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** A minor one, but [[spoiler:Steely Dan is stated to have been killed after his beatdown from Jotaro. Likely due from shock after Hitomi made him far more sensitive to pain before his beatdown.]]

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** A minor one, but [[spoiler:Steely Dan is stated to have been killed after his beatdown from Jotaro. Likely due from shock after Hitomi made him far more sensitive to pain before his beatdown.]]



** Just like an optional path in the original game, [[spoiler:Hitomi takes Polnareff's place during the fight with Alessi. It even ends with Joseph looking for them, and getting turned into his younger self from ''Battle Tendency''. Nonetheless, some creative liberties are taken with the adaptation of something possible in the game.]]

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** Just like an optional path in the original game, [[spoiler:Hitomi takes Polnareff's place during the fight with Alessi. It even ends with Joseph looking for them, and getting turned into his younger self from ''Battle Tendency''. Nonetheless, some creative liberties are taken with the adaptation of something possible However, because Joseph fights him in an in-game battle in the game.game, here it's translated into a brief action sequence.]]
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** [[spoiler:With the rest of the fight deviating from how it normally plays out [[ForWantOfANail thanks to Hitomi saving Avdol]], Vanilla Ice]] is finished off differently than in canon as [[spoiler:Avdol ensnares him with Red Bind, followed by Polnareff causing his body to explode from a flame-boosted assault with Silver Chariot's rapier imbued with Magician's Red's flames. The sunlight still plays a role in destroying his remains to make sure he's dead]].

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** [[spoiler:With the rest of the fight deviating from how it normally plays out [[ForWantOfANail thanks to Hitomi saving Avdol]], Vanilla Ice]] is finished off differently than in canon as [[spoiler:Avdol ensnares him with Red Bind, followed by Polnareff causing his body to explode from a flame-boosted an assault with Silver Chariot's rapier imbued with Magician's Red's flames. The sunlight still plays a role in destroying his remains to make sure he's dead]].



* EarlyBirdCameo: [[spoiler:Johngali A. makes an appearance in chapter 20 as one of Don Cherry's pupils.]]

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* EarlyBirdCameo: [[spoiler:Johngali A. [[spoiler:[[Manga/StoneOcean Johngali A.]] makes an appearance in chapter 20 as one of Don Cherry's pupils.]]
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* AdaptationDistillation: The fight with Telence D'arby happens off-screen and happening the same as it did in canon while the fanfic focuses on the fight with Vanilla Ice.


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** [[spoiler:With the rest of the fight deviating from how it normally plays out [[ForWantOfANail thanks to Hitomi saving Avdol]], Vanilla Ice]] is finished off differently than in canon as [[spoiler:Avdol ensnares him with Red Bind, followed by Polnareff causing his body to explode from a flame-boosted assault with Silver Chariot's rapier imbued with Magician's Red's flames. The sunlight still plays a role in destroying his remains to make sure he's dead]].


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** When Vanilla Ice is finished off, [[spoiler:Avdol lights Silver Chariot's rapier on fire before Polnareff finishes the job, which is just like their Dual Heat Attack from ''[[VideoGame/JoJosBizarreAdventureEyesOfHeaven Eyes of Heaven]]'', right down to Polnareff's words in response. While Ice DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation, Polnareff's PreMortemOneLiner to Ice still tells him to go to hell]].

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* DisneyDeath: [[spoiler:Hitomi has one at the end of chapter 58, even after Jotaro gets her out of Dio's mansion and tries to resuscitate her. She's better in the next chapter after Jotaro successfully stabilized her.]]

