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* TheAloner: Aster starts out as this, remaining secluded in a house on the starting planet of Good Egg Galaxy, having a sign on his door telling people to stay out and lying about not being home, and being rude to Mario when he enters the house through a pipe. Though after following Mario to the next star, he grows out of this and apologizes.
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* GreaterScopeVillain: Several were revealed in Chapter 28 alone.
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* GreaterScopeVillain: Several were revealed in Chapter 28 alone.GreaterScopeVillain:
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** It's revealed during Bowser's flashback on how he got the idea to rule the universe that Topmaniac is not actually the leader of the Topman Tribe, but has an unseen superior who reveals to Bowser the secrets of the Comet Observatory. So far, this being has only been heard in said flashback.
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** Also this to this original game, which already was darker than most other ''Mario'' games. Just invoke more CerebusSyndrome through a newly introduced character, have one of Mario's closet friends go through UnwillingRoboticization, give boss characters more depth, and go in-depth on Mario's struggles in space, and you've got a recipe for true grimness.
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** Also this to this original game, which already was darker than most other ''Mario'' games. Just invoke more CerebusSyndrome through a newly introduced character, have one of Mario's closet closest friends go through UnwillingRoboticization, give boss characters more depth, and go in-depth on Mario's struggles in space, and you've got a recipe for true grimness.
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* EvilHasABadSenseOfHumor: Peach did ''not'' appreciate Bowser's joke on him liking his steak the bleed.
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* EvilHasABadSenseOfHumor: Peach did ''not'' appreciate Bowser's joke on him liking his steak rare (a steak that isn't cooked much, resulting in the bleed.animal's blood often coming out of the meat).
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* DistressCall: Chapter 23 reveals that Grand Stars are capable of doing this, with it sending their equivalent of an SOS signal in the form of "twinkles" to Aster.
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* WrittenByTheWinners: {{Inverted}}. The Toads actually ''lost'' the war against the Koopas in Crumbleden, but after the few survivors started their own kingdom, they were quick to write the Koopas off as a purely evil conqueror race despite the fact that the Toads started the war in the first place. And with such history being spread across the world, not helped by the fact that they created a dragon which destroyed their own kingdom, the koopa race became [[HatedByAll hated across the world]] and banished to [[{{Mordor}} the dark lands]]. Peach was actually surprised to hear of the Toads' selfishness since she raised to believe the Koopas had no redeeming qualities, with Bowser claiming her kingdom to be biased.
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* WrittenByTheWinners: {{Inverted}}. The Toads actually ''lost'' the war against the Koopas in Crumbleden, but after the few survivors started their own kingdom, they were quick to write the Koopas off as a purely evil conqueror race despite the fact that the Toads started the war in the first place. And with such history being spread across the world, not helped by the fact that they created a dragon which destroyed their own kingdom, the koopa race became [[HatedByAll hated across the world]] and banished to [[{{Mordor}} the dark lands]]. Played straight in the present thanks to Mario helping the Mushroom Kingdom claim constant victory. Peach was actually surprised to hear of the Toads' selfishness since she raised to believe the Koopas had no redeeming qualities, with Bowser claiming her kingdom to be biased.
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* AdaptationExpansion: Where do we even begin with this one?
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* AdaptationExpansion: Where do we even begin with this one?The fanfic expands on many elements of the game, and adds brand new elements as well.
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* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: In the original game, Luigi didn't show up until Mario rescued him in Ghostly Galaxy with only a brief mention by the Toad Brigade prior. Here, Peach runs into Luigi playing cards with Toad at her castle, somehow unaware that it was lifted into the air.
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* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: AdaptationalEarlyAppearance:
** In the original game, Luigi didn't show up until Mario rescued him in Ghostly Galaxy with only a brief mention by the Toad Brigade prior. Here, Peach runs into Luigi playing cards with Toad at her castle, somehow unaware that it was lifted into theair.air.
