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''Twilight Sparkle and her friends must once more band together to stop the evil alicorn known as Shades of Grey. However, Grey's influence has threatened not only Equestria, but all of ponykind. Twilight has exceled in magical prowess since becoming an alicornian princess, but without the Elements of Harmony, can the Mane six hope to prevent Shades of Grey from realizing his goal?''
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''Twilight Sparkle and her friends must once more band together to stop the evil alicorn known as Shades of Grey. However, Grey's influence has threatened not only Equestria, but all of ponykind. Twilight has exceled excelled in magical prowess since becoming an alicornian alicorn princess, but without the Elements of Harmony, can the Mane six Six hope to prevent Shades of Grey from realizing his goal?''
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* ShoutOut: The story's very premise and title are references to the iconic song [[VideoGame/FinalFantasyVII One Winged Angel]].
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* ShoutOut: The story's very premise and title are references to the iconic song [[VideoGame/FinalFantasyVII [[AwesomeMusic/FinalFantasy One Winged Angel]].
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* DangerouslyGenreSavvy: Shades of Grey agrees that ThePowerOfFriendship poses a threat to him.
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-->'''Shades of Grey''': "Indeed. That's why I've decided to separate you."
-->'''Twilight''': "You saw it yourself Grey, together we can accomplish anything!"
-->'''Shades of Grey''': "Indeed. That's why I've decided to separate you."
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One Winged Alicorn is a straightforward ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fan novella by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Mondai+Shunketsu Mondai Shunketsu]]. Similar to the season 1-3 opening episodes, it revolves around a newly introduced BigBad.
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** Rainbow Dash refers to the aforementioned InconvenientSummons as [[DragonballZ "instant transmission"]].
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** Shades of Grey was [[DragonballGT born from the build up of negative energy]] in the Elements of Harmony.
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** Shades of Grey was [[DragonballGT [[Anime/DragonballGT born from the build up of negative energy]] in the Elements of Harmony.
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* ShoutOut: The story's very premise and title are references to the iconic song [[FinalFantasyVII One Winged Angel]].
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* ShoutOut: The story's very premise and title are references to the iconic song [[FinalFantasyVII [[VideoGame/FinalFantasyVII One Winged Angel]].
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* HopeSpot: [[spoiler:The Eclipse spell looks like it may actually defeat Shades of Grey. Instead, Luna gets beaten off-page immediately after.]]
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* DangerouslyGenreSavvy: Shades of Grey agrees that ThePowerOfFriendship poses a threat to him.
-->'''Twilight''': "You saw it yourself Grey, together we can accomplish anything!"
-->'''Shades of Grey''': "Indeed. That's why I've decided to separate you."
-->'''Twilight''': "You saw it yourself Grey, together we can accomplish anything!"
-->'''Shades of Grey''': "Indeed. That's why I've decided to separate you."
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* NoOneCouldSurviveThat: Twilight figures Shades of Grey couldn't ''possibly'' have survived Luna's Eclipse attack.
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** ''"Your confidence is your weakness." "Your friends' faith in you is theirs."'' The wording is changed slightly, but this otherwise ''very'' strongly resembles an exchange between Luke and Sidious in ''Film/ReturnOfTheJedi''.
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* TakenForGranite: A cockatrice comes to Fluttershy's aid against Shades of Grey's neophytes.
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** Twilight's reference to the neophytes as "wannabe shadow puppets" is a ''possible'' reference to ''FanFic/TheImmortalGame''.
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* IAmYourOpponent: Discord insists on fighting Shades of Grey to buy time for Twilight to think of a plan, despite Grey giving him the option of just walking away.
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* IAmYourOpponent: Discord insists on fighting Shades of Grey himself to buy time for Twilight some time, ignoring Grey's offer to think of a plan, despite Grey giving let him the option of just walking away.walk away.
** Luna also does this to keep Grey's attention away from the mane six.
** Luna also does this to keep Grey's attention away from the mane six.
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* FlunkyBoss: Shades of Grey summons neophytes to take on the mane six while he resumes his duel with Luna.
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* GoodHurtsEvil: Even without the Elements of Harmony, [[spoiler:a declaration of friendship between the mane six is enough to shield them from Shades of Grey's assault.]]
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* AsLongAsThereIsEvil: Shades of Grey points out that using the Elements of Harmony to defeat him is pointless, since that mechanism is ''how he was formed in the first place''.
