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* {{Bowdlerisation}}: After the moderators came down on ''Fanfic/HopeComesToBrocktonBay'', the Website/SpaceBattlesDotCom and Sandbox/SufficientVelocityDotCom versions of this story were adjusted to remove or rewrite all scenes that hinted at underage physical relationships (even [[FakeRelationship fake ones]]). Website/FanFictionDotNet still has them.
** When Emma helps get Taylor cleaned up and showered after the locker, Sophia mocks them for being in the shower together, and Emma decides to roll with it and question what's wrong with that rather than argue. In the original version, she kisses Taylor and pretends to feel her up after quietly telling Taylor to play along. In the revised version, she just verbally agrees that they're in a relationship.
** Lily and Sabah spend the night together after a FadeToBlack. The original shows them waking up together and Sabah helping Lily get dressed; the revised version skips ahead to when Lily is picked up by a PRT transport.
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''One More Trigger'' is a ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' fanfic by Tropers/{{ack1308}}, published on Website/FanFictionDotNet ([[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10072620/ here]]), Website/SpaceBattlesDotCom ([[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/one-more-trigger-worm-au.284428/ here]]), Sandbox/SufficientVelocityDotCom ([[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/one-more-trigger-worm-au.3830/ here]]), and Questionable Questing ([[https://forum.questionablequesting.com/threads/one-more-trigger-worm-au.874/ here]]). It is in progress as of October 2022.

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''One More Trigger'' is a ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' fanfic by Tropers/{{ack1308}}, published on Website/FanFictionDotNet ([[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10072620/ here]]), Website/SpaceBattlesDotCom ([[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/one-more-trigger-worm-au.284428/ here]]), Sandbox/SufficientVelocityDotCom ([[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/one-more-trigger-worm-au.3830/ here]]), and Questionable Questing ([[https://forum.questionablequesting.com/threads/one-more-trigger-worm-au.874/ here]]). It is in progress as of October 2022.
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When Emma Barnes and her father are cornered in an alleyway, before they can be rescued by Shadow Stalker, Emma triggers with powers of her own, and fights the gang members off by herself. [[ForWantOfANail As a result]], she's not impressed by Shadow Stalker's offers of friendship, and instead she holds even closer to her best friend, Taylor Hebert...

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When Emma Barnes and her father are cornered in an alleyway, before they can be rescued by Shadow Stalker, Emma triggers with powers of her own, and fights the gang members off by herself. [[ForWantOfANail [[ButterflyOfDoom As a result]], she's not impressed by Shadow Stalker's offers of friendship, and instead she holds even closer to her best friend, Taylor Hebert...
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--> "How much power's running through it?" asked Panacea.\\

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* LogicalWeakness: Mannequin's body is almost entirely an artificial shell around he actual organs and incredibly durable, making him very hard to injure at all, let alone put down. [[spoiler:It also means his body is extremely vulnerable to Vista since her power can be used on any nonliving object.]]

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* LogicalWeakness: Mannequin's body is almost entirely an artificial shell around he his actual organs and is incredibly durable, making him very hard to injure at all, let alone put down. [[spoiler:It also means his body is extremely vulnerable to Vista since her power can be used on any nonliving object.]]
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** [[spoiler:Hatchet Face is killed by Sparx pumping as much electricity as possible into him]].

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** [[spoiler:Hatchet Face is killed by Sparx pumping as much electricity as possible into him]].him.]]



** When the Undersiders end up fighting the Samaritans when they rob a bank, Sparx grabs Regent's taser-sceptre and shocks him with it.

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** When the Undersiders try to rob a bank and end up fighting the Samaritans when they rob a bank, Samaritans, Sparx grabs Regent's taser-sceptre and shocks him with it.



* LogicalWeakness: Mannequin's body is almost entirely an artificial shell around he actual organs and incredibly durable, making him very hard to injure at all, let alone put down. [[spoiler:It also means his body is extremely vulnerable to Vista since her power can be used on any nonliving object]].

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* LogicalWeakness: Mannequin's body is almost entirely an artificial shell around he actual organs and incredibly durable, making him very hard to injure at all, let alone put down. [[spoiler:It also means his body is extremely vulnerable to Vista since her power can be used on any nonliving object]].object.]]
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* LogicalWeakness: Mannequin's body is almost entirely an artificial shell around he actual organs and incredibly durable, making him very hard to injure at all, let alone put down. [[spoiler:It also means his body is extremely vulnerable to Vista since her power can be used on any nonliving object]].

