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* RecursiveFanfiction: Is one to the [[VideoGame/JoJosBizarreAdventureThe7thStandUser the fangame]] it adapts. While it draws from the existing setting from that game, this story takes a handful of creative liberties with it.
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* OutOfTheFryingPan: How Oingo's defeat plays out, doubling as a slight NotHisSled: When the car everyone is in nears the hospital and when Oingo (who is disguised as Jotaro) is trying to dissuade Polnareff from digging into the orange bomb (saying it could have come from the gutter), Hitomi makes a snide joke [[ContinuityNod recalling the events of the Justice arc]], which [[spoiler:annoys Polnareff to where he throws away the orange. Oingo thinks he's saved until he sees the real Jotaro in the distance before anyone else could, causing him to demand the car to be stopped, now claiming he has to rush to the dry cleaners. He ends up being caught up in being alive and seeing Boingo in the distance that he doesn't undo his disguise...and he ends up stepping on the orange bomb anyway. This version of the arc makes two {{Hope Spot}}s for Oingo before he got blown up (and three if you count the first time he got rid of the orange)]].
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* BaitAndSwitch: When Oingo and Boingo are introduced, they're referred to as Zenyatta and Mondatta by Whitney, their DubNameChange. After Whitney leaves, it's revealed they're still called Oingo and Boingo, and that the other names were just cover names they used around Whitney since she's a servant of Dio that was kicked out for [[spoiler:murdering her own sister]].
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** [[spoiler:[[Manga/GoldenWind Ms. Shiobana, Giorno's mother]], appears as a teacher at the school Jotaro and Hitomi attend. She's also Hitomi's teacher and plays a crucial role in Hitomi's past. Here, she is [[NamedByTheAdaptation given the first name of Shiori]].]]
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** [[spoiler:[[Manga/GoldenWind [[spoiler:[[Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventureGoldenWind Ms. Shiobana, Giorno's mother]], appears as a teacher at the school Jotaro and Hitomi attend. She's also Hitomi's teacher and plays a crucial role in Hitomi's past. Here, she is [[NamedByTheAdaptation given the first name of Shiori]].]]
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* CallBack: Following the fight against Anubis [[spoiler:and Amber]], Hitomi tends to Jotaro's wounds. By the time Jotaro wakes up, Hitomi had spent so much energy into tending to him that when she leaves to inform the group Jotaro's awake, she falls over from dizziness as Jotaro catches her with a single arm. This references an identical moment with Jonathan and Erina in ''Manga/PhantomBlood''.
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* CallBack: Following the fight against Anubis [[spoiler:and Amber]], Hitomi tends to Jotaro's wounds. By the time Jotaro wakes up, Hitomi had spent so much energy into tending to him that when she leaves to inform the group Jotaro's awake, she falls over from dizziness as Jotaro catches her with a single arm. This references an identical moment with Jonathan and Erina in ''Manga/PhantomBlood''.''[[Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventurePhantomBlood Phantom Blood]]''.
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* DramaticIrony: A humorous example in chapter 38's flashback of Joseph and Caesar has Joseph making a sleazy joke about Lisa Lisa after she leaves the two to their task, which Caesar reprimands him on. Keep in mind that Joseph doesn't know Lisa Lisa is his mother since the flashback is set during ''Manga/BattleTendency''.
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* DramaticIrony: A humorous example in chapter 38's flashback of Joseph and Caesar has Joseph making a sleazy joke about Lisa Lisa after she leaves the two to their task, which Caesar reprimands him on. Keep in mind that Joseph doesn't know Lisa Lisa is his mother since the flashback is set during ''Manga/BattleTendency''.''[[Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventureBattleTendency Battle Tendency]]''.
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* EarlyBirdCameo: [[spoiler:[[Manga/StoneOcean Johngali A.]] makes an appearance in chapter 20 as one of Don Cherry's pupils.]]
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* EarlyBirdCameo: [[spoiler:[[Manga/StoneOcean [[spoiler:[[Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventureStoneOcean Johngali A.]] makes an appearance in chapter 20 as one of Don Cherry's pupils.]]
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%% Anything original to the fanfic that originated in the original version that is shown to still be the case in the sequels (such as anything to do with Ms. Shiobana's role in the story) should go in here as well.