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* DisneyDeath: [[spoiler:Hitomi has one at the end of chapter 58, even after Jotaro gets her out of Dio's mansion and tries to resuscitate her. She's better in the next chapter after Jotaro successfully stabilized her.]]her]].
* DramaticIrony: A humorous example in chapter 38's flashback of Joseph and Caesar has Joseph making a sleazy joke about Lisa Lisa after she leaves the two to their task, which Caesar reprimands him on. Keep in mind that Joseph doesn't know Lisa Lisa is his mother since the flashback is set during ''Manga/BattleTendency''.
--> '''Joseph''': Is she gonna do her own shopping? I bet she's gonna buy some lacy underwear. This makes me wonder how stacked she is... \\
'''Caesar''': [=JoJo=], that is our TEACHER. I'm getting tired of your crude remarks, you idiot! \\
'''Joseph''': Come on, you can't adore her that much? You got some kind of [[{{Irony}} mother complex?]]
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** [[spoiler: Utah]] commits suicide with his Stand rather than being killed in a fight with the protagonists.

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** [[spoiler: Utah]] Utah commits suicide with his Stand Stand]] rather than being killed in a fight with the protagonists.

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Making the Stone Ocean spoiler warning more apparent now that the anime's final batch has released


'''Beware of spoilers for ''Stone Ocean'' considering the game the fanfic adapts.'''
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'''Beware !!'''Beware of spoilers for ''Stone Ocean'' considering the game the fanfic adapts.'''
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** Also in that same chapter, Whitney asks Enya about if she had a second son when she mentions J. Geil having died. Enya responds by saying she doesn't count him and he's TheUnfavorite. [[spoiler:This is alluding to [[Fanfic/LacrimeDoroDelVentoAureo Thin Lizzy]].]]

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** Also in that same chapter, Whitney asks Enya about if she had a [[spoiler:her second son son]] when she mentions J. Geil having died. Enya responds by saying she [[spoiler:she doesn't count him and he's TheUnfavorite.TheUnfavorite]]. [[spoiler:This is alluding to [[Fanfic/LacrimeDoroDelVentoAureo Thin Lizzy]].]]
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** Unlike the original game, there are several deviations from even the game. such as [[spoiler:Avdol actually dying in Calcutta, Berlin and Alicia "resurrecting" him and he goes through the game's submarine route, and none of the endings in the game are directly adapated. This fanfic instead goes for an original ending]].

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** Unlike the original game, there are several deviations from even the game. such as [[spoiler:Avdol actually dying in Calcutta, Berlin and Alicia "resurrecting" him and he goes through the game's submarine route, and none of the endings in the game are directly adapated. This fanfic instead goes for [[AdaptationalAlternateEnding an original ending]].ending]]]].
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** During the battle with Vins and Hanoi Rocks in chapter 38, three of the zombies that attack the group are very much the Special Infected from ''VideoGame/Left4Dead'' in all but name.[[note]]The Smoker, Tank, and Boomer. The Tank is referred to as a "Tank-like zombie", though.[[/note]]

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** During the battle with Vins and Hanoi Rocks in chapter 38, three four of the zombies that attack the group are very much the Special Infected from the ''VideoGame/Left4Dead'' series in all but name.[[note]]The Smoker, Tank, Jockey, and Boomer. The Tank {{Expy}} is referred to as a "Tank-like zombie", though.[[/note]]

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* ShoutOut: During the battle with Vins and Hanoi Rocks in chapter 38, three of the zombies that attack the group are very much the Special Infected from ''VideoGame/Left4Dead'' in all but name.[[note]]The Smoker, Tank, and Boomer. The Tank is referred to as a "Tank-like zombie", though.[[/note]]

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* ShoutOut: ShoutOut:
** The title of chapter 19, "Love Me, Fool Me" is a clever reference to the song "Lovefool" by Music/TheCardigans.
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During the battle with Vins and Hanoi Rocks in chapter 38, three of the zombies that attack the group are very much the Special Infected from ''VideoGame/Left4Dead'' in all but name.[[note]]The Smoker, Tank, and Boomer. The Tank is referred to as a "Tank-like zombie", though.[[/note]]
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''Star-Crossed Crusaders'' is a ''Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventure'' fanfiction by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/CandyAshes/pseuds/CandyAshes CandyAshes]]. It is a retelling of ''Stardust Crusaders'' with original elements added to the story.

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''Star-Crossed Crusaders'' is a ''Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventure'' fanfiction by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/CandyAshes/pseuds/CandyAshes CandyAshes]].CandyAshes]], who also provides illustrations for it. It is a retelling of ''Stardust Crusaders'' with original elements added to the story.