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* HeroInsurance: A variation. A person can get insurance that covers property damage the occurs during cape battles. Blackwell can't believe Gladly somehow doesn't have it despite living in Brockton Bay for years.



* HighVoltageDeath: When Coil sets traps in his base, dropping a grating to pin invaders in place, he electrifies the grating for good measure. Tattletale can guess he's done it, though.

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When Coil sets traps in his base, dropping a grating to pin invaders in place, he electrifies the grating for good measure. Tattletale can guess he's done it, though.


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** [[spoiler:Hatchet Face is killed by Sparx pumping as much electricity as possible into him]].


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* SkewedPriorities: Mr. Gladly is more concerned about his car potentially getting damaged in an upcoming cape fight than the fact said fight involves [[spoiler:the Slaughterhouse Nine]]. When he tries to ask what guarantee he has that his car won't get damaged, Blackwell points out there's no guarantee the ''school'' will still be there after the fight.
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* TogetherInDeath: [[spoiler:When he realizes that Noelle really intends to let herself be executed, Trickster decides to stay with her rather that keep living on without her.]]

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* TogetherInDeath: [[spoiler:When he realizes that Noelle really intends to let herself be executed, Trickster decides to stay with her rather that than keep living on without her.her. She kisses him while giving a thumbs up to the camera for the explosives to go off.]]

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* YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe: Lisa boggles at the realisation that the Samaritans have [[spoiler:used Vista's power to turn Mannequin into a toboggan]].
--> '''Lisa:''' Oh, you didn't. Oh, man. You did. You really did.

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Lisa boggles at the realisation that the Samaritans have [[spoiler:used Vista's power to turn Mannequin into a toboggan]].
--> ---> '''Lisa:''' Oh, you didn't. Oh, man. You did. You really did.did.
** All PRT staff present are gobsmacked when Ladybug tells them that [[spoiler:she would like to rehabilitate Bonesaw]].
---> '''Director Piggot:''' You can ''not'' be serious.
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--> '''Emma:''' Well, you're the expert in firearms. I've never owned one in my life.\\
Which was absolutely true. Her ''father'' owned the shotgun, not Emma.
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* DePower: [[spoiler:Bonesaw invents a prion powder that permanently disrupts a cape's control over their power. However, Panacea is able to study it and devise a cure.]]

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* DePower: [[spoiler:Bonesaw As per canon, Bonesaw invents a prion powder that permanently disrupts a cape's control over their power. However, [[spoiler:However, Panacea is able to study it and devise a cure.]]
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''One More Trigger'' is a ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' fanfic by Tropers/{{ack1308}}, published on Website/FanFictionDotNet ([[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10072620/ here]]), Website/SpaceBattlesDotCom ([[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/one-more-trigger-worm-au.284428/ here]]), and Sandbox/SufficientVelocityDotCom ([[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/one-more-trigger-worm-au.3830/ here]]), and still in progress as of October 2022.

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''One More Trigger'' is a ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' fanfic by Tropers/{{ack1308}}, published on Website/FanFictionDotNet ([[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10072620/ here]]), Website/SpaceBattlesDotCom ([[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/one-more-trigger-worm-au.284428/ here]]), and Sandbox/SufficientVelocityDotCom ([[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/one-more-trigger-worm-au.3830/ here]]), and still Questionable Questing ([[https://forum.questionablequesting.com/threads/one-more-trigger-worm-au.874/ here]]). It is in progress as of October 2022.

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* TooDumbToLive: [[spoiler:Greg Veder stays behind at Winslow when there's an order for evacuation, thinking he can get a video for PHO, not realizing that there ''might'' be a reason why everyone's being evacuated.]]
** [[spoiler:He also took out his phone to post on PHO about the ABB hitting the dance, ''after everyone was told not to try to call for help.'']]

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** [[spoiler:He He also took [[spoiler:takes out his phone to post on PHO about the ABB hitting the dance, ''after everyone was told not to try to call for help.'']]
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--> '''Ladybug:''' We're thinking we'd locate them with a flytrap[[note]]Plant bugs in people they know to be from the Empire, and tag anyone they interact with[[/note]], then start out with a Blind Man's Bluff[[note]]Use the bugs to determine who are the Empire's capes, while the latter don't know they're under surveillance[[/note]] leading on to Survival of the Unfittest. After we hit what we figure is a good number, we switch to shock and awe and steamroll the rest.