** Bowser Jr. doesn't first appear in the game until right before the boss with Megaleg. The fanfic has him debut alongside his father in the very first chapter.
** In the original game, Luigi didn't show up until Mario rescued him in Ghostly Galaxy with only a brief mention by the Toad Brigade prior. Here, Peach runs into Luigi playing cards with Toad at her castle, somehow unaware that it was lifted into the
** Bowser Jr. doesn't first appear in the game until right before the boss with Megaleg. The fanfic has him debut alongside his father in the very first chapter.
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* WrittenByTheWinners: {{Inverted}}. The Toads actually ''lost'' the war against the Koopas in Crumbleden, but after the few survivors started their own kingdom, they were quick to write the Koopas off as a purely evil conqueror race despite the fact that the Toads started the war in the first place. And with such history being spread across the world, not helped by the fact that they created a dragon which destroyed their own kingdom, the koopa race became [[HatedByAll hated across the world]] and banished to the dark lands. Peach was actually surprised to hear of the Toads' selfishness since she raised to believe the Koopas had no redeeming qualities, with Bowser claiming her kingdom to be biased.
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* WrittenByTheWinners: {{Inverted}}. The Toads actually ''lost'' the war against the Koopas in Crumbleden, but after the few survivors started their own kingdom, they were quick to write the Koopas off as a purely evil conqueror race despite the fact that the Toads started the war in the first place. And with such history being spread across the world, not helped by the fact that they created a dragon which destroyed their own kingdom, the koopa race became [[HatedByAll hated across the world]] and banished to [[{{Mordor}} the dark lands.lands]]. Peach was actually surprised to hear of the Toads' selfishness since she raised to believe the Koopas had no redeeming qualities, with Bowser claiming her kingdom to be biased.
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* WrittenByTheWinners: {{Inverted}}. The Toads actually ''lost'' the war against the Koopas in Crumbleden, but after the few survivors started their own kingdom, they were quick to write the Koopas off as a purely evil conqueror race despite the fact that the Toads started the war in the first place. And with such history being spread across the world, not helped by the fact that they created a dragon which destroyed their own kingdom, the koopa race became [[HatedByAll hated across the world]] and banished to the dark lands. Peach was actually surprised to hear of the Toads' selfishness since she raised to believe the Koopas had no redeeming qualities, with Bowser claiming her kingdom to be biased.
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* EvilHasABadSenseOfHumor: Peach did ''not'' appreciate Bowser's joke on him liking his steak the bleed.
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* AdaptationalSympathy: Bowser, who is known in the games to be a purely evil tyrant, whose malice was born simply from bad parenting by Kamek, is instead portrayed as a TragicVillain born into a bloodline of royalty in an ongoing rivalry with the Mushroom Kingdom. He once tried to end the tension by asking some Toads to play with him, only for them to bully him, then got lectured by his AbusiveDad on how conquest is the only way to get things done.
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* GreaterScopeVillain: Several were revealed in Chapter 28 alone.
** Bowser's ancestors all previously attacked the Mushroom Kingdom in similar manners to how he does today. Of special note is [[AbusiveParents his father]], who allowed a group of Toads to bully him just to hammer in the lesson that he can't solve conflicts through reason, only conquest. Bowser would likely be a different person today if not for him.
** Serving as one for the Koopa and Mushroom Kingdoms as a whole, [[VideoGame/SuperMarioOdyssey The Ruined Dragon]] was created by the Koopas during the war that started the conflict between them and the Toads. While it did allow the Koopas to reign triumphant over the Toads, it also laid Crumbleden to waste, causing both races to abandon their old home and start their own individual kingdoms.
** It's revealed during Bowser's flashback on how he got the idea to rule the universe that Topmaniac is not actually the leader of the Topman Tribe, but has an unseen superior who reveals to Bowser the secrets of the Comet Observatory. So far, this being has only been heard in said flashback.
