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* FamousLastWords:
** "Gods, you sound so much like your father sometimes-–" – [[spoiler: Aleema Syndulla]]
** "Still looking for Jedi, Togruta?" – [[spoiler: the Hunter]]
** "She was so eager to prove that she was the equal, even the better, of anyone else here that she was ready to do anything it took to serve her Empire. [[KilledMidSentence Anything –]]" – [[spoiler:Agent Beneke]]
** "You are not my mother. You're a traitor and a murderer-- [...] [[OhCrap Mother?]]" [[spoiler:Thamir Fenn, as Secchun tells him to [[PreMortemOneLiner tell his brother and father that she won't join them for a while]].]]
** "Gods, you sound so much like your father sometimes-–" – [[spoiler: Aleema Syndulla]]
** "Still looking for Jedi, Togruta?" – [[spoiler: the Hunter]]
** "She was so eager to prove that she was the equal, even the better, of anyone else here that she was ready to do anything it took to serve her Empire. [[KilledMidSentence Anything –]]" – [[spoiler:Agent Beneke]]
** "You are not my mother. You're a traitor and a murderer-- [...] [[OhCrap Mother?]]" [[spoiler:Thamir Fenn, as Secchun tells him to [[PreMortemOneLiner tell his brother and father that she won't join them for a while]].]]
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* DeathOfAChild: Baby Lika Syndulla is killed offpage during the raid on Zydossa Stix. As well, several of the children in Project Nemesis other than Hera were eventually executed.
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* InfantImmortality: [[AvertedTrope Very averted]]. Baby Lika Syndulla is killed offpage during the raid on Zydossa Stix. As well, several of the children in Project Nemesis other than Hera were eventually executed.
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''On the Edge of the Devil's Backbone'' is a ''WesternAnimation/StarWarsRebels'' fic by [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/bedlamsbard/pseuds/bedlamsbard Bedlamsbard]], who also did the ''{{FanFic/Ouroboros}}'' series.
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It can be read [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/4417469/chapters/10035371 here]]. A sequel, ''The Devil's Lair'', is in the making.
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* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: Members of the Inquisition give up their names and are officially only known as the Inquisitor. This being rather confusing when there's more than one around, they have a variety of nicknames. Due to being written prior to the reveal of the number motif within the show, the Pau'an Inquisitor is "the Hunter", the Seventh Sister is "Patience", Kanan is "the Jedi", "the Hound", or "the Stray", while Barriss is simply "the First" [[CaptainObvious because she was the first one.]]
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* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: Members of the Inquisition give up their names and are officially only known as the Inquisitor. This being rather confusing when there's more than one around, they have a variety of nicknames. Due to being written prior to the reveal of the number motif within the show, the Pau'an Inquisitor is "the Hunter", the Seventh Sister is "Patience", Kanan is "the Jedi", "the Hound", or "the Stray", while Barriss is simply "the First" [[CaptainObvious because she was the first one.]]
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* TheCameo:
** Neeyutnee is mentioned as having become Naboo's senator after Padmé's death.
** Sammo Quid and Tai Uzuma, Caleb's "friends" in the ''[[ComicBook/StarWarsKanan Kanan]]'' comic, make unnamed appearances when [[spoiler:Kanan envisions himself in the Jedi Temple.]]
** Neeyutnee is mentioned as having become Naboo's senator after Padmé's death.
** Sammo Quid and Tai Uzuma, Caleb's "friends" in the ''[[ComicBook/StarWarsKanan Kanan]]'' comic, make unnamed appearances when [[spoiler:Kanan envisions himself in the Jedi Temple.]]
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It can be read [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/4417469/chapters/10035371 here]].
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* AndTheAdventureContinues: [[spoiler:The Inquisitors (particularly Patience, Hangman, and Amity) are still out there, Barriss is still out there, Ezra chooses to stay with Kanan over Ahsoka, Ezra attains a kyber crystal from a destroyed Inquisitor lightsaber, Hera and her family tie up loose ends, and the ''Ghost'' crew parts with Free Ryloth to continue their own fight against the Empire elsewhere.