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--> '''Ladybug:''' We're thinking we'd locate them with a flytrap[[note]]Plant bugs in on people they know to be from the Empire, and tag anyone they interact with[[/note]], then start out with a Blind Man's Bluff[[note]]Use the bugs to determine who are the Empire's capes, while the latter don't know they're under surveillance[[/note]] leading on to Survival of the Unfittest.Unfittest[[note]]Yet to be seen, but likely a pattern of taking out the strongest capes first and leaving the weaker ones for later[[/note]]. After we hit what we figure is a good number, we switch to shock and awe and steamroll the rest.
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''One More Trigger'' is a ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' fanfic by Tropers/{{ack1308}}, published on Website/FanFictionDotNet ([[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10072620/ here]]), Website/SpaceBattlesDotCom ([[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/one-more-trigger-worm-au.284428/ here]]), and Sandbox/SufficientVelocityDotCom ([[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/one-more-trigger-worm-au.3830/ here]]).

When Emma Barnes and her father are cornered in an alleyway, before she can be rescued by Shadow Stalker, Emma triggers with powers of her own, and fights the gang members off by herself. [[ForWantOfANail As a result]], she's not impressed by Shadow Stalker's offers of friendship, and instead she holds even closer to her best friend, Taylor Hebert...

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When Emma Barnes and her father are cornered in an alleyway, before they can be rescued by Shadow Stalker, Emma triggers with powers of her own, and fights the gang members off by herself. [[ForWantOfANail As a result]], she's not impressed by Shadow Stalker's offers of friendship, and instead she holds even closer to her best friend, Taylor Hebert...

''One More Trigger'' is a ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' fanfic by Tropers/{{ack1308}}, published on Website/FanFictionDotNet ([[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10072620/ here]]), Website/SpaceBattlesDotCom ([[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/one-more-trigger-worm-au.284428/ here]]), and Sandbox/SufficientVelocityDotCom ([[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/one-more-trigger-worm-au.3830/ here]]).

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* ChekhovsGun: In Part Nine, when Piggot decides to send Vista to become the PRT's liaison to the Samaritans, she mentions that she's not sending Flechette because she's in an outside relationship. [[spoiler:In Part Thirty-Three, posted '''seven years later''', Vista uses that exact comment to help Flechette leave the Wards and also leave the Wards herself.]]

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* ChekhovsGun: In Part Nine, when Piggot decides to send Vista to become the PRT's liaison to the Samaritans, she mentions that she's not sending Flechette because she's in an outside relationship. [[spoiler:In Part Thirty-Three, posted '''seven years later''', Vista uses that exact comment to help Flechette leave the Wards and also leave the Wards herself.herself, by proving that Director Piggot knew of Flechette's relationship before initiating her ploy to recruit Parian.]]
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* SpannerInTheWorks: Coil's plans get derailed because the bank the Undersiders are robbing as part as the former's plan to kidnap Dinah Alcott was also being attended by the Samaritans.
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--> '''Ladybug:''' We're thinking we'd locate them with a flytrap, then start out with a Blind Man's Bluff leading on to Survival of the Unfittest. After we hit what we figure is a good number, we switch to shock and awe and steamroll the rest.

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--> '''Ladybug:''' We're thinking we'd locate them with a flytrap, flytrap[[note]]Plant bugs in people they know to be from the Empire, and tag anyone they interact with[[/note]], then start out with a Blind Man's Bluff Bluff[[note]]Use the bugs to determine who are the Empire's capes, while the latter don't know they're under surveillance[[/note]] leading on to Survival of the Unfittest. After we hit what we figure is a good number, we switch to shock and awe and steamroll the rest.
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* ChekhovsGun: In Part Nine, when Piggot decides to send Vista to become the PRT's liaison to the Samaritans, she mentions that she's not sending Flechette because she's in an outside relationship. [[spoiler:In Part Thirty-Three, posted '''seven years later''', Vista uses that exact comment to help Flechette leave the Wards and also leave the Wards herself.]]

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* BlowYouAway: Madison [[spoiler:triggers when she's about to be raped by ABB members who had just kidnapped her. She can control nearby air, with enough force to lift herself off the ground (and passengers, for a short time), deflect bullets, and crush drone helicopters. She can also use fine control to protect herself from airborne contaminants. Her would-be rapists are promptly flung into a wall and knocked out.]]

