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* HostageSituation: [[spoiler:Kallus only recruited the Ghost crew for the mission so that he could use Hera as a hostage against Cham and Free Ryloth. Ends up not working due to intervention, and while Hera is shaken up, she tells the others the next chapter that regardless of this, she is still loyal to the Empire.]]
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** Played completely straight with her former piloting instructor, Captain Haiduk.
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* BadBoss: Agent Kallus recruits the Ghost crew for the attack on Free Ryloth [[spoiler:only so Hera can be used as a hostage.]]
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** "She was so eager to prove that she was the equal, even the better, of anyone else here that she was ready to do anything it took to serve her Empire. Anything –" – [[spoiler:Agent Beneke]]
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** "She was so eager to prove that she was the equal, even the better, of anyone else here that she was ready to do anything it took to serve her Empire. [[KilledMidSentence Anything –" –]]" – [[spoiler:Agent Beneke]]
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* AllInTheManual: Bedlamsbard's [[bedlamsbard.tumblr.com Tumblr]] is full of writing updates/snippets, worldbuilding for Ryloth and Twi'lek culture, commentary, and meta.
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* AllInTheManual: Bedlamsbard's [[bedlamsbard.[[http://bedlamsbard.tumblr.com Tumblr]] is full of writing updates/snippets, worldbuilding for Ryloth and Twi'lek culture, commentary, and meta.
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* EvilFormerFriend: Barriss Offee is Ahsoka's.
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* NiceToTheWaiter: Ironically, Barriss. Even her FaceHeelTurn and the Crucible can't break those habits out of her.
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* PetTheDog: While meeting with Barriss on Nal Hutta, Ahsoka orders a bowl of nuts that Barriss used to enjoy back when they were Padawans.
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* SuccessionCrisis: As Hera is obviously not an option even after she's discovered to be alive, the Syndulla clan has one of these in the works if Cham were to die. The direct heir is Cham's niece Xiaan, but she's an extremely emotionally traumatized teenager who wants no part of the job. Cham could adopt Alecto's nephew Doriah and name him heir, but won't do it officially because Alecto would see it as giving up on Hera for good.
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* InsistentAppellation: [[spoiler:In her meeting with Barriss on Tatooine, Ahsoka refuses to call Barriss by her name and only calls her "Inquisitor". Barriss is seriously angered by this and returns the favor, referring to Ahsoka only as "Fulcrum".]]
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* PromotedToParent: Doriah Syndulla protected his younger cousin Xiaan when they were enslaved together, and even after their escape remains her primary caregiver. [[Their relationship ended up becoming more of a romantic one.]]
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* PromotedToParent: Doriah Syndulla protected his younger cousin Xiaan when they were enslaved together, and even after their escape remains her primary caregiver. [[Their he's practically the only person she really trusts. [[spoiler:Their relationship ended up becoming more of a romantic one.]]
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* FamilyUnfriendlyDeath: Aleema Syndulla, Hera's aunt, who is killed shielding her from a grenade during the raid on Zardossa Stix. While it was offscreen, Lika Syndulla's death was implied to be this. [[And then Agent Beneke's brains are blown out by a blaster bolt.]]
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* FamilyUnfriendlyDeath: Aleema Syndulla, Hera's aunt, who is killed shielding her from a grenade during the raid on Zardossa Stix. While it was offscreen, Lika Syndulla's death was implied to be this. [[And [[spoiler:And then Agent Beneke's brains are blown out by a blaster bolt.]]
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* ShowSomeLeg: [[spoiler:Ojeda]] distracts two stormtrooper this way so Ahsoka and Doriah can knock them out in order to get into the ISB Headquarters.
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* ShowSomeLeg: [[spoiler:Ojeda]] distracts two stormtrooper stormtroopers this way so Ahsoka and Doriah can knock them out in order to get into the ISB Headquarters.
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* DistractedByTheSexy: [[spoiler:Ojeda]] distracts two guards this way so Ahsoka and Doriah can knock them out in order to get into the ISB Headquarters.
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* DistractedByTheSexy: [[spoiler:Ojeda]] distracts two guards this way so Ahsoka and Doriah can knock them out in order to get into the ISB Headquarters.
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* {{Codenames}}: Ahsoka is Fulcrum, and she has several contacts who she also refers to by codenames. Barriss is "Cannon" (as in loose cannon) and she has another one on Naboo called "Siren", [[spoiler:also known as the Flower of Ryloth.]]
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* {{Codenames}}: Ahsoka is Fulcrum, and she has several contacts who she also refers to by codenames. Barriss is "Cannon" (as in loose cannon) and she has another one on Naboo called "Siren", [[spoiler:also known as the Flower of Ryloth.Ryloth, Ojeda Syndulla.]]
* DarkerAndEdgier: Compared to the show it's based on, although mostly because it can actually show things that the show can only hint at due to its rating.