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* AdaptationExpansion: In this story's version of Oingo and Boingo's attempt on the group, not only is there an additional scene with "Jotaro" and Hitomi [[AdaptationDeviation after she spots someone at the car before Joseph and Polnareff arrive,]] Oingo slips up about knowing Boingo and has to explain to Hitomi about him in tandem with a quick excuse about how Avdol told "Jotaro" about the brothers. Said slip-up is that after Hitomi wonders about where Boingo's mother is after noticing him nearby, "Jotaro" says she died when Boingo was a baby.

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* AdaptationExpansion: AdaptationExpansion:
** From Jotaro's expanded backstory in chapter 42, [[NamedByTheAdaptation Mr. Okamoto]] is the teacher (that is seen in a still in the anime) from when Jotaro mentions a teacher who never came back to class as a result of him during his speech when he fights Kakyoin.
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In this story's version of Oingo and Boingo's attempt on the group, not only is there an additional scene with "Jotaro" and Hitomi [[AdaptationDeviation after she spots someone at the car before Joseph and Polnareff arrive,]] Oingo slips up about knowing Boingo and has to explain to Hitomi about him in tandem with a quick excuse about how Avdol told "Jotaro" about the brothers. Said slip-up is that after Hitomi wonders about where Boingo's mother is after noticing him nearby, "Jotaro" says she died when Boingo was a baby.
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** [[spoiler: Avdol, Kakyoin, Iggy all survive the events in Cairo]], but still die later.

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** [[spoiler: Avdol, Kakyoin, and Iggy all survive the events in Cairo]], but still die later.



* RoleSwapAU: During the Bastet and Set arc, a few roles get swapped around that lead to some big changes.
** [[spoiler:Polnareff and Kakyoin face Mariah]], leading to things like [[spoiler: Polnareff having [[RunningGag yet another bathroom disaster]], an interesting inversion of the two women's reactions in the hotel hallway, and Kakyoin managing to end the fight at the railroad tracks by outsmarting Mariah.]]

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* RoleSwapAU: RoleSwapAU:
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During the Bastet and Set arc, a few roles get swapped around that lead to some big changes.
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changes: Here, [[spoiler:Polnareff and Kakyoin face Mariah]], leading to things like [[spoiler: Polnareff having [[RunningGag yet another bathroom disaster]], an interesting inversion of the two women's reactions in the hotel hallway, and [[AdaptationDeviation most differently, Kakyoin managing manages to end the fight at the railroad tracks by outsmarting Mariah.]]Mariah with a ruse]]]].
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* MythologyGag: Jotaro's first fight with Kakyoin takes heavy inspiration from the OVA, where it's set in some woods near the school instead of the nurse's office.
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** Steel seems to take the role of [[spoiler:''Pucci'']], of all people, in this iteration of the world.
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Later, a shorter version of the story, called the ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/21264575 Ace of Cups Remix]]'' was published. This rewrites Hitomi's origin and other important parts of the story to line up better with the world that's been established in the sequel. On top of the retained elements, the author does mention the original fanfic still has a lot of interactions between the cast, which are the groundwork for interactions in the sequel onward.

The "Remix" version was published on November 1st, 2019, and is ongoing.

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Later, a shorter version of the story, called the ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/21264575 Ace of Cups Remix]]'' was published. This rewrites Hitomi's origin and other important parts of the story to line up better with the world that's been established in the sequel.sequels. On top of the retained elements, the author does mention the original fanfic still has a lot of interactions between the cast, which are the groundwork for interactions in the sequel onward.

The "Remix" version rewrite was published on November 1st, 2019, and is ongoing.currently dormant, likely due to the author being busy with the current entries in the series among other things.

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* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: [[spoiler:Ms. Shiobana, Giorno's mother, appears as a teacher at the school Jotaro and Hitomi attend. She's also Hitomi's teacher and plays a crucial role in Hitomi's past. Here, she is [[NamedByTheAdaptation given the first name of Shiori]].]]

