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* TimeStandsStill: From ''Playing Hero'''s ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/349631/3/playing-hero/a-minty-fresh-adventurer A Minty Fresh Adventurer]]'' has its title be a reference to the Pony Platforming Project's [[http://www.dragon-mango.com/ponygame/colgate.htm Minty Fresh Adventure!]], with a time-manipulating Minuette, using a time-stop spell cast by {{call|ingYourAttacks}} "'''Clock up.'''", to [[spoiler:foil a bank robbery]]:
--> [[spoiler:The thieves]] stood frozen, dust hung still in the air. Nobody even looked like they were breathing.
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* MasterOfTheMixedMessage: The final chapter of Pinkie Pie's Problematically Private Passion's Parental Personages Presented Perpostorously Prior Publishing Previously Paraphrased Preoccupation puts Pinkie through the wringer as the girl she's crushing on obliviously praises her friendship and understanding and says she feels as close as family, before tossing off a french saying and giving her a peck on the cheek in farewell. Pinkie's reaction: Summon Sunset Shimmer.
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* MasterOfTheMixedMessage: The final chapter of Pinkie ''Pinkie Pie's Problematically Private Passion's Parental Personages Presented Perpostorously Prior Publishing Previously Paraphrased Preoccupation Preoccupation'' puts Pinkie through the wringer as the girl she's crushing on obliviously praises her friendship and understanding and says she feels as close as family, before tossing off a french saying and giving her a peck on the cheek in farewell. Pinkie's reaction: Summon Sunset Shimmer.
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-->'''Pinkie Pie:''' I need you to teleport me to my room, give me a giant plush of indeterminate species I can sit against, cover me in a thick woolen blanket, summon thirty gallons of ice cream in no less than five different flavors, and call Rarity over so we can talk about things.\\
'''Sunset Shimmer:''' ...bad day?\\
'''Pinkie Pie:''' I DON'T KNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW!
-->'''Pinkie Pie:''' I need you to teleport me to my room, give me a giant plush of indeterminate species I can sit against, cover me in a thick woolen blanket, summon thirty gallons of ice cream in no less than five different flavors, and call Rarity over so we can talk about things.\\
'''Sunset Shimmer:''' ...bad day?\\
'''Pinkie Pie:''' I DON'T KNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW!
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* DiscardAndDraw: From ''Group Precipitation'' - ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/323071/2/group-precipitation/launch-error-by-fome Launch Error]]'', where Scootaloo can't [[{{Flight}} fly]] like usual Pegasus Aspects, but has Fate Magic in apparent exchange:
--> '''Sunset''': Maybe unusual talents like your fate magic come at the cost of normal pegasus magic.\\
'''Sunset''': I may have done this to you, Scootaloo. I'm sorry.\\
[...]\\
Scootaloo vaulted over her at ludicrous speed and, once more behind her, said, "I'm still pretty awesome. Just wanted to know why I couldn't get airborne."
--> '''Sunset''': Maybe unusual talents like your fate magic come at the cost of normal pegasus magic.\\
'''Sunset''': I may have done this to you, Scootaloo. I'm sorry.\\
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Scootaloo vaulted over her at ludicrous speed and, once more behind her, said, "I'm still pretty awesome. Just wanted to know why I couldn't get airborne."