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* BlowYouAway: Madison [[spoiler:triggers when she's about to be raped by ABB members who had just kidnapped her. She can control nearby air, with enough force to lift herself off the ground (and passengers, for a short time), deflect bullets, and crush drone helicopters. She can also use fine control to protect herself from airborne contaminants.contaminants, asphyxiate someone by pulling the air from around them or create vacuums. Her would-be rapists are promptly flung into a wall and knocked out.]]



** For Rogers, firing on a single target, from a prepared position with plenty of time to set up, at a few tens of yards, is effectively point blank range. [[spoiler:Too bad his target is ImmuneToBullets, and bugs jam his rifle before he can fire a second shot.]]

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** For Rogers, firing on a single target, from a prepared position with plenty of time to set up, at a few tens of yards, is effectively point blank point-blank range. [[spoiler:Too bad his target is ImmuneToBullets, and bugs jam his rifle before he can fire a second shot.]]



** Danny finishes off [[spoiler:Jack Slash, with a shotgun directly to his eye while he's lying on the ground. Jack's reinforced skull might have survived anything less, but his eye socket isn't as tough, and the bullets shred his brain.]]

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** Danny finishes off [[spoiler:Jack Slash, with a shotgun directly to his eye while he's lying on the ground. Jack's reinforced skull might have survived anything less, but his eye socket isn't as tough, and the bullets shred his brain.]]brain]].



* DidntSeeThatComing: Mannequin [[spoiler:has a shell sealed against bugs, insulated against Sparx's lightning, and too heavy for Aerodyne to lift, which makes Jack Slash think he's a perfect counter for the Samaritans. But being mostly non-living, he's a sitting duck for Vista's spatial distortions.]]

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* DidntSeeThatComing: Mannequin [[spoiler:has a shell sealed against bugs, insulated against Sparx's lightning, and too heavy for Aerodyne to lift, which makes Jack Slash think he's a perfect counter for the Samaritans. But being mostly non-living, he's a sitting duck for Vista's spatial distortions.]]distortions]].



* ExactWords: When Armsmaster asks [[spoiler:who shot Jack Slash and Burnscar]], the Samaritans give perfectly correct answers that nonetheless hide the fact that [[spoiler:it was their parents that did the deed]].



* FlippingTheBird: The Samaritans use hand signals, somewhat like sign language, to communicate when it's not convenient to speak, but when Lisa pretends she didn't understand one after being temporarily deafened, "Emma gave her a hand signal that was not in their official repertoire."

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* FlippingTheBird: The Samaritans use hand signals, somewhat like sign language, to communicate when it's not convenient to speak, but when Lisa pretends [[TheGadfly pretends]] she didn't understand one after being temporarily deafened, "Emma gave her a hand signal that was not in their official repertoire."



* GoodFeelsGood: Lisa comments several times on how nice it feels to use her powers to actually help people instead of stealing.



* KryptoniteFactor: Liquid makes Emma's hair collapse back to its unpowered state. It's not great for Taylor's bugs, either..

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* KryptoniteFactor: Liquid makes Emma's hair collapse back to its unpowered state. It's not great for Taylor's bugs, either..either.



* MakeSureHesDead: The dad brigade take no chances after [[spoiler:some of the Slaughterhouse Nine escaped the first time; once Jack Slash and Burnscar are down, Burnscar is shot again [[BoomHeadshot in the head]], and Jack gets a CoupDeGrace to the left eye.]]

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* MakeSureHesDead: The dad brigade take takes no chances after [[spoiler:some of the Slaughterhouse Nine escaped the first time; once Jack Slash and Burnscar are down, Burnscar is shot again [[BoomHeadshot in the head]], and Jack gets a CoupDeGrace to the left eye.]]



* NotSoAboveItAll: When Taylor and Emma suggest Vista to [[spoiler:use Mannequin as a toboggan]], Vista says she can't believe she's the youngest of the three... but she agrees [[spoiler:as long as she gets to steer]].

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** Amy returns from getting prion samples saying that she only has enough to heal either Emma or Taylor, not both. Just as Taylor and Emma point at the other to be healed, Amy grins and reveals she was kidding.



* PapaWolf: Danny Hebert, Alan Barnes, and Rod Clements are very protective of their daughters. This initially takes the form of giving them extensive training so they'll have the best chance of surviving. Later, [[spoiler:Danny hunts down Coil in a timeline where Taylor was killed by Noelle, and systematically beats him to death with a tyre iron, forcing him to drop that timeline.]] The dads also [[spoiler:kill Jack Slash with a shotgun after he took the girls prisoner]].