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* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: AdaptationalEarlyAppearance:
** As mentioned below, [[spoiler:Steely Dan]] appears far earlier than he does originally.
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[[spoiler:Ms. Shiobana, Giorno's mother, appears as a teacher at the school Jotaro and Hitomi attend. She's also Hitomi's teacher and plays a crucial role in Hitomi's past. Here, she is [[NamedByTheAdaptation given the first name of Shiori]].]]



* AdaptationExpansion: In this story's version of Oingo and Boingo's attempt on the group, not only is there an additional scene with "Jotaro" and Hitomi [[AdaptationDeviation after she spots someone at the car before Joseph and Polnareff arrive,]] Oingo slips up about knowing Boingo and has to explain to Hitomi about him in tandem with a quick excuse about how Avdol told "Jotaro" about the brothers. Said slip-up is that after Hitomi wonders about where Boingo's mother is after noticing him nearby, "Jotaro" says she died when Boingo was a baby.



* DeathByAdaptation: A minor one, but [[spoiler:Steely Dan is stated to have been killed after his beatdown from Jotaro. Likely due from shock after Hitomi made him far more sensitive to pain before his beatdown.]]

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* DeathByAdaptation: DeathByAdaptation:
** A double subverted example. In canon, it's left unclear whether [[spoiler:Rubber Soul]] died after his defeat, but here, he's [[spoiler:first shown to be in the hospital after said defeat. However, he gets a visit from Steely Dan, who finishes him off, likely for spilling info about Dio's servants [[YouHaveFailedMe on top of failing his mission]]]].
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A minor one, but [[spoiler:Steely Dan is stated to have been killed after his beatdown from Jotaro. Likely due from shock after Hitomi made him far more sensitive to pain before his beatdown.]]



* DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation: [[spoiler: Avdol, Kakyoin, Iggy and Polnareff all survive the events in Cairo]], but still die later. [[spoiler: Utah]] commits suicide with his Stand rather than being killed in a fight with the protagonists.

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* DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation: [[spoiler: Avdol, Kakyoin, Iggy and Polnareff all survive the events in Cairo]], but still die later. DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation:
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[[spoiler: Utah]] commits suicide with his Stand rather than being killed in a fight with the protagonists.protagonists.
** [[spoiler: Avdol, Kakyoin, Iggy all survive the events in Cairo]], but still die later.

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* DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation: [[spoiler: Avdol, Kakyoin, Iggy and Polnareff all survive the events in Cairo]], but still die later. [[spoiler: Utah]] commits suicide with his Stand rather than being killed in a fight with the protagonists. [[spoiler: Speedwagon and Stroheim]] are killed in Aswan.

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** [[spoiler: Speedwagon and Stroheim]] are killed in Aswan instead of surviving until the end, like in the game.
* DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation: [[spoiler: Avdol, Kakyoin, Iggy and Polnareff all survive the events in Cairo]], but still die later. [[spoiler: Utah]] commits suicide with his Stand rather than being killed in a fight with the protagonists. [[spoiler: Speedwagon and Stroheim]] are killed in Aswan.
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* AdaptedOut: Joseph encounters Stroheim and Speedwagon, like in the game, but not Dire.


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* DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation: [[spoiler: Avdol, Kakyoin, Iggy and Polnareff all survive the events in Cairo]], but still die later. [[spoiler: Utah]] commits suicide with his Stand rather than being killed in a fight with the protagonists. [[spoiler: Speedwagon and Stroheim]] are killed in Aswan.
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* CallForward:
** After the story's take on Oingo's attempt to eliminate the group, Polnareff jokes about if Jotaro managed to stop time upon him, Joseph and Hitomi spotting him at the hospital, not knowing the "Jotaro" they just let out of the car moments before was Oingo in disguise.
** Jotaro's ability to stop time is foreshadowed much earlier than before when [[spoiler:he unknowingly activates it to save Kakyoin from a CollapsingLair at the end of the fight with Joey, in which he attempts a TakingYouWithMe on both of them. It incapacitated Kakyoin since he was destroying him with Hierophant Green beforehand]].