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** [[spoiler:Ms. [[spoiler:[[Manga/GoldenWind Ms. Shiobana, Giorno's mother, mother]], appears as a teacher at the school Jotaro and Hitomi attend. She's also Hitomi's teacher and plays a crucial role in Hitomi's past. Here, she is [[NamedByTheAdaptation given the first name of Shiori]].]]
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* FirstLove: While she's alone in Singapore, Hitomi runs into [[spoiler:Steely Dan, who she becomes infatuated with, not knowing he's working for Dio.]]
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* FirstLove: While she's alone in Singapore, Hitomi runs into [[spoiler:Steely Dan, who she becomes infatuated with, not knowing he's working for Dio.]]Dio]].
* KarmaHoudini: In Hitomi's backstory, anyone already familiar with [[spoiler:''Golden Wind'' will know that Shiori Shiobana is SavedByCanon from any comeuppance, and she gets away scot-free for her mistreatment of Hitomi and a young Giorno]].
* KarmaHoudini: In Hitomi's backstory, anyone already familiar with [[spoiler:''Golden Wind'' will know that Shiori Shiobana is SavedByCanon from any comeuppance, and she gets away scot-free for her mistreatment of Hitomi and a young Giorno]].
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: [[spoiler:Subverted. While Avdol, Iggy, and Kakyoin survive the final battle with Dio, they all die later at different points in time after the events of ''Stardust Crusaders''. The sequel confirms this still happens by showing stuff that adds up with this in a flashback chapter.]]
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: [[spoiler:Subverted. While Avdol, Iggy, and Kakyoin survive the final battle with Dio, they all die later at different points in time after the events of ''Stardust Crusaders''. The sequel confirms this still happens by showing stuff events that adds add up with this in a flashback chapter.]]chapter]].
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* {{Lime}}: Chapter 33 contains a short and mildly sexual scene between Jotaro and Hitomi in the middle of the night in the desert, which is after their arrival in Egypt. It's not explicit, but certain actions are implied.
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* BetterToDieThanBeKilled: Faith commits suicide with a pistol he had handy once he's defeated in chapter 32. Specifically, he did it so that Joseph wouldn't be able to reveal what he knows about Dio with Hermit Purple.
* HeroOfAnotherStory: Played with, as in chapter 15, Joseph is recounting some of the events of ''Battle Tendency'' to Hitomi, and he's seen telling her of his final battle with Kars and the aftermath. Of course, here we know what Joseph's story was.
* JustJokingJustification: Overlapping with ThisIsGonnaSuck, [[spoiler:Rainbow meekly does this once Hitomi tells her she heard of what her Stand did to Jotaro and Kakyoin earlier in chapter 32, which is right after Hitomi decides to heal her despite the conflict from before. [[LaserGuidedKarma She gets punched unconscious for it]] and some of her money taken by Hitomi as she does a BondOneLiner]].
-->'''Hitomi''': [[spoiler: Don't forget to pay your medical bill.]]
* LaserGuidedKarma: Steely Dan's eventual comeuppance is not only for everything he originally does, but also manipulating and even taking advantage of Hitomi.
* LetUsNeverSpeakOfThisAgain: In chapter 32, Jotaro and Kakyoin touch base regarding [[spoiler:their actions while under attack by a new ability of Rainbow's Stand (which caused them to say ''a lot'' of inappropriate things to one another while arguing, to say the least)]], in which Jotaro says they're cool as long as it's not brought up again.
* JustJokingJustification: Overlapping with ThisIsGonnaSuck, [[spoiler:Rainbow meekly does this once Hitomi tells her she heard of what her Stand did to Jotaro and Kakyoin earlier in chapter 32, which is right after Hitomi decides to heal her despite the conflict from before. [[LaserGuidedKarma She gets punched unconscious for it]] and some of her money taken by Hitomi as she does a BondOneLiner]].
-->'''Hitomi''': [[spoiler: Don't forget to pay your medical bill.]]
* LaserGuidedKarma: Steely Dan's eventual comeuppance is not only for everything he originally does, but also manipulating and even taking advantage of Hitomi.
