], as well.
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The story, consisting of 34 35 chapters and counting, is guilty of [[HaremGenre Harem Antics]], especially the [[MarshmallowHell marshmallow kind]], but like with ''Pawn'', has quite a few [[CerebusSyndrome dark and dramatic moments]], as well.
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Gag Boobs has been renamed to Boob Based Gag. Changing to the proper trope where appropriate and cutting misuse.
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The premise is that Manato [[SparedByAdaptation survives the ambush at Damroww]], but Haruhiro leaves the party out of weariness of feeling like an outsider. After striking out on his own for a few weeks, he meets a [[GagBoobs busty]] blonde centaur in need of rescuing, and after he leaps to her aid, she swears allegiance to him.
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The premise is that Manato [[SparedByAdaptation survives the ambush at Damroww]], but Haruhiro leaves the party out of weariness of feeling like an outsider. After striking out on his own for a few weeks, he meets a [[GagBoobs busty]] busty blonde centaur in need of rescuing, and after he leaps to her aid, she swears allegiance to him.
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* GagBoobs: ''All'' of the haremettes are top-heavy, and more than one of them have no problem with subjecting Haru to MarshmallowHell, not that he's complaining.
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* EntertaininglyWrong: Due to the appearance of Haru's haremettes, Shu'ni concludes that he likes women whom are [[LikesOlderWomen older,]] [[TinyGuyHugeGirl taller,]] and [[BuxomIsBetter well-endowed]]; thus the form she takes has big breasts and towers over him. It turns out that Haru ''doesn't'' have that kind of fetish, but he allows her to maintain the form, regardless.
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* EntertaininglyWrong: Due to the appearance of Haru's haremettes, Shu'ni concludes that he likes women whom are [[LikesOlderWomen older,]] [[TinyGuyHugeGirl taller,]] and [[BuxomIsBetter well-endowed]]; well-endowed; thus the form she takes has big breasts and towers over him. It turns out that Haru ''doesn't'' have that kind of fetish, but he allows her to maintain the form, regardless.
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* HasAType: Subverted, but invoked. Shu'ni takes on the form of a [[StatuesqueStunner tall]], [[BuxomIsBetter busty]] woman under the belief that, since all of the other haremettes are like that, Haru must obviously prefer that type of woman. He doesn't, but she retains the form, regardless.
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* HasAType: Subverted, but invoked. Shu'ni takes on the form of a [[StatuesqueStunner tall]], [[BuxomIsBetter busty]] busty woman under the belief that, since all of the other haremettes are like that, Haru must obviously prefer that type of woman. He doesn't, but she retains the form, regardless.
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The story, consisting of 32 chapters and counting, is guilty of [[HaremGenre Harem Antics]], especially the [[MarshmallowHell marshmallow kind]], but like with ''Pawn'', has quite a few [[CerebusSyndrome dark and dramatic moments]], as well.
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The story, consisting of 32 34 chapters and counting, is guilty of [[HaremGenre Harem Antics]], especially the [[MarshmallowHell marshmallow kind]], but like with ''Pawn'', has quite a few [[CerebusSyndrome dark and dramatic moments]], as well.
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** [[spoiler:Rachnera pleasures him in Chapter 34, though they don't go all the way]].
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The story, consisting of 31 32 chapters and counting, is guilty of [[HaremGenre Harem Antics]], especially the [[MarshmallowHell marshmallow kind]], but like with ''Pawn'', has quite a few [[CerebusSyndrome dark and dramatic moments]], as well.
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* TheirFirstTime: [[spoiler:Haru and Centorea have sex in Chapter 25]].
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* TheirFirstTime: TheirFirstTime:
** [[spoiler:Haru and Centorea have sex in Chapter25]].25]].
** [[spoiler:Haru has sex with Yukio in Chapter 32, and the same chapter ends with Tio about to get her turn]].
** [[spoiler:Haru and Centorea have sex in Chapter
** [[spoiler:Haru has sex with Yukio in Chapter 32, and the same chapter ends with Tio about to get her turn]].