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** [[spoiler:Saint attacks the Dragon Craft carrying the Nine to their execution point to steal one of the armors, allowing the Nine to attack the Samaritans again.]]
** [[spoiler:When Winslow is evacuated as part of the Samaritans' plan to end the Slaughterhouse Nine, Greg Veder stays behind [[SocialMediaBeforeReason to get a video of whatever is going to happen]], which leads to him and Taylor being kidnapped by the Nine and Taylor and Emma (temporarily) losing her powers.]]
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**[[spoiler:When When Winslow is evacuated as [[spoiler:as part of the Samaritans' plan to end the Slaughterhouse Nine, Greg Veder stays behind [[SocialMediaBeforeReason to get a video of whatever is going to happen]], which leads to him and Taylor being kidnapped by the Nine and Taylor and Emma (temporarily) losing her powers.]]
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* StarterVillain: Shadow Stalker's plot relevance ends when after the Locker Incident (and Emma beating Sophia bloody), Emma and Alan out everything about Emma's Trigger Event and throw Sophia under the bus. She and several hangers-on are quickly expelled and Sophia herself is implied to have had her probation revoked and carted off to Prison.
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* StarterVillain: Shadow Stalker's plot relevance ends when after the Locker Incident (and Emma beating Sophia bloody), Emma and Alan out everything about Emma's Trigger Event (ie Shadow Stalker sitting back and watching how they'll react instead of immediately rescuing them) and throw Sophia under the bus. She and several hangers-on are quickly expelled and Sophia herself is implied to have had her probation revoked and carted off to Prison.
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* {{Bowdlerisation}}: After the moderators came down on ''Fanfic/HopeComesToBrocktonBay'', the Website/SpaceBattlesDotCom and Sandbox/SufficientVelocityDotCom versions of this story were adjusted to remove or rewrite all scenes that hinted at underage physical relationships (even [[FakeRelationship fake ones]]). Website/FanFictionDotNet still has them.
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* {{Bowdlerisation}}: After the moderators came down on ''Fanfic/HopeComesToBrocktonBay'', the Website/SpaceBattlesDotCom and Sandbox/SufficientVelocityDotCom Website/SufficientVelocityDotCom versions of this story were adjusted to remove or rewrite all scenes that hinted at underage physical relationships (even [[FakeRelationship fake ones]]). Website/FanFictionDotNet still has them.
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''One More Trigger'' is a ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' fanfic by Tropers/{{ack1308}}, published on Website/FanFictionDotNet ([[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10072620/ here]]), Website/SpaceBattlesDotCom ([[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/one-more-trigger-worm-au.284428/ here]]), Sandbox/SufficientVelocityDotCom ([[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/one-more-trigger-worm-au.3830/ here]]), and Questionable Questing ([[https://forum.questionablequesting.com/threads/one-more-trigger-worm-au.874/ here]]). It is in progress as of October 2023.
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''One More Trigger'' is a ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' fanfic by Tropers/{{ack1308}}, published on Website/FanFictionDotNet ([[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10072620/ here]]), Website/SpaceBattlesDotCom ([[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/one-more-trigger-worm-au.284428/ here]]), Sandbox/SufficientVelocityDotCom Website/SufficientVelocityDotCom ([[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/one-more-trigger-worm-au.3830/ here]]), and Questionable Questing ([[https://forum.questionablequesting.com/threads/one-more-trigger-worm-au.874/ here]]). It is in progress as of October 2023.
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* AlcoholInducedIdiocy: [[spoiler: How The Samaritans [[FramingTheGuiltyParty frame Victor, Othala and Crusader]] and get them into PRT custody; after eavesdropping on Empire 88's meeting and figuring out who's really running the show (ie Max Anders), knocking them all out with Taylors stinging insects and having them crash Victor's car into the lobby of the PRT Building all drunk as skunks, letting the Drink Driving and Criminal Damage charges open the door to all their other myriad criminal charges being dropped in their laps, and hoping one of them will crack and take a plea bargain to sell out the rest]].
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* AlcoholInducedIdiocy: [[spoiler: How The Samaritans [[FramingTheGuiltyParty fake this in a ploy to [[spoiler:[[FramingTheGuiltyParty frame Victor, Othala and Crusader]] and get them into PRT custody; after custody. After eavesdropping on Empire 88's meeting and figuring out who's really running the show (ie Max Anders), knocking the Samaritans knock the three of them all out with Taylors Taylor's stinging insects insects, artificially make them drunk as skunks using Amy's power, and having have them crash Victor's car into the lobby of the PRT Building all drunk as skunks, Building, letting the Drink Driving and Criminal Damage charges open the door to all their other myriad criminal charges being dropped in their laps, and hoping one of them will crack and take a plea bargain to sell out the rest]].rest.]]
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* AlcoholInducedIdiocy: [[spoiler: How The Samaritans [[FrameTheGuiltyParty frame Victor, Othala and Crusader]] and get them into PRT custody; after eavesdropping on Empire 88's meeting and figuring out who's really running the show (ie Max Anders), knocking them all out with Taylors stinging insects and having them crash Victor's car into the lobby of the PRT Building all drunk as skunks, letting the Drink Driving and Criminal Damage charges open the door to all their other myriad criminal charges being dropped in their laps, and hoping one of them will crack and take a plea bargain to sell out the rest]].
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* AlcoholInducedIdiocy: [[spoiler: How The Samaritans [[FrameTheGuiltyParty [[FramingTheGuiltyParty frame Victor, Othala and Crusader]] and get them into PRT custody; after eavesdropping on Empire 88's meeting and figuring out who's really running the show (ie Max Anders), knocking them all out with Taylors stinging insects and having them crash Victor's car into the lobby of the PRT Building all drunk as skunks, letting the Drink Driving and Criminal Damage charges open the door to all their other myriad criminal charges being dropped in their laps, and hoping one of them will crack and take a plea bargain to sell out the rest]].