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* AndTheAdventureContinues: [[spoiler:The Inquisitors (particularly Patience, Hangman, and Amity) are still out there, Barriss is still out there, Ezra chooses to stay with Kanan over Ahsoka, Ezra attains a kyber crystal from a destroyed Inquisitor lightsaber, Hera and her family tie up loose ends, and the ''Ghost'' crew parts with Free Ryloth to continue their own fight against the Empire elsewhere.]]
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* AnArmAndALeg: Both of [[spoiler: the Pau'an Inquisitor's]] hands are cut off by Ahsoka in their brief duel.
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* AnArmAndALeg: Both of [[spoiler: the [[spoiler:the Pau'an Inquisitor's]] hands are cut off by Ahsoka in their brief duel.duel.
* AndTheAdventureContinues: [[spoiler:The Inquisitors (particularly Patience, Hangman, and Amity) are still out there, Barriss is still out there, Ezra chooses to stay with Kanan over Ahsoka, Ezra attains a kyber crystal from a destroyed Inquisitor lightsaber, Hera and her family tie up loose ends, and the ''Ghost'' crew parts with Free Ryloth to continue their own fight against the Empire elsewhere.
* AndTheAdventureContinues: [[spoiler:The Inquisitors (particularly Patience, Hangman, and Amity) are still out there, Barriss is still out there, Ezra chooses to stay with Kanan over Ahsoka, Ezra attains a kyber crystal from a destroyed Inquisitor lightsaber, Hera and her family tie up loose ends, and the ''Ghost'' crew parts with Free Ryloth to continue their own fight against the Empire elsewhere.
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* BadBoss: Agent Kallus recruits the Ghost crew for the attack on Free Ryloth [[spoiler:only so Hera can be used as a hostage.]]
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* BadBoss: Agent Kallus recruits the Ghost ''Ghost'' crew for the attack on Free Ryloth [[spoiler:only so Hera can be used as a hostage.]]
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** "Gods, you sound so much like your father sometimes –" – [[spoiler: Aleema Syndulla]]
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** "Gods, you sound so much like your father sometimes –" sometimes-–" – [[spoiler: Aleema Syndulla]]
** "You are not my mother. You're a traitor and a murderer-- [...] [[OhCrap Mother?]]" [[spoiler:Thamir Fenn, as Secchun tells him to [[PreMortemOneLiner tell his brother and father that she won't join them for a while]].]]
* {{Irony}}: In the battle in Chapter 29, Secchun [[spoiler:accepts that Thamir is traitor and may have to be killed for the greater good]], while Alecto [[spoiler:is relieved that Hera is fine and can't wait to reunite with her afterwards]].
* MeaningfulName: The ''MercyKill''. [[spoiler:In the final battle, Secchun ultimately has the ''Mercy Kill'' fire on her own son after he refuses to leave the Empire out of UndyingLoyalty to his captives and coming to hate his family that much.]]
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* NotMeThisTime: Ahsoka believes that [[spoiler: the exploding kyber shipment]] was a trap by Barriss, and for once Barriss is actually completely innocent.
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* NotMeThisTime: Ahsoka believes that [[spoiler: the [[spoiler:the exploding kyber shipment]] was a trap by Barriss, and for once Barriss is actually completely innocent.
* OffingTheOffspring: [[spoiler:Secchun resorts to ordering the ''Mercy Kill'' to kill Thamir when he continues to work for the Empire.]]
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** The slaves at the Lake House on Naboo, most prominently the Flower of Ryloth, the Red Star of Zeltros, and the Blue Opal of Pantora. [[spoiler: AKA Ojeda Syndulla, Zaidi Farseer, and Khiry Chuchi]]
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** The slaves at the Lake House on Naboo, most prominently the Flower of Ryloth, the Red Star of Zeltros, and the Blue Opal of Pantora. [[spoiler: AKA [[spoiler:Who are otherwise known as Ojeda Syndulla, Zaidi Farseer, and Khiry Chuchi]]Chuchi.]]
* PreMortemOneLiner: A TearJerker variant in Chapter 29, [[spoiler:Secchun, [[ApologeticAttacker after apologizing to Thamir]] for [[MyGreatestFailure failing him]], bids him goodbye and has the ''Mercy Kill'' fire on him.]]
-->'''Secchun:''' [[spoiler:Thamir, when you see your father and your brother, tell them they'll have to wait a little longer for me.]]
-->'''Secchun:''' [[spoiler:Thamir, when you see your father and your brother, tell them they'll have to wait a little longer for me.]]