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* NoodleIncident: The CMC somehow sneak past the guards into the Canterlot throne room mid-briefing. Rainbow Dash actually ''asks'' how they did so, and the question is completely ignored.
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* OneWingedAngel: Ironically, Shades of Grey does ''not'' fit the trope comfortably since he doesn't physically transform; his absorptions are instead marked by the attachment of scales (the transformed bodies of his victims) to his wings. The power and personality changes ''might'' qualify for the trope, though.
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** She goes off on it again in chapter 5, and this time the rest of the mane six slam her ''back'' for it.
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-->'''Shades of Grey''': "Then stop talking."
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-->'''Shades of Grey''': "Then stop talking.talking, [[BringIt and lower your stance]]."
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* DeadpanSnarker: Shades of Grey, at times.
-->'''Twilight''': "Where are my friends? I won't ask again!"
-->'''Shades of Grey''': "Then stop talking."
* EvilLaugh: Shades of Grey starts off emotionless, but gains one of these after he [[spoiler:absorbs Discord.]]
-->'''Twilight''': "Where are my friends? I won't ask again!"
-->'''Shades of Grey''': "Then stop talking."
* EvilLaugh: Shades of Grey starts off emotionless, but gains one of these after he [[spoiler:absorbs Discord.]]
* FromBadToWorse: [[spoiler:Discord's defeat and absorption is bad enough; the absorption of Luna as well gives him a virtually unstoppable edge.]]
* IAmYourOpponent: Discord insists on fighting Shades of Grey to buy time for Twilight to think of a plan, despite Grey giving him the option of just walking away.
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* OneManArmy: Shades of Grey lays siege to Canterlot, killing dozens of royal guard effortlessly, without any backup.
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* OneManArmy: ThePowerOfHate: The attack Shades of Grey lays siege uses to Canterlot, killing dozens [[spoiler:defeat Discord]] is called Hate Wave.
* RazorWind: Shades ofroyal guard effortlessly, without any backup.Grey hits Discord and Twilight with this.
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* VillainsNeverLie: Shades of Grey insists that he's true to his word. [[OhCrap When he says he wants to kill you, nothing will change his mind.]]
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One Winged Alicorn is a straightforward, BigBad-oriented straightforward ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fan novella by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Mondai+Shunketsu Mondai Shunketsu]].
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A ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Mondai+Shunketsu Mondai Shunketsu]].
Twilight Sparkle and her friends must once more band together to stop the evil alicorn known as Shades of Grey. However, Grey's influence has threatened not only Equestria, but all of ponykind.
Twilight has exceled in magical prowess since becoming an alicornian princess, but without the Elements of Harmony, can the Mane six hope to prevent Shades of Grey from realizing his goal?
Twilight Sparkle and her friends must once more band together to stop the evil alicorn known as Shades of Grey. However, Grey's influence has threatened not only Equestria, but all of ponykind.
Twilight has exceled in magical prowess since becoming an alicornian princess, but without the Elements of Harmony, can the Mane six hope to prevent Shades of Grey from realizing his goal?
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A ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Mondai+Shunketsu Mondai Shunketsu]].
Twilight Sparkle and her friends must once more band together to stop the evil alicorn known as Shades of Grey. However, Grey's influence has threatened not only Equestria, but all of ponykind.
Twilight has exceled in magical prowess since becoming an alicornian princess, but without the Elements of Harmony, can the Mane six hope to prevent Shades of Grey from realizing his goal?
It can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/98416/one-winged-alicorn here]].
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!This fanfic provides the following tropes:
*BeatThemAtTheirOwnGame: Shades of Grey is an embodiment of chaos and disharmony, so they figure Discord - the ''god'' of chaos and disharmony, and thus his hierarchical superior - would be a fitting counter.
** [[spoiler:DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: Discord loses.]]
*BigBad: Shades of Grey.
*FeelingOppressedByTheirExistence: Shades of Grey states that he despises "all things harmonious." Being an embodiment of disharmony himself, it's possible that such things actually fundamentally offend him.
*GoodWingsEvilWings: Shades of Grey has one white and one black.
*InconvenientSummons: Twilight (as an alicorn) is capable of teleporting both herself and other people to and from any location she can visualize. Spike gets teleported this way in chapter 2, without warning, and is summarily confused.
*MadeOfEvil: Shades of Grey. The Elements of Harmony neutralize evil by absorbing it and sealing it away for later dispersal, similar to how a vacuum cleaner sucks up dirt and keeps it in a bag. Shades of Grey is what happens when that dirt piles up, becomes sentient, and breaks out of the bag.