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* ImagineSpot: From the second chapter of ''Pinkie Pie's Problematically Private Passion's Parental Personages Presented Perpostorously Prior Publishing Previously Paraphrased Preoccupation'', indicated by the text being aligned to the right, instead of the left, as usual:
--> "Yes, Ruby Rose. I have some sort of bug... a lovebug. It has bitten me and made me fall deeply in love with you! I know this must come as great shock--"\\
"Oh, but Pinkie Pie, I wish you'd told me sooner! For you see, I too have found a healthy and burgeoning attraction to you! And at last, I feel my heart lifting again!"\\
"Oh dearest Ruby, how is it that we ever felt fear to confess our feelings to another? Now at last I feel free, free to once more sail the winds of whimsy! Come, let me show you wonders worth a thousand giggles!"\\
"I come, my lovely Pinkie! And lo, I do find these pies you present a suitable gesture of your romance! Perhaps in turn I shall return the gesture and--"
--> "Yes, Ruby Rose. I have some sort of bug... a lovebug. It has bitten me and made me fall deeply in love with you! I know this must come as great shock--"\\
"Oh, but Pinkie Pie, I wish you'd told me sooner! For you see, I too have found a healthy and burgeoning attraction to you! And at last, I feel my heart lifting again!"\\
"Oh dearest Ruby, how is it that we ever felt fear to confess our feelings to another? Now at last I feel free, free to once more sail the winds of whimsy! Come, let me show you wonders worth a thousand giggles!"\\
"I come, my lovely Pinkie! And lo, I do find these pies you present a suitable gesture of your romance! Perhaps in turn I shall return the gesture and--"
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** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/323071/96/group-precipitation/hell-save-every-one-of-us-by-masterweaver-and-fome He'll Save Every One of Us, by Masterweaver and FoME]]:
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In Which Pinkie Pie Meets Her Crush's Strange Family Before Telling Her Crush She's Crushing On Her.\\
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Let's See How Much We Can Make A Manifestation Of Laughter Squirm.
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In Which Pinkie Pie Meets Her Crush's Strange Family Before Telling Her Crush She's Crushing On Her.\\
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Let's See How Much We Can Make A Manifestation Of Laughter Squirm.
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In Which Pinkie Pie Meets Her Crush's Strange Family Before Telling Her Crush She's Crushing On Her.\\
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* ForYourPeopleByYourPeople: From ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/323071/346/group-precipitation/adventure-capitalism-by-fome Group Precipitation: Adventure Capitalism]]'':
--> "the Infinite Carousel. Of Rarities, by Rarities, for everyone."
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** ''Go, Emps!''
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** From [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/349607/7/crossworlds-guardian-sailor-orbital/organization-and-arguments-compromises-are-made Sailor Orbital Chapter 6]], to ''Toys/MilkyWayAndTheGalaxyGirls'' from Creator/LaurenFaust, who was also responsible for WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic, the originating series for WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls. It's also lampshaded in the Author's Note at the end:
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** From [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/349607/7/crossworlds-guardian-sailor-orbital/organization-and-arguments-compromises-are-made Sailor Orbital Chapter 6]], to ''Toys/MilkyWayAndTheGalaxyGirls'' from Creator/LaurenFaust, who was also responsible for WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic, ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'', the originating series for WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls.''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls''. It's also lampshaded in the Author's Note at the end:
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--> At dinner that night, Bonbon bit her lip and said, "Dad?"\\
Bon Mot looked up from his spaghetti. "Yes, Sweetie?"\\
"Did... did Mom ever, you know... ''suspect''?"\\
Her mother, Aspartame, snorted. "Believe me, Sweetie, if I had ever suspected what he was up to before it was too late, I would... Well, things would've gone differently."
--> At dinner that night, Bonbon bit her lip and said, "Dad?"\\
Bon Mot looked up from his spaghetti. "Yes, Sweetie?"\\
"Did... did Mom ever, you know... ''suspect''?"\\
Her mother, Aspartame, snorted. "Believe me, Sweetie, if I had ever suspected what he was up to before it was too late, I would... Well, things would've gone differently."
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* [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/430918/go-emps Go, Emps!]]
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* AlliterativeList: How Ditzy described pizzas in ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/430918/1/go-emps/and-keep-on-going Go, Emps! - And Keep on Going!]]''
--> calorie-crowded, heart-harming, sodium-stuffed, cancer-causing, fat-filled pizzas.
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** ''Crossworlds Guardian, SailorOrbital!''Orbital!''
** ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/430918/1/go-emps/and-keep-on-going Go, Emps! - And Keep on Going!]]''
** ''Crossworlds Guardian, Sailor
** ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/430918/1/go-emps/and-keep-on-going Go, Emps! - And Keep on Going!]]''
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** '''S'''unset '''S'''himmer
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* DeadlyForceField: From ''Oversaturation'', in ''Clashing'': Sunset's reflexive shield spell is a green barrier "that redirected the force, combining offense and defense".
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* PreMortemCatchphrase: Discussed by Timber, when talking about a Catch-Phrase shared between his mom and sister.