* LetUsNeverSpeakOfThisAgain: In chapter 32, Jotaro and Kakyoin touch base regarding [[spoiler:their actions while under attack by a new ability of Rainbow's Stand (which caused them to say ''a lot'' of inappropriate things to one another while arguing, to say the least)]], in which Jotaro says they're cool as long as it's not brought up again.
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* LaserGuidedKarma: Steely Dan's eventual comeuppance is not only for everything he originally does, but also manipulating and even taking advantage of Hitomi.
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** As another result of this, [[spoiler:Caesar]] does not appear as he does in the game, but he does appear in an original flashback with Joseph.
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The rewrite was published on November 1st, 2019, and is currently dormant, likely due to the author being busy with the current entries in the series among other things. (Last updated August 9, 2021)
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The rewrite was published on November 1st, 2019, and is currently dormant, likely due to the author being busy with the current entries in the series among other things. (Last updated August 9, 9th, 2021)
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The rewrite was published on November 1st, 2019, and is currently dormant, likely due to the author being busy with the current entries in the series among other things. \n (Last updated August 9, 2021)
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** Thanks to Hitomi's healing ability, [[spoiler:Kakyoin does not have to stay in the hospital after the fight with Geb, allowing him to stay with the group for various different arcs]].
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** Thanks to Hitomi's healing ability, [[spoiler:Kakyoin does not have to stay in the hospital after the fight with Geb, allowing him to stay with the group for various different arcs]]. This is also something implemented from the game.
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* SinisterNudity: During the final battle against [[BigBad Vins]], [[VictoryFakeout she resurfaces from getting buried by a bookshelf while she was on fire,]] blocking the path of the heroes trying to escape. She's naked as a result of the flames burning her robes, and it's played for intimidation given the VictoryFakeout, all the burns on her body, and that she's dead set on killing [[OriginalCharacter Hitomi, Alicia,]] and [[AscendedExtra Berlin]]. How she's able to withstand all that is because she's [[spoiler:a vampire]].
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* SinisterNudity: During the final battle against [[BigBad Vins]], Vins, [[VictoryFakeout she resurfaces from getting buried by a bookshelf while she was on fire,]] blocking the path of the heroes trying to escape. She's naked as a result of the flames burning her robes, and it's played for intimidation given the VictoryFakeout, all the burns on her body, and that she's dead set on killing [[OriginalCharacter Hitomi, Alicia,]] Alicia, and [[AscendedExtra Berlin]].Berlin. How she's able to withstand all that is because she's [[spoiler:a vampire]].
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* SinisterNudity: During the final battle against [[BigBad Vins]], [[VictoryFakeout she resurfaces from getting buried by a bookshelf while she was on fire,]] blocking the path of the heroes trying to escape. She's naked as a result of the flames burning her robes, and it's played for intimidation given the VictoryFakeout, all the burns on her body, and that she's dead set on killing [[OriginalCharacter Hitomi, Alicia,]] and [[AscendedExtra Berlin]]. How she's able to withstand all that is because she's [[spoiler:a vampire]].
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** [[spoiler:The drifter that J. Geil wounded to fool Polnareff and Kakyoin]] gets killed by Wisps]].
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* TemptingFate: In the ending, Polnareff [[spoiler:has a quip for all of the group since they all survived the final battle with Dio. His quip to Kakyoin in particular, ends up predicting how he dies after the story's events, as Kakyoin would die in a car accident]].
-->'''Polnareff''': [[spoiler:Kakyoin... watch out for accidents, you dumbass!]]
-->'''Polnareff''': [[spoiler:Kakyoin... watch out for accidents, you dumbass!]]
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** [[spoiler:The drifter that J. Geil wounded to fool Polnareff and Kakyoin]] gets killed by Wisps]].
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This fanfiction is the beginning of a series of fanfics that center around a Zeppeli descendant being among the main cast, and also retelling its respective story with new elements, further developing the established characters, and various original characters, friend and foe. Despite this being the very beginning, it has an interesting history.
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This fanfiction is the beginning of a [[SeriesFic series of fanfics fanfics]] that center around a Zeppeli descendant being among the main cast, and also retelling its respective story with new elements, further developing the established characters, and various original characters, friend and foe. Despite this being the very beginning, it has an interesting history.