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* SickAndWrong: Kanan's reaction to [[spoiler: the giant kyber crystal.]]
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* SickAndWrong: Kanan's reaction to [[spoiler: the [[spoiler:the giant kyber crystal.]]
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* YouWouldntShootMe: Cham to Hera. [[spoiler: He was wrong.]]
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* YouWouldntShootMe: Cham to Hera. [[spoiler: He was wrong.]]]]
* ZergRush: Comparable to a pack of wolves, the Inquisitors do this. Doesn't always equal success, though; in the final battle in Chapter 29, it's a bloodbath for ''them'', courtesy of [[OneManArmy Kanan and Ahsoka]].
* ZergRush: Comparable to a pack of wolves, the Inquisitors do this. Doesn't always equal success, though; in the final battle in Chapter 29, it's a bloodbath for ''them'', courtesy of [[OneManArmy Kanan and Ahsoka]].
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%%[[caption-width-right:350:[[http://bedlamsbard.tumblr.com/post/139458113763/i-am-an-imperial-officer-i-sacrificed-too-much-to "I am an Imperial officer. I sacrificed too much to be anything else."]] (Art by [[http://lorna-ka.tumblr.com lorna-ka.]])]]
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It can be read [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/4417469/chapters/10035371 here]].
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''On the Edge of the Devil's Backbone'' is a ''WesternAnimation/StarWarsRebels'' fic by [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/bedlamsbard/pseuds/bedlamsbard Bedlamsbard]], who also did the {{FanFic/Ouroboros}} series.
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''On the Edge of the Devil's Backbone'' is a ''WesternAnimation/StarWarsRebels'' fic by [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/bedlamsbard/pseuds/bedlamsbard Bedlamsbard]], who also did the {{FanFic/Ouroboros}} ''{{FanFic/Ouroboros}}'' series.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: Compared to the show it's based on, although mostly because it can actually show things that the show can only hint at due to its rating.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: Compared to the show it's based on, although mostly because it can actually show things that the show can only hint at due to its rating. But even then, it still goes pretty far, like prostitution and sex scenes (though nothing too explicit), characters dying more often onscreen, and so on.
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!! ''On the Edge of the Devil's Backbone'' contains examples of:
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* ActionDad: Cham Syndulla
* ActionMom: Alecto Syndulla
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* ActionMom: AlectoSyndullaSyndulla.
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* AuthorAppeal: One of the author's favorite comic book series from the ''Star Wars'' franchise is the ''[[ComicBook/StarWarsRepublic Republic]]'' series (and some of the other Ostrander-Duursema works like ''ComicBook/{{Legacy}}'' as well). ''Republic'' had emphasis on Twi'lek characters like Xiaan Amersu and Aayla Secura as well as delving into Ryloth a bit, which explains some things about the fic. And of course, when in tandem with the author's love for Hera, who also happens to be a female Twi'lek that is stunning yet strong and independent with a past of depth, combined with the author ''also'' having a passion for Roman history, and this fic is the result.
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'''On the Edge of the Devil's Backbone''' is a ''WesternAnimation/StarWarsRebels'' fic by [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/bedlamsbard/pseuds/bedlamsbard Bedlamsbard]], who also did the {{FanFic/Ouroboros}} series.
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'''On the Edge of the Devil's Backbone''' is a StarWarsRebels fic by [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/bedlamsbard/pseuds/bedlamsbard Bedlamsbard]], who also did the {{FanFic/Ouroboros}} series.
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'''On the Edge of the Devil's Backbone''' is a StarWarsRebels ''WesternAnimation/StarWarsRebels'' fic by [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/bedlamsbard/pseuds/bedlamsbard Bedlamsbard]], who also did the {{FanFic/Ouroboros}} series.
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** In a mix between this and TheThingsManWasNotMeantToKnow, Kanan is given some sort of drug that leaves no barrier between him and the Force during his training at the Crucible. With Mustafar being a shatterpoint, Kanan is forced to see and feel ''everything'', and has to be restrained from tearing his own face off in a desperate attempt to stop it.
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** In a mix between this and TheThingsManWasNotMeantToKnow, TheseAreThingsManWasNotMeantToKnow, Kanan is given some sort of drug that leaves no barrier between him and the Force during his training at the Crucible. With Mustafar being a shatterpoint, Kanan is forced to see and feel ''everything'', and has to be restrained from tearing his own face off in a desperate attempt to stop it.