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-->"I've got this," echoed Timber. "You know, I wouldn't be surprised if those were my mom's last words."
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* HurricaneOfPuns: From ''Group Precipitation'' - ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/323071/331/group-precipitation/disservice-charge-by-fome Disservice Charge, by FoME]]'' about Discord calling with non-phone objects:
--> make calls on objects including but not limited to a stove top, a banana, a deck of playing cards, a chunk of wood, and your own hand\\
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--> make calls on objects including but not limited to a stove top, a banana, a deck of playing cards, a chunk of wood, and your own hand\\
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* MeasuringTheMarigolds: In ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/269241/6/oversaturation/contrast Contrast]]'', the idea is countered:
--> The sun rose, and Mr. Discord stood on his lawn to greet it. He loved moments like this, when the sky and shadows changed, when the crispness in the air made it feel like it would crinkle if he moved too quickly, where the beauty of the natural world was fully manifest. Understanding the optics, the fluid dynamics, and all the other myriad secrets behind moments like this didn't lessen their beauty, it ''enhanced'' them. To watch the rising sun was to gaze into the inner workings of the universe.
--> The sun rose, and Mr. Discord stood on his lawn to greet it. He loved moments like this, when the sky and shadows changed, when the crispness in the air made it feel like it would crinkle if he moved too quickly, where the beauty of the natural world was fully manifest. Understanding the optics, the fluid dynamics, and all the other myriad secrets behind moments like this didn't lessen their beauty, it ''enhanced'' them. To watch the rising sun was to gaze into the inner workings of the universe.
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** The chapter titles of ''Blue Sunny Days and Pink Lemonade'', which can be joined to form a single long sentence: [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/369785/1/ It starts with a casual chat...]] [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/369785/1/...then you're meeting up for 'practical' reasons...]]
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** The chapter titles of ''Blue Sunny Days and Pink Lemonade'', which can be joined to form a single long sentence: [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/369785/1/ It starts with a casual chat...]] [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/369785/1/...net/story/369785/2/ ...then you're meeting up for 'practical' reasons...]]
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** The chapter titles of ''Blue Sunny Days and Pink Lemonade'': [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/369785/1/ It starts with a casual chat...]] [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/369785/1/...then you're meeting up for 'practical' reasons...]]
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** The chapter titles of ''Blue Sunny Days and Pink Lemonade'': Lemonade'', which can be joined to form a single long sentence: [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/369785/1/ It starts with a casual chat...]] [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/369785/1/...then you're meeting up for 'practical' reasons...]]
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* AbstractApotheosis: [[spoiler: Equestria's Tree of Harmony almost forcibly ascends Sunset into becoming the Catalyst of Harmony for the human world. This involves a sequence where Sunset perceives herself as human, pony, and a humanoid sun all at the same time.]]
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* AbstractApotheosis: [[spoiler: Equestria's [[spoiler:Equestria's Tree of Harmony almost forcibly ascends Sunset into becoming the Catalyst of Harmony for the human world. This involves a sequence where Sunset perceives herself as human, pony, and a humanoid sun all at the same time.]]
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* AmazingTechnicolorPopulation: Actually a plot point! This is explained by the existence of [[https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/414604/fome-thinks-too-much-chromelanin chromelanin]], a form of melanin that forms in the presence of magic to cause unusual colorations. [[spoiler:This is one of the many clues that humans are more magical than first thought...]]
** Subverted in the ''Group Precipitation'' story "Paler Living Through Chemistry". When Applejack was younger, her parents bought her some cheap soap that caused her to lose all her chromelanin. She jokingly refers to herself as a freak, even though she's the only one of the girls with a (to us) normal skin tone.
** Subverted in the ''Group Precipitation'' story "Paler Living Through Chemistry". When Applejack was younger, her parents bought her some cheap soap that caused her to lose all her chromelanin. She jokingly refers to herself as a freak, even though she's the only one of the girls with a (to us) normal skin tone.
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* AmazingTechnicolorPopulation: AmazingTechnicolorPopulation:
** Actually a plot point! This is explained by the existence of [[https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/414604/fome-thinks-too-much-chromelanin chromelanin]], a form of melanin that forms in the presence of magic to cause unusual colorations. [[spoiler:This is one of the many clues that humans are more magical than first thought...]]