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This fanfiction is the beginning of a FanVerse series of fanfics that center around a Zeppeli descendant being among the main cast, and also retelling its respective story with new elements, further developing the established characters, and various original characters, friend and foe. Despite this being the very beginning, it has an interesting history.
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This fanfiction is the beginning of a series of fanfics FanVerse that center around a Zeppeli descendant being among the main cast, and also retelling its respective story with new elements, further developing the established characters, and various original characters, friend and foe. Despite this being the very beginning, it has an interesting history.
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* WholeEpisodeFlashback: Chapters 27-30 are all about [[spoiler:Avdol going through the game's submarine route, alongside Tabasaki, Stroheim and Speedwagon]].
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** Once High Priestess is defeated, Midler is described to have a belly dancer outfit, just like her now-canon appearance from ''[[VideoGame/JoJosBizarreAdventureHeritageForTheFuture Heritage For The Future]]''.
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** Played With. During the fight with Midler, [[spoiler:the ruse that the group does in canon to attempt to deceive Midler fails because Midler spotted how Jotaro held Hitomi earlier on. When that happens, the group tries a new one that's instead about refuting Hitomi's attractiveness, albeit at her expense as she reminds herself they don't actually mean it. However, Jotaro just tells Midler to shut up instead, which then commences Midler's attack from the original manga/anime]].
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** Also in that same chapter, Whitney asks Enya about [[spoiler:her second son]] when she mentions J. Geil having died. Enya responds by saying [[spoiler:she doesn't count him and he's TheUnfavorite]]. [[spoiler:This is alluding to [[Fanfic/LacrimeDoroDelVentoAureo Thin Lizzy]].]]
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** Also in that same chapter, Whitney asks Enya about [[spoiler:her second son]] when she mentions J. Geil having died. Enya responds by saying [[spoiler:she doesn't count him and he's TheUnfavorite]]. [[spoiler:This is alluding to [[Fanfic/LacrimeDoroDelVentoAureo Thin Lizzy]].]]Lizzy]]]].
* INeverToldYouMyName: During this version's take on the Justice arc, when Enya feigns falling over, Hitomi offers to check her hip and hand. Enya declines saying she's a little afraid of doctors. Then, when Hitomi begins to get suspicious following Enya's failed sneak attack, she uses her earlier comment against her. Enya tries to deny it saying she saw Hitomi examining a dead traveler from earlier, but it ends up [[NotHelpingYourCase backfiring as it contradicts Enya's arrival and meeting the group, only further confirming Hitomi's suspicion]].
* INeverToldYouMyName: During this version's take on the Justice arc, when Enya feigns falling over, Hitomi offers to check her hip and hand. Enya declines saying she's a little afraid of doctors. Then, when Hitomi begins to get suspicious following Enya's failed sneak attack, she uses her earlier comment against her. Enya tries to deny it saying she saw Hitomi examining a dead traveler from earlier, but it ends up [[NotHelpingYourCase backfiring as it contradicts Enya's arrival and meeting the group, only further confirming Hitomi's suspicion]].
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* DoWithHimAsYouWill: Hitomi leaves [[spoiler:Steely Dan]] to Jotaro's mercy after she makes her final confrontation with [[spoiler:him after his failed attempt at a SadisticChoice, which he tried to use his Stand again on Hitomi]].
-->'''Hitomi''': Jotaro... do you remember asking me for [[spoiler:my permission to kill him]]? He's all yours.
-->'''Hitomi''': Jotaro... do you remember asking me for [[spoiler:my permission to kill him]]? He's all yours.
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** A zig-zagged example, but [[spoiler:Pet Shop seemingly does this at first, but then pulls a VictoryFakeout by beginning to freeze Hitomi about a minute later so he can finish her off. This prompts Iggy to do the same move he did to kill Pet Shop in canon, just with the location being different]].
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* CallForward: Both versions of the fanfic allude to different things. Specific examples are shown in their respective folders.
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* CallBack: Following the fight against Anubis [[spoiler:and Amber]], Hitomi tends to Jotaro's wounds. By the time Jotaro wakes up, Hitomi had spent so much energy into tending to him that when she leaves to inform the group Jotaro's awake, she falls over from dizziness as Jotaro catches her with a single arm. This references an identical moment with Jonathan and Erina in ''Manga/PhantomBlood''.