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* TheThingsManWasNotMeantToKnow: Force-sensitives have a natural veil that keeps them from fully perceiving the Force. Kanan getting his torn down nearly kills him.
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* TheThingsManWasNotMeantToKnow: TheseAreThingsManWasNotMeantToKnow: Force-sensitives have a natural veil that keeps them from fully perceiving the Force. Kanan getting his torn down nearly kills him.
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* MySkullRunnethOver: Ezra accidentally senses ''every living being'' on Lothal at one point. It's completely overwhelming, and it's only thanks to his street instincts [[spoiler:that he escapes Kanan moments later]].
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** Ezra accidentally senses ''every living being'' on Lothal at one point. It's completely overwhelming, and it's only thanks to his street instincts [[spoiler:that he escapes Kanan momentslater]].later]].
** In a mix between this and TheThingsManWasNotMeantToKnow, Kanan is given some sort of drug that leaves no barrier between him and the Force during his training at the Crucible. With Mustafar being a shatterpoint, Kanan is forced to see and feel ''everything'', and has to be restrained from tearing his own face off in a desperate attempt to stop it.
** Ezra accidentally senses ''every living being'' on Lothal at one point. It's completely overwhelming, and it's only thanks to his street instincts [[spoiler:that he escapes Kanan moments
** In a mix between this and TheThingsManWasNotMeantToKnow, Kanan is given some sort of drug that leaves no barrier between him and the Force during his training at the Crucible. With Mustafar being a shatterpoint, Kanan is forced to see and feel ''everything'', and has to be restrained from tearing his own face off in a desperate attempt to stop it.
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* TheThingsManWasNotMeantToKnow: Force-sensitives have a natural veil that keeps them from fully perceiving the Force. Kanan getting his torn down nearly kills him.
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* AdventuresInComaland: A low-key version when [[spoiler:Kanan, recently rescued from the Crucible, makes a mental version of the Jedi Temple and stays there for a while.]] Ezra enters his mind but finds he's mostly okay, and he comes out of it on his own.
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* InSpiteOfANail: Despite all the changes, the Ghost crew still ends up together, Ezra still becomes Kanan's apprentice, and the ending arc of season 1 is echoed in chapter 19 and 20.
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* RealityBleed: Mustafar has a mental version of this, thanks to being an EldritchLocation. While being interrogated, Kanan sees glimpses of the past, the canon timeline, and possibly the future.
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* SexForSolace: Hera and Kanan in Chapter 20.
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* PsychicRadar: While Kanan and Ezra are on Mustafar [[spoiler:escaping the Crucible]], they sense a lingering presence from the Force of [[Film/RevengeOfTheSith two Jedi Knights who have or will duel there.]]
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* WhamEpisode: Chapter 18, where Hera [[spoiler:decides to rescue Kanan from Mustafar, essentially committing treason.]]
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With Cham and the Rebel agent known as Fulcrum in pursuit, a new mission takes Hera and the crew of the Ghost to the planet Lothal, where a chance meeting with a Force-sensitive teenager awakens something long buried in the Inquisitor once known as Kanan Jarrus...and has dire consequences for Hera, their crew, the Empire, and the fledgling Rebel Alliance.
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With Cham and the Rebel agent known as Fulcrum in pursuit, a new mission takes Hera and the crew of the Ghost to the planet Lothal, where a chance meeting with a Force-sensitive teenager awakens something long buried in the Inquisitor once known as Kanan Jarrus... and has dire consequences for Hera, their crew, the Empire, and the fledgling Rebel Alliance.
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* LateArrivalSpoiler: Fulcrum is Ahsoka Tano, as revealed in the canon Season 1 finale.
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* AllInTheManual: Bedlamsbard's [[http://bedlamsbard.tumblr.com Tumblr]] is full of writing updates/snippets, worldbuilding for Ryloth and Twi'lek culture, commentary, and meta.
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* AllInTheManual: AllThereInTheManual: Bedlamsbard's [[http://bedlamsbard.tumblr.com Tumblr]] is full of writing updates/snippets, worldbuilding for Ryloth and Twi'lek culture, commentary, and meta.