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Special thanks to Solidusgabo and Lexa_Alycia for assisting me with proofreading and Spanish. Some chapters have been cleaned up but I'm planning to go back and clean up any mistakes I have missed prior.
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[[caption-width-right:350:Art from a part of the story by the author.]]
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* CrashIntoHello: The story's plot begins with Luz being launched into the air and landing on Amity by accident.
* CutenessProximity: Luz gushes over [[spoiler:child Eda]] upon seeing her and pulls her into a hug.
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** Transforming Luz's clothes to that of a cheerleader's during the last part of the Magicball match when she's cheering for her teammate, Amity, much to her blushing embarrassment.
* HumanDisguise: Transformed by Eda, Amity has human traits put on her in order for Luz to be able to take photos of her and send without Luz's Mother catching on that she isn't in camp.
* HumanDisguise: Transformed by Eda, Amity has human traits put on her in order for Luz to be able to take photos of her and send without Luz's Mother catching on that she isn't in camp.
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** Transforming Luz's clothes to that of into a cheerleader's outfit during the last part of the Magicball match when she's cheering for her teammate, Amity, much to her blushing embarrassment.
* HumanDisguise: Transformed byEda, Eda with an illusion spell, Amity has human traits put on her in order for Luz to be able to take photos of her and send without Luz's Mother catching on that she isn't in camp.
* HumanDisguise: Transformed by
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* IgnoredEnamouredUnderling: Steve has a crush on Lilith and throws himself into his job in hopes of impressing her.
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* ShoutOut: During the home invasion, the frog brothers mention encountering another [[WesternAnimation/{{Amphibia}} frog family]] and that the tadpole knew how to use a mace.
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* AccidentalKiss: Due to Hooty's interruption of their special moment, [[spoiler: Amity kisses Luz on the lips on accident instead of the cheek]]; resulting in both being flustered and the former running from the Owl House in mixed emotional feelings of how her first kiss happened.
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* AccidentalKiss: Due to Hooty's interruption of their special moment, [[spoiler: Amity kisses Luz on the lips on accident instead of the cheek]]; cheek]] resulting in both being flustered and the former running from the Owl House in mixed emotional feelings of how her first kiss happened.
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:The story may end with Amity having to return home knowing she'll have to keep her relationship with Luz secret (especially from her parents), but at least they ''are'' dating, not to mention she just got her first kiss with Luz and the twins, Willow and Gus will support their relationship along with the residents of the Owl House.]]
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* AffectionateNickname: Luz asks if she can call Amity by the same name as her sibling's, with Amity refusing due to not wanting her crush to use the same nickname her family calls her.
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* AffectionateNickname: Luz asks if she can call Amity by the same name as her sibling's, siblings, with Amity refusing due to not wanting her crush to use the same nickname her family calls her.
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** Since Luz knows this fact, she and Amity continue to [[spoiler:flirt]] while organizing Eda's human item collection with her hearing in proximity; resulting in Eda kicking them out [[spoiler:and them being able to go on their first date.]]
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** Since Luz knows this fact, she and Amity continue to [[spoiler:flirt]] while organizing Eda's human item collection with her hearing in proximity; proximity, resulting in Eda kicking them out [[spoiler:and them being able to go on their first date.]]
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* BilingualBonus: Since Luz knows Spanish, she has a tendency to switch languages when in emotion; whether that's anger, love, or out of habit due to her mother.
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* BadlyBatteredBabysitter: Luz and Amity take a lot of punishment from [[spoiler:child Eda]].
* BilingualBonus: Since Luz knows Spanish, she has a tendency to switch languages whenin emotion; emotional; whether that's anger, love, or out of habit due to her mother.
* BilingualBonus: Since Luz knows Spanish, she has a tendency to switch languages when
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* CrushBlush: Happens so often with Amity whenever she's around Luz that the color red may as well be her natural skin tone.
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* CharacterTic: Luz is shown to have a habit of hiding her face in her hood when she's embarrassed.
* CrushBlush: Happens so often with Amity whenever she's around Luz that the color red may as well be her natural skin tone. [[spoiler:It becomes mutual when Luz realizes her feelings for Amity and they begin dating.]]
* CrushBlush: Happens so often with Amity whenever she's around Luz that the color red may as well be her natural skin tone. [[spoiler:It becomes mutual when Luz realizes her feelings for Amity and they begin dating.]]
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* FromBadToWorse: When Amity takes Luz's unconscious body to Eda with fear that she has a concussion, Eda comments that only if it was just that; revealing that both Luz and King are infected with Skull Screamers.
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* FountainOfYouth: The StoryArc of "Sixth Day" focuses on [[spoiler:Eda being cursed with a youth potion after a mixup with her usual order of elixers. As such, Luz and Amity try to take care of her as she slowly grows back to her normal age while King tries to get the elixers back.]]
* FromBadToWorse: When Amity takes Luz's unconscious body to Eda with fear that she has a concussion, Eda comments that only if it was justthat; that, revealing that both Luz and King are infected with Skull Screamers.
* FromBadToWorse: When Amity takes Luz's unconscious body to Eda with fear that she has a concussion, Eda comments that only if it was just
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** Whispering in Luz's ear to cheer Amity on when Amity and King are playing "Explosion Man" against each other, telling her to say "Go get him, girlfriend!"; causing Amity to fluster and lose the match.
** Transforming Luz's clothes to that of a cheerleader's during the last part of the Magicball match when she's cheering for her teammate, Amity; much to her blushing embarrassment.
** Transforming Luz's clothes to that of a cheerleader's during the last part of the Magicball match when she's cheering for her teammate, Amity; much to her blushing embarrassment.
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** Whispering in Luz's ear to cheer Amity on when Amity and King are playing "Explosion Man" against each other, telling her to say "Go get him, girlfriend!"; causing Amity to fluster become flustered and lose the match.
** Transforming Luz's clothes to that of a cheerleader's during the last part of the Magicball match when she's cheering for her teammate,Amity; Amity, much to her blushing embarrassment.
** Transforming Luz's clothes to that of a cheerleader's during the last part of the Magicball match when she's cheering for her teammate,
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* AccidentalKiss: Due to Hooty's interruption of their special moment, [[spoiler: Amity kisses Luz on the lips on accident instead of the cheek]]; resulting in both being flustered and the former running from the Owl House in mixed emotional feelings of how her first kiss happened.
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* SecretRelationship: Amity and Luz decide to keep their new relationship a secret, in fear mainly of Amity's parents; but settle on telling close friends of their relationship that they know will keep their secret.
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* RomanticSpoonfeeding: Variation of, Amity feeds Luz a "Victory Snack", by throwing a chip into her mouth. At first she misses, but is able to launch it into Luz's mouth; she continues to do so in order to get the lovingly satisfaction reaction from her [[spoiler:girlfriend]], which Luz is quickly overwhelmed.