** Bowser's ancestors all previously attacked the Mushroom Kingdom in similar manners to how he does today. Of special note is [[AbusiveParents his father]], who allowed a group of Toads to bully him just to hammer in the lesson that he can't solve conflicts through reason, only conquest. Bowser would likely be a different person today if not for him.
** Serving as one for the Koopa and Mushroom Kingdoms as a whole, [[VideoGame/SuperMarioOdyssey The Ruined Dragon]] was created by the Koopas during the war that started the conflict between them and the Toads. While it did allow the Koopas to reign triumphant over the Toads, it also laid Crumbleden to waste, causing both races to abandon their old home and start their own individual kingdoms.
** It's revealed during Bowser's flashback on how he got the idea to rule the universe that Topmaniac is not actually the leader of the Topman Tribe, but has an unseen superior who reveals to Bowser the secrets of the Comet Observatory. So far, this being has only been heard in said flashback.
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Other stories planned for the saga include ''The Darkness of Space'', a {{Prequel}} to the series, a currently unnamed second part which will be an adaptation of [[VideoGame/SuperMarioGalaxy2 the second game]], and three unnamed stories simply labeled as "???".
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Other stories planned for the saga include ''The Darkness of Space'', a {{Prequel}} to the series, a currently unnamed second part which will be an adaptation of [[VideoGame/SuperMarioGalaxy2 the second game]], and three unnamed stories simply labeled as "???"."TBA".
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* AdaptationNameChange: Then type of ice flower that debuted ''VideoGame/NewSuperMarioBrosWii'' is referred to as the freeze flower. This is likely to avoid confusion between Galaxy's version of the ice flower.
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* AdaptationNameChange: Then The type of ice flower that debuted ''VideoGame/NewSuperMarioBrosWii'' is referred to as the freeze flower. This is likely to avoid confusion between Galaxy's version of the ice flower.
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Other stories planned for the saga include ''The Darkness of Space'', a {{Prequel}} to the series, a currently unnamed second part which will be an adaptation of [[VideoGame/SuperMarioGalaxy2 the second game]], and two unnamed stories simply labeled as "???".
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Other stories planned for the saga include ''The Darkness of Space'', a {{Prequel}} to the series, a currently unnamed second part which will be an adaptation of [[VideoGame/SuperMarioGalaxy2 the second game]], and two three unnamed stories simply labeled as "???".
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This or these examples of Surprisingly Realistic Outcome seem to violate at least one of these rules, which disqualifies them: No character reactions (characters get angry, don't forgive, don't change their personality instantly, etc.); Too fantastical (depends on the properties of magic, powers, sci-fi tech, monsters, etc.); Not surprising (a character was warned about the outcome, it's used to provide Karma or An Aesop, or it simply follows normal conventions for this genre or medium); Plot happens (the example only describes an event, but not why audiences would expect a different, unrealistic outcome); Not an outcome (a character just explains why something wouldn't work as expected, or something is just an innate aspect of the setting or character that has a logical reason for being present); More of a Deconstruction (the event has major, lasting effects on the plot, make something more realistic, but not completely realistic, or a parody/fanwork applies realistic consequences to the events of a different work); or fits better under a different trope. See the trope's definition for more details. If you believe a removal was a mistake, please bring it up in the cleanup thread
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* RealityBreakingParadox: {{Parodied}}. Luma tells Mario a rumor his sister spread about black holes spawning whenever someone in the universe divides by 0. Bowser Jr. sees this conversation and divides by 0 himself and... [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome nothing happens]]. Aster then [[{{Jossed}} josses]] this theory altogether.
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* RealityBreakingParadox: {{Parodied}}. Luma tells Mario a rumor his sister spread about black holes spawning whenever someone in the universe divides by 0. Bowser Jr. sees this conversation and divides by 0 himself and... [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome [[SubvertedTrope nothing happens]]. Aster then [[{{Jossed}} josses]] this theory altogether.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: When Mario gets to the pill-shaped planet in Good Egg Galaxy, the constant flipping of gravity disorients him so much that he vomits as soon as it's over.