*NiceJobBreakingItHero: Shades of Grey wouldn't have been released in the first place if the mane six hadn't attempted to use the Elements when there was obviously something wrong with them, but in their defence they had no way of knowing.
*OneManArmy: Shades of Grey lays siege to Canterlot, killing dozens of royal guard effortlessly, without any backup.
*SealedEvilInACan: Shades of Grey.
*ShoutOut: The story's very premise and title are references to the iconic song [[FinalFantasyVII One Winged Angel]].
**Rainbow Dash refers to the aforementioned InconvenientSummons as [[DragonballZ "instant transmission"]].
**Shades of Grey was [[DragonballGT born from the build up of negative energy]] in the Elements of Harmony.
**"''Wait,'' [[Literature/FiftyShadesOfGrey Shades of--?]] ''Bwahahaha!'' ''[[TakeThat I can't believe you said that.]]''"
*SpikesOfVillainy: Shades of Grey.
*TitleDrop: Chapter 3 refers to Shades of Grey as the ''One Winged Alicorn''.
*WhatTheHellHero: Rainbow Dash spends most of chapter 2 building up to one. Not only had she taken Twilight's coronation and ascension into high society rather badly to begin with, but the mention of the "Harmony" spell (which would potentially allow Twilight to wield the Elements' power on her own) is what pushes her into firm "oh, you don't need us anymore?" territory.
*YouWillBeAssimilated: Shades of Grey absorbs [[spoiler:Discord and Luna]], incorporating their powers into his own.
Twilight Sparkle and her friends must once more band together to stop the evil alicorn known as Shades of Grey. However, Grey's influence has threatened not only Equestria, but all of ponykind.
Twilight has exceled in magical prowess since becoming an alicornian princess, but without the Elements of Harmony, can the Mane six hope to prevent Shades of Grey from realizing his goal?
It can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/98416/one-winged-alicorn here]].
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!This fanfic provides the following tropes:
*BeatThemAtTheirOwnGame: Shades of Grey is an embodiment of chaos and disharmony, so they figure Discord - the ''god'' of chaos and disharmony, and thus his hierarchical superior - would be a fitting counter.
** [[spoiler:DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: Discord loses.]]
*BigBad: Shades of Grey.
*FeelingOppressedByTheirExistence: Shades of Grey states that he despises "all things harmonious." Being an embodiment of disharmony himself, it's possible that such things actually fundamentally offend him.
*GoodWingsEvilWings: Shades of Grey has one white and one black.
*InconvenientSummons: Twilight (as an alicorn) is capable of teleporting both herself and other people to and from any location she can visualize. Spike gets teleported this way in chapter 2, without warning, and is summarily confused.
*MadeOfEvil: Shades of Grey. The Elements of Harmony neutralize evil by absorbing it and sealing it away for later dispersal, similar to how a vacuum cleaner sucks up dirt and keeps it in a bag. Shades of Grey is what happens when that dirt piles up, becomes sentient, and breaks out of the bag.
*NiceJobBreakingItHero: Shades of Grey wouldn't have been released in the first place if the mane six hadn't attempted to use the Elements when there was obviously something wrong with them, but in their defence they had no way of knowing.
*OneManArmy: Shades of Grey lays siege to Canterlot, killing dozens of royal guard effortlessly, without any backup.
*SealedEvilInACan: Shades of Grey.
*ShoutOut: The story's very premise and title are references to the iconic song [[FinalFantasyVII One Winged Angel]].
**Rainbow Dash refers to the aforementioned InconvenientSummons as [[DragonballZ "instant transmission"]].
**Shades of Grey was [[DragonballGT born from the build up of negative energy]] in the Elements of Harmony.
**"''Wait,'' [[Literature/FiftyShadesOfGrey Shades of--?]] ''Bwahahaha!'' ''[[TakeThat I can't believe you said that.]]''"
*SpikesOfVillainy: Shades of Grey.
*TitleDrop: Chapter 3 refers to Shades of Grey as the ''One Winged Alicorn''.
*WhatTheHellHero: Rainbow Dash spends most of chapter 2 building up to one. Not only had she taken Twilight's coronation and ascension into high society rather badly to begin with, but the mention of the "Harmony" spell (which would potentially allow Twilight to wield the Elements' power on her own) is what pushes her into firm "oh, you don't need us anymore?" territory.
*YouWillBeAssimilated: Shades of Grey absorbs [[spoiler:Discord and Luna]], incorporating their powers into his own.