** Subverted in * AnswerCut: From ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/269241/2/oversaturation/tones Tones]]'':
--> who'd want a school full of disharmony?\\
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** Actually a plot point! This is explained by the existence of [[https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/414604/fome-thinks-too-much-chromelanin chromelanin]], a form of melanin that forms in the presence of magic to cause unusual colorations. [[spoiler:This is one of the many clues that humans are more magical than first thought...]]
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* BlandNameProduct: All over the place: [[Website/YouTube EweTube]], [[Website/{{Google}} Gillion]], and [[MagicTheGathering [[TabletopGame/MagicTheGathering Hocus-Pocus: the Get-Together]] to name but a few. Many have some manner of horse pun.
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* ExactWords: Discord (a science teacher in this setting) wanted to build a research facility at CHS. Principal Celestia told him he could add anything, so long as it was not a human testing installation. So he built the "Not A Human Testing Installation." Which is, of course, a human testing installation.
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* ExactWords: As said in ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/269241/2/oversaturation/tones Tones]]'': Discord (a science teacher in this setting) wanted to build a research facility at CHS. Principal Celestia told him he could add anything, so long as it was not a human testing installation. So he built the "Not A Human Testing Installation." Which is, of course, a human testing installation.
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* IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming: Its nine chapter titles all relate to color:
** ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/269241/1/oversaturation/neutrals Neutrals]]''
** ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/269241/2/oversaturation/tones Tones]]''
** ''Brightness''
** ''Secondaries''
** ''Clashing''
** ''Contrast''
** ''Running''
** ''Spectrum''
** ''Light''
** ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/269241/1/oversaturation/neutrals Neutrals]]''
** ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/269241/2/oversaturation/tones Tones]]''
** ''Brightness''
** ''Secondaries''
** ''Clashing''
** ''Contrast''
** ''Running''
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** ''Light''
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* IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming: Color-titles:
** The story itself, ''Oversaturation''
** Its nine chapter titles all relate to color:
** *** ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/269241/1/oversaturation/neutrals Neutrals]]''
** *** ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/269241/2/oversaturation/tones Tones]]''
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***** ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/269241/3/oversaturation/brightness Brightness]]''
*** ''Secondaries''
** *** ''Clashing''
** *** ''Contrast''
** *** ''Running''
** *** ''Spectrum''
** *** ''Light''
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** The title of the story itself,''Oversaturation''. And its ''Oversaturation''
** The story's ninechapters: ''Neutrals'', ''Tones'', ''Brightness'', ''Secondaries'', ''Clashing'', ''Contrast'', ''Running'', ''Spectrum'', and chapters:
*** ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/269241/1/oversaturation/neutrals Neutrals]]''
*** ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/269241/2/oversaturation/tones Tones]]''
*** ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/269241/3/oversaturation/brightness Brightness]]''
*** ''Secondaries''
*** ''Clashing''
*** ''Contrast''
*** ''Running''
*** ''Spectrum''
*** ''Light''.
** The title of the story itself,
** The story's nine
*** ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/269241/1/oversaturation/neutrals Neutrals]]''
*** ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/269241/2/oversaturation/tones Tones]]''
*** ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/269241/3/oversaturation/brightness Brightness]]''
*** ''Secondaries''
*** ''Clashing''
*** ''Contrast''
*** ''Running''
*** ''Spectrum''
*** ''Light''.
* PunctuatedForEmphasis: From ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/269241/2/oversaturation/tones Tones]]'':
--> After Vinyl shut the door, she turned to face Sunset. "What. The. Actual. Fuck." With every word, she stalked a step closer, forcing Sunset back until she was pinned against the opposite wall.
--> After Vinyl shut the door, she turned to face Sunset. "What. The. Actual. Fuck." With every word, she stalked a step closer, forcing Sunset back until she was pinned against the opposite wall.
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** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/391512/chromatic-chronomancy Chromatic Chronomancy]].
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** [[https://www.''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/391512/chromatic-chronomancy Chromatic Chronomancy]].Chronomancy]]''.
