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* ShamelessFanserviceGirl: Krystal feels absolutely no qualms about being stark naked, even in public.
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* DirtyMindReading: When using her telepathy on Scarface, she sensed the overwhelming lust he has for her.
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* DirtyMindReading: When using her telepathy on Scarface, she Krystal sensed the overwhelming lust he has for her.
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* GiantSpider: Krystal is attacked and nearly eaten by one in the first chapter.
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* MsFanservice: This story takes Krystal's already ludicrous status as this ''even'' higher by having her spend the ''entire'' story ''completely naked''. Her introduction takes great pains to describe in great detail how dead-drop gorgeous she is, and even after many sentences still remind us of her beauty and nudity.
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* MsFanservice: This story takes Krystal's already ludicrous status as this ''even'' higher by having her spend the ''entire'' story ''completely naked''. Her introduction takes great pains to describe in great detail how dead-drop gorgeous she is, and even after that many sentences still remind us of her beauty and nudity.
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** All of Brezok's slave girls have this, having been captured, enslaved and sexually abused by him.
* GiantSpider: Krystal is attacked and nearly eaten by one in the first chapter.
* GoGoEnslavement: All of Brezok's slave girls are dressed in skimpy outfits.
* GoGoEnslavement: All of Brezok's slave girls are dressed in skimpy outfits.
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* SpidersAreScary: Krystal is attacked and nearly eaten by a giant spider in the first chapter.
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* CurbstopBattle: Brezok defeats anyone who tries to directly fight him with relative ease.
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* DistractedByTheSexy: Scarface is quite often distracted by Krystal's beauty and nudity.
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CastingAShadow: Brezok has the ability to control and manipulate his own shadow and use it to attack others.
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* LoveInterest/LustObject: Krystal is simultaneously these for Scarface Claw, who is deeply in love with her and admires her strength, fighting skills, but is also almost head-in AxCrazy with lust for her.
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* LoveInterest/LustObject: LustObject: Krystal is simultaneously these this for Scarface Claw, who is deeply in love with her and admires her strength, fighting skills, but is also almost head-in AxCrazy with lust for her.
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* SpidersAreScary: Krystal is attacked and nearly eaten by a giant spider in the first chapter.chapter.
* LoveInterest/LustObject: Krystal is simultaneously these for Scarface Claw, who is deeply in love with her and admires her strength, fighting skills, but is also almost head-in AxCrazy with lust for her.
* LoveInterest/LustObject: Krystal is simultaneously these for Scarface Claw, who is deeply in love with her and admires her strength, fighting skills, but is also almost head-in AxCrazy with lust for her.
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''[[https://www.deviantart.com/krocken/art/Primal-Journey-1-945520677 Primal Journey]]'' is an un-going deviantart fanfic co-written by Krocken and Zilloclaw. It features Krystal from ''Franchise/StarFox'' as the main character.
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''[[https://www.deviantart.com/krocken/art/Primal-Journey-1-945520677 Primal Journey]]'' is an un-going on-going deviantart fanfic co-written by Krocken and Zilloclaw. It features Krystal from ''Franchise/StarFox'' as the main character.
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''[[https://www.deviantart.com/krocken/art/Primal-Journey-1-945520677]]'' is an un-going deviantart fanfic co-written by Krocken and Zilloclaw. It features Krystal from ''Franchise/StarFox'' as the main character.
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''[[https://www.deviantart.com/krocken/art/Primal-Journey-1-945520677]]'' com/krocken/art/Primal-Journey-1-945520677 Primal Journey]]'' is an un-going deviantart fanfic co-written by Krocken and Zilloclaw. It features Krystal from ''Franchise/StarFox'' as the main character.
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* BoundAndGagged: Brezok and his minions do this to Krystal in part 2.
* DarkAndTroubledPast: Like in canon, Krystal lost her entire race as a child.
* DarkAndTroubledPast: Like in canon, Krystal lost her entire race as a child.
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* BoundAndGagged: Brezok and his minions do this to Krystal in part Part 2.
* DarkAndTroubledPast: Many characters have this:
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* PantheraAwesome: Scarface Claw is an extremely strong, fast, agile and powerful humanoid feline.
* SlaveCollar: Krystal is forced to wear one when she is captured by Brezok.
* PantheraAwesome: Scarface Claw is an extremely strong, fast, agile and powerful humanoid feline.
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* FullFrontalAssault: Krystal spends the entire story naked and gets into a lot of fights.
* MsFanservice: This story takes Krystal's already ludicrous status as this ''even'' higher by having her spend the ''entire'' story ''completely naked''. Her introduction takes great pains to describe in great detail how dead-drop gorgeous she is, and even after many sentences still remind us of her beauty and nudity.
* NothingIsScarier: The story never gives much detail about how Scarface Claw was tortured and experimented on by Brezok; only that said torture resulted in his scars. Scarface himself refuses to talk about the details because it's "too horrible."
* PantheraAwesome: Scarface Claw is an extremely strong, fast,agile agile, and powerful humanoid feline.
* SlaveCollar: Krystal is forced to wear one when she is captured by Brezok. Brezok's other slave girls are also forced to wear these.
* MsFanservice: This story takes Krystal's already ludicrous status as this ''even'' higher by having her spend the ''entire'' story ''completely naked''. Her introduction takes great pains to describe in great detail how dead-drop gorgeous she is, and even after many sentences still remind us of her beauty and nudity.
* NothingIsScarier: The story never gives much detail about how Scarface Claw was tortured and experimented on by Brezok; only that said torture resulted in his scars. Scarface himself refuses to talk about the details because it's "too horrible."
* PantheraAwesome: Scarface Claw is an extremely strong, fast,
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* BoundAndGagged: Brezok and his minions do this to Krystal in part 2.
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* MsFanservice: This story takes Krystal's already ludicrous status as this ''even'' higher by having her spend the ''entire'' story ''completely naked''.
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* MsFanservice: This story takes Krystal's already ludicrous status as this ''even'' higher by having her spend the ''entire'' story ''completely naked''. Her introduction takes great pains to describe how dead-drop gorgeous she is, and even after many sentences still remind us of her beauty and nudity.
* SlaveCollar: Krystal is forced to wear one when she is captured by Brezok.
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''[[https://www.deviantart.com/krocken/art/Primal-Journey-1-945520677]]'' is an un-going deviantart fanfic co-written by Krocken and Zilloclaw. It features Krystal from ''Franchise/StarFox'' as the main character.
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* AbhorrentAdmirer: Brezok is this to Krystal and every girl he enslaves.
* BadassAdorable: Krystal is dead-drop gorgeous... and an awesome fighter.
* DarkAndTroubledPast: Like in canon, Krystal lost her entire race as a child.
* EvilOverlord: Brezok.
* MsFanservice: This story takes Krystal already ludicrous status as this ''even'' higher by having her spend the ''entire'' story ''completely naked''.
* SpidersAreScary: Krystal is attacked and nearly eaten by a giant spider in the first chapter.
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* AbhorrentAdmirer: Brezok is this to Krystal and every girl he enslaves.
* BadassAdorable: Krystal is dead-drop gorgeous... and an awesome fighter.
* DarkAndTroubledPast: Like in canon, Krystal lost her entire race as a child.
* EvilOverlord: Brezok.
* MsFanservice: This story takes Krystal already ludicrous status as this ''even'' higher by having her spend the ''entire'' story ''completely naked''.
* SpidersAreScary: Krystal is attacked and nearly eaten by a giant spider in the first chapter.