* HoneyTrap: The Flower of Ryloth, [[spoiler:Ojeda Syndulla]] is also the rebel informant known as Siren. She gets information from her ISB clients and passes it off to a Naboo resistance leader who works for Fulcrum, [[spoiler:who is actually Sabé Ledoyen, former body double of Padmé Amidala.]]
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** The slaves at the Lake House on Naboo, a brothel frequented by officers from the nearby regional ISB Headquarters. [[spoiler: Khiry Chuchi]] is an exception only because she's not old enough yet.
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** Patience implies she would use Kanan as this if it wasn't for the Hunter "protecting" him.
** Patience implies she would use Kanan as this if it wasn't for the Hunter "protecting" him.
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* TheHandler: Agent Beneke is Hera's, and on the rebel side the Rainbow Lady [[spoiler:Sabé Ledoyen]] is Flower/Siren's.
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* ArrangedMarriage: Secchun Fenn tries to arrange one between Xiaan Syndulla and her son. It doesn't go over well.
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* ArrangedMarriage: Secchun Fenn tries to arrange one between Xiaan Syndulla and her son. It [[spoiler:It doesn't go over well.]]
* BoomHeadshot: [[spoiler:How Cham kills Agent Beneke]]
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* {{Codenames}}: Ahsoka is Fulcrum, and she has several contacts who she also refers to by codenames. Barriss is "Cannon" (as in loose cannon) and she has another one on Naboo called "Siren"."Siren", [[spoiler:also known as the Flower of Ryloth.]]
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* CurbStompBattle: [[spoiler: The Pau'an Inquisitor]] was no match for Ahsoka Tano.
* CyanidePill: [[spoiler: The Pau'an Inquisitor takes one of these to prevent Ahsoka from extracting information out of him after she defeats him.]]
* CyanidePill: [[spoiler: The Pau'an Inquisitor takes one of these to prevent Ahsoka from extracting information out of him after she defeats him.]]
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* CurbStompBattle: [[spoiler: The Pau'an Inquisitor]] Hunter]] was no match for Ahsoka Tano.
* CyanidePill: [[spoiler: ThePau'an Inquisitor Hunter takes one of these to prevent Ahsoka from extracting information out of him after she defeats him.]]
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: The Lake House on Naboo, which is a [[SexSlave sexual slavery]] operation, considers the sixteen-year old Blue Opal of Pantora to be too young to do anything but serve drinks yet.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: The Lake House on Naboo, which is a [[SexSlave sexual slavery]] operation, considers the sixteen-year old Blue Opal of Pantora to be too young to do anything but serve drinks yet.sleep with clients yet. It's not much of a standard, though, since they still treat her terribly.
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* FamilyUnfriendlyDeath: Aleema Syndulla, Hera's aunt, who is killed shielding her from a grenade during the raid on Zardossa Stix. While it was offscreen, Lika Syndulla's death was implied to be this.
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* FamilyUnfriendlyDeath: Aleema Syndulla, Hera's aunt, who is killed shielding her from a grenade during the raid on Zardossa Stix. While it was offscreen, Lika Syndulla's death was implied to be this. [[And then Agent Beneke's brains are blown out by a blaster bolt.]]
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** "Still looking for Jedi, Togruta?" – [[spoiler: the Pau'an Inquisitor]]
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** "Still looking for Jedi, Togruta?" – [[spoiler: the Pau'an Inquisitor]]Hunter]]
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* {{Flashback}}: There are several throughout the story showing what the Empire did to Hera and Kanan.
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* FriendlyEnemy: Barriss and Ahsoka, although only by the loosest interpretation of the word "friendly". They occasionally meet up to attack each other without seriously intending to kill the other and manage to be barely civil while exchanging information over drinks.
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* FriendlyEnemy: Barriss and Ahsoka, although only by the loosest interpretation of the word "friendly". They occasionally meet up to attack each other without seriously intending to kill the other and manage to be barely civil while exchanging information over drinks.Barriss gives Ahsoka information.
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* HotBlooded: Alecto. She gets ''furious'' at Cham for not stunning Hera and taking her with them regardless of her wishes, and later throws a chair across the room after watching some of the ISB's tapes of Hera.
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* HotBlooded: Alecto. She gets ''furious'' at Cham for not stunning Hera and taking her with them regardless of her wishes, and later throws a chair across the room after watching some of the ISB's tapes of Hera. It's also mentioned [[NoodleIncident she once punched Secchun Fenn in the face.]]
* IHaveYouNowMyPretty: Patience is very [[NoYay excited]] to meet Kanan.
* IHaveYouNowMyPretty: Patience is very [[NoYay excited]] to meet Kanan.
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* LuredIntoATrap: Just like in canon, the Empire lures a former Padawan by using the actually-dead Luminara Unduli as bait. [[spoiler: Unfortunately for the Pau'un Inquisitor, Ahsoka Tano was much more than he could deal with.]]