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* BreakingTheFourthWall: After Alessi is defeated, the narrator inexplicably begins to mention how he had the same fate as Kars before Hitomi interrupts him.

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** The first instance of this is naturally when ZZ seemingly kills Jotaro, as he says a bit more than his declaration of having ended Part 3.
-->'''ZZ''': Yes, I won! Part 3 is over! And that means this fanfic's main protagonist is now single!\\
'''Hitomi''': [[BigWhat Whaaaat?!]]
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Alessi is defeated, as the narrator inexplicably begins to mention how he had the same fate as Kars before Hitomi interrupts him.
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** While the Hol Horse and Boingo arc [[AdaptationDistillation is skimmed a bit,]] not only does [[spoiler:Hitomi decide to heal Hol Horse's injury upon arriving at the scene, Iggy's attack on Boingo is stopped by Hitomi, and after learning about the situation, especially about how a kid like Boingo (and his older brother) would be killed if they revealed Dio's whereabouts, she lets Boingo go. Allowing him to keep the new resolve he initially had in the original]].

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** While the Hol Horse and Boingo arc [[AdaptationDistillation is skimmed a bit,]] not only does [[spoiler:Hitomi decide to heal Hol Horse's injury upon arriving at the scene, Iggy's attack on Boingo is stopped by Hitomi, and after learning about the situation, especially about how a kid like Boingo (and his older brother) would be killed if they revealed Dio's whereabouts, she lets Boingo go. Allowing This allows him to keep the new resolve he initially had in the original]].original, though this time he gets it differently than he did in canon]].
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* Jotaro gets a past-life flashback of the manga/anime version (instead of the OVA version used in the fanfic) of his fight against Kakyoin during the Steely Dan beatdown, when Cardigans [[spoiler: [[EyeScream carves out Steely Dan's eye]] with its scalpel]].

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* ** Jotaro gets a past-life flashback of the manga/anime version (instead of the OVA version used in the fanfic) of his fight against Kakyoin during the Steely Dan beatdown, when Cardigans [[spoiler: [[EyeScream carves out Steely Dan's eye]] with its scalpel]].
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* Jotaro gets a past-life flashback of the manga/anime version (instead of the OVA version used in the fanfic) of his fight against Kakyoin during the Steely Dan beatdown, when Cardigans [[spoiler: [[EyeScream carves out Steely Dan's eye]] with its scalpel]].
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** Chapter 17's SpotTheImposter moment is one to [[spoiler:the OVA, where Enya was able to diguise herself. Here, she disguises herself as Hitomi]].

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** Chapter 17's SpotTheImposter moment is one to [[spoiler:the OVA, where Enya was able to diguise herself.disguise herself with Justice's fog. Here, she disguises herself as Hitomi]].
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** Chapter 17's SpotTheImposter moment is one to [[spoiler:the OVA, where Enya was able to diguise herself. Here, she disguises herself as Hitomi]].
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* NiceJobFixingItVillain: A minor one by Steely Dan - his gift helps Jotaro quickly recognize the real Hitomi from an [[SpotTheImposter imposter]].


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* SpotTheImposter: [[spoiler: Enya]] tries to pose as Hitomi at one point.
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* MythologyGag: Jotaro's first fight with Kakyoin takes heavy inspiration from the OVA, where it's set in some woods near the school instead of the nurse's office.
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!!This fanfic is a retelling of ''[[Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventureStardustCrusaders JoJo's Bizarre Adventure: Stardust Crusaders]]'', and this page assumes you're familiar with the series up to that part. As such, all spoilers up to it will be unmarked. [[Administrivia/YouHaveBeenWarned You have been warned.]]

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!!This fanfic is a retelling of ''[[Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventureStardustCrusaders JoJo's Bizarre Adventure: Stardust Crusaders]]'', and this page assumes you're familiar with the series up to that part.part before reading this one. As such, all spoilers up to it will be unmarked. [[Administrivia/YouHaveBeenWarned You have been warned.]]

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