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* AmazingTechnicolorPopulation: Subverted in the ''Group Precipitation'' story "Paler Living Through Chemistry". When Applejack was younger, her parents bought her some cheap soap that caused her to lose all her chromelanin. She jokingly refers to herself as a freak, even though she's the only one of the girls with a (to us) normal skin tone.
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* FunetikAksent: Applejack's speech is written with one:
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* FunetikAksent: As seen in ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/269241/1/oversaturation/neutrals Neutrals]]'', Applejack's speech is written with one:
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* IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming: Its nine chapter titles all relate to color: ''Neutrals'', ''Tones'', ''Brightness'', ''Secondaries'', ''Clashing'', ''Contrast'', ''Running'', ''Spectrum'', and ''Light''.
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* IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming: Its nine chapter titles all relate to color: ''Neutrals'', ''Tones'', ''Brightness'', ''Secondaries'', ''Clashing'', ''Contrast'', ''Running'', ''Spectrum'', color:
** ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/269241/1/oversaturation/neutrals Neutrals]]''
** ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/269241/2/oversaturation/tones Tones]]''
** ''Brightness''
** ''Secondaries''
** ''Clashing''
** ''Contrast''
** ''Running''
** ''Spectrum''
** ''Light''
* LuminescentBlush: From ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/269241/1/oversaturation/neutrals Neutrals]]'', when Rarity was showing her cutie mark to Sunset, and''Light''.raised her skirt up:
--> Sunset knelt and stared for a good minute\\
Finally, Rarity cleared her throat and shoved her skirt back down, her face almost incandescent. “Did you enjoy yourself?"
** ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/269241/1/oversaturation/neutrals Neutrals]]''
** ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/269241/2/oversaturation/tones Tones]]''
** ''Brightness''
** ''Secondaries''
** ''Clashing''
** ''Contrast''
** ''Running''
** ''Spectrum''
** ''Light''
* LuminescentBlush: From ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/269241/1/oversaturation/neutrals Neutrals]]'', when Rarity was showing her cutie mark to Sunset, and
--> Sunset knelt and stared for a good minute\\
Finally, Rarity cleared her throat and shoved her skirt back down, her face almost incandescent. “Did you enjoy yourself?"
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* PunctuatedForEmphasis: ** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/323071/96/group-precipitation/hell-save-every-one-of-us-by-masterweaver-and-fome He'll Save Every One of Us, by Masterweaver and FoME]]:
---> ([=FoME=])\\
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"Flash Sentry says he wasn't fully aware of what happened, but you were there with him. What can you tell us?"\\
"Well—"\\
Applejack put a hand over Pinkie's mouth. "No comment."\\
The reporter blinked. "But—"\\
"No. Comment."
---> ([=FoME=])\\
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"Flash Sentry says he wasn't fully aware of what happened, but you were there with him. What can you tell us?"\\
"Well—"\\
Applejack put a hand over Pinkie's mouth. "No comment."\\
The reporter blinked. "But—"\\
"No. Comment."
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** ''Pest Control'': [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/367276/1/pest-control/usually-ya-let-things-just-roll Usually, ya let things just roll...]] [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/367276/2/pest-control/and-when-issues-crop-up-ya-try-ta-keep-a-level-head
...and when issues crop up, ya try ta keep a level head...]] [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/367276/3/pest-control/but-sometimes-ya-just-gotta-go-big ...but sometimes, ya just gotta go big.]]
...and when issues crop up, ya try ta keep a level head...]] [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/367276/3/pest-control/but-sometimes-ya-just-gotta-go-big ...but sometimes, ya just gotta go big.]]
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** ''Pest Control'': [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/367276/1/pest-control/usually-ya-let-things-just-roll Usually, ya let things just roll...]] [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/367276/2/pest-control/and-when-issues-crop-up-ya-try-ta-keep-a-level-head
...net/story/367276/2/pest-control/and-when-issues-crop-up-ya-try-ta-keep-a-level-head ...and when issues crop up, ya try ta keep a level head...]] [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/367276/3/pest-control/but-sometimes-ya-just-gotta-go-big ...but sometimes, ya just gotta go big.]]
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* AdjectiveNounFred: ''Crossworlds Guardian, Sailor Orbital!''.