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* LuredIntoATrap: Just like in canon, the Empire an Inquisitor lures a former Padawan by using the actually-dead Luminara Unduli as bait. [[spoiler: Unfortunately for the Pau'un Inquisitor, Hunter, Ahsoka Tano was much more than he could deal with.]]
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* MirrorUniverse: Only for the Ghost crew, who work for the Empire. Everyone else is on the same side that they are in canon.
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* MirrorUniverse: Only for the Ghost crew, who work for the Empire. Everyone else (with the possible exception of Barriss) is on the same side that they are in canon.
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* NiceToTheWaiter: Ironically, Barriss. Even her FaceHeelTurn and the Crucible can't break those habits out of her, it seems
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* NoYay: The Hunter is very...[[PersonalSpaceInvader possessive]] of Kanan in the Crucible flashbacks.
* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: Members of the Inquisition give up their names and are officially only known as the Inquisitor. This being rather confusing when there's more than one around, they have a variety of nicknames. Due to being written prior to the reveal of the number motif within the show, the Pau'an Inquisitor is "the Hunter", the Seventh Sister is "Patience", Kanan is "theJedi" Jedi", "the Hound", or "the Stray", while Barriss is simply "the Inquisitor" First" [[CaptainObvious because she was the first one. one.]]
* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: Members of the Inquisition give up their names and are officially only known as the Inquisitor. This being rather confusing when there's more than one around, they have a variety of nicknames. Due to being written prior to the reveal of the number motif within the show, the Pau'an Inquisitor is "the Hunter", the Seventh Sister is "Patience", Kanan is "the
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* OriginalCharacter: All of the Syndulla family members other than Hera and Cham, most prominently Hera's mother Alecto.
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* PragmaticVillainy: Agent Beneke tries, in his own twisted way, to combat the empire's racist policies because he believes non-humans can be valuable members of the empire.
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* PragmaticVillainy: Agent Beneke tries, in his own twisted way, to combat the empire's racist policies because he believes non-humans can be valuable members of the empire. He still believes non-humans are inferior, but in a more paternalistic way than most Imperial officers.
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* PromotedToParent: Doriah Syndulla protected his younger cousin Xiaan when they were enslaved together, and even after their escape remains her primary caregiver.
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* RapeByProxy: Offscreen example, [[spoiler: in Flower's last scene at the Lake House, it is implied that her last client made her and Opal have sex with each other.]]
* RapeByProxy: Offscreen example, [[spoiler: in Flower's last scene at the Lake House, it is implied that her last client made her and Opal have sex with each other.]]
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* SecretTestOfCharacter: The whole reason [[spoiler:Ojeda Syndulla]] was at the Lake House was to set up one to test Hera's loyalty. She never visited the Lake House (despite numerous offers) thus passed by not taking it.
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* BitchInSheepsClothing: Hera's handler, ISB Agent Roberto Beneke, who she beleives has her best interests at heart but is actually extremely emotionally manipulative of her.
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* EqualOpportunityEvil: Agent Beneke, Hera's handler, participated in Project Nemesis because he genuinely believes that partaking in this [[PragmaticVillainy will make the empire stronger]]. His goal is to install mass re-education systems on non-human species, indoctrinating them into the empire.
* EvenEvilHasStandards: The Lake House on Naboo, which is a [[SexSlave sexual slavery]] operation, considers the fifteen-year old Blue Opal of Pantora to be too young to do anything but serve drinks yet.
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* EqualOpportunityEvil: Agent Beneke, Hera's handler, participated in Project Nemesis because he genuinely believes that partaking in this incorporating non-humans [[PragmaticVillainy will make the empire stronger]]. His goal is to install mass re-education systems on non-human species, indoctrinating them into the empire.
* EvenEvilHasStandards: The Lake House on Naboo, which is a [[SexSlave sexual slavery]] operation, considers thefifteen-year sixteen-year old Blue Opal of Pantora to be too young to do anything but serve drinks yet.
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* FantasticRacism: As a non-human in Imperial service, Hera Syndulla is subjected to a lot of this.
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* PragmaticVillainy: Agent Beneke dislikes and, in his own twisted way, tries to combat the empire's racist policies because he believes non-humans can be valuable members of the empire and that one of the Republics strengths was the fact that it included non-human species.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: The Lake House on Naboo, which is a [[SexSlave sexual slavery]] operation, considers the fifteen-year old Blue Opal of Pantora to be too young to do anything but serve drinks yet.
** Barriss and Agent Beneke are mutually disgusted by each other.
* EvilFormerFriend: Barriss Offee is Ahsoka's.
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* BullyingADragon: [[spoiler:Agent Beneke taunts Cham about Hera. Cham responds by killing him.]]
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* PrettyLittleHeadshots: [[spoiler:Averted with Agent Beneke's death]], who gets the back of his skull blown out.
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