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* PapaWolf: Danny Hebert, Alan Barnes, and Rod Clements are very protective of their daughters. This initially takes the form of giving them extensive training so they'll have the best chance of surviving. Later, [[spoiler:Danny hunts down Coil in a timeline where Taylor was Taylor, Emma, and Madison were killed by Noelle, Noelle or Coil's base's self-destruction charge, and systematically beats him to death with a tyre iron, forcing him to drop that timeline.]] The dads also [[spoiler:kill Jack Slash and Burnscar with a shotgun after he they took the girls prisoner]].hostage]].


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* NotSoAboveItAll: When Taylor and Emma suggest Vista to [[spoiler:use Mannequin as a toboggan]], Vista says she can't believe she's the youngest of the three... but she agrees [[spoiler:as long as she gets to steer]].

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* NiceJobBreakingItHero:
** [[spoiler:Saint attacks the Dragon Craft carrying the Nine to their execution point to steal one of the armors, allowing the Nine to attack the Samaritans again.]]
** [[spoiler:When Winslow is evacuated as part of the Samaritans' plan to end the Slaughterhouse Nine, Greg Veder stays behind [[SocialMediaBeforeReason to get a video of whatever is going to happen]], which leads to him and Taylor being kidnapped by the Nine and Taylor and Emma (temporarily) losing her powers.]]



* PutThemAllOutOfMyMisery: [[spoiler:When Noelle gives up hope, she just wants to kill the whole world, and she has enough captured capes that she could probably pull it off. Fortunately that timeline ends with Coil's death.]]

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* PutThemAllOutOfMyMisery: [[spoiler:When Noelle gives up hope, she just wants to kill the whole world, and she has enough captured capes that she could probably pull it off. Fortunately Fortunately, that timeline ends with Coil's death.]]


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* HoistWithHisOwnPetard: [[spoiler:Riley's probation is enabled by [[DePower removing her powers]] with the prions she made for attacking the Samaritans.]] For bonus points, [[spoiler:studying those prions is ''also'' the key to Panacea restoring the powers of the affected Samaritans, using Bonesaw's work to undo her work.]]

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* HeterosexualLifePartners: Taylor and Emma like boys, but they are so close that people think they are a couple.

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** Emma gives one to Sophia when the latter causes Taylor to Trigger.

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---> "What." ''Smack.''\\
"Does." ''Smack.''\\
"It." ''Smack.''\\
"Take." ''Smack.''\\
"For." ''Smack.''\\
"You." ''Smack.''\\
"To." ''Smack.''\\
"Get." ''Smack.''\\
"The." ''Smack.''\\
"Message?" ''Smack.''

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* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: Danny [[spoiler:loses Taylor in one timeline due to Coil's plots, and proceeds to run Coil down with his car, then take out a tyre iron and break every part of Coil's body he can reach. Coil eventually closes the timeline when he's about to have his skull smashed in.]]
--> [[spoiler:Coil could not speak; Danny chose not to. He began to systematically, brutally, beat Coil to death. The only sounds that he made were the hissing of his breath through his teeth. He broke both of Coil's legs, shattered his kneecaps, and then his arms and collarbones. The fact that some of these bones were already broken mattered not at all to him.]]

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--> ---> [[spoiler:Coil could not speak; Danny chose not to. He began to systematically, brutally, beat Coil to death. The only sounds that he made were the hissing of his breath through his teeth. He broke both of Coil's legs, shattered his kneecaps, and then his arms and collarbones. The fact that some of these bones were already broken mattered not at all to him.]]
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* AmazonBrigade: The Samaritans don't have a specific policy against recruiting boys, but it never seems to happen. Instead, in varying degrees of permanency, they have Taylor, Emma, Madison, [[spoiler: Vista/Missy, Panacea/Amy, Glory Girl/Vicky, Tattletale/Lisa, Flechette/Lily, and Riley]]. Between them, they put away many of Brockton Bay's worst threats, from [[spoiler:a flawless victory over Oni Lee]] to [[spoiler: annihilating the Slaughterhouse Nine]]. The only males are the three dads, who are mostly in a support role.
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* AcceptableTargets:
** InUniverse, when Aerodyne raises the possibility of using air control to suffocate Burnscar, she also points out that it's hard to make it reliably nonlethal -- but Danny points out that all the Nine have kill orders, so if she did kill Burnscar, there would be no charges laid.
** Director Piggot states outright to [[spoiler:Riley, formerly Bonesaw,]] that if it becomes necessary, she'll sign execution paperwork "with a song in my heart."

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